Zi Yuan college entrance examination composition

"Side-by-side" Structure Model of Argumentative Papers in College Entrance Examination

A, parallel structure mode:

Introduce (put forward central arguments and sub-arguments)

This argument is divided into argument 1+ argument (case)+analysis argument.

Argument is divided into argument 2+ argument (case)+analysis and argumentation.

Argument is divided into argument 3+ argument (case)+analysis argument.

Conclusion (refer to full text)

Language is the key to communication.

▲ the beginning part: rise up and talk in general.

▲ Part II: Parallel Structure

Argument 1: Proper language expression is beneficial to the communication of family ties.

Sub-argument 2: Proper language expression is conducive to friendly communication.

Argument 3: Proper language expression is conducive to the exchange of love.

▲ conclusion: deepen the topic and reiterate the point of view.

[example]

Language is the key to communication.

If communication is a door, then language is the key to it. (General debate)

If the door of communication leads to night, then the key of language will lead you to the bright moon and starry sky; If the door of communication leads to the endless desert, then the key of language will lead you to the oasis of birds and flowers; If the other side of the communication door leads to the boundless sea, then the key of language will lead you to "ride the wind and waves" like Zong Yi, and "hit the water in the middle, and the waves will stop the flying boat" like Chairman Mao. How important language is in communication! It is a flashing key, which can make communication reach people's hearts directly. Get excited, express your point of view, clarify the role of language in communication, and clearly let the reviewers see the central meaning of the article.

Appropriate language expression is conducive to the exchange of family ties. (Subargument 1)

It is true that parents are "looking forward to the success of their children and their daughters". However, when a child falls down, whether it is denouncing "useless things, how to do it" or saying "I was wrong this time, try my best next time" will have the opposite effect. When children eat the forbidden fruit of puppy love, parents solemnly declare: "That won't do, absolutely not", or say "your parents can understand your mood" first, and then make sense, not to mention the effect. Although the heart of communication is as bright as moonlight, the expression of language makes the effect of communication different. It can be seen that family communication needs the key of language. (echoing the title)

Appropriate language expression is conducive to the exchange of friendship. (Sub-argument 2)

Gao Shi's "Mochow has no bosom friend before her, and everyone knows her husband" and "However, China has our friendship, and heaven is still our neighbor" both used beautiful language to send friends away and reached friendly exchanges. Li Bai's article "Difficult Road to Shu" persuades friends with incisive language to achieve friendly exchanges. From Li Bai's "As high as a banner, six dragons drive the sun, and the river below lashes its twists and turns", we can know that "Shu Dao is difficult to learn, and it is difficult to go to the sky", and friends will feel their concern from their words and communicate directly with their hearts. Communication is not like "silence is better than sound" as Bai Juyi said. It needs language to convey each other's concerns. The exchange of friendship needs the key of language. (Echoing the title again)

Proper expression is conducive to the exchange of love. (Sub-argument 3)

Because of Robert's arrogant language expression, it is difficult to understand Jane Eyre and the protagonist Robert in the early literary works. Fortunately, Jane Eyre's straightforward language of love and hate broke the barrier between the two people, and the two love experiences were communicated. When I sent Liu Lanzhi home, I used Jiao Zhongqing's answer "You are a rock, my concubine is a reed" and Jiao Zhongqing's answer "I swear that the sky will not be negative" to communicate love. Sometimes love can't be like Liu Yong's saying "holding hands and looking at each other with tears, but choking", but needs communication. The communication of love needs the key of language. (Finally echoing the title)

Look at "Touching the Dragon" and say that Zhao and Jian Taizong are all expressed in appropriate language. The communication between monarch and minister also needs the key of language.

In a word, please use the key of language well, and let communication go straight to your heart. (reiterate the topic and take care of the beginning)

[Comment] This article belongs to the model essay of parallel prose structure. Use "appropriate expression, which is beneficial to the communication of XX." As a recurring sentence pattern, this paper discusses it from three aspects. This is a typical "three big and three small" structure. The so-called "big three" means that the full text consists of three parts; The second part of "three small" refers to three parallel paragraphs. This writing format is convenient for reviewers to quickly grasp the author's ideas.

2. Common mistakes in dialing

1. The general argument put forward at the beginning has nothing to do with the sub-argument.

For example, The Value of Life.

General argument: We should create a more meaningful and valuable life.

Argument 1: Life is the basis of understanding the world.

Argument 2: Life is the key to human progress.

Argument 3: Life is the prerequisite for success.

Summarize the full text

2. The classification standards of sub-arguments are inconsistent.

Argument 1: Work hard to create miracles.

Argument 2: Hard work can lead to success.

Argument 3: Struggle stems from lofty beliefs.

Comment; The first two sub-arguments are from the perspective of the role of struggle, and the third sub-argument is from the perspective of the source of struggle, and the classification standards are chaotic.

3. The sentence patterns of sub-arguments are too different, which affects the beauty of the article structure.

Argument 1: Loving lightly is a strategy to cultivate children's self-reliance.

Argument 2: Loving lightly is a spiritual comfort to children's self-confidence.

Argument 3: The touch of love can work miracles.

Third, parallel decomposition

1, class-what is it? It mainly answers questions about class, nature and connotation, which can be referred to as "class" for short.

Example 1: Courage: Argument 1: Courage is the quality that wealth cannot be lewd.

Argument 2: Courage is a poor and unchangeable character.

Argument 3: Courage is unyielding integrity.

2, because-why, mainly answer questions about the cause and purpose, can be referred to as "cause". It is to take the central argument as a conclusion to trace the conditions and reasons of this conclusion.

Example 1: Say safety: establish a center: safety is the premise of ensuring production.

Argument 1: Without safety, production will be threatened.

Argument 2: Without security, the life of workers cannot be guaranteed.

Argument 3: Without security, the long-term profit target cannot be achieved.

Example 2: The answers are different:

Argument 1: The world is ever-changing and things are complicated, so the answers are colorful.

Argument 2: People look at problems in different ways and angles, so the answers are colorful.

Argument 3: The criteria for judging things are different, so the answers are colorful.

Exercise 1: learn to be tolerant.

Exercise 2: Quality is life.