4 change, pay attention to the reality at the end, the language is fluent, and it is done in one go. Disadvantages: individual cases lack rigor and the closing statement is not accurate enough. This article was rated as the first class, with 44 points. I am the master (4) I am a dandelion, so weak that I may not be able to control my own destiny. However, at that moment, I realized the regret of "I am the master". This is an empty valley, and I grew up in such a lonely place with no one to rely on. But do you know how much I want to fly? Fly to see the beauty of mountains and rivers, fly to see the world. This afternoon, it was sunny, but there was no sun in the valley. I am so eager for sunshine. It's just that I don't have the courage to fly, I don't have confidence, I'm too weak to decide my own destiny. On that day, pigeons swarmed, and they sucked the dew of the earth in the sun. When they saw me, they began to laugh at me: "Why are you so weak! That's funny! Look how free we are! Learn more! " Their taunts stimulated my nerves. I began to be inexplicably full of courage. I want to be the master of my own destiny! Another brilliant afternoon, I suddenly felt the blood in my chest begin to boil! I plucked up my courage, tried my best to jump up and failed. I tried again and failed. Finally, I suddenly feel airy. I know I succeeded. This time, I landed on the land and the land was burning. When I fly, I look at the world I dream of. Oh, how beautiful! Everything in the world is full of vitality. I feel the beauty of sunshine, and everything is slowly blurred in tears. I dry my tears and open my eyes to see the world. I smiled again, laughing so comfortably. You see, I finally succeeded, didn't I? I finally realized my dream. Perhaps, I may never return, but I have no regrets, but I have a heartfelt relief. My fate is finally decided by myself! My dream is no longer a dream! I smiled happily and was not afraid of the impending death at all. I am still brave. I am still glad for the persistence and firmness of my dreams! Yes, I was brave for too long, which decided my fate. I'm in charge. Comments: This is a fairy tale. The story of mastering one's own destiny through a weak dandelion clearly expresses the theme, with complete narrative, twists and turns and fluent language. Was rated as a class, 44-45 points. However, it should be noted that there are too many people who pay attention to such themes (grass, butterflies, etc.), so don't imitate them deliberately. I am the master (6) Children of our age will always think that I am the master and think that many things can be solved by us. Indeed, my decision can make you feel more. Let me make you feel the joy of life. There is a slogan that says, "My website is my decision." In life, sometimes only you can get more. Once I met something that embarrassed me, other people's ideas kept echoing in my ears, but in the end I insisted on my own ideas, and I was in charge! Finally, good results have been achieved. I decided to let you succeed. In other words, stick to yourself and you will succeed. In a speech contest, none of the contestants thought he could win the prize, and many people around him warned him not to use this speech. But he didn't change his mind before the game. While people were waiting to hear the names of the players they supported, the first person to advance to the next round turned out to be a non-supporting player. He sticks to his ideas, makes his own decisions and abides by what others say. Finally, he succeeded. I'll let you think creatively. As students, they often encounter open thinking problems at school. Many students will use other people's ideas when they encounter this kind of topic, and rarely stick to themselves, but most of those students with novel and unique ideas are not influenced by others, thinking independently, opening their own thinking and pioneering new thinking. The more you do this, the more you can think from another angle. I am responsible for preventing you from making mistakes. I tried it myself. In class, every time the teacher asks a question, he raises his hand to express his opinion, uncertainty or mistake. Try a few more times, and your mistakes will be found, which will make you have a deeper impression and prevent you from making the same mistakes again. Is to be your own master, solve everything and face life. To sum up, strengthening ourselves, letting me be the master and having my own thoughts can make us feel more. Comments: the article has a clear point of view, but it is not prominent enough (I can make you more assertive); The four sub-arguments are clearly listed, but there is no strict logical relationship between them. For example, the second, third and fourth sub-arguments can overlap; Be able to reason with your own reality, but the examples cited are not typical, 5 are not convincing; The language is average. This article was rated as Grade II with a score of 40-4 1. I am in charge (7) Junior high school life is coming to an end, and an important topic in front of me is the study in the future. Listening to the ideals of other students, I haven't thought about this problem carefully. Walking on the way home from school, thinking about my interests and achievements, I have no plan at all. When I came home and saw my parents, I suddenly felt relaxed. "Aren't there still them?" ? Let them help me plan it. With a small plan in mind, I walked up to them and said to my parents, "I am going to graduate. What school should I go to after graduation? " My mother looked up at me and said, "We think it's better to let you make your own decision. This is a great event in your life, and we can't make a decision for you. " I nodded silently, pushed open the door of the room and fell on the bed. Lie in bed, recall the scores of each school, find