Grass gives people vitality. It is full of vitality, dreams and hopes. Grass has a wide range of functions: it can be made into prescriptions to treat people; It can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, so that we have fresh air every day; It can prevent soil erosion and desertification in the world ... It also has a quality that has always inspired me, and that is perseverance.
I remember it was in the sixth grade of primary school. I didn't do well in the mid-term exam, so I screwed up. I walked to the river alone and silently looked at the endless river. I was speechless and sat down.
I sat on the green grass and calmly reflected on my previous loss. At this point, the light in my heart has disappeared, and I feel as if I have fallen into the abyss and can't get up again.
Thinking about it, I stood up and looked down. The grass was trampled by me. I thought to myself: Grass has the same sense of loss as me! I went home in despair. The next day, I came to yesterday's place to reflect. I didn't expect the grass that I trampled all over yesterday to grow taller and more energetic.
My heart was touched at once, and the light in my heart lit up again, and I regained my confidence. At that time, my heart felt like a big stone, but now I have removed the stone and untied my heart. Looking at these grasses, I can't help thinking of Bai Juyi's poem: "wildfire never quite consumes them, the spring breeze is blowing high."
I ran home happily, flying freely in the sky like a happy bird. In the final exam, I was full of confidence and achieved brilliant results-because I know where I fell and I will try my best to get up from there. I am convinced that as long as you persevere and work hard, there is nothing unsuccessful in the world! Ah! Grass, you touched my heart and made my heart spacious and bright.
2. Writing a 400-word composition around the feelings gained from things touched my heart.
Grass has been neglected since ancient times, but I think it is indispensable in my life.
Grass gives people vitality. It is full of vitality, dreams and hopes. Grass has a wide range of functions: it can be made into prescriptions to treat people; It can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, so that we have fresh air every day; It can prevent soil erosion and desertification in the world ... It also has a quality that has always inspired me, and that is perseverance.
I remember it was in the sixth grade of primary school. I didn't do well in the mid-term exam, so I screwed up. I walked to the river alone and silently looked at the endless river. I was speechless and sat down. I sat on the green grass and calmly reflected on my previous loss. At this point, the light in my heart has disappeared, and I feel as if I have fallen into the abyss and can't get up again. Thinking about it, I stood up and looked down. The grass was trampled by me. I thought to myself: Grass has the same sense of loss as me! I went home in despair.
The next day, I came to yesterday's place to reflect. I didn't expect the grass that I trampled all over yesterday to grow taller and more energetic. My heart was touched at once, and the light in my heart lit up again, and I regained my confidence. At that time, my heart felt like a big stone, but now I have removed the stone and untied my heart. Looking at these grasses, I can't help thinking of Bai Juyi's poem: "wildfire never quite consumes them, the spring breeze is blowing high." I ran home happily, flying freely in the sky like a happy bird. In the final exam, I was full of confidence and achieved brilliant results-because I know where I fell and I will try my best to get up from there. I am convinced that as long as you persevere and work hard, there is nothing unsuccessful in the world!
Ah! Grass, you touched my heart and made my heart spacious and bright!
3. A 600-700 composition takes one thing as a clue that runs through the whole text, and this thing is around the book with me all my life.
I first came into contact with books when I was 6 years old. Grandpa's family was very poor before, and my father went out to work without graduating from junior high school. There are no traces of books at home. Until I was 6 years old, my father sent me a book called "100,000 Why" from far away. Because I couldn't read at that time, I didn't know what was written in the book at all, but I "read" it with relish, and the book was turned over and over again by me. Once, I picked up the book and "read" it again, and found that several pages were actually stuck. I carefully tore open the stuck pages and wiped them with my hand for fear of sticking them again next time. In this way, a year passed in my voice of "reading".
The next year, I followed my father to Pujiang, where I also went to school. After school, under the guidance of my teacher, I know more and more words and understand the books my father gave me. Every time I come home from school and finish my homework, I can't help but pick up that book and read it eagerly, often forgetting to eat. ...
Now, I am in the fourth grade and have read a lot of books, but books are still so sacred to me. Books are like bright strawberries, delicious chocolates and delicious sweets, which attract me and fascinate me. Every time I finish reading a book, my spirit and soul seem to have been baptized.
A short life, a full life, does not seek eternal possession, but only a moment's touch. No matter the ending is eternal or disillusioned, I hope that rich book can accompany me all my life. ...
