Examples and comments.

Example 1 Argumentation must be modest.

Modesty cannot be abandoned.

In the face of fierce recruitment competition, a female college student named Zhang Yuanyuan gave up her seat several times, but it is this humility that is considered unsuitable for fierce market competition. This made me think deeply. (The materials are simply quoted, the language is concise, and the key points are grasped)

The excellent traditional virtues of the Chinese nation have been passed down for thousands of years, guiding thousands of generations of China people to find the beacon of life and achieve great things. Among them, the word humility occupies the weight of Mount Tai. Modesty is a virtue, which is necessary for people with good moral cultivation. Therefore, at any time, we must not abandon humility. (Put forward opinions, be clear and powerful)

Modesty cannot be abandoned, and it is a kind of personality beauty. Kong Rong let the story of pear spread to this day, becoming a must-read masterpiece for children in the enlightenment period. When Kong Rong eats pears, he gives the big and good ones to his younger brother and parents, and keeps the smallest ones for himself. Kong Rong's humility, some people may think that he has suffered, but this is only the view of people with low personality. What we can see from it is a filial piety, a way of respect, and a noble personality beauty. (Sub-argument 1, modesty is the beauty of personality)

Modesty cannot be abandoned, it is a kind of broadness and loftiness. In the ancient imperial system of China, hereditary system preceded abdication system. When Emperor Yao was emperor, he loved the people as a son, treated the people's closest relatives as if they were his own affairs, and the country was governed very peacefully. But time waits for no one, and people will get old eventually. When Yao Di was powerless, someone wanted to take his place. Some people think that Yao's son can shoulder the heavy responsibility, but Yao obviously knows that his son can't do anything, so he turned his attention to the talented Shun and gave up his position to Shun. Shun also lived up to expectations, and the people lived and worked in peace. Emperor Yao was self-effacing. He gave way to his son not for the benefit of his family, but for the sake of the world. Yao Di's modesty is broad and lofty. (Sub-argument 2: Modesty is sublime in a broad sense. )

Modesty cannot be abandoned, it is an indispensable and important navigation mark in life. On his deathbed, Liu Bei held Zhuge Liang's hand, hoping that Zhuge Liang could take his place, fight for the world and stand on his own feet as king. Indeed, with Zhuge Liang's talent, the throne can be replaced. Perhaps it is humility, perhaps it is a beacon in his heart. He refused, and he wanted to serve the young master with the power of his servants for life. At the moment of Zhuge Liang's death, he still made contributions to the country. (Sub-argument 3, Modesty is the beacon of life)

Modesty cannot be abandoned, it is the unity of stability and harmony. When I came to the streets of Korea, the traffic was busy, but it was not chaotic at all. When there are people in the workshop, the boss will be humble and let people go first. When the cars meet, they are respectful and orderly. Why can the traffic in Korea be so harmonious and stable? The answer is humility. (Sub-argument 4, Modesty is the unity of stability and harmony)

In today's increasingly fierce competition, some people think that a person or a country must forge ahead and be humble and out of date, but I don't think so. Modesty can be a kind of beautiful morality, which plays an inestimable role in building a harmonious society at present. It will not change with the development of the times. No matter how the times develop, virtue is "virtue", which will not be abandoned by the times and will only exude new charm. (Conclusion: Modesty is not out of date in today's society because of its characteristics. The discussion was strong and targeted. )

Comments: The article has a profound understanding of the materials. Starting from the recognition of Zhang Yuanyuan's practice, this paper profoundly discusses the role of modesty with several typical examples at home and abroad, and then naturally expounds that this virtue should still be maintained in today's society, which is convincing and targeted. The disadvantage is that the arguments overlap a little, but it is not easy to list several arguments like this. (17+17+16 = 50 points)

Example 2 Advocating enterprising argument

Natural selection, survival of the fittest

It is said that there is a news that has aroused strong repercussions in the provincial capital, which is about the recruitment of sales staff in the provincial talent center. On that day, there were many applicants, but the employer only reserved one position, but a girl named Zhang Yuanyuan gave her seat to someone else to take the exam. Finally, because of the girl's modesty, the person in charge of the company thought that she was not suitable for working in the sales department, and the interview failed. This makes people talk about whether they should have good moral cultivation.

To be an excellent talent, good moral cultivation is essential. However, "natural selection, survival of the fittest", in this fiercely competitive society, if you are too modest and ignore the endeavor, then you will eventually be eliminated. Give your opinion, don't neglect making progress.

Darwin's "theory of evolution" is considered to be a household name. So, giraffes were finally preserved, but not extinct? Because as the trees grow taller and taller, in order to survive, they all struggle to stretch their necks to eat the leaves on the trees. Deer that are too humble and do not know how to compete will be abandoned and eventually starve to death on the road; The deer that knows how to go up and the deer that knows how to compete survived and evolved into a "giraffe." Even lower animals understand the truth that "natural selection, survival of the fittest", but how can smart humans not understand it? (using giraffe analogy)

In the advanced society, all walks of life are fighting with each other. In order to gain a foothold in society, they keep innovating to attract customers. Therefore, many enterprises have kept and continued this enterprising upsurge. Of course, there are also many enterprises that are eventually eliminated by society because they don't know how to compete. (contact enterprise)

Let's look at the world film market again. Generally speaking, the foreign film market is broader than China's, because their innovative ideas and advanced technologies make their films excellent. Coupled with professional actors, it can be said to be the icing on the cake. Therefore, foreign films have always been superior to China films. But is it because foreign technology is more advanced than China that China will bow to foreign countries? Is it because the proportion of excellent foreign films in the world is higher than that of China that China will give in? If our country wants to "grovel" instead of competing and making progress, then we will really lose. Therefore, in order to develop the film industry in China, many excellent directors are enterprising, innovative and indomitable, so the film industry in China is also developing vigorously. (Take the film industry as an example)

In our daily life, we can always be "modest", but when we are living and competing, we should not be "modest" but "strive for it". Only those who strive for the upper reaches and forge ahead can firmly take root in society, but only those who are too humble will be eliminated by society. Dialectical analysis, when can we be modest and when must we make progress?

"Natural selection, survival of the fittest" is always a truth. (strengthen the point of view)

Comments: The article has clear thinking, natural connection from beginning to end, and rich and appropriate examples. Pay great attention to the strengthening of the central point of view. Complex sentences and rhetorical questions are better used. Literary talent should be further strengthened.

Example 3 advocates both argumentative writing and argumentative writing.

Modest and enterprising.

A company refused to hire a female college student named Zhang Yuanyuan because she was too modest, despite the good conditions. The company believes that as a salesperson, what is more needed is to forge ahead, not humility. Zhang slowly thought, how can you do a good job without modesty?

It seems that both sides are right. It's just too one-sided. In my opinion, only those who are modest and enterprising are qualified to be hired. (make comments)

Enterprising spirit is indispensable, but excessive enterprising is foolhardy and self-defeating. The rapid development of our country now is due to the lessons learned from the past-in the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China, the development can be described as hard and slow as a turtle crawling. Maybe we just founded the country and have no experience. In order to speed up development, we made a "Left" mistake and implemented the "Great Leap Forward" plan. Never bow and scrape to foreign countries, you must surpass Britain and catch up with the United States. How can this plan, which is totally out of line with the national conditions, promote development? Sure enough, you can't eat hot tofu with impatience. Under this rash mistake, our country has praised and trampled on it. What is your evaluation of this answer? 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