"Color" topic composition design example 1, black and white, simple and pure, can not be defiled; White is elegant, white makes people tremble. Black, black is silent, black is deep, black makes people get rid of other thoughts; Black is calm and makes people confident and firm. Maybe it's in our nature. I like white. I love the serenity and simple elegance it brings me. It is pure and natural, free from secular pollution, and stains are exposed on it. Indeed, I admire its integrity, but sometimes it is too dazzling and not tolerant enough. I don't love black, but I appreciate its tolerance. White can only give people bright vision, while black can cover the whole. Tolerate other people's mistakes. It sets off the nobility of white without complaint, does not envy people's praise of white, and lays the most suitable background for everything. But it's too silent. Black and white are always the most suitable collocation, and the two extreme colors are so harmonious and natural. Black absorbs the extra light from white, and white stimulates the infinite vitality contained in black, bringing out the best in each other. Harmony is impeccable. Everything in the world is like this. Simplicity always has shortcomings, because it can't make up for its own shortcomings. Only by absorbing the essence from everything in the world can we form the most perfect artifact in the world From this, I thought of people. Gold is not enough, and no one is perfect. Just like white, no matter how noble it is, it will become boring if you try your best to reflect the sunshine and show off yourself. Black is unknown, always unknown. The same is true of people. Striving for the top is enterprising, but it is selfish to only care about yourself and not give others room to display their talents. There is nothing wrong with obscurity, but silence without exerting its own value is mediocrity and cowardice. As a man, your figure should be just right. Don't always think you are the most perfect. What's wrong with learning more from others? Just like black and white, it is the most beautiful charm to match each other. The principle of being a man is like the rhyme of black and white. Only by gathering the strengths of hundreds of families can we become the beauty of a family! The author wants to express his in-depth discussion on the truth of being a man by writing "color" When writing, he wrote about the advantages and disadvantages of black and white and the perfect combination of the two colors. After some description, he naturally told a truth: people can only become a beautiful family if they gather the strengths of a hundred families. The association is natural and the theme is enlightening. However, the author has a profound and dialectical understanding of it. Therefore, the full text is profound and meaningful, with a strong philosophical and speculative flavor. Example 2 Enrich life. Some people say that life is red. It gives people a burning heat and makes people feel that life is beautiful. Some people say that life is blue, which makes people calm and rational, and makes people have a broad mind and great spirit like the sea; Some people say that life is green, which gives people the dream of youth and makes people look forward to discovering the beauty of green in a limited life; Some people say that life is gray, it is full of traps and failures, which makes you black and blue and unhappy; Some people say that life is black, with no hope and no future. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers. Everyone has his own answer, so what color is your life? I think this is a question that a person has to answer all his life. You only see darkness, and you will always be in darkness; When you see light, it will be in your life. Hawking, a giant in a wheelchair, described his life with pain. Helen Keller, who was deaf and blind, painted a colorful and bright world in the bitter darkness. Dong Cunrui blew up the sky with loyalty, thick black smoke dispersed and bright red flags fluttered in the blue sky. Yang Liwei uses the ambition and wisdom of China people to draw a brilliant trajectory in space ... Life is not a trap set by God to test how stupid we are, but a stage for our wonderful performances, a compulsory course for us to understand and experience life, and a huge palette. Therefore, we should use our own hands to bring out our own life color! If you are faced with difficulties, please turn the gloom of "mountains and rivers are in doubt and there is no way out" into the lightness of "a bright village" and the despair of "dark clouds crushing the city" into the hope of "a bright one". If you think autumn is too depressing, touch the green of spring to make it glow; If you think winter is too cold, put a pink tick in summer to bring it enthusiasm and joy. If you are not satisfied with the plain background of life, let go of your ideals. Fight bravely, and let the plain disappear under the golden color of success. If you lose your mind under the temptation of golden aura and copper smell, then cast a warning bell with gold and copper. Adjust the color of life and life with your own hands. Draw a wonderful chapter of our life with youthful colored pens. Hundreds of millions of hands will create a harmonious society, and the tree of China will be deeply rooted and will last forever. The author compares life to a "palette", and relates people's feelings in different situations with related colors, showing the theme of "bringing out their own living colors with