Looking at the mysterious and beautiful tropical jungle in the book, I looked up and saw only the indifference and desolation of the steel forest; I yearn for the endless blue ocean on TV, but I have never felt the coolness of the sea breeze. Do you feel so close to nature, but we never seem so far away. Mobile phone, TV and mouse make us closer to nature, but from the frozen screen, we can't draw the outline of nature after all.

The ancients said: Read thousands of books and take Wan Li Road. However, people only saw the first half of the sentence, but regarded the second half as nothing. Indeed, the innovation of various shooting tools has enabled the general public to perceive the beauty of nature from the screen. However, people don't know that what you get on paper is superficial after all, and it takes practice to perceive nature!

If Su Shi has never been to the magnificent Red Cliff, how can he have the feeling that "the water of one river does not return, and the waves wash away the romantic figures of the ages"? If Li Bai didn't visit Lushan Mountain, how could he write such a timeless quatrain as "Doubt is that the Milky Way has set for nine days"? If Chairman Mao didn't visit nature, how could he express his lofty ambition of "pointing out the mountains and rivers, writing passionately, and filth in Wan Huhou"? If you want to truly experience and perceive nature, you can only express it through movies and words.

However, as Hegel said: Being is reasonable. The existence of TV and mobile phones also has its positive significance. Through weather forecast, people can avoid natural disasters; Through movies and TV programs, people can also listen to the songs of birds and see flowers. But in my opinion, these ways of perceiving nature are not advocating the harmonious coexistence between man and nature, but reflect the ambition of human beings to control and even rule nature. People disturb the normal ecological order in order to photograph wild animals; For the benefit of mankind, people predict and even fantasize about changing the weather, which really reflects the rapid progress of human science and technology, but it also violates the principle of respecting and respecting nature since ancient times. When nature is put into a "box", its "body" is close to us, but its "heart" is farther away from us.

At present, people's need to "see" nature has been met by science and technology, but our expectation of perceiving nature cannot be met by science and technology. Then, why not take "Wan Li Road" as our new criterion to experience the wonder of Huangshan Mountain, the greatness of Mount Tai, the strength of the Yangtze River and the vastness of the sea? If you want to perceive nature, you have to walk on your own.

Full score composition review

This article is a relatively standard argumentative essay. From the perspective of directly perceiving nature, the author flexibly uses propositional materials at the beginning, and puts forward the viewpoint of "being aware of nature should do" in comparison, which is accurate in examination and clear in conception and easy to be accepted by the general public. Then, the hypothesis is reversed, and examples such as Su Shi, Li Bai and Chairman Mao are cited by using parallelism rhetoric. The arguments are relatively substantial and more powerful. Then it is pointed out that it is not enough to perceive nature only by "movies and words". "Only by visiting nature in person can we discover the true meaning of nature", and the attribution analysis is reasonable.

What is more valuable is that while dialectically affirming the "positive" of "TV and mobile phone" in perceiving nature, the article tries to explore the significance of perceiving nature, reveal the delusion of "controlling the ambition of nature" of human beings, and the consequences that lead to the "heart of nature" getting farther and farther away from us, criticize the current disadvantages and make people think.

In addition, the title and viewpoint of this article are all ancient poems, concise and gentle, with slight changes. The topic is "sentiment", which is closely related to the propositional materials; The argument uses "awareness", which has some philosophical implications and is quite ingenious. At the end, "To perceive nature, we must walk on our own", calling for kindness and asking for a good talk.

Although there are some improper words and typos in the writing, and three historical materials are also suspected of improper arrangement, the defects have not been concealed, and this article is still an excellent emergency chapter in the examination room.

Full score composition 2: Combine distance and perceive nature.

Looking at clouds in spring can measure rain and snow, but it is limited to eyesight; Through TV, we can know the global weather, but we are not interested in watching clouds. Looking at the vegetation in the forest, you may not be able to name the flowers and birds; With a click of the mouse, you can tell the genus of living things, but you lose the fragrance of flowers and fruits and the smell of the jungle. Nature seems very close, but it seems too far.

Why not combine the benefits of distance and distance to perceive nature?

Today, with the development of science and technology, people can know the world and feel the nature through extremely convenient information technology, which is of course good, but it lacks the personal feeling of flowing water. In ancient times, people only communicated with nature and could not fully understand and know nature. Both have their own advantages and disadvantages, so let's combine their advantages to make the natural perception incisively and vividly.

