When talking about his successful experience, an entrepreneur said, "I just took one more step." Yes, one more step on the road of life may lead to success.
Please write an article, or narrate your experience, or expound your point of view on the topic of "by going up one flight of stairs", and choose your own style (except poetry), not less than 800 words.
Two. Writing instruction
This is a composition topic with materials and propositions. First of all, you should pay attention to the analysis of materials, because materials help you understand the topic. There are two sentences in the material that are crucial:
(1) "An entrepreneur said when talking about his successful experience"; (2) "Take one more step and you may succeed".
In other words, you don't have to "take one more step" to succeed; Only by going in the right direction and going just right ... can we succeed? Unfortunately, judging from the students' compositions, they all emphasize that "taking one more step" can succeed, but fail to grasp the word "possible" and lack dialectical and pluralistic ideas.
Secondly, "taking one more step" can actually mean taking one more step on the road, or it can falsely mean taking one more step, working harder and paying more than others on the road of life and career. There is a difference between "going one step further" and "going one step earlier"-"stupid birds fly first"-"thinking one step first"-"courageously fighting": the topic emphasizes "more", which is more in quantity or deeper and farther in degree.
It is also wrong to directly understand "further progress" as "persistence", "accumulation" and "choice". Of course, when talking about how to go further, we can talk about "only perseverance can go further", but this does not mean that "going further" means "persistence".
Combined with the following examples, there are at least five ways to write this composition:
(a) focus on "why do you want to go further", that is, emphasize that only by working harder on the original basis, doing further work, or comparing with others, taking more actions and making more efforts can you succeed, or surpass others, or make your life more exciting-the first one is;
(2) focus on "what does it mean to take one more step"-the second, third and fourth items are;
(3) Pay attention to "how to go one step further". It can be said that if we take one more step, we must have an unsatisfied attitude, a style of daring to think and do, foresight, perseverance and perseverance. Only in this way can you take one more step and succeed-chapter five is;
(4) focus on "under what circumstances to go one step further", that is, add a condition to give the specific situation-Chapter VI is;
(5) Combining personal life experiences, writing experiences and showing literary talent-the seventh and eighth items are.
In short, no matter how you write, the key sentence "go one step further" should be deducted from the expression of writing. In addition, whether it is narrative lyricism in narrative or examples in argumentative essays, the connotation of excess should be written out, otherwise it may be far-fetched or even off-topic.
Three. Sample display
Take another step.
I always think that no matter where you are, it is necessary to take one more step. For a lost traveler, one more step may help him find his way home. For those who are struggling to start a business, one more step may make him successful. Taking one more step is both a pursuit and a kind of wisdom.
How powerful is it to take one more step? Open the history books and you will know. Jintian uprising, the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom, has its capital in Tianjing, and the Western Expedition and Northern Expedition swept half the country. In the face of a good situation, the "King of Heaven" stood still and coveted. In the end, China was torn apart, and the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom was finally strangled and destroyed. Chairman Mao, facing half the country, shouted the slogan "Cross the Yangtze River and carry out the revolution to the end", and finally the people's army liberated Chinese mainland in the autumn wind. In the face of half the country, those who stagnate will lose the world, and those who take one more step will build the country. The next step is the great spirit of "carrying out the revolution to the end"!
Go further. For you who are successful, taking one more step will make you gain greater success. When talking about their own success, many successful people say that they have taken a step ahead of others. For them, they have a good quality of never being satisfied and eager for progress. Driven by these qualities, they keep moving forward and are never complacent. Their success is inevitable. Haier used to be a bankrupt small factory, and its employees worked hard to revitalize the enterprise and finally achieved impressive results. However, they moved on and integrated into the international community. Finally made today's Haier. Kodak is a global brand, and its products were brought to the moon by Armstrong. But in the end, the lack of innovation went bankrupt this year. While regretting, we should also clearly realize that if we want to succeed, we must take one more step.
There is no way to go because of the winding water flow in the mountains, and a mountain village suddenly appears in the willow-green flower bay. If you are still wandering on the road of life, please put aside everything and take one more step! Maybe there is a bright future ahead. Sometimes we are blinded by difficulties. In the face of darkness, we should have the spirit of going forward bravely. When you take one more step and succeed, please go on and broaden your future. When you take one more step and still fail, you still have to persist. If you take one more step, you may gain more.
