Attention should be paid to the integration of narration and lyricism in expression techniques.
Model essay: the prayer of birds
I am a poor bird.
I once lived in a dense forest in the upper reaches of the Yellow River, where the scenery was beautiful and the air was fresh. The river there is clear and blue; There are abundant weeds and blooming flowers ... I live in a carefree home with my friends. All kinds of animals live in harmony. When the sun is shining and the spring breeze is warm, we often get together to hold a grand party. We are free and happy!
Our home is beautiful: Aunt Chun brings us bursts of spring breeze with cheerful dance; Xia Bobo brought us a pool of clear water and clear springs against the background of blue sky and white clouds; Uncle Qiu greeted the bleak cool breeze and presented us with a string of golden fruits; Grandpa Dong put on his white winter clothes and reported our hopes for the coming year.
We are proud and gratified to have a comfortable and warm home!
Time is like running water, gone forever. With the continuous expansion of human territory, our lovely home is being destroyed by human beings.
When I flew back to my hometown again, I was very surprised at what I saw:
Spring has come, and Sister Cao has emerged from the soil and is no longer so green. The wild flowers opened her smiling face, but her smile was covered with a trace of melancholy; Brother Dahe took off his thick ice coat, but his body became thinner and thinner. Grandpa Dashu's condition is getting worse and worse, and the business of several new buds who just debuted is so lacking.
The long summer is really hard. The sun is shining in the forest, and the singing of the animal singer cicada is so weak that it makes people upset.
Autumn has come, and the fruits on the trees are sparse, not as red or as big as before, so indifferent.
Winter has just arrived, and the animals in the forest are going to hibernate.
Ah, we lost our beautiful and charming home. Pieces of trees were cut down and the grass was yellow; Wild flowers hang their heads; The river is about to stop flowing. Tall buildings have risen from the ground, and the chimneys are constantly emitting smoke. The environment is destroyed, the blue sky is no longer blue, and the river is no longer clear. Our old home has become a dead zone. There are no more animal laughter in the forest; No more warm sunshine; No more gurgling springs; No more lullabies. ...
Dear friend-human, please help us! We long for blue sky and clear water, and we pray for a peaceful home.
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With children's psychology and unique vision, the author expressed his understanding of environmental protection with fairy tales from the standpoint of birds. The conception is novel and strange, the language is beautiful and vivid, the feelings are sincere and moving, and more importantly, the empty reasoning is avoided, making the article pleasing to the eye; At the end of the article, the bird called on human beings to "save us!" We are eager for blue sky and clear water, and we pray for a safe home. ".
Adapt to the end of natural composition and change yourself to adapt to the environment.
Some people say that great men change the environment, capable people use it, ordinary people adapt to it, and mediocre people don't adapt to it. There is some truth in this. * * * led the people of China to overthrow the three mountains, turned the semi-feudal and semi-colonial old China into a new socialist China, and made the people of China stand up from now on; * * * set things right, reform and opening up, led the people of China to the road of Socialism with Chinese characteristics, and made the people of China rich from then on. They have the wisdom to control the law of historical development, the courage to guide the country, and the charm to unite hundreds of millions of people. They are all worthy of being great men in history. They have made great achievements in changing the overall environment of China, and not everyone can do it. When the spring breeze of reform and opening up spread all over the motherland, many people who had been dormant at the bottom of society for a long time immediately made a fortune and rose rapidly in the wave of reform and opening up, becoming the bosses of the first batch of private enterprises in China. They have keen tentacles to perceive the changes in the environment, have the intelligence to use the changes in the environment, and have the adventurous spirit of "being the first to eat crabs". Their shrewdness and courage are beyond the reach of ordinary people. Facing the environment, we have neither ambition nor courage to change it. Then we have to adapt to the environment. Most of us may only position ourselves in the position of mortals, and never want to be a mediocre person. As a mortal, success mainly depends on the degree of integration with the environment in which we live. If the environment is a glass of water, we are a spoonful of instant coffee. If we are a stone that can never be dissolved, it will be difficult to gain social recognition, at least when we are alive, it will be difficult to achieve our expected success. We must learn to adapt to the