a familiar school for yourself according to the results of a model, think for a while, and then set a goal for yourself. I found my goal, like a cheerful bird, opened the door and ran to my parents' room. I went to my mother and happily introduced the school I wanted to take. My mother listened carefully and nodded to me with a smile from time to time. When I finished, my father sitting next to me said, "Daughter, now you can decide which school you want to go to. There will be many choices in society in the future. You can't always depend on your family. You should learn to make your own decisions and face them yourself. We are your strong backing and will always support you. " After listening to my father, I seem to understand something. I know my parents' love, expectation and concern for me. I nodded, looked at my father and said, "I will be an independent person." I will find my own way in the face of difficulties and will not rely too much on you. " Dad smiled and nodded, and the love revealed in mom and dad's eyes made me feel warm. My parents let me make my own decisions and realized their trust in me. I will live up to their trust and expectations and become an excellent person. Comments: the center is clear, the content is specific, the narrative is clear, the details are lacking, and the language is not vivid enough. This article was rated as Class II, with 40 points. I am in charge (8) Life is bound to have setbacks and bumps. At this time, some people will complain bitterly that all this is unfair to themselves by God. In fact, all this is caused by themselves, and my fate should be decided by myself! Life, I am in charge! In life, I am a lively and cheerful little boy. I always believe that fate is in my hands, so my life is my decision! I control my life. Every day, I will live a planned life, perhaps because my father forced me to form a habit. Every day, I will make a plan and everything will be carried out strictly according to the schedule. Everything is under my control and arrangement. So my life, I'm in charge! Study, I have the final say! Academic performance reflects a person's attitude towards learning. At home, my parents never worry about my study, because I control my study and study independently. I will study independently in a planned way and often come home from school. My first thing is to study and finish the completed task before doing other things. I don't like reading silently. I will pick up the textbook, read out the key sentences loudly, and then explain them like a teacher, as if I were teaching myself a lesson. I walked around the room with a book, looking for happiness in my study. Let me study, I am the master! Entertainment, I have the final say! As the saying goes, "work and rest are combined." Every Sunday, this is my favorite day. I put down all the pressure of studying and living, looking for the carefree and free-spirited me in the past. Laughter often hangs on the face. I like extreme skateboarding. At this time, when I was sliding on the V-shaped ground with my skateboard, everything was forgotten by me, only happiness and joy filled my whole body. I am the master, I believe in myself, and I believe that only I can control my own destiny. Let us all be our own masters! Let everything be up to me! Take control of the future! Comments: This article consists of three narrative segments: life, study and entertainment. The language is fluent, but it lacks detailed description and is not vivid enough. At the beginning, "My destiny should be decided by myself" is not consistent with the following, and it lacks the depth of thinking. Was rated as the second category and got 38 points. I am the master (9) Everyone wants to be the master of their own affairs, but they are all controlled by our parents and can't do their own things. Why can't we be our own masters for a day? So, this time I want to be my own master. "Great!" When I got up in the morning, I opened my eyes and shouted. My parents are not at home today, and I am the only one at home. Finally, one day I can make my own decisions. After breakfast in a hurry, it's already past 10 in the morning, so I quickly make the next plan. I got on my bike and walked to the supermarket with my pocket money. When I arrived at the supermarket, I found there were so many things here! I can't even start. After two rounds, I bought my mother's favorite roast chicken and celery, as well as a bag of seaweed and some eggs. When I got home, I found it was almost twelve o'clock, and my mother would come back soon. I washed the celery and sliced it. After frying with pepper, a dish is ready. After soaking laver in hot water, I cooked an egg soup, and finally I tore the roast chicken into pieces, so that a meal was ready. At this time, my mother came back, smiled after seeing the dishes on the table, and said, "When my son grows up, he can be the owner of his own house." Seeing my mother smile, I couldn't help laughing. Because this is my own lunch. After this, I feel that when I grow up, I can really be my own master and stand on my own feet. I think we should all be masters once, so as to satisfy our desire for independent thinking and exercise my will. Therefore, I think: we should all be our own masters once! Let's take action together! Comments: The selection of materials in this paper is outdated, and the narration belongs to the running account type, lacking vividness and immature narration and reasoning. This article was rated as Grade 3 with a score of 34-35. My Decision (10) Today is my 10 birthday, which may be the first big birthday in my life. Two days ago, I discussed with my parents that on my 10 birthday, I would do everything with one hand, and no one was allowed to intervene, so I could do whatever I wanted. This is called: my birthday is my call! I didn't