Looking back on ancient times, Du Fu can appreciate the spirit of "reaching the peak, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky.". ; Li Bai can feel the danger of "so high that the yellow crane can't pass, and the poor monkey only has claws to use"; Su Shi admired the Yangtze River for "mourning my life for a while, admiring its infinity", and had a leisurely walk in the rain "Don't listen to the leaves beating in the Woods, why not sing and walk slowly". The ancients had extremely rich experiences and feelings about nature. After all, they are with heaven and earth and walk with the sun and the moon. However, they lack a deep understanding of nature and cannot grasp the nature of heaven and earth, the origin of the world and the tree class, so they cannot use the laws of nature to benefit mankind and transform nature. Compared with the ancients, we have an advantage We can use a complete information system to get all the information of nature, grasp the essence and laws of nature, personally understand nature and feel the charm of nature in combination with distance.

Looking at modern times, many people are only satisfied with "digital nature" and lack the feeling of "being there" in nature. Can "Baidu Online Zoo" reflect the momentum of the eagle and the wolf howling? Can pictures show the beauty of flowers and trees? What's more, can straightforward words describe the momentum of the Yangtze River, such as the rainbow and Mount Everest? Modern people may be able to say a lot about nature, but when it comes to the smell of plants and the posture of flowers and birds, they are speechless. Then, let's put down the mobile phone, leave the computer and go into nature, experience the comfort of "Egrets flying in the quiet swamp, mango birds singing in the trees in midsummer" and feel the indifference of "I will walk until the water stops me, and then sit and watch the rising clouds" ...

Nature is very close and far away from us, but we can use the existing methods and means to close the distance with nature. When people create science and technology, they can use it to understand and transform nature, but don't forget the original way and the most primitive experience. Only by combining the two can we truly perceive nature and enjoy its beauty.

Full mark composition review

This is an argumentative essay. According to the contents of the examination materials, the author thinks that direct experience of nature and indirect experience of nature by using modern science and technology have their own advantages and disadvantages. The former is "close" to nature, but lacks a deep understanding of nature. The latter is "far away" from nature, and does not feel "immersive", but can understand the laws of nature. Therefore, the author advocates taking the "long" of the two and feeling nature in combination with distance. Around this point of view, this paper compares the way people feel nature with the ancients under the background of modern science and technology, and lists the poems of ancient poets such as Du Fu, Li Bai and Su Shi to show that the ancients experienced and felt more about nature and were closer to nature, but they could not grasp the laws and essence of nature. Nowadays, people know the advantages and disadvantages of nature by means of science and technology, which is contrary to that of the ancients. Therefore, people today should learn from the strengths of the ancients to make up for their shortcomings and feel nature in an all-round way. The idea of the article is consistent with the content of the material, with clear central views and clear ideas. However, when the article demonstrates its own argument, it is too absolute to equate the two ways of feeling nature between the ancients and the present, and completely deny the ancients' understanding of natural laws. Some sentences in the article are not properly chosen.

Full mark composition 3. Combine distance and feel nature.

Looking at clouds in spring can measure rain and snow, but it is limited to eyesight; Through TV, we can know the global weather, but we are not interested in watching clouds. Looking at the vegetation in the forest, you may not be able to name the flowers and birds; With a click of the mouse, you can tell the genus of living things, but you lose the fragrance of flowers and fruits and the smell of the jungle. Nature seems very close, but it seems too far.

Why not combine the benefits of distance and distance to perceive nature?

Today, with the development of science and technology, people can know the world and feel the nature through extremely convenient information technology, which is of course good, but it lacks the personal feeling of flowing water. In ancient times, people only communicated with nature and could not fully understand and know nature. Both have their own advantages and disadvantages, so let's combine their advantages to make the natural perception incisively and vividly.

Looking back on ancient times, Du Fu can appreciate the spirit of "reaching the peak, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky.". ; Li Bai can feel the danger of "so high that the yellow crane can't pass, and the poor monkey only has claws to use"; Su Shi admired the Yangtze River for "mourning my life for a while, admiring its infinity", and had a leisurely walk in the rain "Don't listen to the leaves beating in the Woods, why not sing and walk slowly". The ancients had extremely rich experiences and feelings about nature. After all, they are with heaven and earth and walk with the sun and the moon. However, they lack a deep understanding of nature and cannot grasp the nature of heaven and earth, the origin of the world and the tree class, so they cannot use the laws of nature to benefit mankind and transform nature. Compared with the ancients, we have an advantage We can use a complete information system to get all the information of nature, grasp the essence and laws of nature, personally understand nature and feel the charm of nature in combination with distance.

