(1) Introduction-Summarize the content around the feeling points.
The feeling after review focuses on feeling, which comes from a specific point of view. The introduction is the foothold of feeling, so the first paragraph of the essay should summarize the main contents of the film and television works you have seen in concise words, and of course it can also be a sentence that gives you a deep feeling in the film and television works you have seen. A composition of not less than 600 words, with the opening quotation of about 50- 100 words. If there are too many words, the writing will be verbose, which will affect the expression of the following words.
(2) Discussion-analyzing materials and refining opinions.
After the first paragraph introduces the content of "view", the second paragraph makes some comments on "view" Choose a point that you think is more important and express it in your own words:
What do I think is better? What do I think?
We can analyze the content of "citation" on the basis of facts; You can also dig from the phenomenon to the essence, from the individual to the general, and then naturally "light up" your own views.
(3) Connecting with reality and expanding vertically and horizontally.
The third paragraph combines the content of film and television with real life to explore and express true feelings.
The most taboo in writing after reading is to talk about things in general. If you talk about the matter, the "feeling" can't go deep, and the article you write is too superficial. If you talk in general terms, the feeling of reading will lack pertinence and can't give people a shock. This is the most common problem in students' writing, and most students have this problem in this review.
Contact is contact with reality, which can not only contact with similar phenomena in real life from one place to another, but also contact with opposing problems in real life from ancient times to the present. You can focus on the overall situation, or you can start with small things. You can use famous sayings to prove it, and you can also use celebrity cases as examples. Can be positive and negative contrast, can be metaphorical reasoning. However, it should be noted that when analyzing and demonstrating with reality, we should always give back or respond to the quoted content, so that "connection" and "quotation" are broken and "silk" is connected.
(4) Conclusion-Summarize the full text and sublimate the viewpoint.
At the end of the article, we should summarize the full text. At the end, you can respond to the previous article and emphasize your own point of view; You can also express your ideals, put forward your hopes, issue a call, and sublimate the feelings of the full text to the peak.
It should be noted that the meaning of review is always bound by the "view", and the content of the view cannot disappear after the end of the initial reference. Even some students throw their opinions directly as soon as they come up, which has nothing to do with what they are looking at. Therefore, we should introduce the concept at the beginning, return the concept content from time to time in the middle, and return the concept content appropriately at the end.
The above is the general structure of the post-review, which is very simple, but to really write well, it needs clear logic, concise and powerful language, rich content and a sense of the times, and profound and penetrating thoughts. To do this, students need to study hard, remember more, practice writing more, and show their determination to "stick to the castle peak and not relax".
Finally, summarize the key points of review for students:
The summary content comes first, and the viewpoint comes last. Famous articles have clear arguments. Compare positive and negative metaphors and connect with real life. Finally, summarize the promotion and look at the reality.
The true spirit of China.
-Comment on the spirit of "two bombs and one satellite"
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Red clouds are shining into the sky, and nuclear forces are shaking.
After watching the video of "Two Bombs and One Satellite Spirit", I was deeply touched. More than 60 years ago, the "two bombs and one satellite" workers abandoned the generous treatment and superior environment of other countries with their initial heart and mission and resolutely returned to the motherland. In the hard years of poverty and backwardness, they lived in the desert Gobi, separated from their loved ones, unknown and worked hard. They gave their youthful blood and even their precious young lives. For the prosperity of the country and the rejuvenation of the nation, they dedicated their most sincere love to the motherland and the people. Their selfless and unrepentant efforts have made a great country and realized a great dream of the motherland. They are the backbone of * * * and the country, and they have cultivated the spirit of China.
