The problem of applying ready-made stories has always existed in college entrance examinations everywhere. For example, Hubei Volume 20 1 1 has several sets of compositions. Many candidates wrote that their mothers or grandmothers bought several college entrance examination questions or review materials for their children with a pair of ancestral bracelets (or life savings) before the college entrance examination, but students realized that their illiterate mothers or grandmothers had been cheated when they saw the primary school Chinese or math textbooks. After hating and moving, they made up their minds and worked hard. In fact, these views are all relayed from a widely circulated article. A similar situation occurred in Zhejiang Volume 20 1 1:
Read the following text and write as required.
The success of idols is difficult to replicate, because time is changing, everything is changing, and the path of success is also changing.
The true meaning of life is not to copy the success of others, but to know yourself and do what you should do at the right time!
According to the meaning of the above materials, write an article with no less than 800 words on the topic of My Time.
Exam case
My Time (Excerpt)
I think I am an easily infected person. When Liu Xiang's flying back was infinitely magnified in my pupil, I was moved by the dignity of the yellow race standing proudly on the champion stage; I was moved when Zhang Yimou turned the Olympic Games into a feast for the rise of the Chinese nation and let the world fall for it. When Yuan Longping made a silent dedication in the paddy field, his sweat moistened the whole world, and I was very moved.
It turns out that success is so beautiful.
But I am still a firm person. When Tao Yuanming looked back leisurely, he had Nanshan in his eyes; Set Meng Haoran in the deer gate humble abode. Singing the fallen fairy all the way, singing and walking, walking drunk, one step is one step of talent. ...
I thought: this is the person I want to be.
Fortunately, I was born in Jiangnan, and the blue and hazy world gave me perceptual potential. Spreading paper, grinding ink, waving, a world of ink and wash, the crisp sound of horseshoes splashing on the bluestone board, who agrees to burn out slowly? At this time, I may be on the bridge, at the end of the tent, looking for my indifference and comfort in poetry and painting, accompanied by tea fragrance.
This is my time.
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This is my own time.
This is a typical "rhetorical composition", except for the words with horizontal lines, the rest are ready-made materials (including some paragraphs describing Jiangnan cultural prose); These materials are at arm's length from the topic itself, or even irrelevant. I would like to remind all candidates that if some compositions really make the topic of the composition wonderful, they can be summed up in writing as an example of writing argumentative papers; However, if you can't apply the ready-made articles to the main body of the full text and only add a little deduction at the beginning and end, you can't copy them intact.
Second, the content is naive and narrow.
In the review of Zhejiang and Guangdong volumes of 20 1 1, it is found that some narratives are written like students of grade five or six in primary schools, which lacks necessary significance. There are also some compositions in the examination room that tend to be younger in terms of language, such as Grandpa Sun, Grandpa Yue, Grandpa Sima Qian, Uncle Lei Feng and Aunt Zhang Haidi. A high school graduate and an adult should have profound rational thinking and independent opinions on society and life. If 18 and 19 are still interested in the thoughts of a little over ten years old, they always feel very modest.
Please look at the Guangdong exam questions:
In the world, there are "origins" everywhere. The origin can be the starting point of a road, the source of a long river, the center of coordinates and the root of things. ...
Please write an article of not less than 800 words (including punctuation marks) with the topic of "Back to the Original Point" in combination with your own life experience and understanding.
Exam case
Back to the original point (excerpt)
Xiao Wei became a disabled person, unable to go to school, decadent at home all day, and often lost his temper for no reason. You can't eat, dress, play ball or write without hands. What's the fun of living? Xiao Wei has become a baby who needs help to take care of everything, and life seems to be back to square one.
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The next day, Xiao Wei began to practice scooping rice with his feet. He trudged to the dining table and clumsily picked up the spoon with his toes. At this time, he remembered that his mother took pains to teach him to hold spoons and chopsticks in his hands when he was a child, and he couldn't help but burst into tears. With hands and feet, the essence is the same, and both need to practice from the beginning. Back to the original point, what's terrible?
