Dream lives together, and it will never wither in the warm room of memory. Let's put wings on them with the flowers of love. (dreams)
2. The composition begins and ends. The imitation park is a beautiful place with mountains and water, beautiful flowers and plants.
When you walk into the park, you will see trees and trees, butterflies flying in the sky and bees enjoying the cool under the leaves. The tender green grass has dressed the earth in a green dress, and birds are chirping in the trees.
Walking through the path, you will see an ancient tea pavilion with a long history, where the old people play chess and the children enjoy the cool.
Not far away, you will see the zigzag bridge, and the story is very long. There is still a version. Don't underestimate the rows of small stone lanterns. Legend has it that lanterns can also exorcise demons.
After crossing the bridge, we came to the lively song and dance square, where the old people danced and the children played.
Guys, do you want to go?
3. 20 wonderful composition topics at the beginning and 20 at the end, each imitation place 10. When writing in the examination room, you must write the opening paragraph, firmly grasp the reader's eyes, and let the reader follow your thoughts involuntarily.
Generally speaking, there are many ways to start, and one of them is the most important, that is: concise and clear, and quickly get to the topic. Please look at the opening skills of the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in recent years.
Tip 1: Cut to the chase and point out that the beginning of the article should be closely related to the theme and slightly explained. This is a common and effective composition method.
This method of solving problems first is widely used. For example, writing a person's article can start with the main characters; Writing is an article, just grasp the beginning of the main event and deduct the topic.
However, the topic should be flexible, not that the first sentence of any composition should be deducted from the topic, but that the beginning part should enter the topic as soon as possible. My friend, how do you feel when you see mountains of garbage, streams and rivers stinking and harmful gases poisoning people? At that time, I was so angry that I wanted to shout loudly: "Please pay attention to the living environment of human beings!" (Excerpted from the full text of "I am concerned about the living environment of human beings" in Guangdong senior high school entrance examination) Tips: The writing of argumentative papers in the examination room must clearly show your own views.
It is a common but practical method to come straight to the point and make a clear attitude when writing. At the beginning of this paper, the way of asking questions and answering questions is adopted, which is concise and powerful, and clearly shows my own views, laying the foundation for the later development.
When you are in pain, you will go home and vent in tears; When you are upset, you will go home and let the warmth of home dispel the dark clouds in your heart; Home-what melts in is sadness, and what melts out is happiness; Home-accept sadness and release happiness. What a nice home! (Selected from the composition "Home is really good" in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province) Skills: Narration can also come straight to the point.
You see, this article uses parallelism to express the feeling of "home" without any cover. Set the tone for the full text.
Let's look at some good starting examples: 1) Everyone has their own unforgettable past. I did a novel and interesting thing, and it can surprise people to say it.
That's roasted grasshoppers. "Grilled grasshopper" brother, what a kind name! Whenever I see those innocent children walking hand in hand with his brother on the road; Whenever I see someone else's brother tutoring my younger brother and sister in their studies; Whenever other children call me brother, I can't help thinking of you, my dear brother.
"Miss You, Brother" 3) Kaifeng, the ancient city, is the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty, and Long Ting in Kaifeng is a dazzling pearl in the history of ancient architecture in China. I'll believe that when I see it. Last summer vacation, I was lucky enough to visit Long Ting with my mother.
Travel Notes of Longting 4) I didn't know the beauty of Taiwan Province Province until Alishan; I didn't know the greatness of Taiwan Province Province until Alishan. Mountaineering railway, forest, sea of clouds, sunrise and sunset glow are indeed the characteristics of Alishan, which can be called "Five Wonders of Alishan".
Looking for an autumn dress, I accidentally saw the scarf at the bottom of the box. It is made of black velvet rope with wide stripes ... in this simple wool fabric, I will never forget the story.
It was more than ten years ago, on a stormy day, my father came to see me at school from his hometown. ..... (The student's composition "Father and Daughter" is changed to "A Black Scarf") Skill 2: Design suspense and myth. At first, create a puzzle in some way, suspend the reader's thoughts and ideas, make others have the desire to find out the details, and attract others to continue reading.
This is a better way to start. In fact, this kind of opening form is very rich, such as: ① Ask an unsolved question first.
(2) intercept a wonderful event first. (3) first explain an object that plays a clue role.
(4) First, arrange a scene that triggers the story. ⑤ Introduce the characters closely related to the story first.
Example: 1) A sentence "My God! What should I do? What should I do? " It's midnight and I still can't sleep. Thinking of Dahua's nervous and disappointed expression this morning, my conscience constantly condemns myself.
Dad, it's two o'clock in the morning. Do you know that your daughter has been standing by the door for a long time? Recalling the "civil war" that happened during the day, I feel so sad. ("Say Sorry") C Dad is a kind name. Students don't know how many times to call every day, but I can only call "dad" silently in my heart.
"Dad and I" 2) "The captain had a fight." "The battalion chief was taken away by the police."
The news blew all over the campus with the morning breeze and blew into everyone's ears. The battalion chief is Li Daming, a famous good student in Class 2, No.4 Middle School.
