3. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
This composition is novel in material, wonderful in conception and lively in language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
This article narrates the events of ... according to the sequence of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
6. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
7. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
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9. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
10, the full text has many wonderful sentences, which adds some literary interest to the article.
1 1. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.
12, appropriate details, and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article ... the content is richer and more vivid.
13, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.
14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
15, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
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17, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
18, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
19, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, novel ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
2 1, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the main points of the article.
23 ... is both practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, which is both exciting and emotional to read.
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