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1:? Although the bow is heavy, it can shoot far and accurately; After carving and hunting, the bow became gorgeous, but it lost its practical value. The real beauty lies in its practical value, and the simple life that is not carved still shines brilliantly.

2? Bows made of ebony are large in size, poor in appearance and not beautiful at all. This is its formal defect, but its function is good, which is the embodiment of its own value. Inner beauty is a higher level of beauty.

First, the angle of conception.

1, the correct conception angle:

Hunter's point of view: be responsive, lose something, be perfect and moderate, attach importance to its essence, despise its form, let nature take its course, and don't let love flow over the bow. Angle: truth, goodness and beauty, removing decoration, pursuing essence, flashy, flashy.

Event perspective: pursuing the truth of life and the perfection without decoration.

2. Examples of intentional mistakes:

Are defects beautiful? Thank you for being incomplete and finding your place? Subjective and objective coordination? Subjective understanding to find height? Smart thinking and dialectical view of things? Know how to pursue and cherish the present? Learn to live to the best of your ability? one can't make an omelette without breaking eggs

Judging from the actual situation of students' compositions, there are the following ideas:

The bow that begins to work-it breaks after carving-must be good if it is not beautiful.

Some things don't need anything else to decorate-simple things can be beautiful.

The durable essence of a bow is better than its beautiful appearance-the essence of things is better than its appearance.

(4) Pay attention to the inner essence, not the appearance-beauty not only pays attention to the appearance.

In fact, simple can also be beautiful.

6. Gorgeous decoration is not necessarily beautiful, but simplicity is beautiful.

All landowners everything has an imperfect side, don't deliberately pursue perfection.

8 Incomplete can also be beautiful.

Pet-name ruby gold, no one is perfect-excessive pursuit of perfection will only get twice the result with half the effort.

Attending why the bow is broken and why the bow is broken-the hunter's love for the bow is not true love.

There are also ideas such as "don't blindly pursue things that don't belong to us" and "contentment is always fun". The composition structure model also has the confession of bow (fate, self-report)-extension, connection, deepening, hunter self-report-from the perspective of parents and teachers: what kind of love is true? Wait a minute.

Classify students' compositions from the perspective of intention;

① Defect and perfection ② Appearance and essence ③ Details determine success or failure ④ People's pursuit and scale.

Teacher's guidance: The key to material composition is to understand the material and choose a good writing angle. The specific steps are as follows:

1. Complete reading materials and all requirements.

2, on the basis of the overall feeling, the material layer or points, points.

3. Re-integration to form an overall understanding of materials.

4. Look at the "requirements" carefully. You can choose an angle or just write the theme. But in any case, the angle must be in the material, and the material cannot be deviated or misinterpreted.

Second, the material analysis

(1) bow: excellent, far and accurate-hunter: cherish? 、? like

(2) The appearance of the bow: it's not excellent, just a little heavy-Hunter: What a pity. Remedial measures? Don't let love turn into harm.

(3) the original intention of love-the result of bow breaking

One?

Don't let spoiled water pass through.

Love is the clear water and sunshine sprinkled on flowers, sweet and warm, nourishing them to thrive.

Love is a gentle greeting from the mother, a gentle touch to the child, and it warms the child's heart.

However, love is an uncontrolled pruning of flowers, digging up the soil and loosening the roots, so that the buds that have not yet bloomed will wither early. Love is to let children do whatever they want, meet all their requirements, and make them dependent on others for a long time, unable to move towards society and the future.

Love can warm everything and infect everything. But excessive love turns into doting and destruction, which will drown a person's future and ruin a person's fate. So I want to say: don't let the spoiled water cross.

Shang Zhouwang loved his Maggie so much that he cut out the courtier's heart to make her laugh, so much so that he failed the people and did nothing. Zhou Wang poured all his love into her body, leaving all the advice of state affairs, home country, people and sages behind. Finally, the unbearable love, the flood of doting, roared to Zhou Wang's bedroom, rushed to the outside world that had already cooled down, swallowed up Zhou Wang together with his dream, and let a dynasty withdraw from the historical stage early. As we all know, all this is because of Zhou Wang's unrestrained love. Once love goes beyond the original boundaries, it will drown everything like a huge wave.

