First of all, we understand the requirements of this exercise: choose to observe and discover a certain animal, plant or natural phenomenon, and write down the activities, personal feelings and experiences in observation and discovery. This composition requires expressing the thoughts and feelings of loving and being kind to nature and the spirit of bravely exploring the mysteries of nature.
Tips for writing ideas:
Nature is our home. It teaches us how to live. Teach us the meaning and true meaning of life. Think about it carefully, you get a lot of inspiration from nature: people imitate the characteristics of egg shape and build arch bridges; Inspired by the flight of birds, he invented the plane, cut his fingers from the thatch and invented the saw. The natural phenomena of full moon and lack of moon often represent the reunion and separation of relatives and friends; Ants and aphids show cooperation and mutual assistance in order to survive; From bees, we can also see the spirit of unity and division of labor ... these revelations are countless. As long as you observe carefully and think seriously, you will find many secrets of nature.
Writing essentials and precautions:
There are two key points and links to pay attention to in this exercise:
First, it is slightly different from what we wrote. Generally speaking, material objects have the appearance (shape) and use (habit) of objects, plus they can hold things and express their will. But this exercise should not only describe the appearance of animals, plants and natural phenomena, but also write out the essential characteristics of discovery, such as reasons, principles, properties and methods to solve problems.
Second, write your own feelings at the end, that is, write out the conclusions after analysis and research and the opinions after observation and discovery. You can also write down your experience after observing activities.
Third, pay attention to the writing order: there are two orders for reference:
1. Write according to the clues of observation-discovery-revelation;
2. Write in the logical order from result to cause. That is: explain what inspired me first, and then talk about how to inspire me.
Example of exercise outline:
The enlightenment of woodpecker to human beings
Brief introduction: briefly introduce what kind of animal woodpecker is. Such as: forest guards
Chinese: Write my question: Why are woodpeckers not afraid of earthquakes?
Write how I found that woodpeckers are not afraid of earthquakes. Just skim, just skim. )
Write how I discovered step by step why woodpeckers are not afraid of earthquakes. Whether by looking up information, asking teachers, surfing the internet, or asking mom and dad; Then cite facts to explain why. (detailed)
Conclusion: the enlightenment of writing woodpeckers to human beings.
Wonderful topic reference:
The enlightenment of XX, XX (a phenomenon), you are my teacher and understand XX (a phenomenon).
"Thinking from XX" and "Taking the observed phenomenon as the topic directly"
Wonderful good word reference:
The modern special functions of bionic ultrasonic transgenic multifunctional scanner are endless.
Understand nature, use natural laws, protect nature, harmony and natural whimsy, and think about ecological balance.
Innovative spirit Endangered species warm spring breeze gentle spring breeze cool autumn breeze cool golden breeze send cool.
All kinds of things are absent, scattered when they are present, gathered when they are present, drifted when they are present, and the sea of clouds changes rapidly.
Model essay 1: the inspiration of spiders
Everything in nature gives us a lot of inspiration. For example, plum blossoms stand proudly in the cold wind, let us face the difficulties bravely; Grass bends down in winter and straightens up in spring, which is teaching us to stand up from where we fell.
One sunny Sunday, I happened to find a little spider in a small corner of the bathroom. I was so scared that I almost trampled the little spider to death. I see it is preparing to weave a web. I couldn't bear it, so I decided to see how it weaves a web. I saw the little spider slowly spit out a small white thread from his mouth, and then climbed from one corner to another, thus weaving the first thread. Then, it weaves down according to the previous knitting method. After a while, a complete spider web is almost finished. I am really happy for this little spider in my heart. At this time, the little spider is still working quietly. Seeing that the little spider was almost finished, naughty brother Feng came to make trouble. When it exploded, the spider web broke as soon as it stretched out.
The poor little spider is going to weave a web again. It weaves the web meticulously in the same way as just now. This spider web is the same as the last one. Just less than half of the weaving, the spider web is broken again. In this way, the spider web has been broken several times, but it is still not finished.
