The composition topic of the annual college entrance examination has always been one of the focuses of attention of all parties. This year's college entrance examination composition in our province requires candidates to write according to a passage by Yuan Longping. Is such a proposition difficult? How to grasp from style to conception? What points should be paid attention to when writing? How to write well ... Yesterday, this newspaper invited many senior Chinese teachers in our city to comment on the composition proposition of the college entrance examination for the first time. □ Our reporter Ye
20 1 1 Fujian college entrance examination composition questions
Write a narrative or argumentative essay of not less than 800 words according to the following words: Yuan Longping said that my job made me bask in the sun and breathe fresh air, which made me have a good body ... I dreamed that the rice I planted was as high as sorghum, the ears were as long as brooms, and the particles were as big as peanuts. My friend and I sat under the ear of rice to enjoy the cool.
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(The final and complete standard questions are subject to the announcement of the local admissions examination institutions. )
The style is limited and the narrative is not easy to write.
Chen Wu, Head of Chinese Teaching and Research Group of Quanzhou No.5 Middle School
This year's composition is really not too difficult. The materials given are simple and easy to enter the questions, and there are not many obstacles in the examination of the questions, which embodies the principle of smooth transition. I think it should be accurate to write "Lohas", "Work is beautiful" and "I like it, I choose".
What is different from previous years is the choice of style. This year, I asked to write a narrative or argumentative essay, unlike in previous years, except poetry, which is not limited to genres-it seems to respect candidates, but it is actually more time-consuming, and it has also led to a large number of "four unlike" compositions that have been criticized. I estimate that most students will choose to write argumentative essays this year, because it is almost impossible to write narratives with such materials. However, complicated argumentative essays are not so good to write. Some students who are good at accommodating and interspersed seem to just recite some famous sayings and examples, plus their own heads and tails. This "pie-spreading" composition needs to stop!
It is not difficult to be a candidate, which reflects the good intentions of the proposer. But the fly in the ointment is that deep thinking training is basically not available because it is simple and easy to see.
The difficulty of the test questions is the key.
Xie Quanzhou No.1 Middle School Teaching and Research Section Director
The topic is quite difficult, and it is not easy to investigate. Correctly grasping the meaning of the topic is the key. The first sentence of Yuan Longping in the material can be understood as his positive and optimistic working attitude; The second sentence can be understood as his life ideal or dream. Such a material proposition presents at least the following writing directions:
First, pay attention to the examination of questions. Candidates should write from the overall meaning of the material, not from a certain sentence or a certain angle, that is, "good attitude and ideal in life", "to pursue dreams, to be willing to enjoy themselves in suffering", "to have dreams, but also to work hard and persist" and "to have fun in suffering is often the happiness of those who have dreams". In short, you must read the two sentences in the material together, or explain the relationship between the two sentences, or express your understanding of the two sentences.
The second is to pay attention to style. It is the first time that our province has put forward specific requirements for style since the independent proposition of the college entrance examination in 2004. However, this kind of material is more suitable for writing argumentative essays, and it is quite difficult to write quality narratives.
The third is to attach importance to realism. The materials reflect the current socialist core values, and candidates should pay more attention to the reality to discuss or describe it.
That makes sense. It's not hard. There's not much room.
Lu, a teacher of the Chinese preparation group of Grade Three in Quanzhou No.11 Middle School.
This year, the material composition pattern of last year is still continued, but the difficulty is reduced. Yuan Longping's words are plain and easy to understand, and candidates can understand them without barriers. Moreover, candidates are familiar with Yuan Longping's deeds, and it is not difficult to conceive, but there is not much room for development and innovation.
In terms of conception, Yuan Longping's first sentence of this passage reflects his optimistic, healthy and positive attitude towards life; The second sentence embodies his lofty pursuit of life. Tell us: a person with a dream is willing to do boring and hard work. Therefore, a better idea can start with "the relationship between mentality and dreams", such as "optimism is the driving force of dreams" and "traveling with dreams is also fun". We can also start with the importance of dreams to the meaning of life, such as "dreams make people vivid" and "dreams make people stand out". Or start with what you need to realize your dreams: face the reality correctly, face the environment optimistically, and have a peaceful mind.
The common problems that may arise are as follows: First, because candidates have written essays on similar topics, it is inevitable that they will give questions or digress. Second, the content is empty and lacks depth. Some candidates' understanding of dreams can only be generalized, and it is difficult to write deeply.
The interpretation of dreams reflects the social value orientation.
Luo Hao, assistant principal and office director of Quanzhou Modern Middle School.
The material of this year's college entrance examination composition is only a passage by Yuan Longping, or "talking in a dream". When encountering this kind of material with unclear directionality, we should first carefully examine the questions and find out the real intention of the questioner.
What is lacking in this era is a warrior who pursues dreams tirelessly for the future development of human society. Therefore, the orientation of composition is related to the construction of social morality. Why Yuan Longping? 1981June 6th, the state awarded Yuan Longping and others the first special invention award since the founding of New China. This year is exactly the 30th anniversary from the day before the college entrance examination, which can send a signal. I would like to believe that this guess is exactly what the questioner intended.
Students can conceive around the structure of dreaming, chasing dreams and interpreting dreams. First, you have a dream and a direction. Secondly, different dreams reflect different values, which can be combined with realistic analysis, such as comparing the dream of profit-seeking of enterprises, the dream of personal worship of money, and the dream of Yuan Lao's home and country enjoying the cool under the grass to reflect events such as "clenbuterol" and "plasticizer", so as to strengthen the importance of the construction of civil social responsibility. Finally, highlight the significance of struggle. The materials also tell us that we should dare to dream and constantly pursue greater ideals.