Empress Zhao loves Chang, and this kind of love is well known. "Respect Chang's position, seal it with fertile land and give it more heavy weapons", and she was reluctant to take Chang as a hostage in Qi State. Touching the dragon said, "I secretly thought that after I loved Yan, I was more virtuous than Chang Anjun." Yes, I married Queen Yan far away and prayed for her, hoping that she would not come back. This is my old plan. I love Chang, but I respect his position, seal his land and care about his affairs, but I don't think about "once the mountain falls, why should Chang entrust himself to Zhao?" "Excessive love will certainly hurt Chang, making him unable to gain a foothold in Zhao. Empress Zhao finally understood this, and she won everyone's trust and admiration.

Zou Ji is loyal to his monarch, which is also a kind of love. However, Zou Ji did not let the spoiled water pass. With a keen eye and clever suggestions, he satirized the elegant words of King Chana of Qi, made full use of his strengths and avoided his weaknesses, and won the support of all, eventually making Qi rich and strong, ranking first in the world.

Love is the clockwork in the clock. A few tweaks are enough to keep the watch running. The deeper you love, the tighter you twist it, which will only make the clockwork break, which is counterproductive. Therefore, love needs to be controlled. Proper love will make the flowers brighter, the sky bluer and the happy laughter reverberate in the ears.

Spoiling can only destroy people's love, my friend, please remember, don't let the spoiling water cross-flow.

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? Second, the beauty of "heart" is true beauty.

Friends came to visit during the Spring Festival and brought a box of oranges, which was festive and beautiful. After opening it, I found that most of the oranges inside were black and could not be eaten. My friend exclaimed and was fooled: I thought such exquisite packaging must be a good product!

I smiled and took out an extremely beautiful mooncake packaging box that I collected last year. If you only look at the packaging, who would have thought that the expensive moon cakes inside could not even catch up with the bulk moon cakes in the supermarket?

Therefore, when we criticize business speculation, we can't help but ask ourselves: What has blinded us? When we excessively pursue gorgeous appearance, have we ever paid attention to its inner quality? What the hell are we chasing?

An ebony bow was originally shot far and accurately, but with the loss of appearance, when the best artist was asked to carve a beautiful "hunting map" on the bow, the bow broke. When this bow loses its practical value, even the most beautiful picture loses its meaning of existence.

I remember reading a report that the mayor of a city overhauled the city square to show people the elegance of his city and made great efforts in the image project. Eventually, due to the heavy debt, the city's economy tends to be depressed, leaving behind not the laughter of the citizens, but the complaints in the beautiful square.

I still remember reading a story about a father who "armed" his children to the teeth with a brand, hoping to be the best children in others' eyes. When the child goes astray because of excessive pursuit of material enjoyment, I wonder if the parent will have a thought when chasing the call sign of the police car.

Paying attention to appearance and neglecting inner quality bring us only regret and even tragedy. What is more helpless and sad than "the golden jade is outside, and the defeat is among them"? "Buying gifts and returning pearls" left more than just a laughing stock.

The tortoise is not beautiful, but it is deeply engraved in the children's fairy tale world with its persistent crawling. It won more love than the impetuous little white rabbit.

The grass is not beautiful, but because its green arouses people's enthusiasm for life, it will live in the poet's life forever with full vitality.

Sima Qian is not beautiful. His humiliated body bursts with infinite life energy in the strange eyes of the world, which makes his mutilated body illuminate the history of a nation.

Hawking is not beautiful either, but the mystery of the universe in his beating fingers has fixed him forever in the brilliant starry sky of 2 1 century.

The grass in the green world will always make people feel pity; Raindrops that moisten the earth will always make people look forward to it; Spreading warm sunshine will always be praised. Quality determines life, except for the glitz of appearance, the rest is the weight of life.

Haier group tells us with its success: quality is always the first, and the beauty of appearance is only a temporary opening. Only the beauty of "heart" can be true and eternal.

Third, keep the true colors of life.

I can't help feeling sorry for the bow. The bow was manipulated by the owner at will, and it could not keep its true color, which caused the tragedy of fracture. And people, can not be at the mercy of others, can keep the true colors of life.