Each of us has an ideal, so why not go one step further to realize it? In my opinion, one more step is a spirit of striving for ideals and an advanced concept of advancing with the times. Take another step, let's continue to look for the light! (Don)
Comments: The article is clear in thinking and adopts the method of positive and negative comparative argument, which is very dialectical and convincing; The content is substantial and the language is fluent. Although it is a general writing, it is more confident and successful.
Take another step.
Take one more step and you will be greeted by the other side of victory.
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In real life, people often complain that success is too far away from them. Many people have worked hard all their lives, but they have achieved nothing. So they face the success of the winners and feel the injustice of fate. In fact, they just saw the aura of success and ignored their own efforts. Fate is fair to everyone, but losers lack the courage and courage to "go further"
The next step is the quality that stupid birds fly first.
We have been taught by our elders since childhood. "Learning, you should know that stupid birds fly first ..." Indeed, we have no extraordinary intelligence. No photographic memory, no natural talent. So if we want to succeed, all we have to do is learn to go further and get ready before success comes. What we have to do is to be the first, work harder than others, make up for our own shortcomings and stand out from many competitors. You know, the chances of success are always reserved for those who are prepared.
Further, Gong Yu insisted on moving mountains.
The road to success will never be smooth sailing, and there will always be difficulties and obstacles on the way forward. What we have to do is to carry forward the indomitable and tenacious spirit of Yugong Yishan. "Children and grandchildren are endless." Gong Yu's insistence can move two mountains in reach for the sky. So as long as you persist, what muddy and tortuous roads are there to fear on the road to success? Strengthen your faith, make efforts and consolidate your will! You know, sunshine always comes after a storm.
Another step is the accumulation of dripping water wears away the stone.
There is a sentence in Xunzi's "Encouraging Learning": "I don't know how to take a step forward, but it is thousands of miles away; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas. " Success can never be achieved overnight, but it takes a long time. I believe everyone still remembers the text "Take a Step, Take a Step" in junior high school. The protagonist's experience of getting out of the predicament tells us that as long as the big difficulties are broken down into small ones, the small ones can be solved one by one and the big ones can be overcome. Isn't success the same? Do a good job of accumulation, knowing that "as long as you work hard, the iron pestle is ground into a needle."
When you feel overwhelmed, take one more step and prepare in advance; When you want to give up, take one more step and never give up; When you face great difficulties, go one step further and overcome them bit by bit.
Further, it will blossom a flower of success. (Zhang Han)
Comments: There are some highlights in the layout of the article, and the language is fluent. However, the understanding of "further progress" is not in place, and some arguments in the second and third layers are divorced from opinions and cannot be countered to opinions.
Take another step.
A wise and discerning person will not care about a step away, because he understands the meaning of "a tiny difference, a thousand miles lost". One step is not long, but it is far away. Maybe your future is full of mountains and rivers. After this step, you will find a bright future. Maybe you are stepping on the endless yellow sand desert, and you will smell the grass in the oasis if you take another step. Maybe there is a terrible deep valley in front of you. If you take a step, you will see the bridge standing steadily. The road you have traveled may be dark and full of thorns, but you must have the courage to take a step forward. As long as the direction is correct, the road must have a shining end.
This is the result of a belief. However, faith is the support of your progress. It is this kind of thing that you can only rely on, realize and realize when you are desperate. Ignore your inner anger at fatigue, take a step forward and take another step, and you will see the dawn. Running all the way, a brave man in the marathon, told the support of his faith, and went one step further until he saw the magnificent city and spread the news of the victorious authorities all over the city. People who reach the top of the world, at the top of the mountain above 8000 meters, carry empty oxygen bottles and hardly breathe air. With forward faith, they can further reach the top and become winners. Faith has accumulated the courage to advance and is a further persistence.
This is a sign of wisdom. A true wise man will make steady progress on the road of his choice, and choose to go one step further and jump out of the encirclement when he is under siege. Iacocca is an American national idol. When he led Chrysler to turn a profit and re-sit on the throne of the third largest automobile company in the United States, people even issued the voice that movie stars could be presidents and car dealers could not. He just made one more change in the original design of the company. He built a wild horse that Mercedes-Benz has been enduring on the road, and then began the road of revival. This is a kind of wisdom. We didn't do anything wrong, just didn't do enough. Maybe this is a pen for cleaning. Wisdom provides further ability, which is its meaning.
