There is a sky on everyone's head, everyone's life is connected with the sky, and everyone has a sky in his heart. Clear sky, vast sky and deep sky are fascinating and fascinating. Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "Thinking about the sky", and have your own ideas, regardless of genre, except poetry. The composition topic embodies the principle of organic combination of full openness and certain limitations. The test consists of three parts, one is the prompt, the other is the composition topic, and the third is the specific writing requirements. As long as the candidates follow the prompts, they should write about the past, history and thinking in terms of "homesickness" and "sky", and the voluminous articles will stay on topic. But poetry can't be written, because there is a requirement that "the genre is not limited, except poetry" in the title. This year's composition topic can be regarded as "suggestive propositional composition" In fact, proposition composition, topic composition and material composition are the same thing. Just grasp the given topic or topic, but don't be influenced by the given material. The tips of the composition try to guide the candidates to write articles with true feelings and considerable ideological depth; Although the prompt has a certain prompting and enlightening effect, it is only an example and does not limit the space for candidates to recall, think, associate and imagine. On the other hand, the hints in the proposition are also easy to mislead some candidates to rely too much, lack innovative ideas, simply interpret them and write them in words; It is easy to mislead some candidates to write articles according to the suggested language style. "Miss the sky" has two key words. One is "homesickness" and the other is "sky". Judging from the grammatical structure, it should be a verb-object structure. The subject of nostalgia is "I" in principle, and the object of nostalgia is "heaven". However, some candidates wrote the theme of homesickness in the third person, which became the homesickness of Sima Qian and Li Bai. To tell the truth, Missing Heaven covers a wide range and can be written in many ways. The optional material is also very rich. You can write about the relationship between man and nature, or you can write about the relationship between people. You can write the praise of blue sky and white clouds, the vast, clear and deep sky; Anxiety and thinking about ecological change; Explore the association and imagination of the mystery of the sky and so on. Can write the sky of history, the sky of mind, the sky of spirit, the sky of thought, the sky of art and so on; You can also write the memories and associations of "holding up a blue sky" on the road of life under the impetus of family, teacher-student relationship and friendship; Under the guidance of ideals, beliefs, etc. Strive to overcome the pursuit of "supporting a blue sky" in the end; Inspired by literature, art, science, etc. We are determined to "hold up a blue sky" on the road of life and so on. Because of its breadth, it is the easiest for students to wander in the open and high sky with longing, and it is the easiest for people to feel speechless after writing. In the end, it is often general and empty. It is not easy to write well. However, from the compositions of more than 4,000 randomly selected candidates, we find that the quality of the candidates is high and there are many perfect compositions. Many compositions have quite ingenious ideas; Have a distinct character image; There are real and touching life stories; Have distinct personality characteristics; Have far-reaching artistic conception; There is considerable language to express wisdom. The draft of the Red Mansion is well known to all people in China. Not to mention that Cao Xueqin is pregnant with "a handful of bitter tears and full of absurd words", nor does he think that "two bends are like frowning brows, and a pair of eyes seem to be happy but not happy." ..... Lin Daiyu, who knows better than her works, is as sick as a western child and wins three points. Just saying that Wang Xifeng is "too smart to tell fortune" is enough to make your composition get high marks. However, it is gratifying that candidates rarely involve it. They stopped talking about the ancients and wrote new stories. Although many students have also written historical figures, most of them can distinguish between the past and the present, and write flesh-and-blood articles in connection with real life. Some candidates wrote: "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood." This is Lu Xun's sky, sincere and loyal. "A piece of ice heart is in the jade pot", this is the sky in Wang Changling, and this side of the sky is clear and bright. "The country lives and dies, why not avoid it because of disaster?" This is Lin Zexu's sky, persistent and unyielding. Everyone's life is just a sky, either vast or deep, but this sky is in your hands! Your sky is up to you! Savoring the lives of Lu Xun, Wang Changling and Lin Zexu, his views are concise, unique and ingenious, which implies the author's nostalgia for the historical sky. "Everyone's life is just a sky", which skillfully leads the sky of nostalgia to the sky of grasping oneself. "Instead of drowning in the dust of history, it is better to build a sky that belongs to you." Distinctive and vivid. Professor He Yongkang once told his students earnestly on different occasions: "Most of our candidates are teenagers in their late teens and have little life experience, so it is difficult to write an argumentative essay with profound views, even if it is written in a stylized and routine way. A person can't write a real argumentative essay until he is 30 years old, so I earnestly ask students to write more narratives. " Therefore, most candidates in Jiangsu have written narratives. Of course, narratives and essays with