Keeping its true color is a trickle flowing quietly instead of rolling and roaring like the sea. Keeping its true color is that butterflies dance and play among flowers instead of collecting honey like bees. Keeping its true color is that cheerful birds play in the forest instead of fighting the sky like goshawks. Keep the true colors of life and shape your natural and true self.

In the long history of 5,000 years, countless people with lofty ideals have emerged. It is precisely because they have kept the true colors of life that they have added a thousand pounds to history.

"Castle Peak is fortunate to bury loyal bones, and white iron casts innocent courtiers." The big characters on both sides of Zhong Jing Garden are shining, telling a loyal story. "Eat pork when you are hungry and drink Hun blood when you are thirsty" is Yue Fei's chant. "The nomads from the army are still alive, why do you want to do it at home?" Facing the weakness of the emperor, the framed by Qin Gui and others, and the insistence on the true nature of the word "loyalty" in my heart, Yue Fei sighed. On the moonlit night, Konakayama and Fengbo Pavilion witnessed Yue Fei's loyalty. He could have gone along with Qin Gui and others and settled in a corner of the south of the Yangtze River. He could have endured the humiliation of 8 jin j for a while. However, he didn't. He has always maintained his true colors of loyalty to the Song Dynasty. Hundreds of years of wind and rain have faded the little blood on the wind wave pavilion, but the true colors of Yue Wumu's loyalty are still revealed in the historical sky.

"Since ancient times, no one has died in life, so care with your heart and shine on history." Wen Tianxiang's brave words came from Ling Dingyang. Facing Yuan Bing's carrot and stick, Wen Tianxiang was not tempted by fame and fortune, and he was not afraid of death. He could have surrendered to the Yuan Army and won an official position. He could have hung his noble head for a while and survived. However, he didn't. He is always fearless. Hundreds of years of waves have drowned the sighs on the ocean, and Wen Tianxiang's fearless nature will never be erased.

The long history has left us with endless spiritual wealth. They are like pearls on precious stones. Pick up these pearls and gems, keep the true colors of life like the ancients, and watch the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court. If you have no intention of staying or staying, it is easy to follow the clouds outside.

Keep the true colors of life and make the spiritual sky clear.

Keep the true colors of life and make our life more meaningful.

Four? Cruel perfection

The Yangtze River is majestic, the Yellow River is broad, Mount Tai is majestic, and Emei is strange. If the bird in the air does not satisfy its desire for wings, its life will be painful; If a deer in the forest is not satisfied with its running limbs, but expects its wings, then its life will be boring from now on.

A famous person once said, "The most painful thing in life is not that you can't get it, but that you will never be satisfied." Corrupt officials of past dynasties, although obviously rich, are still deliberate and unscrupulous, and the result is notorious all their lives; Picasso's paintings have obviously shocked the world, but he pursues unrealistic perfection. As a result, he is crazy.

The beautiful Venus, if connected with the brokeback, will lose its elegance; If the reason for smiling is indicated, the mysterious Mona Lisa will lose its charm. Beauty in the world is often not demanding. Beauty is an essence, a connotation, and an unconscious nature.

If you have wisdom, don't expect beautiful appearance. The strange rocks on the top of the mountain have their own moving characteristics. If you have health, don't aspire to a million dollars. Birds in the air have their own happy direction.

Many times, we are often bound by unsatisfied desires and ignore our actual situation. Shorter feet and longer inches. Envy others' poetry books and ignore their own brilliance, envy others' gentleness and ignore their own understanding. No one is perfect, it is foolish to pursue perfection excessively, and it is extremely foolish to pursue perfection and lose yourself.

There is a story: a man has an excellent bow. He used it very successfully, but he was not satisfied with its clumsy appearance. Finally, the bow broke because of carving pictures on it.

This almost cruel perfection is shameful. Lost the dream, also lost the truth. To be a man, we must have the pride and confidence of Li Bai, who said, "Since God has given talents, let them find jobs". There must also be Tan Sitong's strong spirit of "I laugh at the sky with a horizontal knife, and I will stay with my heart." It is wise to believe in yourself, accept yourself and show yourself. The pace of spring has its lightness; The summer breeze has its gentleness; Autumn sunshine has its own beauty; Snowflakes in winter have their own crystals. Let's forget about perfection, live in reality, believe in ourselves, and come up with the brave words of "except who I am": "Since God has given talents, let them find jobs! ! "

Five? No matter how beautiful things are, it is useless to lose their essence.