"His nose is bleeding, and so is the person who fought with him." Students who went to school in the morning said that they saw Li Daming being taken to the police station on their way to school.
The news spread more and more, and the whole school suddenly became lively. My deskmate 3) Suddenly I received a small package. I opened it gently and was shocked.
Isn't this the rain flower stone collected by Lei Lei? Did she give it to me? She doesn't blame me anymore? I am very confused ... (Rain Flower Stone) A little beggar who used to wander around turned out to be a college student. When Xin Wang began to tell me about his extraordinary experience, tears welled up in his eyes before he could say it.
How many past events did he think of ... (Adventure) 5) Professor Su Lin, a famous vocalist, discovered an incredible thing: among the more than 200 candidates who took the entrance examination for the Conservatory of Music, there was a 20-year-old girl, Chen Yiling, who got excellent results in the initial examination. This is the first time that Professor Su Lin has met such a young and talented candidate. However, in the second interview, Chen Yiling's performance was very disappointing.
Typical example: I'm dying.
Can you help me imitate the beginning and end of three compositions? The memory of happy days begins with a long river, full of bitter and cheerful tears, weaving colorful dreams. It flows into my heart like a clear spring. When I opened the door of memory, there were many unforgettable things. However, the most unforgettable thing is my six-year primary school life, which was my happiest day. There is no banquet at the end. Beautiful campus, how much joy and enlightenment you brought me, I will never forget. This spring outing let us go into nature and experience the beauty of spring. However, this is only a small wave of happiness in my magnificent primary school life. I will never forget my primary school life. An unforgettable event began in the long river of my memory, and many of them have been forgotten. But one thing is deeply imprinted on my heart. I can't forget it. This is a very unforgettable thing. Here's the thing. Finally, the past time has passed, and the future time will come. Only by grasping the present, working hard and fighting hard can we be worthy of our own life and our own time and years. An unforgettable childhood begins with a faded childhood. Childhood is like a cheerful song, telling those past stories; Childhood is like a melodious flute, playing the most beautiful movement in life ... I will never forget it in the end. Imitate the thin water, blue sky and running water at the beginning of "The Man I Appreciate Most". Only when the blue sky sets off, the water will be more beautiful. I am a clear stream, xxx shines on my blue sky. The person I admire is the last person I admire! An ordinary xxx who loves labor and cares about the collective.
5. Write the beginning, end and title of my composition. I am a lively, naughty and naughty girl.
I remember it was in the third grade of my primary school. In Chinese class, the teacher lectures carefully and the students listen attentively. It suddenly occurred to me-what would happen if there was a strange call? So I learned the following two meows. The teacher listened and asked sharply, "Who brought the cat into the classroom?" Suddenly someone said, "Teacher, it seems to be Ren Jianan." The teacher said, "Ren Jianan, did you bring the cat?" I quickly said, "No, not me." The teacher went on with the lecture. After class, the teacher said, "Ren Jianan, come to the office." I honestly admitted my mistake to the teacher, who gave me a good lecture and made me realize the serious consequences of making trouble in class.
I am such a troublemaker, but since then, I have never made any mistakes in class, but my naughty nature has not been corrected.
I remember that summer, a rainstorm came and went in a hurry. After the rain clears, the rainbow hangs high. I asked my mother to go out in the rain, and my mother prevaricated. Our yard is plastered with cement, and the accumulated water is crystal clear. I stepped on the water barefoot, and my laughter was splashed with water. I accidentally fell down and got soaked through. I'm afraid my mother will run away when she sees it. At this moment, my mother came out. Seeing my embarrassment, she couldn't help laughing. Then he quickly pulled me up and went to the house to change clothes.
Listen, I'm a naughty girl. My mother often calls me a crazy girl, and I am used to it, and I don't care.
Although I am naughty, I also have many advantages. I am lively, informal, frugal and love to make friends.
It was a quiet night. I watched the stars with some friends. Suddenly I heard crickets and went to find them. Pulling away the stone, I saw a big cricket. I pounced on it and caught it. I shouted happily, "I got it, I got it …" When I got home, my mother said, "This girl is really amazing. She dares to catch anything. "
I am an ordinary student, and everyone knows my personality! But I don't want to change myself. I am still me.
6. Write goodbye 20 1 1 in the tone of the Korean people, combining the exercises after class and the third question. Volunteer Uncle (1)- Write goodbye, dear volunteer uncle, will you come to Korea again? How I don't want to let you go! Do you remember? I am a little golden flower who once sang "The Ballad of Rammed Rice" to you. When the American devils invaded Korea and slaughtered the Korean people across the "38th parallel", you bravely crossed the Yalu River regardless of your own lives. Not far away, Wan Li came to North Korea and fought side by side with us, repelling the Japanese attacks again and again, saving the lives of our whole village and defending our country in North Korea. In the past eight years, you were the first heroic army to help us in the war of resistance, and the last to leave. You really have done too much for our Korean people. I remember that in the Battle of Shangganling, a volunteer soldier named Huang Jiguang gave his 23-year-old life in order to seize a commanding height that could not be captured for a long time. I still remember a soldier named Qiu who died to prevent the enemy from finding our target. Burned alive by enemy incendiary bombs. All these have spread among the Korean people and become eternal heroes in our minds. After the war, you rebuilt our home, planted crops and brought us clothes and food. You fought bloody battles for us, sacrificed your blood, starved, and made selfless dedication, which enabled us to pass through one difficulty after another. How can you forget this friendship that is higher than the mountain and deeper than the sea? Although we are not relatives, we are better than relatives. How can we forget this great friendship condensed with blood and life? Dear Uncle Volunteer, today, you will leave North Korea and return to your motherland. At this parting moment, my friends in the village and I sent a bunch of beautiful Jindalai and said with deep affection: Goodbye, dear friends! Goodbye, dear uncle volunteer! Goodbye, Uncle Volunteer (2) Uncle Volunteer, please get on the bus quickly! You haven't been home for eight years. How much you are looking forward to this day! Get on the train! Why are you shaking your head? Aren't you worried that I will forget you, Uncle China Volunteer? No, not in my life. In the past eight years, you have sacrificed so much for us, and we have finally lived a peaceful and comfortable life. I remember that time, you told me the story of your childhood in the tent, and I was so excited that the agent rushed in and shouted, "Get out!" " Enemy planes are coming! Come on, get in the bomb shelter! "You picked up your grandmother, hugged me and led everyone into the shelter. Then, you said to me, "Little Jinhua, you must take care of yourself, take care of grandma and take care of everyone." You wait for your uncle here, and he will come back soon. "I'm waiting for you anxiously. A few hours later, several other uncles helped you in. I see your face is sallow and your left leg is bleeding. I suddenly "wow! Uncle is fine. "Think about it. A few hours ago, you were handsome and majestic, and you just helped grandma pick a few buckets of water. Now I can only lie quietly in the ward, and I can't be as lively as before. How can I not cry? It was you who lost your legs for our peace and paid such a high price. You said that this friendship is higher than the mountain and deeper than the sea. How can I forget? Men don't cry easily, but today, when they were separated from the Korean people, you cried. Goodbye, Uncle Volunteer! Goodbye, dear people! Get on the train and go back to your family! Goodbye, dear people! Our hearts will always be with you.
7. How to write the beginning, middle and end of an article? How did it end? No one will ask the police this question, because the police don't teach Chinese, which has little to do with him. However, there is a foreign humor that someone asked the police for tips on reporting crimes, and the police finally spoke out the "doorway": someone asked the police for tips on reporting crimes, and the police said, "You must have confidence in reporting crimes first, and the beginning of reporting crimes should be as dramatic as arresting criminals; The middle of the report should be as orderly as interrogating prisoners; The end of the report should be as concise and clear as the judgment. "
The so-called beginning should be "dramatic", that is to say, the beginning should be beautiful; The so-called ending should be "concise and lively", that is, the ending should be crisp and powerful.
The main ways to achieve a "good start" are: the main ways to achieve a "good start" are:
First, describe the cause of the incident. For example, the composition of "Sideline" begins with the following words: "The cleaning has just ended, and I don't know which' wicked ghost' left a small group of waste paper in the corridor of grade five." At the beginning of the article, it is the cause of the quarrel between the army and Niuniu, which has the power to grab people's attention.
Second, describe the environment and set off the atmosphere. For example, in the composition "The Wind", the author described the fierceness of the wind at the beginning: "Walking on the road, the wind will blow me away." Even "the big poplar trees at the intersection in front are blown to stagger and make a' swish' sound ..." The article begins by explaining the harsh environment on the way to school, precisely to meet the needs of expressing the central idea and to enhance the appeal.
Third, arouse people's interest and fascination. For example, in an interesting science class, the author wrote at the beginning: "As soon as the brittle class stopped, Mr. Ma came into the classroom with a lot of fur, silk handkerchief, glass rods and rubber rods." What on earth is Teacher Ma going to do? Don't you want to see it?
Fourth, cut to the chase and get to the point. For example, in the essay "Lei Feng came to the sports ground", the author wrote at the beginning: "The 13th school track and field meeting is over. At the summary meeting, teachers and classmates praised an unknown' Lei Feng'. " This is straightforward, attracting readers' attention to the central idea at once and playing a leading role in the full text.
The main methods to achieve "strong ending" are:
First of all, make the ending of the event clear. For example, an interesting science class ends like this:
Class is over. When the students reluctantly put down the experiment, they could not help complaining: "What's the matter, this class is so short!" "
This development follows the plot, ending the full text with the end of the event, neatly, and the article will end as soon as the event is over.
Second, the language is implicit and thought-provoking. In the narrative, the author writes profound and implicit conclusions with unique knowledge and understanding, trying to be meaningful and thought-provoking.
Third, the ending echoes the beginning. Taking care of the beginning at the end can make the article well-structured and seamless.
Fourth, point to the end of the article and highlight the center. Punctuating the topic at the end of the article is like making the finishing point. If this "eye" is well pointed, it will make the whole article shine. The finishing touch can help readers understand the profound meaning of the full text and leave a deep impression on people.