An article is always connected by layers of meaning and paragraphs of content. There is often a transition from one meaning to another, and from one content to another. Just like crossing a river, from one shore to the other, there are boats and bridges in the middle.
So, under what circumstances should the article transition?
1, the transition when the content of the article changes. The change of content refers to the change of time, place and document. (1) When the narrative time changes, transition is needed. (2) When the narrative position changes, transition is needed.
2. Transition when narrative mode changes. There are various narrative methods of composition, such as flashback, insertion and supplementary narrative, to avoid flat narrative; In order to describe Qi completely and comprehensively, I adopted the way of "total one point-total". Where flashbacks, insertions and supplementary narratives are used, transitions are needed. For example, in the article "From the Heart", the first volume of Ninth Grade Chinese published by People's Education Publishing House, Li Jingjing recalled his childhood experience at his grandfather's house when he read a letter from Fan Ka. At the end of Memories, the author used the phrase "Jingjing grew up later" to make the context and content of the literary competition closely linked.
There will also be a transition where the master table is transferred to the sub-table or the sub-table is transferred to the master table.
The content of the article is gradually developed. What has been said before should be explained later, and what has to be said later should be mentioned before. This connection between the content before and after is called "care". Common ones are front and back support, first support and topic support.
1, care before and after. It refers to the mutual call and care between contexts in writing. With the care before and after, the connection between the content before and after will become close, the writing will be natural, the article will be organized and the context will be smooth.
2. First and last care. The beginning and end of channeling echo each other. Or explain the reason at the beginning and know the result at the end; Or ask questions at the beginning, answer Ifll or flP at the end, start with sadness, and deepen the theme at the end.
Title care. This means that the curtain or the whole article or part of it is in harmony with the title. The title is usually called the eye of the article and the window of the work. Topics and texts are like the sun and the moon.
: Exodus It was an autumn with fallen leaves everywhere. At the school sports meeting, I took part in the 400-meter race, which was my advantage. First, there is no doubt that it must be mine. At the beginning of the game, I led all the way, but I sprained my foot at the last corner. The sharp pain on my foot blinded me at once, and I couldn't win, so my tears flowed down at once. "Liu wei, stand up! The victory must be yours! " There was a cordial call from the head teacher in the stands. I stood up and rushed to the front regardless of my foot pain.
Ah! Teacher, I still remember you shouting "stand up!" "When expressing, it is encouragement and hope." Stand up! "It is the trust in one's own ability and the motivation to strive to achieve the goal.
Analysis:
Duan Shou: It was an autumn with fallen leaves all over the ground. This is a transition with scenes, which sets a beautiful situation for the story to happen. )
Intermediate narration.
Make a summary transition with an independent paragraph. Point out the center and stick to the theme.
When enumerating typical cases in ancient and modern China and foreign countries, we can sum up the events in life or in news reports, and summarize the materials provided by the composition topic itself, and use the words "This made me think of ..." "It gave me such enlightenment ..." "It told us this truth ..." "Aren't these examples telling us ...?" And so on, leading to the central argument, so as to cut to the chase, strategically located, clear-cut, give full play to its role of giving inferences by analogy and shaking the full text.
Exodus: The future is at your feet. As long as you go straight ahead, you will be brilliant step by step. Ohm developed a pair of skillful hands in his father's lock-making workshop since childhood, and later taught in a middle school. He has been busy teaching. After work, he did a lot of experiments himself and finally deduced ohm's law named after him. However, after the publication of this research achievement of Ohm's ten years of hard work, it did not attract the attention of the scientific community, but was suspected or even attacked by some people. Only a few German scientists recognized Ohm's law. One of them, Schveger, gave Ohm great support, published a paper for Ohm, and wrote to Ohm: "Please believe that the light of truth behind dark clouds and dust will eventually be transmitted and dispersed with a smile." 184 1 year, the royal society awarded ohm Kepler medal, which was the highest honor in the scientific community at that time, and ohm's work was widely recognized.
Self-confidence is the catalyst of success and the golden key to open the door to life and the unknown world. Ohm's story tells us that as long as one has confidence, one can stick to what is necessary for success.
Analysis:
The first paragraph: "The future is at your feet. As long as we keep moving forward, we will be brilliant step by step. " Lead an argument.
Chinese: Take Ohm's research on Ohm's law as an example.
Transition part: analyze arguments and demonstrate arguments.
In writing, transition often plays an important role in overcoming defects such as unclear structure, chaotic organization, unclear center and lengthy narration.