"Wow, why is this person's face so dark and there is a birthmark on his mouth? It's really ugly ..." I always hear such words in my life, and I always retort: no matter how beautiful the appearance is, no matter how ugly the heart is, what's the use?

How beautiful Beethoven's music is and how many people regard him as an idol! But is his appearance perfect? No, he is disabled. He couldn't hear his beautiful music, but he succeeded. With his yearning and love for music, he finally became a famous musician. Both Bao and Bao who came out from the Avenue of Stars came out from the countryside. Yang guang is blind and fat. He doesn't look like a star at all, but he doesn't care what others think. He loves music. Po, who came out of the ravine at first, was a bumpkin, a man carrying a hoe. Now, he is popular all over China, and many people like his songs. Their appearance is not beautiful, but they have strength and their essence is beautiful, so they succeeded.

Han Hong, a famous female artist in China, is a "diva", but she has no slim figure and beautiful face. She only has a bulging bucket waist and a pie face ... so what? She doesn't worry about food and clothing now, and lives like a fairy. She can still give her love anywhere.

Appearance is not necessarily good, but your own strength and inner needs are important. Even if the appearance becomes beautiful, the result is often counterproductive.

Michael Jackson, a famous American singer, is black himself, but in order to turn white, he chose plastic surgery. I don't know how many times he turned white all over, but he soon left us because of illness. He just pays too much attention to his appearance and unfortunately falls ill. Otherwise, with his talent and singing skills, I believe he will be more successful, but unfortunately he passed away.

There are still many people in the world. They have a beautiful appearance, but their hearts are evil. They will commit crimes and take drugs ... If they make rational use of their advantages, I think the world will be much more harmonious.

Don't blindly pursue external beauty, in fact, the beauty of memory is the most important. If you want to change something blindly, it will only destroy its own beauty, and such things, no matter how beautiful and impeccable they look, are useless.

I have been pursuing the essence, and it is useless to lose the essence of things, including people.

Six restless beauties

Natural and simple beauty, sometimes unadorned, is often the purest!

The bow in the story is heavy but not excellent, and it can shoot far and accurately. This is its characteristic and beauty. But because of this, although beautifully decorated, it is no longer a good durable bow. The result is being disturbed!

In fact, there are many things in life. In fact, its essence is beautiful, natural and simple. But I never thought that because of our greed and pursuit, we were accidentally disturbed. In the end, it wasn't just disturbed.

Seeing this story, I suddenly thought of environmental protection four days ago, and I worked hard. The environment in nature is also a disturbed beauty. The society is progressing and the economy is developing. Of course, everyone is constantly pursuing beautiful things, so the essence of many things is ruined, just like the man in the story, whose ideas disturb the beauty of everything.

Now food safety problems are rampant. For the fat of fish, the weight of pigs and the thinness of meat, people can add hormones and lean meat at will. In order to make flour white, to make food "live" for a few days, a lot of washing powder and additives appeared in food, and in order to make more money, gutter oil, poisonous bean sprouts and melamine milk powder were born. These original good things are "beautiful" with makeup. And finally? People are very cautious about these problems, even if they are true, they are no longer beautiful! Because it is unnatural, unpretentious and impure.

Who dares to be disturbed?

Nowadays, vegetables are very shiny, without bugs and defects, but is this good? Without the concentration of pesticides, how can there be such "green" food? Vegetables are beautiful now, but people eat too many vegetables that even bugs dare not eat. It is pesticides that disturb the health and beauty of vegetables!

I once read a report that there was a small mountain village with good mountains and good water, but because of poverty, villagers shipped marble from a mountain there to get rich, and the village gradually became rich. There are fewer stones in the mountains, so they use explosives to mine marble underground. Finally, the mountain is bare, and even plants and animals rarely appear. One day a few years later, the geologist in the village found that if this place developed sightseeing agriculture, it could still retain the beauty here, but now, only loess remains. How long can this village be rich without marble? Later, natural disasters hit the road, and slowly, all the people in this village moved away. This village "has nothing but an exorcism ..." The natural beauty was disturbed.

