Sichuan examinee

It is the compass of sailing boat and the guide of life.

He is a boat of success, which can let you reach the other side of victory; It has invincible power and can help you overcome difficulties and realize your ideals. It's strong,

Toughness is a masterpiece of all kinds of frosty days. Whether it's synonymous with strength, pine and cypress, or tiny grass in a rock crack; Whether it is a boulder standing on the wall of thousands of feet or a seemingly weak water stop; ; Whether it is the lion, the king of beasts, laughing proudly in the mountains, or the calm, forbearing and extremely weak lamb, they are all showing their strength directly or indirectly.

Nature shows power, and human beings interpret power from different angles.

Power is the ladder of ancient people's success. The ancients achieved something in adversity because they had a strong light. The story of Zhong Ni's "Bian Wei Three Musts" is a household name; The story of Kuang Heng's "digging the wall to borrow light" is well known to women and children; Everyone is familiar with these beautiful words, such as "hanging beam on the head, stabbing stocks on the cone" and "firefly reflecting snow". These strong great men overcame the poverty of material life with great strength and finally achieved something.

Being strong is the spiritual beacon of people in adversity. The creator gave them great injustice. They are apples that have been severely bitten by God. They are strong enough to rebuild their sound character and ignite the fire of hope in their hearts. The unfortunate experience of living in a silent world did not defeat Helen Keller, but was powerful, illuminating her heart and pointing out her direction; Guanyin with a Thousand Hands shocked many people's hearts, and Tai Lihua's strong figure lingered in our hearts and was deeply remembered by us. There are hawking, Zhang Haidi and Li Li, strong souls, who use wheelchairs to prove to the world how to "stand up" and show people the elegance of the strong from the height of knowledge and theory.

Strong, is the power of man and nature, Wenchuan, strong! Sichuan, strong! China, be strong! Wave after wave of shouts sounded an inspiring horn. Wenchuan earthquake destroyed our home, but not our strong will. People in the ruins survive tenaciously with great strength, and the road to rebuild their homes is even longer. But as long as they have strong strength and strong hands, they will definitely rebuild a better home.

Being strong is the character that we "post-90s" pursue. We are seedlings in the greenhouse, and we have not experienced wind and rain, sun and rain, but strong calcium can cure our rickets immediately. "The sword front comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold", as well as "hardships and hardships lead to success". These life maxims are not the patent of the ancients. To understand the true meaning of "hard work, hungry body and skin". You know, only by dancing a powerful pen can you write a capitalized life; Only by raising strong sails can we start the ship of life; Only with the help of a powerful ladder can we climb the peak of the future! "The students who were crushed under the ruins of the Wenchuan earthquake proved to the world with strong and unyielding perseverance that we are not synonymous with weakness!

Let's walk with the strong, spur the road and create tomorrow's glory!

Comments by famous teachers

This paper is a traditional and normative argumentative paper, which highlights the candidates' solid basic skills in composition. There is an aggressive and overwhelming "strong" spirit between the lines, which left a deep impression on the marking teacher.

The writing idea is clear and the content is substantial, citing ancient and modern Chinese and foreign examples and combining the examinee's own reality, and comprehensively explaining the strong connotation. The background of Sichuan composition is related to the Wenchuan earthquake. It is easy for candidates to get out of control by taking the earthquake as an example, but this paper has a good grasp of the word.

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When I wrote these two words, I didn't know how good they were for myself. Because the 5. 12 earthquake came, I happened to be on a hill in Youxian District, Mianyang City to accept the power project. Even though there was a 9-magnitude earthquake, I think I was relatively safe. Now I live a healthy life with my family. Although somewhat depressed and forbearing, I am lucky compared with nearly 70,000 dead, hundreds of thousands of injured and countless homeless victims. So, maybe I am not qualified to show off my strength here.

However, after all, I am in the hardest hit area, and under the threat of aftershocks and floods, I will stick to my post to perform my duties and be worthy of God's care by completing my tasks. I want to go deep into the most dangerous area of Beichuan under the threat of landslides and rolling stones, and I want to venture into the flooded area of Zhenhu Lake to find a solution under the threat of epidemic and flood. Now sometimes I have to bite the bullet and deal with some affairs in a broken office building with few people. Perhaps, from this perspective, it is time to touch the strong edge again!

What is being strong? I think everyone can understand the literal meaning. But how to understand the meaning behind the strong, I think so. To interpret this word, maybe we don't have to cover it up with blood and life. Even if it is covered with blood and life, it is more wonderful-I have no intention of desecrating the dead here-but I still prefer to see those that can exist and continue, because this power can make people have the courage to follow up.

The so-called strong, I think it is a breakthrough of courage. When 7-year-old pupils rushed into the ruins twice and carried their classmates, when rescuers rushed into the hardest hit areas, they were undoubtedly strong. But behind them stood more unknown workers and volunteers-including singers at disaster relief parties, people who donated generously in front of donation boxes, and even farmers who set up stalls to sell vegetables in disaster areas. They sent care, light and normal life to the disaster area. Maybe they are just performing their duties, maybe some people have their own interests, but at least, he reached out and that's enough.

Being strong is the continuation of perseverance. When one life after another in the ruins challenged the survival limit and was finally rescued, he was undoubtedly strong. He gave himself a chance to be reborn with perseverance. But perseverance is also reflected in countless people who have been waiting, although they have not been killed. For survivors, tears don't mean weakness. Can you say that those brave struggles covered with tears are weak? Similarly, smiling does not mean forgetting. When I saw the smiling faces of those children at the resettlement site, I felt a warm feeling in my heart. This is not indifference, this is another kind of strength! And this kind of strength is exactly what we need now.