This is an accumulation of confidence. If you firmly believe that you are right, you will go on this basis and go further. In the face of difficulties, some people will shrink back, and some people will choose another direction and deviate from the starting line. At this time, your original confidence will crack and eventually collapse. You will start to doubt, start to distrust yourself, start to hesitate, and start to stagnate. If you are confident in winning, break through the obstacles and take a firm step. The wall of confidence will become more stable and thick, which will make you decisive and firm.
With further confidence and belief, with further wisdom and understanding, hold up the scorching sun and stride forward towards the unknown throbbing ahead. (Liu Chunyang)
Comments: clear structure, language and literature. The disadvantage is that the concept of examination is not very accurate, and there are many words that are divorced from topics and viewpoints.
Take another step.
The road of life is long and tortuous, and different people have different results. The reason for success is often that they go one step further. Taking one more step means being strong; One more step means persistence; One more step means a firm belief ... maybe you will succeed if you take one more step on the road of life.
Helen Keller-Illness blinded her. Live in the light and end her. And she is not negative and light, not depraved; But one more step than these passive blind people-that is, being strong. This step she took made her life come to an end and she kept writing down the music of her life. Her persistence, with the light of the soul, condensed the immortal chapter of "If you give me three days of light". What did life give her? Endless dark pain, no bright nightmare? No, neither. Life has given her more courage and determination than ordinary people, that is, being strong.
The symphony of destiny is still ringing in my ears, and the familiar and rhythmic piano music still carries the vitality of the sun. This is Beethoven-Beethoven who insists on going further. Living on the road of dreams gave him the greatest pain, but he was not tortured by reality like ordinary people and gave up. On the contrary, he took an extra step with his persistence in his bones, his blood, his mind and his passion for music. "Symphony of Heroes", he is advancing, "Destiny", he insists in life. What did life give him? It is further persistence, further sweat, and never giving up. It was Beethoven's insistence that he never gave up and played the most beautiful piano music.
"Writing ghosts and writing demons is superior, and stabbing food and stabbing abuse into the wood." He is Pu Songling, who made Pu Songling of Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio with sweat and painstaking efforts. On the road of life, he takes one step more than others, that is, he firmly believes. Those who believe, those who work hard, fulfill their obligations. Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio will live in readers' hearts forever. In the dark society at that time, Pu Songling was not as secular as the world, but stabbed the throat of corrupt officials with his own beliefs and firmness. Using him to take one step more than ordinary people is the blood and sweat of day and night, and it is a unique strange story from a strange studio.
One more step is the strength of Helen Keller; Further is Beethoven's insistence; Further, it is Pu Songling's firm belief. One more step is the leisure of Tao Yuanming's "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"; Du Fu's broad mind is that "all the poor in the world are happy". It is the elegance of Li Bai's "sometimes riding the wind and waves, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" ...
The road of life is not smooth sailing. Take one more step, use your persistence and faith, and be firm and persistent to achieve success, so as not to waste the golden age of high. (Seinfeld)
Comments: The first paragraph points out the viewpoint, explains the connotation of "further progress", demonstrates fully, pays attention to the front and back care in structure, discusses the shortcomings in a clear way, and some languages are blunt and not easy to understand.
Take another step.
If life is a sea of pain without cliffs, please take one more step. It is your courage to hang a long sail to save the sea. If life is a steep and rugged mountain, please take one more step. Dare to climb is your courage to climb a cliff and climb it. If life is a road full of thorns, please take one more step. The courage to chase is a key step for your success.
Stick to your dreams and take one more step.
Who is it, practicing hard at the piano; Who is it, holding the fate by the throat; Who played the swan song of life on the golden stage in Vienna? It's him. He is the figure who moved China-Wei Liu, the armless pianist. When other people's eyes lamented the sadness of life, he still stubbornly put wings on his dreams; The rope of looking for fate binds his arms mercilessly, but he still sticks to his dream and keeps moving forward towards it. When someone asked him the secret of success, he just said calmly, "I just took one more step towards my dream." Yes, success and failure, miracle and destruction are all in this step. Take one more step and you will reach the other side of success.
Clear the direction and take one more step.