environment. If you live on the plateau, you have to adapt to the reaction of hypoxia at the plateau and slow down everywhere; Living in Shan Ye, you have to endure desolate, lonely and inconvenient living conditions; Living in a busy city, you must get used to noise, pollution, traffic jams and congestion, find your own space in the crowd and develop your life in the concrete forest. Adaptation is to change ourselves, because many people live in the same environment, but each of us has different personalities, interests, knowledge and abilities, and different requirements for the environment. Because the change and development of social environment is independent of our subjective will, it often goes beyond our accustomed life track. The world is not in our hands, but our destiny is in our own hands. We often have to change ourselves, integrate ourselves into the environment and live in harmony with our own living environment. In fact, each of us has shortcomings and deficiencies, which is an objective fact. Some shortcomings and deficiencies, if harmless, will not form with the environment. However, due to the sharp contradiction with the environment, some shortcomings and deficiencies will seriously affect our survival and development and change our life trajectory, so we must make up our minds to overcome them. Many of us may want to change ourselves and try to change, but often we can't stick to it, or we lose confidence and choose to give up because we have changed but have not received obvious results. In addition, the contradiction with the environment is more acute, but some successes that should be realized soon are gone forever. Those who can neither change the environment, use it, nor adapt to it have to become mediocre people. Except those who want to change but can't change themselves, there are some people who don't want to change themselves at all. These people are often addicted to the superiority of their own advantages, thinking that they know everything, see through everything and do everything. There is Tao Yuanming's cynicism, but there is no Tao Yuanming's do as the Romans do; There is Lu Xun's radical introduction, but there is no Lu Xun's changeable view. Therefore, in the same environment, others can seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and live easily, while he is ups and downs, complaining all day. It must be admitted that most of us are in a very embarrassing living environment. On the one hand, we are eager for success, so we have to integrate into society and adapt to the environment. On the other hand, they want to try their best to get rid of the oppression of the secular world and strive for greater personality space. In the predicament, most people should change, otherwise it is difficult to survive and develop. This change is the embodiment of self-confidence and strength, and it is flexible and dynamic. However, some things can never be changed and abandoned, that is, personality and dignity, courage and faith.
The beautiful sentences at the beginning and end of nature walk into the depths of nature. Wei Tong Our life comes from nature, and everything in the world comes from nature. Go into the depths of nature and feel the charm of nature. The word "nature" sounds broad and seems to be far away from us, but it is close to us. In our life, there are messengers sent by nature-the four seasons. The four seasons accompany us through countless days and nights, let us understand the mysteries of nature and make our lives colorful. Let us feel the four seasons and nature. "Han Xiao is light outside the green smoke, and the branches of red apricots are full of spring." The spring breeze blows gently and the drizzle rustles. In spring, I stretch my arms and twist my waist, and come to the world with various steps. The "Duck Prophet of Spring River Plumbing" woke up, and he began to rush to the ocean again, breaking through what stood in his way and moving towards his goal. "The grass tree knows that spring will come back soon and all kinds of flowers are in full bloom." The grass is also scrambling to get out of the soil. From a distance, it looks oily and green, and when you get closer, you can only see a few thin pieces. It is really "the grass is far away, but it has nothing." Ah! "Silkworms spin silk and bees make honey". Hibernating animals are also active, frogs are chirping happily by the pool, and lovely bears climb out of tree holes. Everything is so beautiful. "Good rain knows the season, when spring comes." Spring rain is unwilling to be lonely and has been lingering. It makes everything fresh. "Every spring comes, and the melancholy remains." Spring has come, and she brings beauty and vitality. "Water and breeze blow", and summer will come in an instant. It's very hot in summer. Knowing how to sing, summer is always so enthusiastic and full of energy. "The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely bright, and the lotus flowers reflect sunlight in different ways." The West Lake is clear and the lotus stands at the top. The pink lotus is like a shy girl. She hid between the green lotus leaves, forming a jumping summer. "The rain is coming, and the wind is full." Summer rain is coming, the sky is full