In study, work and even life, everyone has written comments and should be familiar with all kinds of comments. With the help of comments, the internal motivation of the evaluated object can be stimulated and maintained, and its internal potential can be mobilized. So the question is, what kind of comments are good? The following is a composition evaluation of the argumentative papers I collected, hoping to help everyone.

Evaluation of argumentative writing 1 1. This argumentative paper has a clear point of view, and its inscription highlights its own point of view. In the text, I use the methods of quotation, example demonstration, reason demonstration and so on to demonstrate my point of view and make it clear. This is a successful exercise.

This is a short literary review. The author enthusiastically affirms the crested phoenix, mercilessly lashes the crested phoenix, is completely relevant, novel and full of personality. The full text has a clear-cut banner and spicy language, just like Erguotou, which makes people feel hot and see stars at a bite.

This argumentative paper comes straight to the point and puts forward the view that music has magical functions. Clear point of view, simple thinking, intriguing. This paper is clear in structure, natural in transition, profound in level, distinct in level and rich in meaning.

4. This argumentative paper has a clear argument, and uses rich examples and convincing vivid language to make the full-text argument clear, with novel, rich, typical and rigorous structure. The thought of the article is profound and makes people think for a long time.

This is an argumentative paper about setbacks, which comes straight to the point and puts forward the central argument in the form of rhetorical question. The level of argumentation is clear, the structure is clear, which arouses readers' thinking, is clear-cut, clear-cut, easy to explain, and emphasizes the central argument again at the end.

6. This article begins with a clear meaning, and then lists Cooper, Populus euphratica and Meihua to analyze their strong perseverance, and compares them with me, pointing out that I should be better than them as a person, thus demonstrating the importance of perseverance to success.

7, caring, is a lingering love thread, cutting constantly, the reason is still chaotic; But without care, can people still call people? This article talks about the past and the present, and expresses a deep understanding of care. Compared with the changes of people's expression of concern in ancient and modern times, the author shows nostalgia for pure and innocent feelings.

8. Judging from your composition, you can change it like this: throw away the topic provided, write it from your own point of view, and change the topic to "Time" to leave us a heavy gift. The first paragraph is philosophical, as long as the last sentence is changed into a heavy gift left by time, it can guide the full text. If the following paragraphs can be revised according to this idea, I think a good composition will be born.

9. The topic of your composition ignited the hope of tomorrow, which shows that you chose the topic of time is the hope of life to write. However, you didn't focus on this point, but let your mind write. The first paragraph of the article does not buckle the topic, the second paragraph writes that fast-paced life makes us numb, and the third paragraph writes two meanings, one is that memory makes us know ourselves, the other is that time can witness everything, and the last paragraph closes the above and points out the topic. Except for a few local topics and topics at the end of the article, the whole article does not focus on the theme. This digression is a taboo in composition. I hope you can pay enough attention to it.

10, fluent in language and rich in ideas, which is the overall impression left by your composition; Your composition can be written better, which is my trust and expectation for you.

1 1, the article conforms to the meaning of the topic, which can be seen from how to see the rainbow without experiencing wind and rain; Finally, ask the question again and the center will be clear. As an argumentative essay, the language of the article is fluent, less dull and boring than the orthodox argumentative essay, more vivid spirituality and aura, and more resistant to personal reading. The author has a deep understanding of the relationship between growth and frustration, and can make a thorough analysis with examples and quotations, achieving an enlightening and thought-provoking expression effect; The use of metaphor, parallelism and rhetorical questions makes the whole article colorful.

12, this argumentative paper begins with explaining what life is, and naturally leads to the following. In the discussion part, we pay attention to reasoning, make good use of metaphors to reason, and discuss the different manifestations and results of the same situation very clearly through comparative argumentation. The author's discussion combined with his own experience is convincing.

13, this is a normative argumentative paper. The opening language is concise and clear. The discussion part is divided into two parts, and the main purpose of the central sentence is to give examples. The example is typical, the angle is different, and it is very measured. The ending thought is positive and inspiring.

14, this argumentative essay, come straight to the point and make the argument clear. The discussion process is reasonable and pure, and the arguments are novel and rich. Full style and clear paragraphs. According to what, why and how to organize the full text, it can be regarded as a model of an argumentative essay.

15. At first glance, the structure of this argumentative paper is not clear, but reading the whole article vertically, this arrangement has its own hills and valleys in the mind of the little author. The article is full of old sayings, and a lot of reasoning skills are also enriched. This article is profound in content and philosophical in language. The whole article vaguely contains the ancient Zen and unique values of the East. It fully shows the depth of the author's thoughts and the richness of knowledge.

16, the dream of this article is the driving force of life, with lofty thoughts and refined language. With examples, the author discusses that as long as we have dreams and work hard for them, we will usher in the most brilliant spring in life, because dreams are the driving force of life.

17. At the beginning, this paper puts forward the central argument that can not be ignored, and then demonstrates the central argument with several sub-arguments. Can comprehensively use a variety of argumentation methods to demonstrate opinions, with clear arguments and strong arguments.

Evaluation of argumentative writing 2 1. This argumentative paper expounds that if people want to constantly pursue new goals and constantly understand the new world, they must drive again and again and rush to their next destination. In this paper, parallelism is used to make the feelings stronger and the language full of rhythm.

2. From the beginning, it points out the important role of core values in history, which is very weighty. Then the author said that history and present are a face-to-face explanation; Writing about the return of Hong Kong is a breakthrough. It is easier to make the truth clear by writing in this way and combining points with surfaces.

