Based on the analysis of the current tourism situation, your paper puts forward the management concepts of "employees first" and "guests first". This is your innovation and the highlight of the article. I am a management major. Let me talk about my opinion for reference only.

First, the management concepts of "employees first" and "guests first" are also applied in other fields, so you can refer to the application in other fields to modify the paper.

Secondly, the management concepts of "employees first" and "guests first" are actually more or less embodied or applied in the tourism industry. This requires you to stand at a higher angle and refine these to the center of your thesis, which is also your essence.

Third, we should further elaborate the relationship between "employees first" and "guests first" to make your paper look perfect and become a complete system.