of dark clouds and the wind is howling; Raindrops from Dongda University poured down from the cloudy sky. She slapped the ground and gave a sedative to the sultry land. Spring goes to summer, and he brings enthusiasm, vitality and enrichment. "After the rain, the mountains are empty, and beginning of autumn is dusk." The golden wind is cool, geese fly south, and autumn is bleak. "The loquat is late and the phoenix tree is dead." The tall phoenix tree was covered with a golden coat instead of greasy green leaves. The maple leaves in Xiangshan are red. They are like a group of passionate fires, adding vitality to this depressed world. The original green rice fields have also changed into golden costumes, showing off their achievements to people. Yellow osmanthus is leaning on the branches, emitting fragrance. "Autumn is crisp, chrysanthemums are fragrant and open new flowers", and all kinds of chrysanthemums are proudly blooming, showing themselves to people. The orchard is colorful and fruitful. Autumn is a harvest season, and she is a little sad and depressed. "The scenery in the north is frozen for thousands of miles, and the snow in Wan Li is floating." Winter is coming. He is holding a big cattail leaf fan, fanning the biting cold wind, fanning the goose feather snow and fanning loneliness. "Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows open the petals of ten thousand pear trees." A thin layer of snow accumulated on the dead branches, like pure flowers. "There are several plums in the corner. They are blooming alone in the cold." You can smell a faint fragrance from a distance. In the snow, several Chimonanthus praecox plants stand in the wind, and it opens in the snow and ice against the cold wind, blooming with the tenacity of life. In winter, he is cold, but charming. The four seasons are the messengers and manifestations of nature. Go into the depths of nature, feel its charm, experience its mystery and listen to its call.
Appreciate the end of natural composition. I love nature.
I love nature because it is full of vitality; I love nature, because it is like a beautiful poem and colorful fairy tales. Listen, nature is calling us!
"Blue sky and white clouds are floating, the sun smiles slightly, wild flowers nod, the scenery is really beautiful, the scenery of nature is really beautiful …" The children are practicing singing "Good Spring" by German writer Mendelssohn. They play and sing on the green carpet prepared by nature for them. Hearing this, Liu Yang proudly looked in the mirror, combed her flowing hair and tied many green ribbons. Show her graceful posture to the flowers and plants.
"cicadas, cicadas. Cicada is screaming excitedly on the branch, as if to sing with the newborn frog-tadpole, but the tadpole can't respond, because the tadpole is sweating for his mother! But cicada can't help tadpoles. It wants to show the world its beautiful singing voice. Finally, the tadpole found her mother, and at the same time, she was fascinated by the place where her mother hung around-lotus flowers floated on the crystal clear river, dancing like a girl in pink under the breeze. Against the background of green, round and crystal clear pearls, they are more beautiful and moving!
"sasha vujacic, sasha vujacic ..." Ginkgo biloba leaves, like a small golden fan, blew away the heat in summer and brought the coolness in autumn. Accompanied by the rustling sound, there are three singers who live in seclusion under the tree-crickets, slugs and oil hyacinthus orientalis, one after another, a large piece, far and near, forming a grand natural symphony. It makes people uncomfortable.
"Woo-hoo ~ ~ Woo-hoo ~" Accompanied by the howling north wind, there was a rush of snow. It's white everywhere in the morning, and thousands of trees are pear blossoms. The straight cement road has been paved with a long white carpet, which extends to the distance and to the place where the snow meets the sky. It is so pure and crystal clear that I can't bear to step on it, so as not to damage this rare silvery white carpet given to us by nature. Children are also laughing and playing on this natural carpet, having snowball fights, skiing and skating on the ice in the park ... Look-there are a group of lovely children chasing them in the endless snow! A child fell and was not afraid, because the silver carpet was soft. The child rolled in the soft snow and stood up. The child is very happy and makes adults laugh, because the child has become a real "snowman". I watched them so free and happy! Makes me want to join their game.
I love nature, its beautiful spring scenery, its cicadas, its rolling wheat waves, its white clothes ... it is like four flowing pictures, slowly spreading and blooming in front of us! ! ! I love nature!
Four seasons; throughout the year
Looking at nature, there are charming colors everywhere: the first breeze blows, which is a delicate season; The first ray of sunshine is the summer when fish jump and lotus flowers bloom, which is a refreshing season; The first piece of golden spread out, is the harvest autumn, this is a lonely season; The first snowflake floated down. It was a cold and depressing winter and a warm season. Naturally, I dress up my world beautifully.