A little bored, I was about to walk away, thinking: I'm not tired of other spiders, but I'm still making unremitting efforts. How can I be bored? So, I continued to squat in the bathroom to see how spiders weave webs. Finally, after its efforts again and again, it finally weaves a perfect spider web for the last time. Seeing this, I was moved by the persistent spirit of the little spider, from which I learned that I can't give up halfway. You must work hard, work hard and work hard again to achieve final success.
Nature is really a good teacher for us human beings! As long as we are willing to study, we will gain something every day.
Model essay 2: Inspiration from nature
Have you ever seen a mountain? This mountain is very big. Have you ever seen the sea? The sea is vast. I have always believed that people can understand a lot in nature. Nature contains many philosophies of life. Just like the moon, the full moon and the lack of the moon represent the reunion and separation of relatives and friends. Ants and aphids show cooperation and mutual assistance in order to survive. Have you ever seen a bee living alone? They pay attention to the spirit of unity and division of labor.
Nature has also brought me years in a hurry, so I must cherish the enlightenment of time. Look at the sunrise and sunset, as if the sun has just risen, but the stars and the moon are sparse in the blink of an eye. Cordate telosma quietly blooms and fades. If the fallen flowers and leaves once represented the end of a gorgeous life, it would be too short. The glory when the bud was born suddenly turned into lifeless dryness! Butterflies will also die in the cold fragrance of flowers in Xia Hou during the busy season.
Life is short, but if we can make it shine, it can be called eternity, can't it!
Model essay 3: Enlightenment from ants
On a sunny morning, I went to the park to play. Next to a big tree, I saw some little black ideas crawling on the ground. Looking closer, it turned out to be a group of ants carrying food on the ground.
I rolled my eyes and came up with a bad idea. I ran home, picked up a cup, filled it with water, and ran to the park. Then I picked up the cup and poured water on the ants. Suddenly, a small area was soaked, and the ants fled around like leaderless soldiers on the battlefield. Some ants are struggling in the water, and some ants can't move, lying there motionless. However, these ants are not dead. After a while, the water on the ground dried up, and the ants got up again and took food in their mouths. They really work hard! Almost fatal. I never give up, thinking: these ants are so tenacious! So I took another glass of water and poured it on them. Now, some ants are struggling to get out of the water. Finally, some ants tried their best to eat milk and finally came out. They ran away soon. I think: these escaped ants should think of staying in Qingshan, not afraid of burning without firewood!
It was at this time that I was inspired. I also understand a truth: people in our world should face difficulties bravely like little ants, overcome them regardless of everything, and don't give up halfway. Only by sticking to the end can we succeed!
Model essay 5: Inspiration from grass
People say grass is weak. Yes, it is really humble, weak and short. It is not as charming and dazzling as colorful flowers, which makes people fondle it; Without a body as tall as a towering tree, you can't reach out to the sky to attract people's attention; But it has tenacious vitality. I like it!
Strong winds can blow off branches, heavy rains can knock off petals, but there is nothing to do with green grass. After the heavy wind and rain, the green grass quickly returned to its former appearance, so quiet and unscathed. It is so elastic, so powerful.
Grass is a symbol of vitality. Full of thick green grass, it is a model of tenacious vitality. Grass can be seen everywhere on the roadside, on the beach and under the roof eaves. The blazing sun can't bake it through, nor can the cold of ice bones break it. A spring rain hit, it held its head high, straightened its chest and emerged from the ground.
Grass is the representative of environmental protection. Without grass, there would be no life on the earth; If there is no grass, the earth will become boring; If there were no grass, there would be no life on earth.
Green grass is endless, with 100 trees, 1000 trees, 10,000 trees and 100 million trees all over the green lawn. Where does this green color come from? Oh! It turned out that the grass decorated the dull and monotonous earth so vividly and beautifully with its tenacious body! Lawn can give people a rest, enjoy the cool, and play for children! Whenever you lie on the grass, you will feel particularly comfortable in your heart.
Grass, although you are weak, you will always be so strong! What you bring to people is comfort and consolation. We should learn from the indomitable and persevering spirit of grass. No matter what difficulties and setbacks you encounter in the future, you should be as brave and strong as grass! We should dedicate our green to the society like grass.