4. Writing materials inspired by the little things in life. If it's good, it will be added. Today, the teacher assigned an essay entitled "Ants Move Food". It happened that there was an ant hole in front of my house. Today, I will take a closer look. I heard that ants like sweets best, so I put some sugar and some cookies about one meter away from the nest, and then I squatted there and began to wait for ants. But I still haven't seen an ant. I thought: did I put the food too far away from their nest, so they couldn't smell the fragrance and weren't attracted? So I tried to move the food forward a little, and finally the first ant appeared. I saw it slowly crawling towards the white sugar and biscuits I scattered on the ground. I saw it turn around the biscuit several times, then pushed it to the left and moved it to the right. However, cookies are just for it. Cookie still stood there as motionless as Mount Tai. I thought it would be discouraged, but I didn't expect it to turn its head to a few sugar beside it. This time, it effortlessly put a white sugar on its head and slowly climbed into its home. After a while, I saw a large group of ants walking slowly towards the biscuits in a neat line, and finally I saw Mount Tai. They were ecstatic and finally approached Mount Tai. These small forces have turned into a huge force, pushing Mount Tai slowly to their home. I was deeply moved by this spirit, and he inspired me: a little ant has such a strong team spirit, and they know that unity is power, so if everyone can understand this, what else can't be done? I wrote it myself. I smiled.
5. composition: get inspiration from something. There are many inspirations in life, in newspapers and books.
But a small paper gave me a different inspiration.
"We have a test paper today."
The teacher said and unfolded the test paper. I think: the results of the previous two exams were good, and this time I will definitely get more than 90 points.
Put away the test paper, pick up the pen, and I'll write at once. If I can't understand a question, I will write a composition. And when I finished writing my composition, I forgot all about this question.
After I finished writing, I didn't check it. I took out a pen, found a piece of paper and began to scribble. I didn't find any wrong questions, no typos, and no fluent composition sentences. I just write and draw on paper.
When the teacher read out the results, I was in high spirits, imagining the envious eyes of my classmates, the happy eyes of my parents and the happy eyes of my teacher.
When I looked at the results, it was an angry voice: "Feng Shuo, 87, the basic knowledge was reduced by 6.5 points, and I didn't do any reading questions, so my composition was not smooth." This time, you have regressed a lot. Take this test paper home for parents to see at night, not only to sign, but also to sign opinions. "
When I got home at night, my parents saw that my face was wrong and asked with concern, "Daughter, what's the matter? What's wrong? " I whispered, "I got 87 points today." Dad looked a little angry, but immediately returned to normal: "bring me the test paper and I'll analyze the reason for it."
I took out the test paper from my schoolbag and my father took it. What you see is one red circle after another, full of typos. There is no sentence next to the composition, and there is a big "87" on the paper. My father said to me, "Daughter, are you proud of doing well in the previous two exams?" I nodded with a red face, and my father said earnestly, "Son, you can't be proud. If you are proud, you will fail. " . You got it? "I nodded hard.
You can't be proud. If you are proud, failure is just around the corner, and proud soldiers will fail. This is my inspiration. What about you? .
6. How do you write about food safety? There is a saying that "food is the most important thing for the people". This shows how closely our life is related to food! When it comes to food, we will think, is the food around us safe? Who is unsanitary? Many of us will think so. Recently, malachite green and Sudan red have been "eliminated", and the red heart duck eggs have not been completely solved. But even if it has been solved now, we still have to worry about whether "they" will make a comeback in the near future. Thinking of this, I can't help thinking of those people who are constantly "making" these foods that endanger life safety behind the scenes. So I wonder, what are these people doing? I think it's still for one word-money, which is the bait that the devil is proud of. How many murders, robberies and thefts have happened in this world because of money? Who would have thought that such coins were "suppliers" who wanted to transport criminals to prisons and courts? That's because of money: the use of artificial sweeteners (sodium saccharin and sodium cyclamate) and preservatives (sodium benzoate and potassium sorbate) and other food additives. Therefore, I really want some people to understand how many people have been harmed by their "products". Many people have vomited and diarrhea and even lost their lives because of eating these so-called "hygienic and safe foods"! However, I think, in addition to criticizing those who only know how to make money without considering health and safety, we should also raise our awareness of prevention! If the apple is too bright, it may be waxed. Too many white spots on grapes may be due to excessive use of pesticides. These show that some artificially added chemicals and harmful substances in national defense food can be detected by naked eyes or simple methods. Come on, let's fight for our health and safety together! Put an end to harmful food and give us a healthy body!
A few days ago, I saw a yellow dog being hit by a car in the middle of the flowing road.