When the spring rain is raining, it always touches my heart and brings me into the world of smoke, fog and sand. That drizzle, like dew, makes me feel the vitality of life.
When the Xia Feng blows gently, the green comes to my face. The mountains are as green as blue, and the water is as clear as a mirror. Wandering among them, you will feel the infinite charm of nature. In my spare time, I like to sit on the windowsill, open the window, let the afterglow of the sunset shine on my face, and let the cool Xia Feng blow selflessly. No matter how much resentment and melancholy I have in my heart, I can let it blow away, leaving only the blue sky in my heart and letting my thoughts fly. At this time, I can't help shouting in my heart: How wonderful life is!
When the winter snow falls slowly, the lights inside and outside the house are intertwined with falling snowflakes, like a fluttering note, like a beautiful picture, which makes people think. After a while, the children will cheer, make snowmen and have snowball fights. When I think of my childhood, I feel a sense of joy. If it comes to Christmas, this snowflake will become the best gift from nature. Looking at the snow outside the window, with the illusion of expectation, the dream will accompany you until dawn.
Nature is like a gorgeous rainbow, and life is like a cup of rich and delicious coffee. Nature is like a melodious and euphemistic piece of music, and life is like a blue sea. No matter whether life is sour, sweet, bitter or salty, a look at the beautiful nature will make my life full of interest.
Savoring nature carefully, I find everything is so colorful; After carefully understanding life, I found that the world turned out to be so beautiful.
About 30 words at the beginning and end are enough for a composition praising the beauty of nature. Beginning: Birds singing, flowers singing and the sound of running water are the most common scenes for us to get in touch with nature. It is only because we are in contact with it all the time that it becomes ordinary. If we calm down and feel with our heart, it seems to have a different taste.
Ending: There are all kinds of things in nature, such as majestic peaks, vast Yuan Ye, cheerful streams and deep oceans. From morning to evening, from zero to summer, flowers are falling, birds are singing and insects are singing, but it really has a different taste!
Write it yourself?
Why did they ignore me at the end of my composition? Why are they ignoring me?
Why are you becoming more and more like a stranger to me?
It always makes me sad not to step on it I'd rather you hit me and scold me than ignore me. I'm a little jealous that you play with other girls.
But I didn't stop you.
You had a good time. I'm not jealous.
You are very happy with them. Can't you share some with me?
You give me a letter or even a blank sheet of paper every day, and you won't ignore me!
I was angry that you had a stomachache that day. I don't want to comfort you because you scolded me.
I really want to say whether I should accompany you to the infirmary to get an undelivered letter.
I stole a look at you in class. Did you get a look at him?
I don't know who to tell my thoughts to. .....................................................................................................................................................................
I can't stand it any longer.
My dear Wu
I only like you forever.
Like your jade
At the end of Revelation of Nature, the cherries are ripe again.
There has been a lot of rain this year, and it has rained several times in a row. The Shidian River rises slightly, and the land smells rich, which is a precursor to a bumper harvest. In this season, I can't help thinking of Chuxiong and all this. ...
On the road of life, everyone has their own dreams. In order to pursue their dreams, they have paid a lot of sweat, hard work and even health. When victory was in sight, I was pessimistic and extremely confused. However, for that ideal, that dream, I will not be afraid, even if the road ahead is bumpy and difficult! Maybe there are obstacles ahead that I can't see. I will cherish every step forward for my dream, even if no one cheers, because I will always understand that from the first step I learn to walk, the road ahead is doomed to be long, and I will walk and face it myself.
It began to rain in Mao Mao early this morning. I walked slowly in the rain to the cinema square to recruit extras for the film "Yang Shanzhou", and the fine rain fell on me, which really made me feel like I didn't want to go back. Rain has always been my favorite sight. Even if you do nothing, staying in the rain for a while is a wonderful enjoyment. And I have a camera with me, so I can spend most of my time. However, the result of being in a daze is dull thinking and heavy enough to stare at the cinema all the time.