expect my parents to agree unconditionally, which really surprised and delighted me! First, I will take my mother to the supermarket for shopping. As soon as I arrived at the supermarket, I put everything I couldn't eat, wanted to eat and loved to eat into the shopping cart, and I packed a big bag of snacks in my heart. My mother looked at it and said, "That's almost enough. You can go home. It's hundreds." As soon as I heard this, I casually replied, "I am the master!" " Mother stopped suddenly. After shopping, as soon as I opened the door full of snacks, there was a fragrance floating out of the living room. On the table in the living room, there is a table cooked by my father and a big cake. This is specially prepared for me by my father. They are all my favorite foods. I watched the saliva flow downwards, so I picked up a chicken leg and ate it. Of course, my father didn't play. "I invite you to dinner and wash your hands at ordinary times. You are full of consciousness. Today, you look dizzy. " I just wanted to give me a scolding, but fortunately I responded in time, haha! "I'm in charge today." Dad had to put out the fire slowly. In the evening, I saw my parents lying in bed watching TV. I ran over and said, "Mom and Dad, look how tired you are. Let me give you a massage. " My parents were very surprised. They thought I was playing a prank, and even said, "Forget it, forget it, you go and play with yours!" " "I'm shocked. I think I have a good way to ensure that you will obey me. I was happy and said, "By the way, don't forget who's in charge today and who you should listen to. "My parents wanted to think, so we have to accept it. I am naturally happy to see my parents rubbing their hands happily. This is my 10 birthday. Since then, my parents have never promised me such a day, but my heart still yearns for: I am the master of my life! Comments: This article says that you can do whatever you want on your 10 birthday. The content is specific and the center is clear, but the narrative is trivial, the thought is unknown and the opinions are superficial. So it is rated as three categories, with 30-32 points. My decision (1 1) Life is like a trip, full of dangers and difficulties. If difficulties are the best enemy in the journey of life, then my destiny, my confidence and my heroism are the best magic weapons for you to be invincible in the face of difficulties. Beethoven, a famous German music master, lost his hearing due to illness in middle age and was deaf in both ears. This means that his music career has been abandoned. When people sighed and mourned for him, he quoted his "magic weapon". He shouted "My destiny is my master, and I want to hold my destiny by the throat" and continued to create a music chapter that shocked the world. It is my unyielding and heroic fate that helped him overcome difficulties and succeed! Edison, the king of invention, is a well-known name. He shocked the world because of the invention of durable light bulbs, but if he didn't succeed before, my fate, my persistence and my heroism would not succeed. When he invented the electric light bulb, he failed hundreds of times. He was ridiculed: "A fool who didn't graduate from primary school can succeed", but he didn't give up in the boos. He secretly vowed that "my destiny is my own, and I must let them see my success!" " After that, he studied the materials carefully and finally found the perfect material "tungsten" in the 1003 experiment, which lit up the world and repelled those stupid words. It was Edison's belief that my destiny was my master that supported his success. In addition, at all times and in all countries, countless people have succeeded by relying on my fate. I think Xiang Yu has burned his bridges with less to win more; After being captured, Gou Jian still refused to give in and defeated Wu, all by my destiny, my confidence and my heroism! My friend stood up, patted the dust on his body and shouted to the sky, "My destiny is my master!" " "Take out your heroism and self-confidence and run to the end of success! Comments: The first paragraph clearly puts forward the argument and can give accurate examples during the discussion, but it lacks sub-arguments and the argument method is monotonous. This article was rated as Class II, with 38 points. I am in charge (12). The advertisement said: "I am the master of my site!" Yes, you should learn to make your own decisions. I once read a report that a student in a school finally became a very bad student because of his good friend's sweet words. Clubbing in bars, surfing the Internet and skipping classes made him a bad student recognized by the school, and his originally happy family was shattered. He didn't have the ability to make his own decisions. He listened to his friends and did whatever they told him to do, which eventually led to his bad habits not being corrected. There is also a story about "approaching the senior high school entrance examination, a classmate wanted to free himself by running away from home because of the pressure of study, so he told his thoughts to a classmate who played better with him." After listening to this, this classmate not only did not encourage him, but advised him and responded to the class teacher, asking the teacher to help educate him. Finally, the student gave up the idea of running away from home in Yuncun, and studied harder to get excellent results in the exam. In fact, these two short stories trace back to the source to tell us that some things should be decided by yourself, and you have no goals. It is meaningless to listen to others completely. No matter what others say is good for you or bad for you, it is a kind of harm to you to insist on listening to others' opinions, not completely listening to others' ideas, but combining with yourself. After all, the final