It can't stand up any more, just open its eyes in despair, sticking out its tongue and panting. Just when I felt heartbroken, suddenly a black and white puppy came running from the other side of the road, only to see it running next to the yellow dog and barking around the half-dead yellow dog, as if asking it to get up and walk with itself and leave this dangerous place.
Later, when he saw that the little yellow dog couldn't get up, he bit the little yellow dog's hind leg with his mouth and pulled the dying little yellow dog to the side of the road. He pulled for a while, let go of his mouth and gasped, then picked up the yellow dog's leg and pulled.
Looking at this scene, I couldn't help crying. I think of those people who gave their lives to save the trapped miners.
Animal Revelation: Part 1 My birthday is coming, and my father gave me a lovely little turtle. I am very happy. The tortoise has a hard shell on its back. It walks slowly and is very cute.
I take good care of it every day. I feed it every time I go home, and sometimes I take it to bask in the sun ... I like it very much. Every time I go to school, I will reluctantly say goodbye to it. Even when I sleep, I will put it and its nest on the bed and watch it fall asleep.
The little turtle also thrives under my care. Once, my parents were not at home, and I was bored, so I took the little turtle out of the basin to play.
However, I found that the little turtle has been kept for a year. I take good care of it, feed it and change the water on time every day, but why is it still so small? I was in a hurry, thinking that I increased the food from one bag to two bags every day, and the food increased. Will it get bigger? As I said, I increase food every day. The little turtle really grew up, and I was very happy, so I increased the food from two bags to four bags, hoping that it would grow from a little turtle to a turtle quickly. However, I fed too much, and the little turtle was suffocated.
I was sad and cried for a long time. From this incident, we know that the growth of any living thing has its own laws. If you are eager for success, it will backfire and do bad things with good intentions.
Enlightenment from animals: there is no shortage of beauty in life, but the eyes that find beauty. In the vast sea of books, nature is a silent teacher. Next, I will talk about the inspiration I got from ants.
Once I found a nest of ants in the grass in the community. I saw them in groups of three or five, carrying food such as rice grains and biscuit residue.
Some older ones actually moved a wasp, but the wasp was too big and the hole was too small. What shall we do? I hurried to find a magnifying glass to see how it transported such a big food into the hole. I saw it cut the food into the same size as the hole with small thorns on its legs, and then moved the divided food into the hole one by one.
I carefully observed the ant's legs. It turns out that ants have many small thorns on their legs, which are very sharp, just like cutting food with a Swiss army knife.
Suddenly, I had a wonderful idea. If you have tools like ants, you can cut materials very easily, and you can calculate the area and volume of objects. How much time and energy engineers will save in building houses and repairing roads! It looks like a metal bar. Open the lid, you can see the low-pressure water knife with a diameter of about 5 cm, which is very safe to use. The other end is a searchlight, which is connected with a microcomputer. It can simulate the appearance of an object, calculate how much material is needed, how much will be lost, and what it will look like after completion. It is widely used in architecture, sculpture and cutting-edge technology, such as drilling and grinding.
Although all this is just a mirage, I will develop it one day. Students, let's go out of the room together and listen to the sounds of nature.
Follow the footsteps of nature and you will find something. Enlightenment from animals: the third animal is indispensable to the earth. Not only that, many animals also tell us enlightenment. What's there? Then take a look at the following article! Who would have thought of hating flies? It also inspired scientists to invent a small gas analysis device, which has been installed in the cockpit of the spacecraft to detect the composition of the gas in the cabin.
Jellyfish are lower coelenterates with more than 250 species. Jellyfish contains more than 95% water and consists of endoderm. There is a thick interlayer between the two layers, which is not only transparent, but also floating.
Jellyfish have various shapes, such as umbrellas, coins and hats. They are very beautiful. There is a small ball on the thin handle in the tentacle, and there is a small auditory stone in it. This is its ear. Infrasound waves generated by the friction between waves and air hit the auditory stone, and the auditory stone touches the surrounding receptors. Jellyfish can get information more than ten hours before the storm warning, so they will disappear from the ocean immediately.
Therefore, the wind ear of jellyfish is imitated by people, and it is of great significance to design the storm predictor of wind ear of jellyfish for navigation. There are many inspirations, such as: submarines were invented according to whales, helicopters were invented according to dragonflies, and radars were invented according to bats ... I won't go into details one by one.
Revelation from animals: Chapter 4: Nature is a good teacher and friend of human beings, which gives us a lot of enlightenment. Let me first introduce some things that scientists have inspired and invented from animals. Sharks are the "kings of the sea", and the speed of swimming is shocking. What makes it so fast? After repeated research and experiments, scientists finally discovered the secret of sharks.
