1, this is an imaginative composition with fairy tales, which can be written directly from the perspective of personification and fairy tales. So you can say that I am a street lamp at the beginning and a dream at the end-no fairy tale will say "it turned out to be a dream" at the end.
2. The composition of street lamps is to illuminate the road and make people feel at ease at night. But the value of this street lamp needs to be written through concrete examples, such as those mentioned in the comments: to illuminate those who come home late and those who leave early.
3. In the composition, the street lamp is a person. He has a pair of bright eyes. He can see the mutual care and help of people in the alley, write a specific thing, and better sublimate the center.
The composition evaluation is as follows:
1, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is success.
2. The article melts into the scenery, paints the scenery lyrically, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
3. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent, coherent and natural.
4, based on real life, the material selection is appropriate and very innovative. The paragraphs are clear, the transition is naturally interesting and readable.
5. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
6. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate, vivid and emotional, and it is really enjoyable to read.
7. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, and hit the floor's reading makes people excited.
8. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and vivid language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
9. This article describes the events of … in the order of development. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
Introduction of the composition:
Composition is a narrative method that expresses a theme through words through human thinking and language organization. Composition is divided into primary school composition, middle school composition and college composition (thesis). Composition genres include: narrative, expository, practical and argumentative.