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At present, Xiao Wei has recovered his lively personality. The difference is that he has become more mature. "The earth is round. Columbus turned around and returned to the original point, but he gained a lot. " He said.
This is a short story, which tells the story of Xiao Wei's attitude gradually changing and making new achievements after being forced to "return to the original point" because of electric shock. But the story is naive, and it is not enough to describe it in a detailed and vivid way. Scoring: 45 points.
Third, the materials are the same, nothing new.
In the marking of Jiangsu paper, it is found that the materials accumulated by candidates are similar, and the degree of collision is quite serious: when it comes to "rejecting mediocrity", many people write about the old lady selling egg cakes; There are also many students who write about Li Na, Fang Zhongyong, Shi Tiesheng and Sima Qian.
Exam case
A marking teacher summed up the "four characters most popular with Jiangsu candidates":
1. Li Na
Typical Quotations: Li Na's winning the French Open not only shocked the world, but also gave an interview in fluent English after winning the championship, which shocked the whole sports circle in China. Li Na is an athlete who refuses mediocrity.
2. Fang Zhongyong
Typical Quotations: Fang Zhongyong is a clever boy, but when he grows up, he is buried among ordinary people. Just because he didn't refuse mediocrity, he finally became a member of mediocrity.
3. Sima Qian
Typical Quotations: After suffering from castration, Sima Qian was able to bear the burden of humiliation and finally wrote the masterpiece Historical Records handed down from ancient times. He refused mediocrity all his life!
4. Liu Wei
Typical Quotations: Wei Liu, winner of the first season of China's Got Talent Show, is physically and mentally disabled, but has mastered the piano with perseverance. Although disabled, he lives better than healthy people because he has the spirit of rejecting mediocrity.
Breaking a promise is failure. Zola IV. Love is fake, it is fake, so it is difficult to understand.
For example, Sichuan Volume 20 1 1 "There is always an expectation" is more suitable for narrative writing. However, judging from the marking situation, candidates generally don't write narratives. No matter how good the materials are, I don't know how to describe the specific events vividly. In the narrative, more students wrote about their loved ones' stroke and cancer, which exposed obvious "flaws" and made people feel fictional.
There are also candidates who make up arguments at will when writing argumentative papers. The Guangdong volume of 20 1 1 has a similar situation:
Exam case
Back to the original point (excerpt)
A candidate in Guangdong
Go back to the origin and grasp the fundamental people-oriented principle of the country. The King of Thailand is a man who values fundamentals. Unlike other heads of state, he spent most of his time talking with farmers in the fields and planting them himself. After the disaster came, he personally went to the disaster area to participate in the rescue and greeted the victims. It is with such a king that Thailand is so powerful. He grasped people-oriented and made Thailand a big agricultural country. When most leaders in the world are troubled by public criticism, they silently accept the love of the people. Assuming that the Thai king only gives up the interests of the people for his own benefit, perhaps the prestige of Thai rice can only appear in his own country. Go back to the original point and get to the root of the matter.
Based on subjective assumptions, the author imagines a series of "deeds" of a "powerful" Thailand and the king. Because the materials are untrue, the examples given are not convincing.
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In order to enrich the writing materials, we should make "three preparations" at ordinary times:
Mental preparation: First of all, we should learn all the courses in middle school. The basic theory of each course embodies the thoughts of dialectical materialism and historical materialism, which is the most basic point of view for us to understand the world. Secondly, we should care about social life and current affairs and politics, and correctly understand some hot spots and focal issues in contemporary society.
Prepare knowledge: it can be combined with prepare thought. Through extracurricular reading, collect three to five cases every week and list one or more points that each case can use to illustrate.
Life preparation: pay attention to people, things and things around you, actively participate in social practice activities, and communicate with classmates, relatives and friends. Write the contents of the above activities in a diary or writing exercise, especially those who are bright, impactful and inspiring, and write them down in time.