Test analysis: it is not difficult to understand and establish the idea of this material. There are two characters involved in the material, so there are two perspectives.

Einstein's perspective: As usual, Einstein refused a painter to paint his portrait, but when he heard that the painter needed the money for this portrait, he readily agreed. The change of Einstein's attitude shows Einstein's great compassionate personality.

The painter's point of view: The painter asked for a portrait of Einstein, but Einstein refused, but he told me frankly that he needed the money for this painting very much. Einstein immediately changed his attitude and sat down and asked the painter to draw a portrait. The painter's frankness and frankness are successful, which shows that frankness is more touching.

Comments: there are three problems to be solved in the composition of the material: first, the problem of conception. In the composition requirements, the correct angle is clearly put forward, and the intention is clear. It is required that the examinee's composition should not be rambling, closely related to the composition materials, and the angle of intention should conform to the content of raw materials, which is the biggest difference from the "three-self" composition. Second, the problem of style. Some materials are suitable for writing argumentative essays, while others seem to be easier to write narratives. The above ideas can be written from the perspective of discussion, and candidates can easily grasp them when writing. However, to see the requirements of the topic clearly, some clearly stipulate the style, such as this topic, and some have no requirements for the style, which must be noted. Third, the problem of expression. As long as the exam composition is plain and fluent, the language can be expressed accurately, clearly, coherently and appropriately. If the language can be vivid, penetrating and infectious, it is a good article.