their own hands", which belongs to writing a variety of colors from multiple angles. The article has clear thinking and rigorous structure. After expressing the feeling that life is "a huge palette", it leads to the main idea of the article, and then "tunes" all the way down to "tune" a "harmonious society", deepening and subliming the theme at the end. It belongs to the "X" structure of release-receiving-release. In the use of language, the article is clear and vivid. Steady and bright. Blue, the color I love, the color of the sky, the color of the sea, the endless sky and the autumn water under Wang Tengting are the same color. Is to never give up watching the stars and the ups and downs of the world. Blue-persistent, eternal, firm, profound, including you and me, as well as all the right and wrong in this world. When the fiery red of the sun and the dark brown of the earth meet in the blue that can't see the edge, and are refined in the flood and undulating tides, life is born. We stand in this world of blue blood. We originally came from the same mother, without national boundaries, regardless of each other. Blue is different from any other color. It belongs to no one, but to everyone. Its great power contains everything. Give everyone a fair start. Life belongs to blue. Some people say that when people die, they will become stars and find a home on the far shore, which will become a bright spot in the vast world. From the end of life, they are waiting for their dear relatives, friends and lovers. I hope they are happy, and I look forward to meeting them eventually. I have no desire or thoughts, and how many innocent memories and dreams are stored in that deep blue. Blue is a fiery color. People usually think that red is a vibrant color, but so is blue. Really young stars will emit dazzling blue light, and when they are old, they will turn red when they are dying. Blue stars generally don't live long because of it. It will burn violently, releasing amazing light and heat, and then turn into a supernova at the end of life, lighting up the endless night sky. Time can't hold the fiery blue, because it can't bear the lofty vitality of ancient times. Blue is a quiet color. No matter how noisy the jumping galaxy is, everything in the world is noisy. When the night is dead, the dark blue night covers everything and everything is quiet. Without the fame and fortune of the day, it is cheating. People who have been running around for a day can take off their false masks in the night, stop their tired bodies, get spiritual relief, completely open themselves, expose themselves under the starry sky, walk into the blue silence, recall in silence and seek comfort from afar. Blue is the color of hope. "I'm from the east, from the rough sea, standing on the last call of the east. I will comfort people and give hope to the world. " Pioneer today. "When the star of Lendiel rises from the sea, hope is summoned in the endless East, and light is pushed out together. When the sky disappears, the silence of the night becomes clear blue, when the waves sail in the wind and rain, the sea breeds new hope and decorates the new day brightly. Blue, my love, I love you, blue. Comments and essays mobilize the existing knowledge reserves and cultural accumulation around the selected "color". Try to express my positive thoughts about life. The author writes a color from many sides, chooses different things with the same color, expresses his feelings and explains the relationship between its characteristics and some kind of life understanding, and then draws the conclusion that "blue, my love, I love you, blue". The article is clear in thinking and rigorous in structure. It starts with Zanlan, then explains it in parallel, and finally ends with Zan, which is a typical total score of minutes. Pitching heaven and earth, roaming the universe, Wang Yang's language is unrestrained and passionate. Perhaps it was the mistake to raise Sanmao, the most beautiful color. She hastily ended her unfinished life with stockings and left her Sahara desert forever, and the rainy season will never come again. Or right, maybe she saw through the boundless darkness of future life and chose death. Each of us is waiting for our fragile dreams to be like bubbles, and happiness has just begun. Sadness has long been lurking. Life is like this. Since pain exists, why should we be afraid? Why not bravely support life, smear and bring out our own colors! This is a decadent studio, so it is called a studio because there are several bald pens and boxes of colored paste in it. Van Gogh, the greatest painter in the Netherlands and one of the pioneers of modern painting art, bowed down in such a room. His hair is messy and his life is quite tight, but this does not affect his enthusiasm for painting at all. After being strongly stimulated by the spirit, he still worked tirelessly. Starry night is his night. He painted a strange and psychedelic starry sky with flaming brushstrokes, a sky caught in a blue-yellow whirlpool. This kind of dizziness is an irrational component of his restless mood, but what we can see is more of his resistance to life. So a sunflower is rooted in the minds of thinkers and engraved in people's hearts. This is a silent struggle in the sense of life, tenacious and lasting. The desert is lonely and smoky. Under the snow, you can't see the enchanting nature wrapped in silver. Instead, you can see a Su Wu, guarding the border of Leng Yue and living a naked and hungry life. Xiongnu advised him to