1, the theme is too far-fetched, at least deduct 18 points.

2. One point less, at least 26 points less.

Beijing 20 18 college entrance examination composition scoring standard;

Volume 1: 42-50 o'clock

Requirements: conform to the theme, demonstrate clearly, demonstrate fully, demonstrate reasonably and express appropriately.

Volume II: 33-4 1

Requirements: conform to the theme and demonstrate clearly. The arguments are substantial, reasonable and basically appropriate.

Three volumes: 25-32 minutes

Requirements: basically meet the requirements of the topic, the argument is basically clear, the evidence is conclusive, the argument is basically reasonable, and there are a few language disorders.

Four types of volumes: 0-24 points

Requirements: Deviation from the theme, improper conception, unclear argument, empty content, unsmooth language and language diseases.

Extended data:

Ways to keep the theme of the composition:

If you want to write a composition that does not deviate from the topic, it is very important to check the topic, especially the topic language and topic scope, which is usually the direction of the proposition.

Therefore, the selection of materials should have the flavor of the times, and teachers should have a clear sense of reading. In addition, structure is the leading factor of thinking. Usually, training should include not only the training of test questions and language use, but also the training of article structure. Avoid writing at will, so that it can't be expressed well.

No matter what composition you write, you should look at the candidates' thoughts, feelings and language. In terms of material selection, candidates should choose topics that reflect their own thinking characteristics and give play to their own advantages. For students who are not good at writing and expressing, sometimes they pile up some "beautiful nonsense" on the content. In fact, this will make the article look empty and it is difficult to get high marks.