To explain the writing of material composition, we should first read the material, grasp the basic meaning and key meaning of the material, and then write the composition. This is the first step. What is the basic meaning and focus of this material? As long as you have read it, it is not difficult to understand. Its basic meaning is: there is a black sheep in Aries, and the shepherd feels a little pity. Emphasis means: in life, in life, it is precisely because of some regrets that it will be better and more exciting; Perfection is good, but in this world, in life, there is no perfect person and there is no perfect thing. As the saying goes, no one is perfect without perfect gold; From the perspective of imperfection and perfection, imperfection is the norm, perfection is special, and nine times out of ten people who are unhappy in life are like this. Good and bad things should be treated dialectically. Understand these, this is the second step of composition. According to the above understanding, quickly determine a point of view, center, quickly build an outline of the article, and quickly search the accumulated materials in your mind for writing. This is the third step of composition. After writing, go back to the overall consideration to see whether the theme is clear, whether the materials are appropriate, whether the structure is reasonable, whether the levels are clear, whether the sentences are fluent, and whether the writing is correct. This is the last step in the composition. Make a painful reverse extension line. Sue's eyes are straight, and her heart is a pilgrimage. Like being burned, dream vigorously; Just like bathing in the holy light, we should also wash away all the flaws on the road of life and make the road holy. So calm, so stubborn, such as kuafu day by day, such as phoenix nirvana, such as jingwei reclamation, the pursuit of perfection. However, the wind of reality is very tight and the steps are difficult. The ideal perfect picture faded out of people's sight again and again in the place within reach, and the pilgrims were very lost, painful and depressed. But has it ever occurred to him that the problem is that the goal he set is too illusory and unrealistic? Has it ever occurred to him that no one has really achieved the ultimate? Has it ever occurred to him that it was his disappointment that made him realize the true meaning of life and kept him alive, busy and vigorously enriched? What's wrong with imperfection? There was once a fairy tale, a circle with a missing corner, bent on finding the missing part. Along the way, it is precisely because of the lack of a corner that it can't roll quickly, and it can talk to the flowers and plants on the roadside and enjoy the passing scenery. When it really found the missing part and made itself "perfect", it found that it rolled too fast, but lost more encounters with happiness, so it finally decided to give up the found part and make an imperfect but happy and full circle. It is true that there can be no real perfection in the world, but good and bad, sadness and joy, sweetness and bitterness are interdependent, and they are different forms of existence of a thing in two different periods. "Aries" is good, but there is no "black sheep" Maybe the farmer will lose the whole flock. The perfect circle is beautiful, but it has no defects, but it is getting farther and farther away from real life and real happiness. All pain is just happiness misplaced, and all happiness is just the reverse extension of pain. Then why do we always look sad because of imperfections? Why is the Acropolis always in ruins? Because it represents the condensed background of real history; Why is the ancient city of Rome as old as before? Because it is new, it has lost the historical light of the Renaissance. Why don't people return the brokeback Venus intact? Because she is complete, the perfect image in people's minds was broken by heavy hammering. So imperfection is a normal and healthy life form. How can we experience the true meaning of happiness without experiencing imperfect pain? Then why can't we extend the pain in the opposite direction, experience the pain with a happy attitude and turn the shortcomings into advantages? Look at Li Bai, who is full of lofty sentiments and poetic talent, but he is doomed to be an official. But why not go to the imperial court? Bring a pot of wine, take a picture in the flowers, dance under the moon, recite poems and spit embroidery. Isn't it just half a prosperous Tang Dynasty? Van Gogh, what's wrong with not catering to secular aesthetic tastes? Don't be stimulated by money, don't be tempted by women, don't be comforted by flowers, and watch the desolation alone. However, with a drawing board and a brush, he drew fourteen golden flowers in a poetic garden and died for the sun. Didn't the tears shed by the sun burn for centuries when the hearse rumbled past the ancient city of orpheus? Imperfection is the normal state of life. I can't imagine that flowers will never fade, leaves will never set and the sun will never rise. As the saying goes, gold is not enough, and no one is perfect. What we need to do is not to aim too high and fall into the mire of insatiable pain, but just to make a reverse extension line of pain, turn shortcomings into characteristics, and let pain derive happiness, openness and beauty. [Opinion] This is a very convincing masterpiece. At least the following points are worthy of recognition: First, the topic is very novel and unique. What is a "painful reversal"? Happiness, of course. The author