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20 18- 12-09 (composition idea)
Topic 1: Read the following materials and write as required.

Scholars can't help Hongyi, they still have a long way to go.

-"The Analects of Confucius Taber"

No matter what my status is, I will never give up my concern for my country.

-Lu You's Disease Book

Suddenly I don't want to open my eyes. Everything feels casual, which is what it is for me.

-Quotations from Buddhist Youth

Requirements: around the content and significance of the material, choose a good angle, determine the concept, clarify the style, and draw up a title yourself; Don't copy, don't copy. Not less than 800 words.

Topic 2: Read the following materials and write as required.

Suddenly it rained heavily and three people were trapped on a desert island.

A said, "There is no place to shelter from the rain on a desert island. Why go for nothing? " Then take it in stride and stay in place quietly.

B said, "A desert island is so big, maybe it doesn't rain elsewhere. In my opinion, it is better to look around. " So I took pains to find a place where it didn't rain.

C said, "It's no use sitting still and running around. Why not walk in the rain and enjoy the fun of nature? " I walked slowly in the rain.

In life, we often encounter some similar situations. What did the words and deeds of these three people cause you to think? Please write an article on this basis and talk about your own views.

Requirements: Synthesize the content and significance of the materials, choose a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up a good topic by yourself; Do not copy or copy; Not less than 800 words.

Topic 3: Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)

Talk, space, Weibo, every minute counts, all kinds of selfies, photos and small videos flood the Internet, enjoying likes, comments and interactions ... Many people use visual impact to pray for others to stop and look back.

The word "present" became popular overnight. For the above social phenomena, some people say that the sense of existence is an instinctive need of human beings, and everyone needs to be valued and recognized, which has attracted widespread attention from society and is beyond reproach;

Some people say that "in order to gain recognition, I am willing to abandon right and wrong and exchange IQ for a sense of security"; It is also said that the real sense of existence is not brushed out, but comes from a strong and confident heart. If your heart is full of nature, you will not seek too much attention from others.

What do you think of this?

Please write according to the content and meaning of the material. You are required to choose your own angle, define your own style, and draw up your own title, no copying, no copying, no less than 800 words.

Topic 4: Read the following materials and write as required.

One day, Wang Yan, the chief inspector of the Ming Dynasty, told the new censors such a thing: Yesterday, I went to town in a sedan chair after the rain, and the sedan chair bearer wore a pair of new shoes. At first, he carefully chose the clean ground to settle down, and then he accidentally stepped on the mud, so he stopped taking care of his new shoes. Yi Shiyu said after listening: "I dare not forget it in my life."

Requirements: Choose your own angle, write your own topic, and write an argumentative essay of not less than 700 words.

Composition intention prompt:

1. In this kind of composition, we should first understand the meaning of each sentence, then sort out the relationship between sentences and finally determine the meaning. Among these three sentences, "a gentleman should strive for self-improvement and shoulder a long way to go" says that "a gentleman should be frank and determined to win." Because of its great responsibility, the road is long and its Xiu Yuan is awkward. " This sentence requires a gentleman to be ambitious and strong-willed, focusing on "Hongyi", and "a long way to go" is the truth of "Hongyi". "Too humble to forget about the country" expresses Lu You's strong sense of patriotic responsibility: although his position is humble, he dare not forget about the country.

This material can be regarded as a concrete exposition of the previous material: caring for the country and worrying about it, even if the status is lower, is an important responsibility.

The last material is the quotation of today's "Buddhist youth", which expresses the attitude of not wanting to face life, being casual and not making progress. This is in sharp contrast with the first two materials. In contrast, I am thinking about how young people should face life.

Therefore, combining these three materials, the intention of the composition should include these elements: courage to shoulder heavy responsibilities, tenacious will, concern for the country, continuous progress, and unwillingness to keep pace with the times. Of course, if you write that you encounter many difficulties in your struggle and need to be optimistic and open-minded, it is also reasonable.

This material describes the different thoughts and actions of three people living on a desert island in the face of sudden heavy rain. Desert island and heavy rain symbolize the difficulties and setbacks encountered in life journey. This material is about the relationship between mentality and life. Different ideas and mentality determine the direction and value of different lives. Pay special attention when writing, and suggest that people hold a positive attitude towards Party A, Party B and Party C. In addition, pay attention to the "desert island" and "heavy rain" in the materials, and discuss "mentality and life" on the premise that life is in adversity.

Idea 1: Be a person like A. A is an idealist and shows a carefree and carefree attitude in the face of difficulties.

Idea 2: Be a person like B. B is a realist, accustomed to facing setbacks directly, actively seeking countermeasures and solving problems.