surrender many times, but he never wavered in his belief that he would never look back. For that Han festival, it was shortened by one thousand years. He endured physical and mental torture, and he looked at the bright moon in Guanzhong day and night, looking forward to it. Let life glow with infinite light. Sanmao explained her disappointment with life and the world in dark black. Van Gogh explained his persistence in art and his love for life in gold. Su Wu explained his attachment to the motherland and unyielding attitude towards life in The Holy White. The memory of history is full of the life ideas and destiny choices of the sages. We are chasing and whistling. What kind of legacy will a painful life leave us? Escape or move on? Are you escaping from the cold or fighting to the death? Since we can't choose life, why not change it and let it show its own colors, such as rainbows after rain and green shoots in spring, which bring the most beautiful colors to life! Comments from the perspective of life, when encountering setbacks, qualities such as "will" and "perseverance" are the most beautiful colors we bring out; In social relations, when we get along with others, we treat others with a smile, tolerance and love. Here, "smile", "tolerance" and "love" are not the most beautiful colors! Based on the basic idea of "bringing out the most beautiful colors", this paper connects highly summarized people and things in series. The thinking is quite clear, the structure is very rigorous, and the content is naturally rich. In addition, the language of this paper is literary, such as "never leave her Sahara desert again, and the rainy season will never come again" and "for that Han Festival, it was shortened by one thousand years here". Examples. People are born like a blank sheet of paper, full of vitality and proud of the world. Over time, there will be no trace on the white paper. Is it the profusion of spring and the trees in summer, or the golden world in autumn and the white and transparent winter? Life is like a painting, and the color of the painting depends entirely on you. For example, white is indifferent, gray is gloomy, red is bright and bright ... as white as Dongpo. " Holding a lamp in the wind, attracting people to sigh heroes, taking the hard road and stepping through the snow. "Dongpo's life is extremely bumpy, his career has subsided, and his love has experienced twists and turns. How can you become a literary world if you give up literature? Finally, he turned fame and fortune into bamboo sticks and straw sandals. On a moonless night, he is indifferent to "what kind of life is everywhere, just like Hong Fei stepping on snow mud". He is not moved by "petty profits, only a hollow reputation", but just wants to "send the rest of his life to the sea." Dongpo walked out of the narrow door of politics and painted his life with a layer of whiteness, purity and nobility ... The introverted temperament outlined the gray space of a person's life, such as Chen Ziang, Lu Fangweng who had no choice but to serve his country, Du Gongbu who was relegated again and again, and Li Taibai who drowned his sorrows by drinking. They use that thick gray to make history sigh and culture become heavy in the eyes of future generations. They became violets swaying in the wind in the gray space! Red as Lu Youqing, whenever I see the words he wrote with physical and psychological pain, and whenever I see the sunflower with a smile on his face, I will feel a tearless sadness. At the last moment of his life, he chose a way of falling leaves-holding up the brilliance of life like a meteor and drawing the most beautiful arc of light at the last moment! His life is also brilliant because of this! The realm of life lies in bringing your potential into full play! The drawing board of life, let's color it ourselves! When you are alive, there will always be a place for you to shine! Maybe we are not outstanding, but ordinary is not without reason to be proud. After the noise, we can always find our own goals and interpret our own wonderful! It is the grass that decorates the earth, and the towering trees that become the pillars! Don't ask what is low and what is high, fly to your extreme in the blue sky of life, this is the best! Mona Lisa sends you an eternal smile, Whitman's poems are calling, and Strauss's waltz is accompanying your youth! Let's pick up the brush, listen to our own voices and paint our lives! The comments on this article are unforgettable. The genius of the author lies in having materials, understanding materials and knowing materials. " White-Dongpo, Gray-Chen Ziang, Lu Fangweng, Du Gongbu, Li Taibai, and Red-Lu Youqing ",the indifference, depression and brilliance of the nature of color and human nature are by no means" wonderful hands "but benefits. The branches of red apricot are full of spring. "Color constitutes rocks, plants, flowers, birds, insects and fish, constitutes everything in the world, and also constitutes everything in the world. The world and all people are full of vitality because of color. However, in this colorful world, you are just an insignificant little bit, perhaps a little bit of green among the evergreen trees, perhaps a grain of soil in the yellow sand of Wan Li. A star has fallen, and you are full of vitality. A flower has withered, so it can't be barren all spring, let alone the slightest bright or dim color. The sea is boundless, the sky is the shore, the mountain is the top, and I am the peak! Even a green leaf, even a