In the long history of China, countless people with lofty ideals pursued the spirit of China, inherited the spirit of the Chinese nation and continued the genes of Chinese civilization. Yue Fei, a famous anti-gold star, devoted himself to serving the country all his life. The majestic "Man Jiang Hong" reflects the dignity of his shoulders when he fought against gold and defended his country, and the desolation of Jin Ge's iron horse. Young people who joined the revolution, in the war-torn era, showed the heroic feelings of "yellow sand wears golden armor, but never breaks Loulan". Young intellectuals, represented by "two bombs and one satellite", performed the touching story of "doing earth-shattering things and hiding their names" during the period of socialist construction; The young pioneers of reform wrote the legends of the times in the magnificent tide of reform and opening up. This is the spirit of China.
The ancients said: "Although the Tao is subtle, it cannot be done; Although easy, it is not impossible. " Our generation of young students not only have broad development space, but also shoulder the glorious mission entrusted by the new era. Only by carrying forward the spirit of patriotism, sharpening the ambition of serving the country and practicing the journey of serving the country can we ignite the dream of youth and achieve youthful glory.
The spirit of China is to love the motherland and make selfless contributions. "Selfishness is the life and death of the country, and it is avoided because of disasters." 2020 is destined to be an extraordinary year, and a fierce epidemic has changed the lives of many people. In the face of sudden new tests and challenges, countless medical workers are sincere and selfless, giving up the time of reunion with their loved ones, not afraid of the risk of being infected by the virus, fighting in the front line of epidemic prevention and control, regardless of remuneration, not afraid of life and death, and not talking about conditions. They spare no effort to win the epidemic prevention and control war and protect people's health, and have no regrets. They do their best to protect people's health, and with the kindness of doctors who apply what they have learned, more patients can be diagnosed in time, and the number of cases of cure and rehabilitation is also increasing. They make extraordinary choices in ordinary posts and show their true colors as heroes. Their light of humanity dispelled the gloom in people's hearts and gave people hope and confidence in out of the dark.
China's spirit is self-reliance and hard work. "Knowing that there are tigers in the mountains, I prefer to go to Hushan." At present, angels in white is retrograde, saving lives; When the People's Army heard the news, Wan Li went to Rongji; Community workers are on duty day and night to build a solid defense line; The takeaway brother has a hard time, "ferrying" life; Construction workers stayed up all night, sweating like rain, helping to build the "Vulcan Mountain". Vegetable farmers donate fruits and vegetables thousands of miles, restaurants provide meals for free, and overseas Chinese scramble to tell each other and collect materials ... where there are shouts, there is support. Have the money to pay, make a strong contribution. No matter how small the power is, multiplying it by1400 million will increase. The smallest efforts, together, can form a strong joint force to fight the epidemic, making people go forward and be invincible. Bit by bit of goodwill, together is a warm current, flowing in the hearts of everyone in China. It is the contribution of ordinary people that can create China speed. What can create China temperature is the goodwill of ordinary people.
The spirit of China is to cooperate vigorously and climb the peak bravely. "The green hills are together, and the wind and rain are together." In the global fight against the COVID-19 epidemic, the China government has announced that it will provide anti-epidemic assistance to 82 countries, the World Health Organization and the African Union, share China's diagnosis and treatment plan, send medical experts and donate medical protective materials. The virus is ruthless, and there is love in the world; If one side is in trouble, all sides will support it. Our motherland has set up a model of great power diplomacy of unity and cooperation, demonstrating the responsibility of great powers in the same boat.
Every generation of young people has its own opportunities and opportunities. The heroes of "two bombs and one satellite" embrace the north wind of the desert, with their heads in the sky, like millions of soldiers thousands of miles away entering the customs, fighting for their ideals in a difficult environment. Our generation of young people shoulder the heavy responsibility of the country's future, national destiny and people's happiness. We should set up lofty ideals, take dreams as horses and live up to our youth. We should maintain high morale, strive for progress and work hard for the Chinese dream. We should inherit the Chinese spirit of our ancestors, pursue our dreams with ideals and passions, realize our dreams with struggle and dedication, and create a youthful family, country and nation with our youthful selves.
Dreams are ahead, hopes are at our feet, and our journey is the sea of stars!