The structure is complete and the topic selection is standardized.
This paper has a complete structure, follows the writing norms of English papers, and has creative topics. The author has conducted in-depth research and is quite familiar with the original materials. The language of the paper is sharp, clear and novel, which has high reference value. This is really a masterpiece.
Two application values
The topic of this paper has practical value. The author makes full use of what he has learned to solve this problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is innovative, the format is standardized, and the writing is fluent.
Combined with the actual situation, make suggestions.
The paper has clear ideas, fluent sentences, distinct levels and accurate expression of views. The author combines administrative knowledge with inner-party supervision practice and puts forward some suggestions to solve practical problems. Consult and refer to the literature closely related to the subject. Although the combination of some contents and themes is a bit unfamiliar, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis on the whole.
Literature review closely combined with the theme
In the process of writing the thesis, the author closely combines the references with the theme, which provides strong support and evidence for the thesis.
Improve the clarity and persuasiveness of the argument
Although this paper is excellent in most aspects, it is a bit unfamiliar in the combination of some contents and themes. I hope the author can further strengthen the logical structure and improve the clarity and persuasiveness of the argument in the future research.