Looking at modern times, many people are only satisfied with "digital nature" and lack the feeling of "being there" in nature. Can "Baidu Online Zoo" reflect the momentum of the eagle and the wolf howling? Can pictures show the beauty of flowers and trees? What's more, can straightforward words describe the momentum of the Yangtze River, such as the rainbow and Mount Everest? Modern people may be able to say a lot about nature, but when it comes to the smell of plants and the posture of flowers and birds, they are speechless. Then, let's put down the mobile phone, leave the computer and go into nature, experience the comfort of "Egrets flying in the quiet swamp, mango birds singing in the trees in midsummer" and feel the indifference of "I will walk until the water stops me, and then sit and watch the rising clouds" ...

Nature is very close and far away from us, but we can use the existing methods and means to close the distance with nature. When people create science and technology, they can use it to understand and transform nature, but don't forget the original way and the most primitive experience. Only by combining the two can we truly perceive nature and enjoy its beauty.

Full mark composition review

This is an argumentative essay. According to the contents of the examination materials, the author thinks that direct experience of nature and indirect experience of nature by using modern science and technology have their own advantages and disadvantages. The former is "close" to nature, but lacks a deep understanding of nature. The latter is "far away" from nature, and does not feel "immersive", but can understand the laws of nature. Therefore, the author advocates taking the "long" of the two and feeling nature in combination with distance. Around this point of view, this paper compares the way people feel nature with the ancients under the background of modern science and technology, and lists the poems of ancient poets such as Du Fu, Li Bai and Su Shi to show that the ancients experienced and felt more about nature and were closer to nature, but they could not grasp the laws and essence of nature. Nowadays, people know the advantages and disadvantages of nature by means of science and technology, which is contrary to that of the ancients. Therefore, people today should learn from the strengths of the ancients to make up for their shortcomings and feel nature in an all-round way. The idea of the article is consistent with the content of the material, with clear central views and clear ideas. However, when the article demonstrates its own argument, it is too absolute to equate the two ways of feeling nature between the ancients and the present, and completely deny the ancients' understanding of natural laws. Some sentences in the article are not properly chosen.

Full score composition: Four ways of science, a little sense of natural beauty.

There is an old saying: "Don't go out at sunrise, but it will take thousands of miles at sunset." This is the experience of observing the sky accumulated from generation to generation, but it is a kind of enjoyment and fun to watch the clouds rolling and infer the weather changes from the dusk. Turn on the TV, and the weather forecast all over the world comes into view. The two ways of perceiving nature are different, but nothing more than observing the weather, and all roads lead to the same goal. There is naturally no need to distinguish between "near" and "far".

For nature, people should use scientific inventions and experiences to know and understand the macro level, and at the same time carefully experience and feel the micro-natural beauty around them with delicate hearts, so as to achieve the realm of "knowing the way of science and feeling the beauty of nature slightly" and realize the ultimate "harmony" among people, science and nature.

Science and nature have never been separated From the invention and application of various water conservancy tools in ancient times to the development of today's developed weather monitoring and forecasting system, the improvement of human productivity and scientific progress have always been complementary. Man is very small to nature, and he has no ability to explore all the mysteries of nature one by one, so nature seems to be far away from man. And scientific application is a powerful tool to solve people's better understanding of natural needs at the macro level. Through TV, people can get weather information and geographical information "without leaving home", which increases their understanding of nature and makes up for the limitations of people's own ability and vision. At the same time, scientific knowledge is also of great benefit to the formation of scientific ideas. Darwin once said that his interest in nature originated from the scientific works of predecessors, and scientific theories, such as biological species, all played a great role in the formation of his rigorous scientific thinking. It can be seen that using science to perceive nature is not only convenient and comprehensive, but also conducive to cultivating natural science thinking, which is a good way to "look up at the universe".

And "overlooking the prosperity of the class" can realize the harmonious unity between man and nature. Life is born in nature and belongs to nature. The Chinese character "sex" consists of a person and a lifetime, which shows that the truth of human nature is inseparable from the nature of ecology. There was a philosophy of "life" in ancient China, which was the tireless pursuit of ancient philosophers. Meng Haoran and Wang Wei were fascinated by the natural landscape, felt the changes of the sky and clouds, and watched the beauty of the clouds flowing in the water, creating beautiful sentences handed down from generation to generation, such as "an empty mountain stands in late autumn after rain", which reflected the integration of man and nature. Human life is integrated into the natural ecology, sharing the same breath and common destiny. Therefore, only by paying more attention to the microscopic flowers and trees around us can we blend in with nature and "feel the beauty of nature".