Idea 3: Be a person like C. C is a hedonist, good at discovering and excavating the beauty in real life, good at taking pleasure in suffering and facing life optimistically.

Idea 4: You can also combine the words and deeds of three people, or choose the words and deeds of two people in the middle period to discuss what kind of mentality you should face difficulties, setbacks and adversity in life.

Test center: Can write expository, practical and literary articles. The ability level is to express and apply e.

Appreciation of examples. ? Relaxation of life

Zhang is the ambition of "waving a bow like a moon, looking at the northwest and shooting at Sirius", the pride of "800 miles under his command and 50 strings beyond the Great Wall", or the vision of "30 fame, 8 thousand miles of clouds and moons". It is an ambition to embrace the whole world, such as rivers and waves.

Relaxation is the quietness and elegance of "I have known Yan for a long time, and the fragrance path in the small garden wanders alone", and the quietness of "people are idle and sweet-scented osmanthus falls" is the philosophical attitude of "the stars are leaning down from the clearing". Clean up the dust of the soul, travel lightly, calmly and calmly, like a crow in the twilight, and occasionally miss the past and old friends in the moonlight path.

People should have "Zhang", roll up their lofty aspirations, tighten their hopes and beliefs, strive for a glorious end, and give life a happy struggle without regrets. People should relax and relax after "relaxation" and "relaxation". They don't care about gains and losses, but look at the leisure of flowers in Yun Qi, so as to clean up the dust all the way and nourish their tired hearts.

The representative figure of "Zhang" is Xin Qiji who is bent on resisting gold. What kind of tension and courage does this man, known as "Qingnan", have! I think all the time that "dream back to the corner and fight for the camp", as if the legendary beast was running and roaring on the scarred land of China, and its courage and blood seemed endless, leaving many surprises for future generations. However, he also has his moments of "relaxation". How many pedestrians cry in the heart of Qingjiang River at Yugutai is disappointment and sadness, which may be a tired rest for him. Listening to the sad songs on the banks of the river in the dusk, not anger. Sadness is thick and heavy, and a thin layer floats like a river fog. At this moment, he is powerless and helpless. He only looked at the mountains and rivers with the eyes of a poet rather than a strategist, but he seemed to see the whole land of the Central Plains more clearly. When he tightened the bowstring and heartstring again, did he feel the strength of his savings surging? There is a degree of relaxation, such as Xin Qiji, and the real iron man is like this.

The representative of "Chi" is Xie An. This Wei-Jin celebrity lived in seclusion in Nanshan, talking about poetry all day long, not seeking temples. He is as handsome as a cloud, and his leisure is not easy. Yet we called and urged a thousand times before she started toward us's strategist, however, is not the leisurely celebrity. The battle of Feishui has made two idioms, "Frightened by wind" and "All plants are soldiers", which have been passed down to this day, and also made Xie An's strategy praised by the world, strategizing and winning thousands of miles, and Xie An's "Zhang" is a pioneer after "relaxation", which is admirable.

Life should have the glory of "Zhang" without regrets and the calmness of "Chi".

I just want to make my life easier.

This is a material composition that analyzes hot events in life. In real life, many people race against time to brush their sense of existence through electronic media. After listing various phenomena of hot events, the material gives three attitudes of affirmation, negation and disdain, and then asks students to talk about this phenomenon. Because it is a hot phenomenon in real life since the media era, students are not only familiar with it, but also have vivid examples in their classmates, friends or relatives around them, so it is not difficult to write and have something to say. But at the same time, due to being too familiar with it, there may be a phenomenon that people frantically use vivid language and a lot of space to "brush the sense of existence", which leads to too simple thinking about this phenomenon, and even problems such as improper details or unclear style.

Reference concept

1. The heart is full and has its own aura.

2. The sense of existence is not brushed out, it comes from a strong and confident heart.

3. What you brush is not the sense of existence, but the inner self-distrust.

4. Full of confidence, you "exist" without brushing.

5. Do not brush the sense of existence.

6. Don't lose your IQ because you are.

7. Don't worry about the existence of "virtual".

Brush a little humbleness under your thumb

Chatting, Weibo, WeChat, Tik Tok ... all kinds of sharing screens, "Thumb Publishing" is getting worse and worse, just asking for your attention and praise. Can such a crazy brush really brush out a sense of existence? I think: the brush under the thumb is not a sense of existence, but a little humble.

"Brush presence" is because of "being" and "not feeling", so "feeling" can be found through "brush". People find that they can get "likes" and "attention" through online sharing, thus finding a sense of existence, so the more they love sharing, the more they love "brushing". In my opinion, it is better to find a more authentic self in the real world than to brush the "sense of existence" with your thumb in the virtual world. Indulge in the virtual world, in exchange for the gradual neglect of people around you, so it is not a "sense of existence" but a "neglect".

