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1. Imitate an excellent model essay 1 and write an article.

Happy reading footprint

I remember Dong Qichang said in his Picturesque: "Read thousands of books and take Wan Li Road". I also remember Gorky once said: "Books are the ladder of human progress." The ancients also said: "The book has its own golden house, the book has its own thousands of millet, and the book has its own Yan Ruyu." Of course, many people study for their own purposes, to gain fame, to win people's admiration, to decorate the facade, and even to satisfy their vanity when talking with others ... Fortunately, I study for no utilitarian purpose. I have always been a happy reader, and I often feel my footsteps rumbling in the book.

I am immersed in the book. Inside, I can feel the depth of Stendhal, Jack? * * * In London, Hugo's melancholy; You can feel the boldness of Li Taibai, the massiness of Du Gongbu and the elegance of Li Yishan. You can taste Liang Shiqiu's randomness, Qian Zhongshu's wisdom and Zhu Ziqing's peace. You can also be happy with Li Ao and even have a "new" addiction. Every reading is a communication with the author's mind, a baptism of the mind and full of fun. I can freely taste the essence, or I can casually "study hard without asking for answers".

In the book, I appreciate the Russian's touch on grasslands and rivers, the Indian's singing of the sky and birds, the Japanese's gaze on ice and snow and grass leaves, and the China's affectionate touch on pine trees, deserts, solitary smoke, flowing bridges and boats. All this gives me a full and happy * * *. The culture and history of every different nation are so clearly shown in the book, and then I am as happy and rewarding as the child who picked up shells at the seaside. It seems clear that the wild horses of their own thoughts are galloping wantonly on the thick earth.

Chekhov said, "Books are notes and conversations are songs." In fact, books are also songs, and only happy readers can hear them and sing them.

Reading is pure happiness for me. Because of happiness, the road under my feet is longer and the footprints are clearer. So the horizon is not far away; So it can make people share joys and sorrows and be fascinated.

2. Don't imitate the embarrassing composition-don't imitate walking into the campus and asking a classmate casually, "Are you afraid of writing a composition?" It is estimated that only a handful of people answered "not afraid".

Why? When you do a math problem, you can work it out as long as you understand the formula. However, writing a composition is different. Even if Chinese textbooks are memorized, it is not always easy to write a composition.

As a result, I scratched my ears, scratched my cheeks and bit my pen every time I watched the composition class. Most of the compositions I collected after class were patchwork, and some of them made a big joke in their compositions. Don't believe it? Let's have a look.

First, the incredible article of embarrassing composition. It's a beautiful day today. The sky is clear in Wan Li, and white clouds are floating in the sky. (Never seen such a scene _) My classmate Xiaogang and I go to school by bike. Suddenly, the valve core of his car was broken, so I pulled out my car and put it on him. We continue to ride to school happily together.

It turns out that my bike doesn't need a valve core. _) When we passed a department store, I couldn't help feeling: Ah! It seems that people's living standards have really improved. Look at the old farmer, with a refrigerator in his left hand and a TV in his right, running away. Worse than Stephen Chow in Kung Fu? ! ) all say that you can't do two things at once. Just as I was staring at the old man, an old lady suddenly rushed out of the fork. Just then, I came to an emergency stop with a bang, but I still knocked down the old lady and the egg basket in my hand danced with the wind.

(Good egg _) Bang, the old lady was smashed to pieces, but she still stood up and ran away. (This old lady must be a sage like type _) She ran all the way back and said to me, "Take your time, young man. If I hadn't come back to nurse my grandson, you would have a good life today! " I rushed to school in fear, just stepped on the class and entered the classroom. The first class is English. As a rule, because I don't understand, I always sleep secretly until class is over.

And because I sit in the last row, behind me is the back door of the classroom. Every time after class, my deskmate will wake me up and go out to bask in the sun. Today, unfortunately, the teacher asked me to answer questions for the first time. I was awakened by my deskmate when I was asleep, thinking that class was over, so I got up and opened the back door and walked out of the classroom.

Three minutes later, I felt strange outside the classroom and rushed back to the classroom, only to find that all the teachers and students were in a state of panic. The teacher tried not to get angry. She repeated the question, but I was in a daze. I stood there for about one minute and ten seconds. The teacher said impatiently, "May I?" I won't scream either! "So he was so angry that he said loudly," Cheep. "

The teacher fainted on the spot. Let's stop here, because writing 600 words is enough. I wrote nearly 100 more words. Will you consider giving more points to my lovely Chinese teacher? Please, please, thank you! Second, the mistakes in the composition 1. The sports meeting 100 meter sprint finally started, and the students ran out like escaped wild dogs.