stone, should show my personality and color! When Qu Yuan wandered by the Miluo River, he turned his life into a legend that will last forever. When the commercial sound of "the wind is rustling and the water is cool" echoes in the ear, what remains in front of us is an indelible back; When Yu Ji turned deep affection into bright red in Blue Sword Shadow; When a strong man hides his face and is crying, what we see is not a yellowed page, but a vivid and tragic scene and a great life. Perhaps Qu Yuan can choose to retire, Jing Ke can choose to escape, and Xiang can choose to cross the river. But they didn't. They chose to dye their lives with blood and make their personality shine! Looking at Hong Fei, the eyebrows are frozen in the sky, which is the solemnity of sending life to the altar, the solidified flame, the quiet chord and the silent philosophy of the strong! This is the color of my own personality, a mellow but not greasy voice, a bright but not dazzling light, and a thick and unobtrusive height. When the color of self becomes indistinguishable in the chaos of the outside world, when the light of self is distorted in the thick darkness, do you go with the flow or stick to yourself? Gold always shines. History will give you a fair evaluation. Every dark cloud is set with Phnom Penh, and every color will have a chance to shine. Lao Dan shut the mouth of Hangu, rode a green cow, gently picked up his own light, and drifted away. He doesn't know, a "Tao Te Ching" has become the essence of Taoist culture, firmly engraved in the meridians of China culture for five thousand years, and it is immortal. Cai Chen is of no help. He didn't know that an Analects of Confucius became the foundation of Confucian culture, deeply rooted in the blood of Chinese civilization for 5,000 years and passed down from generation to generation. When the fog of history is dispelled and the thick night is parted, your color full of personality will become a bright spot in the vast milky way and a strong stroke in the long river of history. Render your personality. Be a flower, be the most brilliant one; Be a leaf, be the greenest one. Pour ink on the picture of life and make the world wonderful because of you! The greatest advantage of commenting on this article lies in the author's extensive selection of materials, and through his own thinking and cutting, using prose-like language to make it an organic part of the article, which contains a lot of capacity in a short space. The title closely follows the requirements of the topic and briefly reveals the main idea of the article. The first paragraph begins with the words of Song Qi's "Spring on the Jade Tower", which depicts a colorful picture of the world full of vitality, and then runs through the whole article with "coloring personality" and then summarizes the incisive connotation ("every color will have a chance to shine"), and finally naturally returns to the topic for conclusion. It is close to the meaning of the topic, with clear purpose, sufficient arguments and complete structure. Life needs color. When the spring willow is called back to life in the wind and rain, it is covered with green branches, green and dripping, and it is full of vitality and worries about the wings of the oriole; When summer lotus breaks through the shackles of silt and jumps out of the water, it is graceful, beautiful and fragrant, bringing infinite reverie; When the morning sun broke the dark silence with a smile, the sun rose, and the bright sunshine brought gorgeous colors to everything ... colors, yes, people need a color in their lives. Spring willow chose the color of rebirth, summer lotus chose the color of jumping out of the water, and the sunshine chose the bright color. Once upon a time, I also envied Tao Qian, who was "returning from land reclamation" and "returning home". I once envied Su Shi that "straw sandals are lighter than horses, who is afraid?" A misty rain lasts a lifetime ","300 lychees a day, and I will grow up to be a Lingnan person ". Laughter is his color to life; I used to envy Haizi, "facing the sea, spring blossoms", enthusiasm is his color ... everyone has his own color, but which one do I belong to? I began to be silent. Reality once brought me gorgeous colors, and now I only have darkness. I have been lost countless times, and I have become afraid of reality. Now I'm just a little confused. At the moment, the examination room is quiet, like a grass in the valley, and I can hear its louder and louder. Listening to the scattered rain outside the window, I can't find my way. I try my best to find the fragments that give me direction in my mind. I met Zu Ti, who told me about his great achievements in serving the country in the Northern Expedition, but it was indispensable to "smell the chicken and dance"; I met Cao Xueqin, who told me the story in the dream of a red chamber, but it was indispensable to "read for ten years and add and delete five times"; I met Gu Cheng, and he told me that "the night gave me black eyes, but I used them to find light" ... In an instant, I seemed to find my way. I picked up a pen and began to write. I want to find my own color. King Gavin was arrested and acted in Zhouyi. Zhong You wrote Spring and Autumn Annals; Qu Yuan's exile is a tribute to Li Sao. Zuo Qiu is blind and has "Mandarin"; The ruler of the revised version of Sun Tzu's Art of War; They all found their own colors when they were most frustrated. Outside the window, the sky began to clear up, and the bright sunshine lit