China's important Confucian thought of "harmony" requires all parties to achieve unity and coordination. At present, people can neither give up the traditional way of feeling nature nor resist the trend of scientific and technological development. Therefore, it is necessary to realize the harmonious unity of man, science and nature. Just like the popular star-gazing activity now, people who observe distant planets with high-tech telescopes also feel the cool breeze blowing in the mountains at night, cicadas singing in bursts, "believing in coke"!

Broaden the road of science and feel the beauty of nature. People are close to and integrated with nature, and can understand nature from a higher perspective. The mind has a "tiger" who looks at nature macroscopically, and it can also sniff out the "roses" around it microscopically.

Full mark composition review

Based on materials, this paper puts forward that modern human beings should perceive nature in two ways: scientific cognition and personal experience, both of which have dialectical thinking, so they have high intentions.

The article adopts the general-sub-general way to organize the whole article, which is clear and reasonable. In the limited space, the article uses the knowledge of nature, literature, culture and other disciplines, and the content is substantial. In terms of expression, the article quoted famous proverbs and classical poems, which effectively enhanced the expression effect of this article.

This article shows that candidates have a certain ideological depth, a wide range of knowledge and good writing ability. Of course, the article also has some shortcomings, such as inaccurate words in some places; Grasping cultural knowledge is also specious. But for a high school student's exam composition, you shouldn't be demanding.

Full score composition five into Xiangshan

Beijing Xiangshan is a small natural circle. Autumn is so beautiful, like a sea of fire. Approaching it is like approaching nature.

Walking on the forest path of Xiangshan, standing on the fallen leaves creaked, the breeze blew, and pieces of green, yellow and red leaves scattered lightly, spreading in people's sense of smell with natural fresh taste. Xiangshan's land is so soft. Stepping on it is like stepping on a sponge. From time to time, I get a little water, so that my shoes smell of earth. Fallen leaves spread on the ground, forming a path full of fire. As soon as autumn is over, they become nutrients and spring mud, making the trees in Xiangshan more lush and the scenery here more beautiful.

There are birds singing in the lush trees, and the euphemistic songs are like the sounds of nature. Let us fantasize about the appearance of these birds. They must be lovely! When an unknown bird fluttered into the air from the branch and flew to the horizon with its own hope, it also let me know the magic of nature. That bird brought me closer to the nature of Xiangshan.

The beauty of Xiangshan in autumn lies in the trees here, with yellow in red and green in green. The roots spread vertically underground, highlighting its age and vicissitudes. I can't name most of the trees here, but why should I know their names? We are here to be close to nature, not to distinguish it. Nature is so beautiful, why not experience it more? Do you think this fiery red leaf will remind you that "frost leaves are redder than February flowers"? Will the beautiful scenery here make you "stop in the maple forest for one night"? Naturally, why are you so beautiful? I stood in Xiangshan to show you!

The weather is not as good as expected, the sky is windy, the leaves rustle and the scattered leaves are high. The rain, without warning, fell underground, and the fragrance of flowers and fruits in Xiangshan and the smell of jungle suddenly merged into the sound of rain. It seems that people can get closer to nature in the rain and feel its love. When you walked halfway up the mountain with my umbrella and looked down at the Woods below, the rain blurred them, but it brought them a beautiful symphony and painted them a beautiful oil painting. This kind of beautiful scenery can't be experienced on TV and computer because there are natural smells and sounds here.

The rain is getting smaller and smaller, and the air is still filled with the breath of nature. It's a pity that time gives me too little time to appreciate nature. I stepped on the land mixed with leaves and rain in a hurry and followed the tour group with the natural taste here. The fragrance of nature remains in my heart, and only when I am there can I really get close to nature.

Full mark composition review

Xiangshan is so beautiful that I want to see it. This composition is a narrative, the materials and ideas are in line with the meaning of the topic, and the center is prominent. The expression of the article meets the stylistic requirements and the language is literary.

According to the meaning of the question, the author closely follows the materials, such as the second, third and fourth paragraphs of the composition, and vividly describes the red leaves, birds and trees in Xiangshan. In the fifth natural paragraph of the composition, the autumn rain in Xiangshan was written in detail, and the breath of Xiangshan jungle was also written.

The outstanding performance of the center is that this article uses vision, hearing, smell, touch and mind to perceive the small ecological map of Xiangshan from beginning to end.

This article is rich in words and emotions, and its narrative prose features prominently. Quotations from poems such as "Frost leaves are red in February flowers" and "Stop to sit in the maple forest late" are very natural and appropriate. In the second half of the second and third natural paragraphs, Lenovo's imagination is beautiful and poetic, which deserves "praise".