It turns out that the shark is covered with shallow ditches, so that the sea can slide smoothly without vortex. So according to this principle, scientists made a swimsuit-shark swimsuit.
This kind of swimsuit is specially added with dentate protrusions, which can effectively guide the water flow, tighten the body and avoid muscle vibration, and become a favorite swimsuit for countless swimmers. Nowadays, the means of transportation that people like to travel are also inspired by animals. What kind of transportation is it? It's the subway.
The subway was actually invented by the mole. The mole dug a long tunnel underground and lived freely in this underground world.
They are not disturbed by the outside world and are not afraid of wind and rain. Scientists invented the subway according to this revelation.
This allows the originally crowded "ground" to be handed in.
8. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating and drinking fruit? It is better to teach people to fish than to teach them to fish.
If you want to know how to write your own post-reading feeling, you must first know what post-reading feeling is. After reading, it means how you feel after reading something, or a book, or just an article. All these are ok, so how should I write them? Let me analyze it for you from the following aspects. First, from the perspective of writing, we should attach importance to reading. In the relationship between reading and feeling, reading is the premise and foundation of feeling. Sense is the extension or result of reading.
You must "read" before "feel". If you don't study, you won't feel. Therefore, to write a post-reading feeling, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp the basic content of the original text, correctly understand the central idea of the original text and the meaning of key sentences, and deeply understand the author's writing purpose and the thoughts and feelings expressed in the text.
Second, we should choose the feeling point accurately. After reading a book or an article, there will be many feelings and experiences. For the same book or article, different people think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "teasing others" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people who have no real skills will "expose their stuffing" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we consider the reason why Mr. Nan Guo Can spent half a day in Qi Xuanwang, we can think that leaders should have a realistic leadership style, not flashy, otherwise it will leave loopholes for those who fish in troubled waters. If we think from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's "pot rice" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides objective conditions for people like Mr. Nanguo to muddle along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the "iron rice bowl" and abolishing the pot rice since the reform and opening up.
After reading an article, you can't write many feelings or experiences, so just choose. As a beginner, you should choose what you feel most and have something to say to write.
We should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing problems, pay attention to our own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text. Second, the writing method There are usually three ways to write after reading: one is to abbreviate the outline, the other is to write after reading, and the third is to extract good sentences and paragraphs.
The topic can be "After Reading" or "After Reading". ? First of all, we must examine the questions clearly.
When writing, we should distinguish what is primary and what is secondary, and strive to make "reading" grasp the key points and "feel" to write experiences. ? Secondly, choose materials.
Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and then we can have some feelings. Only by studying hard can we find the connection point of reading experience. This is the central idea of the article and the sentence that points out the central idea of the article. When writing a work, you can't cover everything. You should write down the changes in your thoughts and actions after reading it, and make a fuss about some of them.
Third, to write a post-reading feeling, we should start with a brief introduction to the contents of the read works, and then write our own experiences. The original content is often summarized in 3~4 sentences.
In the end, most of them return to the works they have read. Focus on the word "feeling" and remember to connect with your own life.
Finally, the points for attention in writing the post-reading feeling: ① Writing the post-reading feeling is by no means copying or simply repeating the original text, nor can it be played arbitrarily without the original text, but should be based on writing "experience". Write with true feelings.
It should be a heartfelt feeling, not a "criticism letter" or a "guarantee". (3) Write unique and fresh feelings, and strive to have new ideas to attract or infect readers.
Third, the idea of writing What is the feeling after reading? After reading an article or a book, write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The written article is called "feeling after reading". How to write a review? The basic idea of reading after reading is: briefly describe the relevant content of the original text.
Such as the title of the book, the author, the writing year of the book and article, the abstract of the original book or text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion.
This part must highlight the word "Jane", briefly describe the part directly related to feelings, and omit things unrelated to feelings. Clarify the basic point of view.
Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence".
This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text.
Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article. Put facts and reason around the basic point of view.
This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing. In this process, we should pay attention to the fact that reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view.
Integrating practice around basic viewpoints. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling.
To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon.
When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely focusing on and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly.
For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged. The above content is about how to write comments. Writing has two angles and three ways, and has its own unique writing ideas. I believe that as long as you follow the method taught by this article, you can certainly write a qualified summary after reading an article. Pay attention.
9. How do you write your thoughts on health food? How to write your thoughts after reading? First, choose what you feel most, which is the key to writing a good review.