a color in my heart, full of vitality. The road is long, Xiu Yuan is Xi, and I will go all out. Life needs a color, which is the color of struggle. Comments on the topic of life color triggered by the natural color of the scenery in front of us are triggered by the envy of literati. Finally, I asked my own answer in my imagination. Example 8 Colored life is as thin as cicada wings and as crisp as reeds. It is the responsibility of all mankind to let life exist, and it is rich and colorful. —— Inscription The women workers in the spinning workshop use a needle to measure their lives, so their lives are monotonous; Farmers who work hard in the fields but still can't make ends meet measure their lives by the number of fields cultivated, so their survival color is dim and painful; A literary and art worker measures his life by how many times he has not read, so his vivid color is full of longing; ..... Everyone's life is painted with their own color, and no one can replace or change it. Just as each of us is an ordinary grass, we all have our own reasons to be proud. Yes, we are very happy. Compared with them: when the raging tsunami hit that land, what color were the lives of those people who were frightened and at a loss? When those hungry people can't stand and crawl on dry land because they haven't eaten for a long time, when we see those small hands like eagle claws, what color can we use to describe their lives? When the eyes of knowledge are presented to us through those pure and expectant eyes, do we understand the color of their lives? When the local underground mine collapsed, we saw our relatives buried alive in the ground, and when our mother or wife and children cried, we would certainly appreciate the color of their lives. Therefore, from a painful experience, we understand that coloring life is not only for ourselves, but also for those who are unable to do so. Teresa gave up the superior living conditions, walked out of the high wall, walked into the slums, and brought love to the darkest corner of the world. I will give freely and love freely until I am hurt ... "Compared with her, we don't have to be so sad, we just need to do our duty well. Dostoevsky said: We are afraid of death because we cherish life. Yes, life is as thin as a cicada and as fragile as a reed. Let life exist and make life colorful, which is our common responsibility! I like Tagore's poem: Life is as bright as summer flowers/Death is as beautiful as autumn leaves. Therefore, I use the colors of summer flowers and autumn leaves to describe my life-it is very important to understand that action is a coloring pen. The commentary applies the words of a poor college student: each of us has a burden, that is, to make life colorful, not only for ourselves, but also for all mankind. From here, we see little people. The eagle spread its wings and flew in its own blue sky. Let go of your personality and find your own color. The color of a meteor comes from the moment it cuts through the starry sky, keeping the life eternal. The color of epiphyllum comes from the moment of blooming, retaining the color of life; The color of moths comes from the moment they put out the fire, which is to keep the pursuit of life. Looking for your own color, the eternity of life, the color of life and the pursuit of life are all wonderful in your own color. The sea is surging, showing its own color. The mountains are profound and broad-minded, and they show their own colors. Personality color, awe-inspiring color, a color that does not die out personality, a vibrant color with vitality. In spring, people live in groups, retain their individuality and show their own colors; Tides rise and fall, showing personality and self-color. The poet Li Bai said, "What are bells and drums, delicacies and treasures? May I get drunk forever "; Qu Yuan, a poet who "everyone is drunk and I wake up alone", is in awe by the Miluo River with patriotic colors. There are 1000 Hamlets among 1000 people, and the color of a never-ending personality exudes a feeling from the heart, a feeling from the heart, a feeling from the soul, and a color that puts itself above the body and mind. It is because of the color of self that they are so tall. Without the vastness of the sea, we can be water drops, dedicate a little life and find our own color, so life is beautiful. Helen Keller uses "If I still have three days of light" to find her own color. A folded person, because of his ideal in his heart, a tenacity for life, a passion for survival, is looking for the color of self, a folded life, which makes them more and more add the color of survival, a color of self-pursuit. There is no proud tongue, but please don't be depressed, because seeds will always break out of the ground and gold will always shine. Find your own color, why not work harder? The color of life comes from the pursuit of self-color, from the inner pursuit, from a persistent. Find your own color, improve your personality, and interpret a beautiful life dream. Comment on this essay and use rhetorical devices such as parallelism and contrast appropriately to make it more flexible. The author's "finding his own color", from mountain springs and eagles to many life colors full of shocking beauty, such as meteors, epiphyllum and moths, is getting deeper and deeper, revealing the truth that "everything has its own unique color and deduces its own beautiful dreams", and taking Li Bai and Helen Keller as examples, it is more vividly pointed out that everything is dominant.