"Brush" is just a little humbleness under the thumb. The existence of the brush reflects the emptiness and loneliness of the spiritual world. "Existence" includes two aspects: material existence and spiritual existence. Material existence means that people can appear as entities and carry out corresponding practical activities; Spiritual existence shows that people's spiritual world is rich and full, and they have a strong and confident heart. The real "sense of existence" refers to a degree of demand for the spirit, and the brush "sense of existence" is due to the lack of "sense of existence". What is brushed under the thumb is small and humble.

In the Internet age, people brush their sense of existence in various ways. What's more, because they are eager to get the attention of others, they ignore the network civilization and make many comments without thinking. For example, some people make verbal attacks on others online in order to brush their sense of existence. Even if there are many criticisms and suggestions in the comments, they will dismiss them because their purpose is to make others pay attention to themselves. What is the significance of this sense of existence? In order to gain recognition, abandon right and wrong, and exchange IQ for a sense of existence that makes people feel safe, will it really be happy?

Therefore, looking for a sense of existence through various "brushes" on the Internet can only show that people are afraid of losing their sense of existence. The content of the brush is like a meal, and the person you like is like eating. People will soon forget what they have eaten, and it is easy to forget what they have "paid attention to" and "liked". Pursuing existence may be people's psychological needs, but "brushing" is only a means, which can only make people's hearts find comfort temporarily. The real sense of existence can only be given by ourselves, and we need to find that truly attractive self from the depths of our hearts. Only the fruits of struggle, there is no "brush" glory.

"Brush" is just a little humbleness under the thumb. The real sense of existence comes from a strong and confident heart. If the heart is rich and natural, there is no need to seek too much attention from others.

Put down your mobile phone and walk out of the illusory world. Don't lose your real life in order to gain a sense of existence.

Comments: The topic directly shows the point of view. The contrast between "Thumb" and "Little Humble" is strong, novel and strong in generalization. The analysis and understanding of the "sense of existence" in writing is profound, with its own unique ideas, concise language, strong summary at the end and strong cohesion.

4. Analysis and detailed explanation (1) This question examines writing ability and is a material composition. There are not many words in this material, but it is a story in a story. On the whole, it is said that Wang Tingxiang, president of Douchayuan, told the new empire that the new empire got the message; To some extent, this is related to the undertaker. These two things are not juxtaposed, but the relationship between the whole and the part. The whole has a restrictive effect on the part, and the part cannot be separated from the whole. The question of the flag bearer in the materials was used by Wang Tingxiang to warn the new censors, and it was given a new meaning in a specific context, so we must grasp its new meaning. This is the key to the exam. As the chief executive of Douchayuan, Wang Tingxiang told the new empire about bearers, not just anecdotes, but with a purpose; The new empire also got the message, so he said, "I will never forget it." So, what is Wang Tingxiang's intention? What is the advice that I will never forget? In this context, it is helpful to accurately grasp the carrier. The bearers wore new shoes and were not polluted at first, so they "carefully picked clean places to settle down"; Later, "I accidentally stepped into the mud", and the new shoes were polluted, so I stopped taking care of them. This kind of "accidentally stepping into the mud" is the key to the change of bearers. Wang Tingxiang used a sedan chair to warn the new imperial advisers that they should take every step to avoid accidentally stepping into muddy water and being polluted. From this, they can make up their minds: "Be careful not to take a slow step", "Be careful not to take the wrong first step", "Be careful not to stumble in the muddy water", "Start from the beginning to the end", "Always lead an honest and clean life" and "One careless step will have a lifelong impact". It is really important to prevent "accidentally stepping on the mud". However, once things happen, we must face them bravely and make positive remedies. If we "don't care about new shoes" from now on, the result can only be that the pollution is getting heavier and heavier. If you accidentally slip and get polluted when you are an official, you must find ways to remedy it and turn over a new leaf instead of breaking the jar. From this, we can make up our minds: "Don't give up on yourself", "Break the jar and break the fall", "It's not too late to mend after a fall" and "It's not too late to hide another great virtue after a fall" ... In the materials, "muddy water" is relative to "pure land", and "muddy water" should refer to muddy water. It is in line with the meaning of the text to interpret the story of the bearer from the perspective of "being honest for the officials and beware of being polluted by muddy water". Besides, are there any other interpretations? The duty of a sedan chair bearer is a sedan chair. Don't be afraid of the muddy water under your feet. The duty of the censor is to supervise the impeachment, so we should face the filth bravely and not be timid. Therefore, he can make up his mind to "do his duty and go forward bravely", "go forward bravely, not afraid of wet shoes" and "do great things carefully" ...