Comments on the final draft of graduation thesis
1. The topic meets the requirements of the training objectives of the administrative management major, and also reflects the strong characteristics of the times and practical application. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable, the thinking is relatively clear, the language is fluent, the level is clear, the viewpoints are basically accurate, the arguments and arguments are basically the same, and the references are closely combined with the topics and papers. I can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management and analyze the main problems of this paper in combination with social reality, but the format is not very standardized, the innovation is not enough, some arguments are not convincing, and the language is not concise enough. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis. With. As the theme, the full text is analyzed first, and then analyzed? ... and finally, it focuses on, 2. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and some parts are closely connected with sub-parts, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and some concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
5, research-such as the title, fully reflect the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
6. Research on ... It can provide reference for solving the problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
7. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administrative management major, and can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
8. The topic of this paper conforms to the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The whole paper is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
9. The idea of this article is novel. Taking-as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the existing problems and reasons of-. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
10. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects social hot issues. Therefore, the research on this subject is conducive to the further development of our country. The full text starts with the problem of-,and then analyzes the reasons. On this basis, the related problems are analyzed. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
1 1, the paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
12, the full text is entitled-. Focus on exploring-the full-text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.
13, the full text is entitled-. The problems and reasons of key discussion and analysis-the full text is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. You can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze-,but
14. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. Taking-as an example, this paper focuses on-. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, and can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
15. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
16, this paper focuses on-. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
17, the title of the full text is-the full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough. In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the professional knowledge and principles of administrative management with social reality. Whether it is from the topic selection or viewpoint demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty. But innovation is not enough.
18, the topic of this paper is-,which is discussed first. Therefore, this paper is closely related to the professional requirements, scientific and reasonable in structure, accurate in viewpoint expression, correct in wording, fluent in sentences and clear in thinking. The relationship between the parts is very close, and the argumentation method adopts case argumentation and case argumentation. The information consulted is sufficient and reasonable. The countermeasures to solve the problem still lack maneuverability.
20. The title of this article is-the structure of this article is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into * * *-most parts. The first part-on this basis. In the process of demonstration, students' reference materials are closely combined with the viewpoints and contents to be demonstrated, and the research methods adopted are mainly theoretical research and case study. Words are basically accurate. However, the main problems are that the arguments are not sufficient and convincing, and the contents of individual quotations do not indicate the source.
2 1. The topic is contemporary and realistic, the full text structure is reasonable, the viewpoint expression is basically accurate, and the thinking foundation is clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
22. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
23. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and it can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
24. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. This paper analyzes and demonstrates this theme, which has reference significance for improving China's administrative management. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable, and the format is more standardized. The reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but there are insufficient innovations and arguments, especially the last part of the chapter is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
This paper focuses on introducing ... as the theme, and the topic basically conforms to the category of administrative management, which fully embodies the professional characteristics. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are accurate, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, but the innovation is not enough, some viewpoints are not fully demonstrated, the format is not very standardized, and there are not many ideas that really belong to you. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
26. The topic of this paper is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative specialty is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.
This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
The paper has clear ideas, fluent sentences, clear levels and accurate expression of views. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature materials consulted and referenced are closely combined with the theme, but the arguments in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis, some contents are not well combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
The theme of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically smooth, the levels are basically clear, and the views are basically accurate. The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management specialty with Deng Xiaoping's administrative reform thought. The format is basically standardized, and the topic selection meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty. However, there are too few documents available for reference, some argumentation contents are not closely combined with the theme, and there are also some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
Selected comments on the final draft of graduation thesis
Excellent:
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance).
The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can collect relevant materials comprehensively, and can comprehensively apply knowledge, analyze problems and apply knowledge comprehensively in the writing process.
The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions.
The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
Good:
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).
Students have a strong ability to consult documents and materials, collect relevant materials comprehensively, and use knowledge comprehensively in the writing process, divide problems comprehensively, and have a strong ability to use knowledge comprehensively. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions.
The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.
Medium:
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance).
The student's ability to consult documents and materials is average, and he can collect relevant materials. In the process of writing, he can basically use knowledge and analyze problems comprehensively, and his ability to use knowledge comprehensively is average. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are focused on certain logic, but there is a lack of personal opinions.
The topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.
The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
By:
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general.
The student's ability to consult documents is poor, so he can't collect information comprehensively. Information, the ability to comprehensively apply knowledge and comprehensively analyze problems in the process of writing is poor.
The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion.
The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
Note: 1. In order to avoid similarity, students' papers should be objectively evaluated according to the contents listed in the template, and the order can be reorganized, and the specific contents of the papers should be explained at the same time.
2. The reviewer's comments should have the tutor's evaluation of the results.
Please tell me whether it takes a lot of time to comment on master's thesis every year. Please use the general template for master's thesis review (review book).
There are too many graduate students every year at present. Teachers often have to review a large number of master's papers in a short time and write two pages of comments on each paper. Many teachers find it difficult to write comments. Through long-term practice, I found that most of the comments on papers are actually platitudes. It will be easier if these cliches are sorted out for later use. The following contents are for your reference, and you should be flexible when writing.
First, the significance of the topic:
On the basis of summarizing the relevant academic literature and trends, and through the analysis of the present situation and problems, this paper puts forward the view that the morality of securities brokers is an important factor related to the security of the securities market, and probes into the morality of securities brokers, which has certain theoretical value and practical significance (or the topic is novel).
Second, an overview of the paper:
This paper analyzes the phenomenon of excess returns on the first day of IPO, and comprehensively applies the principles of economics, finance and econometrics to analyze its causes and its impact on the securities market. Through the comparative study of IPO underpricing in Chinese and foreign securities markets, this paper summarizes some characteristics of IPO underpricing in China's securities market, and puts forward that the systematic principle and the gradual principle must be followed to solve these problems. And put forward some valuable opinions and suggestions. (Write more according to the abstract of the paper) (The paper starts with the main problems faced by China's securities market, summarizes the experience, puts forward the problems, points out the gaps and puts forward ideas on this basis) (Put forward the views through the influence of systematic exposition) (The first paper is put forward, the second one is put forward, and the third one is put forward? )
Fourth, the paper method and innovation:
In this paper, normative analysis, empirical analysis, comparative study, case analysis, exclusion method and other methods are used to demonstrate their views, and the research methods are more scientific. The paper draws the main conclusions from the perspective of methods, and its research methods and conclusions are innovative to some extent.
Third, the paper innovation:
The innovations of this paper are as follows: firstly, the unique factors affecting IPO underpricing in China are found; Secondly, using the empirical analysis method, this paper systematically analyzes the factors that affect IPO underpricing in China from multiple angles. Integrate theory with practice, and have unique views. This paper has considerable theoretical depth.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) Views, arguments and arguments of the paper: