There is a walk of fame in Hollywood, USA, where countless handprints of stars have been left, and on the walk of fame of life, countless ordinary but great people have left their own special footprints.

Li Jianying left his last footprint on the Avenue of Stars. He has been flying for twenty-one years and there are countless footprints on that pedal. But the plane broke down, so we had to land or crash in a natural village to save our lives. Life only gives him sixteen seconds. As a soldier, he naturally tilted the balance of life to the people. The plane can't change its course, so he has to change his life. He finally stepped on the pedal-forced landing. There was a loud noise and the soul returned to the sky. He left the last but also the most brilliant footprint on his beloved pedal.

Lili left no footprints, but she drew the most beautiful arc on the Avenue of Stars with a wheelchair. Her life is full of misfortune, but it is also full of sunshine. She suffered from polio since she was a child. She had a car accident at the age of 40 and was accompanied by a wheelchair all her life. She couldn't stand, so she had to use a wheelchair instead of her feet. She founded Love Paradise, which sends warmth and sunshine to lonely people with her weather-beaten voice. Although her body is incomplete. But she sang the song of the strong with her own heart, which echoed in the paradise she created for a long time. Her wheelchair print is her footprint, leaving her with thousands of efforts and gains day and night.

Fang Yonggang's footprints are full of knowledge. He is full of peaches and plums, and in the last month, he was still helping science graduate students write their graduation thesis. His life is accompanied by study. When he learned that he had terminal liver cancer, he still insisted on teaching. He walked through the battlefield of life belief, leaving his body in a state of charge forever, leaving a series of deep footprints.

Yuan Longping left a simple and noble footprint of a farmer.

Chen Jian left the footprints of a soldier loyal to his comrades.

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They are ordinary, but they are all great. They left their footprints on the Avenue of Stars in a unique way.

Everyone is a star, and everyone can leave their footprints on the Avenue of Stars of life, and use these indelible traces to show the wonderful things you left behind.

When the wings are full.

Brilliant sunshine is projected on the vast sea. In the distance, on a dangerous cliff, an eagle shook off the dust, spread its wings, flew to the sun like the wind and disappeared into the golden light.

The reason why the eagle can fly high is because of its plump feathers and hard wings, and because it has accumulated enough self-confidence after countless attempts. It can be seen that when the wings are gradually plump, they must be tempered.

Chen Jingrun, a famous contemporary young mathematician, showed extraordinary mathematical talent in middle school. When proving Goldbach's conjecture about the world's mathematical problems, he often shut himself in his room and devoted himself to his studies. Whether in cold winter or hot summer. He told us with his own success: don't forget the down-to-earth calculation when the wings are growing.

Pu Songling, a novelist in Qing Dynasty, began to collect novel materials when he was young. He often comes to a big tree near the market and spreads a piece of cloth with a cigarette rod and a cup of tea on it. Whenever pedestrians pass by, he always respectfully asks them to have a rest, have a sip of tea and smoke a pack of cigarettes, and then asks them to tell some folk fairy tales and make their own records. Day after day, year after year. It was not until he was in his forties that he finally finished the creation of Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio. He told us with practical actions: when our wings are getting fuller, we should have the spirit of diligence and humility.

A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. When the wings are growing, we should try to avoid arrogance.

Zhao Kuo is the son of Zhao She, the general of Chu. He has been familiar with the art of war since he was a child and has talked about the theory of war. Even his father, the great Zhao She, couldn't stop him. Proud Zhao Kuo thought he was proficient in the art of war and invincible in the world, so he volunteered after Zhao She's death to replace Lian Po, a generation of general who was just as famous as his father. And Zhao Kuo, who only speaks the art of war and has no actual combat ability, has ruined 400,000 living young soldiers of Zhao. The lesson of "an armchair strategist" warns us that when the wings are growing, a person is most likely to be arrogant.

Pay attention to sharpening, when the wings are gradually full, we will enjoy flying in the sky.

Lay a solid foundation, and when our wings are growing, we will appreciate the grandeur of the mountains and the vastness of the sea.

Full of confidence, when the wings are growing, learn from the predecessors with an open mind, and success is ahead.

In the sunshine, in the mountains, on the road of life, I see my wings gradually plump, and a spirit of fighting against the storm of life gradually emerges at the high end of my heart. ...

Comments by famous teachers

It contains the truth of being a man and conveys the truth of being a man.

This article is extraordinary in momentum, and it shows a touching picture for readers from the beginning. After reading it, we feel that the author is not writing the laws of nature, but showing people a natural truth and a revelation of life. This is not the case from inferior life in nature to long-lived human beings: when the wings are getting full, it is also a time when it is easy to lose yourself. Life can only be perfect if you persist. There are both positive and negative examples, which are really thought-provoking

The overall sense of the article is good, and the application of language expression, rhetoric, expression and writing skills is successful, which shows that the author is diligent in writing practice and has good writing habits and basic writing skills. The expression of emotions is also natural and true. At the end of the article, the theme is clear and powerful.

Live poetically

Heidegger said: "People should live poetically." When birds soar in the sky, when flowers bloom on the earth, when people smile, poetry begins to flow in life. People should live poetically.

Living poetically stems from the harmony in people's hearts. Ji Xianlin once said: "True harmony is the harmony between people." Imagine how a person with a turbid heart can make his life full of poetry. A person's attitude towards life is often a true reflection of his heart.

As a result, sister Lin, who is as clear as water, lived in Xiaoxiang Pavilion, shed tears in the wind under the lush bamboo trees, expressed her feelings for the moon, and sang a few light and strange poems. Xue Pan, who smells like wine and meat, only knows how to guess the rules and talk nonsense about "a mosquito groans". People who are harmonious in heart and full of love for everything can live poetically.

Mother Teresa brings love to every poor person, and love makes her life full of poetry; Father Pierre sends warmth to the homeless, and caring makes his life full of poetry. Academician Yuan Longping sends hope to the hungry, and love makes his life full of poetry. Only when people have inner harmony and love everything can they learn to live poetically.

To live poetically, people need to draw nutrition from reading. Let reading become a part of life, and life can become poetic. When people explore the way of being a man from the classics of Confucianism, Taoism and Mohism, when people open the mirror of history from Sima Qian's bamboo slips, and when people realize the writing method from the works of eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties, wisdom begins to nourish people's dry souls and inject poetry into them. When people think about the hermit's feelings from Tao Yuanming's Chrysanthemum, when people feel the change of life and death from Shi Tiesheng's Altar, and when people find the peace of life from Rousseau's Walden Lake, thinking begins to put wings on the soul and let it soar in the poetic sky. Only when people gain wisdom from reading and learn to think from reading can they experience a poetic life.

To live poetically, people need to let nature soothe their impetuous hearts. Modern people's life is full of running for their livelihood and future, full of noisy whistle and noise, and full of indifference and vigilance between people.

People need to find the poetry of life in the breeze and birdsong. The vast and desolate forest brought rich and sad feelings to Shakespeare who lived poetically, the flowing Danube brought beautiful charm to Strauss' family, and the ancient and vicissitudes of Fenghuang ancient city brought historical simplicity and profundity to Shen Congwen who lived poetically. The agility and purity of nature make people live more poetically.

When people live with inner harmony and love, when people gain wisdom and thoughts from reading, and when people seek comfort from nature, people can live poetically as Liu Yuxi wrote in My Humble Room. 890

Teacher's comment: After putting forward the viewpoint that "people should live poetically", the article discusses it from three aspects: inner harmony and love, drawing nourishment from reading, and letting nature soothe impetuous hearts. The first level can be regarded as the premise and condition of the latter two levels, which are the deepening of the former level and profoundly answer the question of how to live poetically. Finally, the full-text collection is convenient and the structure is rigorous. The viewpoint of the article is more personal; Rich examples, showing a good knowledge reserve; The language is fluent and the sentences are vivid.

Where there is a will, there is a way.

Ambition is the determination to make a difference; Success is achievement. People who can achieve something in their studies and careers, from getting the first place in the exam and seeking an official position to the prosperity of the country and the nation, are all people with lofty aspirations.

"What foreigners can do, China people can certainly do it!" This is not an impulsive rhetoric, but the "ambition" of the discriminated people in China, which made Tong Dizhou and Zhan Tianyou express the pride of the China people in front of the world.

Lu Xun, the most difficult bone to chew in modern China, became the greatest writer and thinker in modern times when the situation was changeable, the disaster was severe, and the contradictions between nationalities and classes were extremely acute and complicated. At the beginning, Lu Xun, a young man who is keen on natural science, realized that even if China people are physically strong, they can only be shot for public display, or be a numb audience, which is meaningless to China's social reform, so he got a pen and wished "I commend Xuanyuan with blood". Such unforgettable choices and firm aspirations make Lu Xun the Kunlun of modern culture in China.

All the examples of bowed piles show the importance of "ambition" to "success". A person without ambition is like being exhausted in a vast desert without an oasis.

At the age of five, Zhong Yong, who could "refer to things and write poems", lost his ambition because his father was greedy for interests. What's more, there is no "ambition" and "Jiang Lang is exhausted" everywhere. If "Zhong Yong" and "Jiang Lang" are determined by their talents, our ancestors may have too many "Edison".

However, yearning is easy, but it is difficult to achieve. There are two monks in West Shu, one is poor and the other is rich. They both have ambitions to go to the South China Sea. However, the rich have been trying to buy a boat for several years, but they have failed, while the poor have a bottle and a bowl. Why? It's just that for the rich, only the "desire" has not moved, while the poor are making unremitting efforts. In this way, the rich are just daydreaming, or their ambitions have not been put into action. What's the difference between such an armchair strategist and a man without ambition?

Because of ambition, the stream flows into the sea; Because of ambition, the dead branches look forward to the green leaves in spring; Because of ambition, human beings have contributed to the height of mountain peaks. Let's stand on the horizon and build our dreams, because we are ambitious and will fight for our dreams. We will be the sea and green leaves, and we will stand on the top of the mountain.

Where there is a will, there is a way.

Cheer for yourself.

Spring breeze passes by the lake, leaving shallow ripples; Sunlight passes through the clouds, leaving a trace of warmth; Time flies in the forest, leaving rings. I walked on the flat and rugged road of life, leaving behind me the sound of cheering for myself. Cheer for yourself and pick the fruits of success!

who is it? Reproduce the prosperity of life in a quiet place? who is it? Show the miracle of life in dance?

It's you, Tai Lihua. From the bottom of misfortune to the peak of art, your life is a beautiful dance. Show the miracle of art in the silent place and outline the nobility of human nature in the arm. It is you, encouraging yourself, not afraid of difficulties, and resolutely moving towards success; It's you, encourage yourself, train hard and be passionate about billy elliot; It's you, cheer for yourself, perform gorgeous dances on the stage of life and shine with eternal brilliance! Encourage yourself, that sincere words, that sincere encouragement, that touching singing voice can all become our inexhaustible motive force. Come on for ourselves, let's climb to the top of the mountain and sit and watch the water and sky in Ji Xiang, Sha Ou; Let's cross the thorns and walk to the broad road covered with flowers; Let's go through the haze and enjoy the lovely and empty weather. ...

Look at the flowers in front of the court and the clouds all over the sky. In the long river of the whole time, every drop of water reflects a shining brilliance, and after this beautiful luster, there is a male voice that encourages me. ...

It's you, Yang Liwei. After all the failures, you didn't lose heart, encouraged yourself and drew a one-stop trajectory in the vast space. ...

It is you, Wang Shunyou, who encouraged yourself to walk out of the legend of the world postal history on an empty night. ...

It is you, Huang Boyun, who encouraged yourself to create the hardest material in the world after resolutely returning to China. ...

A falling star cannot dim the starry sky; A flower cannot wither and be barren all spring; One water disappears, but the whole river will not dry up. When we face failure, we should cheer up and explore the key to success. While we are happy for success, we should also cheer ourselves up and feel the new artistic conception of life!

Friends, let's cheer up and pick the fruits of success together!

Let the pursuit of the heart not old.

Stay in the majestic mountains, we will miss the sea, and walking there will be another vast and magnificent scenery.

Staying in the magnificent sea, we will miss the desert, and the endless sand sea is even more shocking when we walk over it.

If we stay in the yellow sand heat wave in the desert, we will miss the forest. If we walk there, we will appreciate the profound beauty of the forest.

Wang Guozhen said that lingering too deeply is a kind of fetter, which is not only about feet, but also about the future. If you choose to stay, you will have a temporary scenery. If you walk over, the greatest beauty of life will suddenly appear. Choose to go there, and the greatest beauty of life will come back. If you choose to go there, you choose to struggle. Choosing to walk over is to offer sacrifices to the altar of pursuit.

The Jordan River has been flowing for many years, and the Salt Sea said to it, Stay, there is soft sunshine here. The Jordan River refused and ran forward singing. After many years, the Jordan River is still magnificent, but the salt sea has stayed too long and can no longer enter the sea. People named it the Dead Sea. Life lies in constant movement. If life stays in a comfortable environment, the earth will die. It is through every landscape that a vibrant world is created, and life in nature is endless.

Even so, why can people be inferior? We call ourselves the essence of heaven and earth, the spirit of all things, and we must also complete our pride as human beings in constant struggle. Some people say that the herringbone is like a pair of legs, which shows the pursuit of faith and the spiritual direction of never stopping.

This reminds me of Schwarzenegger, the great image of never-ending struggle in life. In his early years, he was a world-famous bodybuilder. His strong muscles won him prizes in various bodybuilding competitions, but he did not stop at the honor brought by bodybuilding, but turned his attention to Hollywood. After making great achievements in film and television again, he became an ambitious politician and was all-powerful in politics. This strong American showed us the beauty he pursued and created the myth of "walking over".

How far can life go? Not your feet, but your will; How high a person can climb, not his hands, but his ambition. Never-ending will and ambition can make our young hearts see the endless scenery in the world.

We should always remember that the peacock has lost its wings because it stays in people's praise. At best, it is just a bird with a beautiful tail that has not walked over. Zhong Yong finally became a mediocre man because he stayed in the aura of genius: Newton regretted that he spent 20 years studying God in the second half of his life because he stayed in the achievements of the first half of his life and did not gain a firm foothold on the shoulders of giants.

A life full of fighting capacity requires endless pursuit. Don't wear off the edges and corners of your endeavor during your stay. Walk past, even if there is more wind and rain, you will smile at the sky, because your pursuit is not old.

I still understand you.

Late at night, there is wind and rain.

At night, I was awakened by the beating rain. Look around, I can't see my fingers.

Open the window, touch the night wind and collect this little rain. So, this night, this wind, this rain let me have infinite reverie …

Spring is endless.

At night, on the water, on the balcony.

A breeze passed through the wooden window and brushed a depressed face. Outside the window, it is raining. You sit by the window, quietly looking at the peach trees not far away, sipping elegant and mellow wine, sometimes reciting poems, and sometimes smiling. Although it is late at night, you are awake.

Drunk, you are drunk, you are not only drunk in the wine on this rainy night, but also drunk in this rich spring. You touch the wind with your hand and watch the peach blossom fall from the branches to the river, and then go away with the ripples on the river. So, you recited this famous saying in one breath: "I woke up carefree in the early morning of this spring, and birds were singing everywhere." But now I think of that night, that storm, I don't know how many flowers were folded? " Spring has no end, spring has no end.

The worries of family members are endless.

Rainy night, autumn pool, melancholy.

Bashan, at night, the downpour beats the banana. The river has risen over the small wooden bridge across the banks.

"It's late autumn, but I can't drive home. I wonder if my parents are healthy and my wife is lovesick? "

You are sitting under the eaves wet with rain, and the cold autumn wind sweeps over your eyebrows, messing up the bun on your temples and your thoughts. "When * * * cuts the western window, we talk about the rain at night". The dark night can't hide your tears, and endless family worries linger in the downpour. ...

National hatred has a long history.

Late autumn, hut, national hatred.

You stand in the heavy rain and look at the roof rolled up by three layers of thatch. Some hang on the treetops, and some sink into the pond. There is only a burst of desolation in my heart, and a helpless sigh in my voice.

"Ah, it's cold autumn rain again, and the child will be frozen again tonight. There is no place in the house that is not wet by the rain. What can we do! "

When you look around at the people who have been displaced and their homes destroyed, you can't help but leave bitter tears and sigh sadly: "... there are thousands of buildings in Taiping, which is a great shelter for all the poor in the world, and it is as peaceful as a mountain." Alas, suddenly seeing this house in front of me, it is enough for me to freeze to death alone! " The country hates you, and the country hates you.

The wind blew across my cheek, and a leaf floated by and landed in my hand holding the rain. This is an ancient leaf, perhaps it is full of laughter and pain, just like this unpredictable rainy night, which will change with people's joys and sorrows. So there are intoxicated Meng Haoran, homesick Li Shangyin, and worried Du Fu. ...

But now I remember that night, that storm, I wonder how many flowers were broken? But I still understand you.

Full score reason:

On a rainy night, the author was "awakened by the beating rain". In this special environment, "I" can't help but fall into meditation: the author imagines the background of Meng Haoran, Li Shangyin and Du Fu's poems, and embodies the pursuit and ideal of the three poets in the way of historical reproduction and the special artistic conception of "rain". The article subtitle is fresh and incisive, and the structure is clear at a glance. Each paragraph constitutes a parallelism, which makes the sentence read neatly and enhances the momentum of the article.

The author is very creative in the structural arrangement of the article. At the beginning, he entered reverie with the help of Rainy Night, putting himself in the middle to associate their feelings, and at the end, he entered reality from fantasy. But now I remember that night, that storm. I wonder how many flowers were broken. Thought-provoking and intriguing. This is a good work.

Cheer for yourself.

Don't be discouraged when facing difficulties. Please don't be proud in the face of success. Cheer yourself, you don't need a reason. -inscription

There is no choice but to spend money.

A disturbing riot finally came. Perhaps, this moment of silence is a precursor to the storm. My parents finally went to court. They want a divorce. Facing the court's inquiry, I shed tears of helplessness and pain. Life will be better with my father, but I can't bear to part with my mother. Looking at the traces of time and the anxious tears on my mother's face, I feel distressed. I encourage myself to be strong, so I choose a lonely and helpless mother. In the face of the past, although I was helpless, the flowers still fell behind. Facing the future, I want to go up a storey still higher and cheer myself up. I believe that single-parent families can be very happy.

The swallow I may know is back.

After my father left, my family was penniless, and my mother and I had to rely on 400 yuan's salary every month. Because of the huge contrast with before, I began to get grumpy. I, a carnivore, will become a vegetarian overnight. The problem of catering has become a big worry for me. Because of this, I am often angry with my mother. She had no choice but to cry quietly. How should I bear this? One night's comparison made me lose confidence in life. I rushed into the room and cried after school. Before long, my mother came in and patted me on the shoulder. "Green, mother sorry for you. Our mother and I live alone. You can't give up! Mom has confidence in you! " This sentence illuminates the darkness in my heart. Shouldn't I cheer myself up more? I still have my mother, and I still have hope. What's so terrible about being poor? The terrible thing is that I thought I had only poverty, and I wiped my tears. I believe in myself. Suddenly, deja vu's happiness came back. You should cheer up, and your life will be very happy in the future!

I'm still alone in the fragrant garden path

I am walking alone on the incense road of the exam. Cheer yourself up, cheer yourself up. I believe that one day I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight and cross the deep sea! Cheer for yourself!

Whether it is the past "helpless flowers falling" or the present "wandering alone in the small garden", we must cheer ourselves up and learn not to be discouraged in life. Only in this way will the other side of happiness get closer and closer to you!

These articles are arranged by teachers in our school. I hope it helps you. I also took the mid-term exam this year.