Being strong is a kind of waiting for confidence. Chen Jian, a young man carrying three prefabricated boards, finally failed to survive, but we saw his persistent confidence; "Son, if you can survive, please remember that I love you." Although the mother who wrote this passage failed to continue the course of her life, her words may become an invincible force for her children in the future. Confidence is also reflected in the survivors, who braved the threat of aftershocks to return home to rebuild their homes. This kind of power is the waiting of confidence.

Let the survivors live well, this is not forgetting, it is a kind of power produced in grief. The dead are gone, but the living have to move on!

On May 19, people shouted loudly and passionately, "Come on, Wenchuan! Sichuan, come on! Come on, China! " At that time, we were pleased to see that the power that the Chinese nation broke out at this moment, merged into rivers, merged into rivers and gathered into the sea, should be the hope of national rejuvenation.

Therefore, when we dry our tears and put them away, we will become more and more stable on the way forward. Isn't this a kind of strength?

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Men don't flick when they have tears, but they can't reach the sad place. However, since the "5. 12" Wenchuan M8.0 earthquake, every time I turn on the TV and watch the thrilling rescue scene, I can't help my blood boiling and tears streaming down my face, for the tragic fate, for the luck of the survivors, for the tenacious struggle under the ruins and for the touching moment in front of the camera.

After the disaster, the country quickly launched an emergency response, and Premier Wen rushed to the disaster area in the rain overnight. Stepping on stones and broken bricks, the Prime Minister of the Republic of China, an old man in his seventies, braved the risk of aftershocks to visit the victims and shed many tears with deep affection. That gaunt face, that hoarse voice and that thin back strongly shocked everyone's heart in front of the TV! "I am grandpa * * *, and the children must hold on!" "I should take care of you!" "I will come to see you again!" How can that kind of kind and affectionate care not make people moved, excited or even shed tears?

Under the ruins, I can always hear a strong voice: "I know you will come to save me!" " "In order to alleviate the fear of hunger and cold, in the ruins, Deng, a middle school girl in Ronghua Town, shifang city, read a book with a flashlight. The living students of Class 7 in Beichuan No.1 Middle School began to sing, and Ren, a little girl in a kindergarten in Beichuan County, sang the nursery rhyme "Two Tigers Run" ... In the process of being rescued, these survivors did not forget to remind rescuers to pay attention to safety. Qin of Deyang Experimental Middle School said to the doctor, "Auntie, come out quickly, it's too dangerous. Le Liuhui, a 22-year-old girl from Dujiangyan City, told rescuers: "Don't worry, I can persist, and you should also pay attention to safety!" I didn't forget to say "thank you" in a weak voice when I was rescued, and even gave a military salute!

They all have an unyielding belief: "You will find me, no matter how deep I am buried and how dangerous the situation is!" Looking at the indomitable life under the ruins constantly refreshing the miracle of survival, I can't help but burst into tears: in the face of the struggle of these lives, our usual sufferings, pains, troubles and depression are as light as clouds.

In the face of the disaster, the building fell and the monument was erected. When the earthquake came, Tan Qianqiu, president of Deyang Dong Qi Middle School, opened his arms and exchanged his flesh and blood for the lives of four students. Wu, a teacher from Chongzhou Huaiyuan Middle School, rescued 27 students and died when he returned to the classroom to save people again. Qu Wanrong, a teacher of Huanhuan Kindergarten in Zundao Town, Mianzhu City, firmly blocked the collapsed concrete slab with his back, and still held 1 surviving students in his arms when he died; Nie Xiaoyan, a kindergarten teacher in Yingxiu Town, Wenchuan, held other people's children in one hand, and her own children had no time to rescue the buried ruins; And those rescuers, not afraid of life and death, fought day and night. They didn't even have time to save their loved ones, and even the bodies of their loved ones didn't have time to take one last look. They held on to their posts until they fainted, just like Jiang Min, a police officer in Pengzhou, who lost his parents and his two-year-old daughter ... touching pictures, scenes that hit the soul directly and epic feats made me cry again and again.

In the face of disaster, great love is boundless. In the face of disaster, our nation is United as never before, China compatriots are linked by blood, and love is surging everywhere. All over the country, at home and abroad, Chinese children generously donated money and blood. In just a few days, the amount of donations reached several billion yuan; CCTV's "Dedication of Love" fund-raising party took only four hours and raised more than 654.38+0.5 billion yuan. There are also spontaneously organized volunteers, enthusiastic taxi drivers, and unknown ordinary people, all of whom are silently contributing their strength. Just like Bai Lin, a senior three student who experienced mixed feelings at the CCTV party, told her father that she would go back to be a volunteer! They only have one wish: everyone is from Wenchuan, lend a helping hand, overcome disasters and rebuild their homes! Like everyone in front of the TV, I shed tears, for the joy after suffering and for the strength in suffering.

In the face of disaster, we are so brave; We are so generous in the face of great love. In the face of disaster, there are always faces that worry me, figures that move me, pride that wakes me up, and dedication that makes me excited and tearful! Disasters cannot be shared, but sufferings can be shared. No matter how big the disaster is, divided by1300 million, it will become smaller; Even a small amount of aid, multiplied by1300 million, will also merge into an ocean of love. We should also dry our tears and do something for the disaster area, even if we try our best to offer a brick and tile.