Who is it, crouching silently in the dark corner, who is living in the shadow of the secular sword, who is it, who has endured the great shame of castration and moved on? It's him. His name is Sima Qian. In the face of chains, chains and cold cages, his mouth was full of contempt and his face was full of perseverance. "Not being sad is the death penalty." He wrote an earth-shattering chapter in his life with a pen, and also submitted a satisfactory answer sheet to the world, which made the immortal masterpiece Historical Records. His persistence and further progress have made him famous in history and admired by thousands of people.
Dare to fight and fight, take one more step.
Who is it, suffering from silent pain; Who won the admiration of everyone, who danced the most perfect curve of life in the magical exchange of light and shadow? It's them, a group of deaf-mute dancers. They can't hear music, but they can feel it with their hearts; If they are physically disabled, they will take one more step than others. Others praise life with words, but they can interpret life with their hands and create a miracle of Guanyin with thousands of hands. They use their efforts to make their lives bloom!
Carving a towering Buddha statue requires a lot of work, and training sailors to sail and sail requires stormy waves. Only stick to the end, please take one more step, only in this way can you see the magnificent sea; Facing the danger of the peak, please take one more step. Only in this way can you see the magnificent scenery on the top of the mountain. In the face of the bumpy and tortuous road of life, please take one more step. Only in this way can you reach the other side of the ideal.
How can plum blossoms smell sweet without wind and frost? Walking on the long road of life, the future is confused and dangerous. However, only by rising the sun in your heart, persisting and taking one more step will you succeed in the end. (Chen Shuangshuang)
Comments: The total score structure is adopted, with emphasis on "How to by going up one flight of stairs" and concise language. Some flawed paragraphs cannot be discussed closely around sub-arguments, such as the last sentence of the third paragraph. Let's say, "He knows his own direction, sticks to his own path, goes one step further, goes down in history, and is admired by thousands of people".
Take another step.
A famous person once said: "Reality is this shore, and ideal is the other shore. From this shore to the other shore, we need to constantly pick up stones, pave the road under our feet, and go step by step without looking back. " Indeed, when you use your own efforts to approach the other side of the ideal, please don't stay and keep going. Take one more step and maybe your life will change.
When failure comes again and again, please take one more step.
Edison, the great inventor, must be familiar to everyone. When he invented the electric lamp, he tried thousands of materials as filament, but after a long time, he still couldn't find a suitable material. At that time, a reporter ridiculed him: "How many times have you failed?" Edison smiled and replied, "I have failed thousands of times, but I also know thousands of ways to fail." I am closer to success! " "Finally, Edison found tungsten wires from thousands of materials and made them into electric lights, which lit up the world. Edison hit a wall many times, but he still bravely went on. He took one more step, and the world finally brought "light".
When hope seems hopeless, please take one more step.
Once upon a time, there was a desert gold digger. He hasn't found a water source plan for a long time. He is hungry and thirsty. At last, he found a depression. According to his experience, this depression must be rich in water. He dug hopefully, dug a person deep, and no water came out. He's a little frustrated. He hesitated for a moment and continued to dig. He gave up when he dug a few meters deep. "There will be no water here. God wants me to die. " He thought about falling to the edge of the pit. Later, a hungry man came and saw the pit and the dead beside him. He continued to dig holes with a shovel, and few of them came out of a stream. He wants to know why the former well digger guarded a good well and would rather die than dig more.
This story tells us that when there is still a glimmer of hope, we must make a hundredfold effort, try one more time and take one more step before we can survive.
When you get successful applause and flowers, please take one more step.
Madame Curie was one of the greatest women in the19th century. Her greatness lies not only in her great contribution to science, but also in her indifference to fame and fortune, treating money like dirt and never stopping working. For a person who stood on the Nobel podium twice in her life, she should have been satisfied, but she gave the medal to her daughter as a toy and never lay down on the past honor. She never stopped working and devoted her life to science until her later years. Madame Curie has never been confused by honor, but after her success, she went further and made more contributions.
Walking through the wind and rain, there is a dazzling rainbow in front of you; Stepping through thorns, the flower avenue is ahead; Climbing to the top of the mountain, there is a fresh and empty mountain scenery under your feet. Many people will see more wonderful scenery if they take a step. When you fail or succeed, please take one more step. I believe that the darkness is followed by the dawn, and the road ahead is still waiting for you to explore! (Liu Yujie)
Comments: The article gives "One Step Further" a concrete situation, with strong sense of reality, clear hierarchy, strong arguments, concise and fluent language and good language skills.