Many times, there are many things that are either changed or the most beautiful. Perhaps its essence is a kind of perfection. Even a simple taste is a charming fragrance. Since it is beautiful enough, please don't disturb it!

Seven-in-one doesn't mean perfect match

Whether a pair of shoes is suitable or not is only known when you wear them on your own feet. Sometimes shoes worn on other people's feet are just what you want, so we want to have them and think they are suitable for us, and we will pursue them. But sometimes, when we get them, we will find that they don't match. They may not match the size or clothes we wear. Therefore, harmony does not mean perfect match.

I heard a story about a man who had a long and accurate bow, but the appearance of the bow was not excellent, so he invited the best artists to carve some pictures on the bow, and added hunting pictures to make the bow look more exquisite. The man pulled the bow happily and it broke.

A good bow was broken because it was engraved with a hunting map. This man, who doesn't know the ability of the bow, just stays on the shape transformation of the bow. The hunting map is beautiful and suitable for decorative painting, but it doesn't match this bow. The bow is broken because it can't have a hunting map. So the hunting map is suitable for this kind of bow, but it is not a perfect match with the bow.

The same is true of our study life: some students see that excellent students have a good learning method and think that they can become excellent students according to that, so they blindly follow other people's methods, but the final result is not always as they wish.

Everyone has his own learning method. Although other people's methods sometimes suit him, after all, people are different, and there will be differences in some aspects, such as ability, knowledge and schedule. The learning styles of students from Tsinghua and Peking University may also be suitable for us, but not all of them can be admitted to Tsinghua and Peking University after studying. Appropriate doesn't mean a perfect match. Don't blindly copy other people's practices, but have your own methods that can match your study and life.

The Olympic champions and athletes we see are repeating almost boring movements in every hard exercise. Their success has the same factor: hard training. However, is everyone sure to succeed as long as they practice as hard as they do? No, you can't. Hard training suits every athlete, but they need a training method that suits them best. Every year, an athlete has his own training method. This is the key to their success.

A bow with a hunting map can't make it better, but it's broken. Students think that the learning methods of excellent students are suitable for them, but this does not make everyone an excellent student. Athletes need to have their own training methods, which match their own abilities and suit them best. ...

To sum up, fit does not mean perfect fit, nor does it mean perfect match.

Eight treasures and eight treasures

"If life is just like the first sight, why draw a fan in the autumn wind?" This is a poem by Nalan Rong Ruo, and I was deeply moved by it. Yes, it would be nice if everything could be as it was at the beginning, but we can't change it, we can only take every step.

An excellent bow made of ebony, although it was shot far and accurately, was cherished by the owner at first. However, it was later found that the bow was a bit heavy and its appearance was not excellent, so I decided to transform it, but it was a long-lasting regret. The bow is broken, and he can only regret it alone.

Although he cherished the bow, he used the wrong method to make it useless. So he wants to find something suitable for the material itself, so as to further transform and sublimate it, instead of blindly changing it, which is inevitably "gilding the lily."

Similarly, this phenomenon is not uncommon in today's society.

Nowadays, parents pay special attention to their children's education. Experts say that it is the golden age to develop the right brain when children are three to five years old. Therefore, many parents have started "pre-school education", so that children will be under great pressure when they have not enjoyed the fun of childhood.

As everyone knows, how cruel this is to children. Children should enjoy the childhood they deserve, not be locked by heavy locks. Although the abdomen is poetic, it is a little too early. So cherish it, cherish it.

We should have a correct goal in life. As contemporary middle school students, we should focus on learning. Cherish what we have. Cherish life and don't ignore it.

The fragile Lin Daiyu, facing all kinds of hardships and setbacks in life, is still tenacious and takes every step of her life well.

Liu Wei, a contemporary youth, lost his arms, but he still lives optimistically.

He has an infinite love for music. Although his road to learning is very difficult, he never gives up. With persistent faith and indomitable will, he unremittingly fulfilled his musical dream. Finally, he became a household name and made a successful film. Shi Tiesheng said: Death is not an urgent matter, but an inevitable procedure. He also has a persistent love for life. He tried to take every step of his life and never gave up. Indeed, to live, to live well.

On the road of life, we should cherish and cherish!