does not say it directly, but uses the mathematical term "make a reverse extension line" to express it tactfully, which is refreshing; Second, the demonstration materials are very flexible and sufficient. The missing circle, the ruins of the Acropolis, the restoration of the ancient city of Rome, Venus with a broken arm, Li Bai, Van Gogh, etc. It seems to be euphemistically used by the author for his own use, appropriate and convincing; Third, the viewpoint is clear, the atmosphere is well-founded, the examples are properly analyzed, the wonderful description is used at the beginning, and the metaphor is sublimated at the end. Finally, the center is naturally clarified: "Turn shortcomings into characteristics, and let pain derive happiness, openness and beauty." Incomplete value Shi Jifeng A black sheep mixed with white sheep undoubtedly destroyed the overall visual training and pure aesthetic feeling, and the abrupt black became a symbol as incomplete as a mole. However, when the heavy snow fell in succession and occupied the land of Yuan Ye, the striking black sheep made the shepherd quickly discover the sheep hidden in the snow, which played a great role and showed extraordinary value. Flowers wither, people have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. When we cling to perfection and lament the incomplete ending, have you ever thought that incompleteness is also a kind of beauty, a kind of value, and an existence worthy of our appreciation, taste and thinking? In the field of art, imperfection has aesthetic value. When the statue of Venus with a broken arm saw the light again, the beauty condensed in her eyebrows, posture and figure quickly captured the viewer's heart, which was amazing. It's a pity that her arm was stripped of her body and she didn't know where it was. An almost perfect work of art is incomplete. People have had a heated discussion about this, constantly trying to explore, and put forward various rehabilitation programs. But the installed arm is like a snake, which is out of place with the statue and destroys the original aesthetic feeling. At this time, people suddenly realized that the lost arms not only caused the disfigurement of the statue, but also inadvertently left a vast imaginary sky for the audience. Smart, free and rich connotations have created the endless artistic life of brokeback Venus. In the long river of history, incompleteness has warning value. When entering the University of Berlin, new visitors are often attracted by the glass embedded in the ground in the center of the square. There used to be an underground library under the glass, but strangely, the neatly arranged bookshelves were empty and the library became a blank scar. The explanation of this strange sight is engraved on the stone tablet next to it. It turned out that during the darkest fascist period in German history, the rulers ordered the destruction of all books in the library of Berlin University in order to eliminate theoretical works that were not conducive to the implementation of extreme policies. Those books are the crystallization and fruit of human thoughts that have been circulating for many years! Therefore, the University of Berlin buried this great tragedy in this transparent grave and left it in an incomplete historical memory forever. People are silent here, alert here, remember here, and sublimate pages of broken historical lessons into the guidance and guidance of humanistic spirit here. On the road of life, disability has the value of awakening. People lament that life is always incomplete and there are always regrets. Behind the glory of happiness, happiness and success, there is always pain of suffering, sadness and failure. Shi Tiesheng once said: "This shore will never be complete, otherwise the other shore will collapse." Indeed, when God's mercy gave us "kindness", it also left a "sad" aftertaste. One-way perfection is mostly an imaginary world imagined in dreams. However, if there is no incomplete night, how can there be day? Without the deformity of winter, how can there be warm spring? How can we be together without leaving incompletely? ..... It is precisely because there are pieces of broken scenery on the road of life that we discover the complete other side of life, let us cherish the beauty of the world, the beauty of emotions and the beauty of the soul, let us look at life with deep eyes and calm feelings, look at life and look at this double world that is happy even if it is broken. Yu Zeng pointed out in his article that the overly regular and mature aesthetic model reflects man's victory and transcendence over nature. Convenient and comfortable, but also lost the wildness and natural simplicity. Therefore, while pursuing perfection and perfection, please cherish the precious value of incompleteness, find the beauty of artistic creation in incompleteness, remember the experience preserved in history, and feel the philosophy of the world. [Comment] One should learn to look at problems dialectically and reason dialectically. The author of this paper has done a good job in this respect. The title of the article makes the point clear, and then uses four paragraphs to reason, which proves my point. With these four paragraphs, you can basically write, but the clever author did not stop, but dialectically sublimated with two paragraphs, making the analysis of "incomplete value" watertight, interesting and alarming. The full text is dialectical in atmosphere, fluent and beautiful in language, complete in structure and clear in level, which is a masterpiece.