After reading a book or an article, there may be many feelings. If you cover everything like a grocery store, and write your feelings in one place, there is nothing too deep, and the key parts are brushed away like dragonfly water, which will inevitably make the article dull and not profound. Therefore, before writing your feelings, you should carefully think and analyze, refine your feelings, and choose what you feel most.
You can write by grasping the central idea of the original work, or you can write by grasping a plot, a character and a flashing language that you feel most deeply in the text. It's best to highlight it, dig deeper and write your true feelings. In short, the deeper the feeling, the more vivid the expression, and the more touching the article. Second, we should closely connect with reality, which is an important content of the feeling after reading.
The focus of writing post-reading feelings should be to express feelings in connection with reality. What we are talking about is extensive contact, which can be linked with personal reality, social reality, historical lessons, current situation, childhood life, class and family situation, but the most important thing is to highlight the spirit of the times and have a strong sense of the times no matter how we contact.
Third, we should properly handle the relationship between "reading" and "feeling" and combine discussion, narration and lyricism. The feeling after reading is an argumentative reading note. We should use personal experience, practical experience and vivid examples to clarify the truth learned from "reading".
Therefore, we should not only write "reading" but also "feeling" in the feeling after reading, which should be both descriptive and reasonable. Narration is the basis of discussion, and discussion is the deepening of narration, and the two must be combined.
The feeling after reading is mainly "feeling". To quote the original text properly, of course, you can't quote too much, and you should give priority to your own language.
In the way of expression, narrative and discussion can be used, and the discussion should be based on analysis and reasoning, with few examples and concise quotations from the original text. Structurally, it is generally recommended to read in general at the beginning, from which "feeling" is derived. After expressing the feeling in a concentrated way, read it again at the end.
Don't recite the original text too much, but embody the word' Jane'. What should I read if I want to write about my reading experience? 1) Citation-Cite materials around the meaning point. Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text.
The feeling after reading focuses on feeling, which comes from specific reading, and "quotation" is the foothold of feeling. The so-called "quotation" refers to quoting the original text around the feeling point: the material is short and can be quoted in full; The material is long, or the key words and sentences that lead to "feeling" are extracted, or the main points that lead to "feeling" are outlined. No matter which way you quote, the "quotation" should be concise, accurate and targeted.
Such as the title of the book, the author, the year of writing, the original book or the abstract of the original text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion.
In this part, we must highlight the word "Jane", and we must not describe the specific content of books and articles in large paragraphs, but simply describe the parts directly related to feelings and omit things unrelated to feelings. (2) Discussion-analyzing materials to improve the sense of practice.
Clarify the basic point of view. After introducing the content of "reading", we should make some comments on "reading".
We can analyze the content of "citation" on the basis of facts; It can also be excavated from phenomenon to essence, from individual to general; It is necessary to analyze the meaningful materials and then naturally "light up" your feelings. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences.
Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article.
The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.
(3) Connecting with reality and expanding vertically and horizontally. Put facts and reason around the basic point of view.
The most taboo in writing after reading is to talk about things in general. If you can't talk about the matter, you can't go deep, and the article is too superficial.
Generally speaking, it often makes reading feel lack of pertinence and can't give people a shock. Contact means close contact with reality, which can not only be related to similar phenomena in real life from one place to another, but also to the opposite problems in real life from ancient times to the present.
You can focus on the overall situation, or you can start with small things. Of course, when analyzing and demonstrating with reality, we should also pay attention to counterattack or echo the "quotation" part from time to time, so that "connection", "quotation" and "connection" become the main part of the argumentative paper, which is an exposition of the basic point (that is, the central point), and prove the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, making the argument more prominent and convincing.
In this process, we should pay attention to the fact that all facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view. (4) Conclusion-Summarize the full text and sublimate the sentiment.
Integrating practice around basic viewpoints. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling.
To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon.
When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely surrounding and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. Knot can not only respond to the last article, but also emphasize feelings; You can also raise hopes and issue calls.
No matter which way it ends, it must be integrated with the previous article. After reading, you should always be bound by "reading", quote "reading" at the beginning, counter-attack the content of "reading" from time to time in the middle, and counter-attack the content of "reading" appropriately at the end without relaxation.
The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged.
Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written. We should pay attention to the following problems when writing about the feelings after reading: first, in the relationship between reading and feeling, we should pay attention to reading, which is the premise and foundation of feeling; Sense is the extension or result of reading.
You must "read" before "feel". If you don't "read", you won't feel it. Therefore, to write a review, we must first understand.