The disadvantage is that the novelty of full-text selection is limited and the difficulty coefficient of full-text writing is average. In addition, the level of the article can be more logical. The current sequence is red leaves-birds-trees-autumn rain, which can be changed to red leaves-trees-birds-autumn rain.

Look up at the universe and overlook everything.

With the development of modern science and technology, human beings can learn about nature through TV and Internet. But if science and technology are regarded as the real way to perceive nature, it seems sad to me.

Yes, technology is just a tool. Only by walking into nature, looking up at the universe and overlooking everything can we truly feel the beauty and power of nature.

What is "perception", "feeling" is feeling, and "knowing" is knowing each other. Knowing this, we can understand why scientific and technological means can't make us really close to and perceive nature.

Television can let us know about the global weather, and the Internet can let us know everything about biology. Technology does provide us with a very convenient way to understand everything in nature. However, this can only be regarded as the study and cognition of scientific knowledge related to nature at most. After all, technology is just a tool, which can never make people feel the beauty of nature. Just as children have never cheered for the red flowers and green leaves on the screen, painters have never waved to the lakes and mountains on TV; Similarly, the weather forecast will not make the poet's poems prosperous, and the species of biological outline will not make the writer's literary thoughts gush. The writer Chi Zijian once said, "Nature is my other heart." In this case, we must put down the mouse, leave the TV and go to nature in person, so that we can get familiar with nature and get close to it, and our hearts can be washed by beauty.

In the way of going into nature personally, its significance lies not only in perceiving beauty, but also in perceiving the wisdom and strength of nature through contact with everything, thus maintaining a reverence for nature.

Man is a part of nature, however, the rise of industrial civilization has cut off the connection between man and nature. People can know and transform nature, which makes people lose their awe of nature and increase their ambition to conquer it. Imagine how you can cherish the blue sky and white clouds if you only know nature from the weather forecast. If we only generalize nature with biological knowledge, how to rely on science and technology to cherish and protect flowers and trees too much, but we lose our personal feelings for nature and make human beings forget their position in the world, so we wantonly destroy nature and create absurd things such as smog and city closure and excessive heavy metal content in river water. Technology has not narrowed the distance between man and nature, but alienated the relationship between man and nature, making people get carried away in arrogance. Therefore, only by letting us return to nature and feel it personally can we regain that awe and let people live in harmony with nature.

Sitting by the lotus pond and watching the lotus for a long time, Monet can create the famous Lotus. Walking into the horses and getting along with galloping horses, Xu Beihong can vividly show the bodybuilding and strength of horses in his paintings. Both of them walked into nature in the form of personal contact. Presumably this is also the reason why they can get to know nature and gain spiritual strength from it.

Let's go into nature. When the sky is high and the clouds are light, we can look up at the size of the universe, look down at the prosperity of the categories, feel and understand the real and natural.

Full mark composition review

This paper is accurate in meaning, which proves a point from beginning to end: if you want to perceive nature, you must go in and fear it yourself.

The article adopts the method of breaking first and then standing, and advancing layer by layer to prove its point of view, which is rigorous in structure.

Firstly, this paper points out the shortcomings of TV network and other scientific and technological means in perceiving nature: people can't perceive the beauty and strength of nature. The performance of children, painters and writers in front of the screen and other media is used to prove their views, and Chi Zijian's remarks are used to testify. The combination of matter and reason makes the argument rigorous.

Then, the article puts forward a profound view: the significance of going into nature in person is not only the perception of beauty, but also the perception of the wisdom and strength of nature, so as to maintain a reverence for nature. The author points out that man is a part of nature, but he is not close to nature, or only understands nature through the media, which has serious consequences: alienating nature, even destroying it, making cities closed by smog and rivers toxic. At this point, the cause and effect of the problem has been clear. The above is "broken".

In the last two paragraphs, Monet's personal observation of lotus flowers and Xu Beihong's painting of horses prove that only when people enter nature can they truly know each other and gain strength and wisdom. This is "Li".

The full text is about 1000 words, rich in content, and the materials used are true, typical and convincing. The application of contrast and hypothetical argument highlights the advantages of perceiving nature through personal experience and the disadvantages of perceiving nature through media. Fluent language and proper use of idioms; Use rhetorical devices such as rhetorical questions and parallelism to make the article more imposing and powerful.

This composition in the examination room has another advantage: the surface is neat and the handwriting is beautiful and pleasing to the eye.

Disadvantages: the beginning is a bit slow, which can be more concise. There is no dialectical understanding of blindly denying the role of scientific and technological media.