After dinner, I walked on the muddy road behind the county seat. In the distance, Yuan Ye was green and full of life. This season, even the grass seems to hear clearly, this is a growing season. In the face of green meta-leaves, even if there is still some stagnation, it will disappear with the spread of green.
Staring at several unknown wildflowers in the uphill field, at that moment, a different kind of calmness and gentleness spread from the fundus to the heart. When I was a child, I used to tear off such flowers and lick the sweet taste with my tongue. It feels beautiful. At the moment, it opens like a lantern, stretches its waist and nods slightly in the wind. I want to find the taste of childhood, but I can't bear to tear off the petals. At this time, there are always some memories revived in the arms of my hometown, and there are always some past events clearly presented in front of me. This is a beautiful season.
It was at sunset, and when I was walking slowly down the mountain, I caught a glimpse of some cherries in the ravine, and now they fascinate me in the afterglow of the sunset. I was surprised: "I forgot that this is the season when cherries are ripe." Through the thorny bushes, I came to the cherry tree. Unfortunately, the sunset at this moment has been blocked by clouds, and I can't capture the most beautiful moment of cherry. Even so, I'm addicted. Seeing the bright and shy cherries hidden in the green leaves, those memories about cherries revived and haunted me for a long time. ...
I like cherries very much because there are many cherry trees in Chuxiong. In spring, cherry blossoms fly in the street, and the pink and white of dead grass on the wall brings warmth to the wall. Spring in Chuxiong is actually very short. Although it still feels chilly, the villages on the edge of the city are full of flowers. There are many cherry trees in Zixi Mountain, one ditch and one ditch, one slope and one mountain. In the season when cherries are ripe, the cherries all over the mountains are red, green and green, and clusters of cherries are like pearls and agates, crystal clear. Looking around, these countless cherries are thriving, magnificent, exquisite, unpretentious and wild. At this time of year, the villagers are always beaming and ready to pick cherries at home. There are many techniques for picking cherries, but the Eight Immortals showed their magical power when crossing the sea. Some picked cherries are eaten at home and some are sold in the market, and the price is cheaper. If you meet a passing guest, the generous and hospitable villagers will always tear off a branch covered with red cherries and shout, "Look, the red on this branch!" ""quick, the purple on that branch! "Busy this busy that, politely let you follow the hands and feet, try this and see that, eat to the throat and burp in your eyes.
After the rain, the cherry red branches are low. In this ripe season of cherries, the short-lived beauty of cherries makes people sigh, just like a woman's face is perishable. At the moment of sighing, cherry's face will be covered with wrinkles: "Han Tao says Wu Dong is the best, and its fragrance and fresh smell are different. Qiaqia looked up with thousands of flowers, and two or three flowers danced on her face. A bird will catch fire when flying, and a person will step on it when struggling to pick up pearls. Unfortunately, there should be no day after the Ming Dynasty. "
Cherry is as short as life. Maybe a person has decided something when he was born. I always thought I could go far away, leave a city, leave this boring bustling, but where is my distance? I looked up at the sky. The color of the sky or the sound of the wind made people feel sad. The setting sun stretched the shadow obliquely, mottling the shadow wall. I stood by Xiangshuiwa Reservoir for a long time. The wind blew gently and the leaves rustled. Why people don't care why the soil is fertile, and no one knows how time is spent in the shade of trees. I have been growing, and so has he or she. People all over the world grow up together, but to different degrees. When the memory is strangled bit by bit in reality, the previous memory always suddenly appears in my mind when the memory disappears, and then inexplicably and inexplicably enlarges and disappears in my mind.
Think of Han Han's lyrics: "The beginning of a beautiful story, the world is counting down". No one can understand this feeling, and no one can change it. People live to like or even love or hate. Like this casual style, this is a period of "youth-related days" and memories of lost time, and vivid records make people miss it. Life is always strikingly similar, or, in a sense, we all grow up along similar tracks. Only many times do we think when we see such words, and the subtle feelings are expressed. So, during this period, we began to recall ourselves again. At that time, I also said childish things, did childish things, had childish thoughts, had great curiosity, and had some explicit or dark memory fragments such as absurd but real fears.