This argumentative paper starts with a topic and fully demonstrates it. It uses demonstration methods such as example demonstration, contrast demonstration and metaphor demonstration. The discussion is well-founded and logical. The article uses questions many times to arouse readers' interest in reading and stimulate people's thinking. The end contains a philosophy: giving up is a kind of beauty!

This argumentative paper wins by reason, with dialectical views, flexible language and free and smart colors. At the beginning of the article, I put forward my own views: believing in myself does not mean being stubborn; Listening to opinions doesn't mean following the trend … then explain why you should listen to others' opinions. The language of the article is concise and focused; Proper quotation makes the center stand out; The question at the end of the article is thought-provoking. If the title of this article can be changed to "Believe in yourself and others", the effect will be better.

5. With the topic of "giving up", the author tells us that we should know how to give up something at the right time by giving examples such as "Alexander", "little boy" and "waiter". At the end of the article, there is a topic, "Success often lies in choice." In a word, it is concise and intriguing.

6. The topic of this argumentative paper is very contemporary. This paper makes a calm and comprehensive analysis around the view that "the old man needs help when he falls to the ground", which has recently troubled the public. The angle of consideration is also very thorough, and finally, concrete solutions are put forward from two aspects: self and social morality. Profound style and strong arguments. This is a rare masterpiece.

7. This is an argumentative essay. The theme of the full text is distinct, with far-reaching ideas, clear argumentation level and orderly structure. In the choice of argumentation materials, the author has a good grasp of anecdotes and historical allusions of famous people at home and abroad, which shows his profound reading skills and cultural background. The last paragraph is a clever use of sentence arrangement, which implies historical facts and is very infectious in one go.

8. The title of this article is "Frustration and Misfortune", and the opening language of the article is concise and clear, which directly shows the author's point of view. Then, the author chooses typical cases to demonstrate his point of view, with clear thinking, well-founded reasons and powerful and vivid language. The structure of the article is also complete, echoing from beginning to end, highlighting the theme.

9. This is an article praising water. The language is profound and meaningful, and the article is full of philosophy, which is a masterpiece. "However, under the water temperature and appearance, there is still a persistent heart hidden." The article is rigorous in structure.

10, I took a sultry train, but a city touched my heart. The warmth of relief in the rain and the harmony of the team pushed me into a happy harbor. I see a bright future in this atmosphere of gratitude, nostalgia and dreams! The sentences in the article are like flowing clouds, gripping and washing every nerve of the reader.

1 1, "winning" means constantly surpassing and succeeding in a competitive manner. The author uses positive examples such as Tong Dizhou, Zhan Tianyou, Helen Keller and Liu Xiang, and negative examples such as Liu Chan and the late Qing emperor to demonstrate the viewpoint that people should live up to expectations. The language is concise, vivid and infectious.

12. The beauty of this argumentative paper lies in its novel conception angle. "We may never catch up with the people we admire and admire, but we can constantly surpass ourselves and be the best ourselves." In the process of argumentation, a large number of examples are cited.

13. This article is about friendship, with elegant language and rich meanings. In this paper, the discussion of friendship is more and more in-depth, from finding friends to maintaining friends, listing typical cases and quoting wisdom words, showing the charm of logic everywhere.

14, harmony is a song, beautiful and beautiful; Harmony is a poem, deep and calm; Harmony inspires nature, and harmony casts the world; Nature needs harmony and the world needs harmony; Harmony is a kind of charm, natural charm and humanistic charm. ...

15, this essay is profound in theory, diverse in techniques, wonderful in sentences and very rigorous in structure. The angle of discussion is also critical. You might as well learn: two paragraphs discuss it from the perspective that everyone needs to hone their courage, three paragraphs discuss it with the classroom as an example, four paragraphs discuss it from the perspective that everything is difficult at the beginning, five paragraphs discuss it with reasons and examples, and six paragraphs discuss it from the perspective of never regretting.

16, the inscription "Today, we cheer for honesty, only because the demon fog is back" tells the creative intention of this article-flogging the lack of honesty in reality and calling for honesty. The full text is written in classical Chinese, which not only shows the simple and elegant style, but also shows the ambition to criticize the current disadvantages.

17. This argumentative paper is novel and unique. It expounds another wisdom in facing difficulties from different angles of "learning to take detours". Profound and thought-provoking The quotation of the arguments in this paper provides abundant evidence just right, which makes the article more convincing. It is a rare masterpiece!

18, this paper is a normative argumentative paper with parallel structure. The full text consists of three sub-arguments: "Faith is a stone, sparking", "Faith is a fire, lighting the lamp of hope" and "Faith is a lamp, illuminating the road ahead", which is concise in metaphor and expression.

The argumentative composition evaluation is 3 1, and the full text is lively in rhythm, fresh in language, full of humor all the time, and interesting to read.

2. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

3. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.

4. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.

5. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.

6, practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, exciting to read, passionate.

This article is full of passion, and the author's love for … can be felt between the lines.

8. The full text has clear levels and fluent sentences.

9, the analysis is unclear, and the language is not fine.

10, with loose structure and poor sentences.

1 1, the language is repeated and the words are not fluent.

12, improper choice of words, unclear meaning

13, inappropriate words, inconsistent tone.

14, unclear analysis, too detailed language.

15, poor knowledge, awkward sentences.

Composition evaluation 4 1, the end of the argumentative paper is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are exhausted and the meaning is still unfinished.

This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

3, practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, exciting and emotional to read.

This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

5. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.

6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.

7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.

8. The content is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.

10, the close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.

1 1. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.

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