answer is to make your own decision. Dad said: "Life is like a trip, and it will go through many hardships and setbacks. Some classmates and friends around you will encourage you to make progress and make you successful. Some people will confuse you with rhetoric and let you lose! " The finish line is not within your reach, the key lies in yourself. "Yes, when I grow up, many places should make their own decisions and blindly listen to others. I will always be a naive child. My life, I decided, I believe, I can do it! Comments: The article basically meets the meaning of the question and has a complete structure. As an argumentative essay, the two examples cited are from the life around us, lacking typicality, and the analysis of examples is not enough and too broad. This article is divided into three categories and scored 34 points. I have the final say (13) Many things in life must be decided by myself, but when someone asks you who is in charge of this matter, I will say, "I have the final say. "If people don't have the idea of self-determination, people will say that you don't have the consciousness of self-determination, and I have been told the experience. It was a sunny morning, and our junior high school study was almost over, so we had to fill in our volunteers (for the first time). Our classmates have all gone out to play after filling out their volunteers, and I still don't know how to fill out their volunteers. Your future needs to be decided by yourself. " What should I do in the future? "I yelled at my heart, my business, my decision. From then on, I secretly said to myself, I want to make my own decisions. It's not difficult to make your own decisions. See if you can work, study, make your own decisions and be responsible for your future work. This is the most critical. If you really can't be responsible for yourself, you must learn to make your own decisions. In fact, autonomy is also an ability. As long as you have this ability, no matter what you do in the future, you can study hard at work, at least your decision-making ability and self-selection ability will be enhanced. There is such a person who has a good family education, but parents expect too much from their children, and the children can't be independent, so parents let him go for further study. For example, a person with strong independent ability will definitely say that I am responsible for my own affairs. But it is precisely because this person has good decision-making ability and too much life that his autonomy is getting weaker and weaker. Finally, he can't stick to his own point of view and make decisions for me, so he obeys his parents. Some people are like this. My ability to be the master of my own house is not strong, and I can't be the master of my parents in the end, so that my life has embarked on the road paved by others for you. Just like the name of my youth, I am the master, I am the master of youth and everything. If your parents let you go to a prestigious school and tell you what to do, we should shout it out, and I am in charge of my affairs. Let everyone be proud of my decision! Comments: the style is not standardized, the context of writing is unclear, and the language is average. Was rated as three categories (27-28 points). I'm in charge (14) I'm in charge when I grow up. -inscription raindrops fell on the ground. I put down my umbrella and put it by the wall. The raindrops on my eyes blurred my vision. One day, when I walked out of the classroom, it rained cats and dogs, and dark clouds surged in the sky. The sky is full of water, and not many people walk slowly in the rain with umbrellas. " I think if I run back in such a heavy rain, I will get soaked, but I still want to go home. "Just as I was wandering, my mother came to pick me up with an umbrella. On the way, I saw my mother wet. I reminded: "Mom, the umbrella is crooked." "Nothing wrong!" "It's really crooked. "I reminded you again." The umbrella is not crooked. Listen to my mother, I'm in charge of this matter. "Mom patted me on the head and said. So many years passed quickly. Dad wasn't at home today, so I went to the hospital with my mother. The weather is not beautiful. Why does it rain when mom is sick? Although the intermittent rain is not big, the wind is blowing with rain, which makes people feel cool. On my way home, I took an umbrella. "Son, the umbrella is crooked. "Mom said." Mom, you are wrong. The umbrella is not crooked. ""The umbrella is really crooked. " "The umbrella is not crooked. Listen to me. This is my decision. "With a blue umbrella, I walked home with my mother. I wiped the raindrops from my glasses and walked quietly back to my room. Outside the window, all kinds of umbrellas are flowing in the street. The person under the umbrella has not changed, but the person holding the umbrella has changed me; The person under the umbrella has not changed, but I have grown taller; The person under the umbrella has not changed, but the person who said "I am in charge of this matter" has changed. When I grow up, things should belong to me. Comments: This article is an excellent composition collection of the senior high school entrance examination the year before last, with only 10 score. Remind students never to copy the examples or fragments of excellent compositions they have read, nor to blindly imitate narrative ideas, but to be original.

I spent two hours looking for some articles for you. I think you can use the sentences and examples in it, and then make a turning point at the end, for example. . . Now that the senior high school entrance examination is just around the corner, I believe that with maternal love, my senior high school entrance examination must be decided by me, and I will expand my life. Such things can sublimate articles, and I think it should be possible.