All kinds of youth flow vividly in the text. 1998, when the young Jia left his hometown in Fenyang, he looked at the heavy roof parallel to the long-distance bus and said to himself, "I will never come back to this place." Whenever and wherever, he can laugh and cry quietly, but at this end, I am still empty-handed and exhausted.
Light a cigarette, take a breath in your lungs, and have a faint aftertaste. Take a sip of beer gently, and recall 28 years of life lightly and sadly. Nothing, romantic, wild, rebellious, melancholy. This is an unspeakable feeling. In my artistic career, life is like a flowing fire pulse, which extinguished the last passion in my heroic body. The gurgling sound of words turned into a difficult trek, and the confession of life was bleak in retrospect. The soul crosses the noble art, and my life interprets incomparable enthusiasm. To choose an artistic life is to choose a lonely road of no return. Living calmly in art, my soul dances in lonely words, not for the sake of reality, but for the ultimate passion of pious people for art, which is a kind of throb of my soul, waving the overwhelming enthusiasm of life and parking in the noble ideological realm. I found the ultimate enthusiasm of life, a simple way of life.
The brevity of cherry blossoms and cherries was cut back by time in the days of being in the mood for love. Whom should I ask to? The sound of time goes upstream on the aging face, leaving a trace of echo occasionally, so that I can hear between the lines in the lonely midnight …
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Life grows in constant discovery, and there are many discoveries since childhood, but what is fresh in my memory is that day.
In life, there are countless philosophies waiting for you to discover. As long as you put your heart into it, you can naturally find the philosophy that can affect your life.
Childhood is beautiful, childhood is happy, in childhood, everyone has his own discovery.
In my happy childhood, I found many things. Although they are not earth-shattering, I am still very excited. After all, I found them myself! One thing is fresh in my memory.
There is an old saying that the world is full of miracles. Indeed, I gained some knowledge through unintentional observation.
Nature breeds everything, and many things contain many mysteries. With the continuous progress of science, people have made many things by imitating animals, such as birds and planes, giraffes and anti-Dutch flight suits, whales and submarines.
Magical nature, diverse resources, wonderful crafts, moon, sun and stars, mountains and rivers, flowers, birds, insects and fish ... people will get beautiful pleasure and edification through mutual observation with nature. Nature not only gives people beautiful enjoyment, but also gives people more enlightenment.
final result
Through this discovery, I understand that we all have a pair of sharp eyes, and we will gain more if we look at anything with the eyes of discovery.
This discovery is really one I tried my best to observe! Now I know that hard observation and discovery are also a good way to broaden my horizons and knowledge!
Through this incident, I understand that science is around us. As long as we observe and think carefully, we will certainly find the answer.
Discovery can make me understand many things I didn't understand before, and also make me understand that there are many strange things in life. We don't know all of them, but we need to observe them carefully, because people are not perfect, right?
I was flattered to find the reason why the color of a painting is different during the day and at night. At the same time, I also know that an ordinary painting contains so much knowledge, so how much knowledge in nature is waiting for us to discover! So pay attention to observation and learn more about nature.
Through this discovery, I understand that only by observing attentively can we find more strange problems in this magical and wonderful nature, waiting for us to understand and explore!
It turns out that there are so many interesting things in life, waiting for us to observe and discover. Then let's explore and discover together!
It's really interesting to stumble upon the mystery of ants moving! I can't help feeling a thrill at my new discovery. There are still many mysteries in life waiting for us to discover. Let's observe everything carefully and turn them into our discoveries!
I found that there are many mysteries and infinite philosophies worth discovering in life. We must study hard and constantly explore and discover the mysteries in this vast world.
Nature is really a good teacher for human beings! People have learned a lot from nature and benefited from it. We should protect the natural and ecological environment!
We should thank and respect nature. Thank nature for giving us a lot of inspiration. Human beings must respect nature and not violate the laws of nature, otherwise they will be punished.
Nature is amazing! You can invent things even on such annoying things as flies. I must explore these endless mysteries when I grow up!
The inspiration of nature gives us a lot of inspiration. Let's observe, invent and create!
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Abstract of model essay for guiding young teachers 1
In recent years, we have been paying attention to the growth of young teachers,