narratives and discussions are also written. Innovative novels will also shine when written. If the examinee writes ordinary lyric prose, it is easy to be vague, and the illusory lyric has no substantive content. It is really difficult to write a general argumentative essay, and candidates rarely involve writing an argumentative essay. You can get high marks in writing narratives. Professor He has repeatedly affirmed: "Write with emotion!" So what is the most touching feeling? The topics of life and death, brotherhood, teacher-student relationship and classmate relationship are enduring. A good article must have good characters, good stories, good feelings, and write your own feelings, ups and downs, simple and pure feelings. Such a composition is bound to get high marks. In fact, a large number of candidates have written many touching and good articles on "maternal love" and "grandparents' love for grandchildren". There is a person who silently supports a growing sky for us, and there is a kind of love that always makes us burst into tears. This person is the mother, and this kind of love is maternal love. Mother's silent concern gave us spiritual comfort and emotional touch. Mother is willing to eat anything for us, and suffer anything, without any return. In the long journey of life, it is selfless maternal love that has taught us to care for others, be grateful to the society, and embrace the life of truth, goodness and beauty with love. "But how much love there is an inch of grass, I got three spring glow. "What reason do we have not to write about our mother and sing praises to our great mother? Some candidates not only wrote a long and heavy maternal love, but also wrote their own thoughts and responsibilities for reality: standing beside my mother, I am much taller than her, putting my hands on her shoulders and feeling the hope and responsibility from the whole family. My university will not have the fast pace as high school, but I will not relax, because I know that my future is the future of my family, and the responsibility on my shoulders is heavier than a thousand pounds. There is a simple article about his father. The little author described the scene of his father cutting wheat with sincere feelings. His father is quiet, hardworking, simple and broad, how similar to ours. Reading this article will make people cry and be moved. The end of the article is the highlight of the article. Taking advantage of the coolness of the examination room and comparing the hot wheat fields, the author wants to "stand in the hot sun for two hours after the exam and feel the taste of the hot sun." When Professor He read this, he was filled with emotion: "No son in the world is so grateful to be a farmer's father. No one has ever used this kind of pen and ink in an article. This wit! It's so touching and lasting! "Students'" Missing the Sky "Random Talk on Guo Shiming of Peixian Middle School. The essay topic of Jiangsu college entrance examination in 2007 is: Everyone has a sky above his head, everyone's life is connected with the sky, and everyone has a sky in his heart. Clear sky, vast sky and deep sky are fascinating and fascinating. Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "Thinking about the sky", and have your own ideas, regardless of genre, except poetry. The composition topic embodies the principle of organic combination of full openness and certain limitations. The test consists of three parts, one is the prompt, the other is the composition topic, and the third is the specific writing requirements. As long as the candidates follow the prompts, they should write about the past, history and thinking in terms of "homesickness" and "sky", and the voluminous articles will stay on topic. But poetry can't be written, because there is a requirement that "the genre is not limited, except poetry" in the title. This year's composition topic can be regarded as "suggestive propositional composition" In fact, proposition composition, topic composition and material composition are the same thing. Just grasp the given topic or topic, but don't be influenced by the given material. The tips of the composition try to guide the candidates to write articles with true feelings and considerable ideological depth; Although the prompt has a certain prompting and enlightening effect, it is only an example and does not limit the space for candidates to recall, think, associate and imagine. On the other hand, the hints in the proposition are also easy to mislead some candidates to rely too much, lack innovative ideas, simply interpret them and write them in words; It is easy to mislead some candidates to write articles according to the suggested language style. "Miss the sky" has two key words. One is "homesickness" and the other is "sky". Judging from the grammatical structure, it should be a verb-object structure. The subject of nostalgia is "I" in principle, and the object of nostalgia is "heaven". However, some candidates wrote the theme of homesickness in the third person, which became the homesickness of Sima Qian and Li Bai. To tell the truth, Missing Heaven covers a wide range and can be written in many ways. The optional material is also very rich. You can write about the relationship between man and nature, or you can write about the relationship between people. You can write the praise of blue sky and white clouds, the vast, clear and deep sky; Anxiety and thinking about ecological change; Explore the association and imagination of the mystery of the sky and so on. Can write the sky of history, the sky of mind, the sky of spirit, the sky of thought, the sky of art and so on; You can also write the memories and associations of "holding up a blue sky" on the road of life under the impetus of family, teacher-student relationship and friendship; Under the guidance of ideals, beliefs, etc. Strive to overcome the pursuit of "supporting a blue sky" in the end; Inspired by literature, art, science, etc. We are determined to "hold up a blue sky" on the road of life and so on. Because of its breadth, it is the easiest for students to wander in the open and high sky with longing, and it is the easiest for people to feel speechless after writing. In the end, it is often general and empty. It is not easy to write well. However, from the compositions of more than 4,000 randomly selected candidates, we find that the quality of the candidates is high and there are many perfect compositions. Many compositions have quite ingenious ideas; Have a distinct character image; There are real and touching life stories; Have distinct personality characteristics; Have far-reaching artistic conception; There is considerable language to express wisdom. The draft of the Red Mansion is well known to all people in China. Not to mention that Cao Xueqin is pregnant with "a handful of bitter tears and full of absurd words", nor does he think that "two bends are like frowning brows, and a pair of eyes seem to be happy but not happy." ..... Lin Daiyu, who knows better than her works, is as sick as a western child and wins three points. Just saying that Wang Xifeng is "too smart to tell fortune" is enough to make your composition get high marks. However, it is gratifying that candidates rarely involve it. They stopped talking about the ancients and wrote new stories. Although many students have also written historical figures, most of them can distinguish between the past and the present, and write flesh-and-blood articles in connection with real life. Some candidates wrote: "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood." This is Lu Xun's sky, sincere and loyal. "A piece of ice heart is in the jade pot", this is the sky in Wang Changling, and this side of the sky is clear and bright. "The country lives and dies, why not avoid it because of disaster?" This is Lin Zexu's sky, persistent and unyielding. Everyone's life is just a sky, either vast or deep, but this sky is in your hands! Your sky is up to you! Savoring the lives of Lu Xun, Wang Changling and Lin Zexu, his views are concise, unique and ingenious, which implies the author's nostalgia for the historical sky. "Everyone's life is just a sky", which skillfully leads the sky of nostalgia to the sky of grasping oneself. "Instead of drowning in the dust of history, it is better to build a sky that belongs to you." Distinctive and vivid. Professor He Yongkang once told his students earnestly on different occasions: "Most of our candidates are teenagers in their late teens and have little life experience, so it is difficult to write an argumentative essay with profound views, even if it is written in a stylized and routine way. A person can't write a real argumentative essay until he is 30 years old, so I earnestly ask students to write more narratives. " Therefore, most candidates in Jiangsu have written narratives. Of course, narratives and essays with narratives and discussions are also written. Innovative novels will also shine when written. If the examinee writes ordinary lyric prose, it is easy to be vague, and the illusory lyric has no substantive content. It is really difficult to write a general argumentative essay, and candidates rarely involve writing an argumentative essay. You can get high marks in writing narratives. Professor He has repeatedly affirmed: "Write with emotion!" So what is the most touching feeling? The topics of life and death, brotherhood, teacher-student relationship and classmate relationship are enduring. A good article must have good characters, good stories, good feelings, and write your own feelings, ups and downs, simple and pure feelings. Such a composition is bound to get high marks. In fact, a large number of candidates have written many touching and good articles on "maternal love" and "grandparents' love for grandchildren". There is a person who silently supports a growing sky for us, and there is a kind of love that always makes us burst into tears. This person is the mother, and this kind of love is maternal love. Mother's silent concern gave us spiritual comfort and emotional touch. Mother is willing to eat anything for us, and suffer anything, without any return. In the long journey of life, it is selfless maternal love that has taught us to care for others, be grateful to the society, and embrace the life of truth, goodness and beauty with love. "But how much love there is an inch of grass, I got three spring glow. "What reason do we have not to write about our mother and sing praises to our great mother? Some candidates not only wrote a long and heavy maternal love, but also wrote their own thoughts and responsibilities for reality: standing beside my mother, I am much taller than her, putting my hands on her shoulders and feeling the hope and responsibility from the whole family. My university will not have the fast pace as high school, but I will not relax, because I know that my future is the future of my family, and the responsibility on my shoulders is heavier than a thousand pounds. There is a simple article about his father. The little author described the scene of his father cutting wheat with sincere feelings. His father is quiet, hardworking, simple and broad, how similar to ours. Reading this article will make people cry and be moved. The end of the article is the highlight of the article. Taking advantage of the coolness of the examination room and comparing the hot wheat fields, the author wants to "stand in the hot sun for two hours after the exam and feel the taste of the hot sun." When Professor He read this, he was filled with emotion: "No son in the world is so grateful to be a farmer's father. No one has ever used this kind of pen and ink in an article. This wit! It's so touching and lasting! "Students' simple works should also be middle school students.