Take another step.
One more step is sunshine.
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Maybe it will be cold after the rain, but cold can't hide from the coming sun. Maybe sunshine is in the next step, maybe warmth is in the next step. Take one more step and you will know the beauty of the world.
One more step and you'll be in heaven. Next, the scenery is beautiful and soothing. You know, the heart is hurt and strong, but you don't know, the heart warms the sun.
There is always another side to climbing mountains and mountains, and the lonely road has no end. This step has reached the end of its tether, and the future for the next step is bright. Take one more step and let your heart take one more step, and you will feel the dawn in the distance.
Dancing with flying flowers all the way, I have seen thousands of joys and sorrows before I know its way. Water knows its depth, so it is quiet, and light knows its warmth, so it is bright. If you can't caress it, you will run away. The next step, it will turn from cloudy to sunny.
I have seen too many scenery before I feel sincere. Even if the beginning becomes the final ending, you will know that the beginning is the end. It's better to take the next step, end this ending, and then take another step to know the depth.
If you are in Lushan Mountain, you will know that clouds gather at the top of the mountain if you take one more step.
The next step is warmth, that is, light. Dim light can not illuminate darkness, but it can illuminate the road under your feet. A small step may not dispel the dark clouds, but we know that the sunshine in the distance is warm.
This step may not be successful, but the next step is full of hope. This step may be bleak, but the next step is a warm paradise. Take one more step, and your heart will take another step. Only when you have been injured will you know that you chose the wrong road at this intersection, but it is not the end, which only shows that you will have hope to go to the next intersection.
This night is full of stars. The moonlight illuminates the road ahead, my ears are surrounded by the heartache of the past, and the memories of the past are scattered into pieces. Go to the next step, the night is the beginning, and the end of the end is the beginning. Take the next step in the dark and you will see the dawn in the distance. I didn't know this step was hard until I failed.
When the sun was flying again, I remembered the starry sky and smiled. Looking up is sunshine and warmth.
The next step is sunshine. The next intersection is heaven. If it's a long night, then-take one more step. Night, will become the best memory, accompany me to go on. (Bu Yifan)
Comments: The article is artistic, symbolic and literary, but the thinking is not very clear, the analysis is not very thorough, and some features of the stream of consciousness are unintelligible at first reading.
Take another step.
I thought I was an eagle that could fly in the vast sky, but God gave me a pair of broken wings. I am disappointed and hesitant. But there is always a voice that makes me take one more step towards my blue sky. So, I walked forward firmly!
Perhaps, it is this humble step that makes me have the sky again. Take one more step and you will reap success. Enduring the pain, I struggled with my broken wings, but my heavy body kept me away from the blue sky. My wings are numb and sore, I want to stop, so I indulge myself, but there is always a voice in my ear, "Take another step!" I held my breath, concentrated all my strength on my wings and waved hard. I felt my feet off the ground, and I flew even harder with joy. Finally, like other eagles, I can fly in the blue sky and have the power of Paramore!
And all this, just because I "take one more step."
I thought I was a lily that could bloom my beauty in a luxurious vase, but fate made me grow in the corner of the mountain. I could have been content with the status quo, quietly maintained the loneliness of not blooming, and accepted the strange eyes of other blooming flowers. But there is still a voice calling me in my heart-take another step!
I tried to break through the steep peaks and geographical restrictions, but no matter how hard I tried, the sunshine always ignored me. Watching the sun shine and kissing the earth, I feel lonely and helpless like a lost child. I don't know if I should continue to work hard and try to bloom my flowers. At this time, the voice that lingered in my ear for a long time appeared again-"Take another step"! Although the road ahead is full of thorns and hardships!
I am struggling in the corner, ready to greet my sunshine with the best posture and open my own flowers! Finally, in my never-ending footsteps, I feel the sunshine and warmth. At this moment, I enjoy the sunshine to my heart's content, bloom my own flowers and have my own stage in an unattended corner.
And all this is precisely because I took an extra step.
In the face of difficulties, setbacks and losses, I always resolutely move forward without hesitation. Just because I took one more step, I gained success!
On the road full of thorns, in the confused sea, in the field without spring rain, please don't stop moving forward, take one more step and get out of your own stage! (Sun Lu)
Comments: The article makes good use of metaphors, which are concrete, vivid and artistic. This division is more rhythmic and layered.