What I want most is to be a person who knows how to cherish time, know that "time is gone forever" and know how to allocate his time. Time is money. This sentence is telling everyone that time is precious, so a fool who wastes time is equivalent to consuming his own life. This kind of person will definitely not succeed, so we must not be that kind of person.
He who cherishes time cherishes his own life. As long as they think about what they want to do, they must finish it at once. If you just talk all the time and don't do it, once people have this inertia, it is no different from suicide. People who don't allocate their own time simply live in a black hole without abyss, which is tantamount to death! So we must learn to cherish time and allocate time!
What are the elements of "greatness"? The elements of greatness are: ability and agility. The most important thing for people to do is "punctuality" and "agility". If they have an appointment with someone, they will be late.
What are the people you're dating thinking? So when you make an appointment with others, you must arrive early and not be late! And if you are slow, you will definitely screw up a lot of things, so these two points are very important! And I not only want to be a person who cherishes time, but also want to be a person who has these two conditions.
Teacher's comments:
The blueprint for describing the person you want to be is beautiful, but the cohesion between paragraphs is not coherent. For example, I mentioned the importance of cherishing time, but then I suddenly wrote a great element. There is a lack of coherence between turns, so it is necessary to pay attention to the fluency and coherence of the connection.