Teacher's comment: Has the playground become a dog racing field? Ten thousand dogs gallop, which is spectacular! 2. The teacher asked the students to imitate the text "Little Tadpole Looking for Mom" and write a composition about someone. A classmate imitated it like this: my mother has a white stomach and bulging eyes ... Teacher's comment: Like mother, like son, I think you have a white stomach and bulging eyes. 3. On the "bumpy road" of life, we should stick to our own direction ... Teacher's comment: This road can become the ninth miracle after eight wonders of the world relayed the Terracotta Warriors.

4. People's Liberation Army uncles crawl forward one by one, just like green bugs crawling on the ground. Teacher's comment: Why did my mighty teacher come to you and become a "bug attack team"? 5. Colorful flags float on the playground, for all ages.

A girl's diary wrote: There are many people around my home who have dogs and have no public morality. I just came out from home this morning and saw a pile of shit pulled by some wild dog at the door. I ate a kilo. (massive! Huge! It should be "surprised" )

There is an article about a teacher in China. When introducing the teacher's appearance, it should be "teacher's face", and as a result, students wrote "teacher's paw face" The Chinese teacher is going crazy.

After getting up in the morning and sorting out the "relics", we gathered at school and took a ride to Kenting for a graduation trip. Teacher's comment: I don't know which funeral home is your home? Teachers never know ... (it should be "appearance") 4. Last night, my classmates and I went to a fast food restaurant for dinner. We ordered two hamburgers and "chicken nuggets and shit" ... Teacher's comment: Is it delicious? Chicken manure? My history teacher is short, with long hair and a shawl.

Four, the embarrassing composition of childlike articles 1. When I was young, I kept a diary, and the teacher stipulated that it should be more than 200 words. At that time, a group of four people, the group leader checked the number of words. A person in my group wrote: "Today, my mother asked me to go out to buy food. I asked how much it was a catty, and the vegetable seller said 5 points. I said, it's really cheap, it's really cheap, it's really cheap ... "The group leader counted four words missing, and my dear friend added at the back, it's really cheap. 2. Grade three students, write a rainy day.

He said: Rainy days are a good time to sleep. After breakfast, my father and I went to bed. That's it! The teacher asked: One sentence is enough? He said we were asleep! Did nothing.

3. The primary school teacher wrote a semi-propositional composition: My xxx. As a result, my classmate wrote a composition entitled "My Comrade Qiu". 4. "A red sun shines in the morning sun ... As primary school students in the new era, we know that Beijing is next to the capital ..." 5. The allusions in the composition are not used enough. The college entrance examination candidates use wonderful pens, bold imagination and humorous words to gallop freely in history and reality, making the boring history and real world so interesting and worthy of being a history creator! The following are some witticisms from the excerpts, which are now quietly submitted to readers.

1. Li Yu is singing: I can't move, I have a lot on my mind, just like a river flowing eastward. Teacher's comment: Are Li Qingzhao and Li Sang Yu together? How could General Montgomery defeat Napoleon in the Battle of Waterloo if he didn't reflect on his failure and continue to work hard? Teacher's evaluation: Napoleon VS Montgomery? Can Guan Gong fight Qin Qiong for 300 rounds?

3. Yue Fei chose to be loyal to the country and do his best.

3. Composition materials about "imitation" 1. Mr. Qi Baishi once said to his students, "Like me, I will live." It means imitating his painting style, but without his own personality, it will only be a dead end; Only by learning how to paint can he realize the significance of his innovation and succeed.

2. Matsushita Group of Japan was once in trouble at the beginning of its business. Panasonic did not continue to develop the same socket as others, but made a dual-purpose plug. Just because we didn't blindly imitate others, Panasonic's products were very popular and the company was on the right track. People should find their way from where there is no road, and don't lose their individuality and blindly imitate others.

3. Kobe Bryant, a famous 3-pointer. NBA star, known as the successor of "King of the Ball" Jordan, a large number of data also show that there are similarities between the two. But Kobe did not move in the direction of imitation. On the contrary, he played according to his own style and gradually became a great NBA star today.

Bergman's temperament and talent touched the producer, but the producer still asked her to imitate others to correct her teeth and change her name, and Bergman firmly opposed it. She said that I am who I am, and I can't "imitate others" because of various interests. In the end, the producer was persuaded by her persistence. Bergman's success depends not on imitation, but on his own principles, the truth of his performance, his personality and style. Her unique style finally won the applause of the audience and embodied her own value.

5. Pierre Cardin abandoned the simple and straightforward clothing style of his predecessors, became unique and designed a novel bubble skirt. Every quarter, new products are launched, constantly bringing forth the old and bringing forth the new, and always at the peak of the trend. It is precisely because Pierre Cardin did not blindly imitate others that he owned his own brand. Rodin said: "clumsy artists always wear other people's glasses."

4. Proposition composition simulation composition is based on the topic of "Life is like a tree". Write a short essay as required. Life is like a tree. 1 To grow into a towering tree, you must bathe in sunshine, rain and cold. To achieve something, we must work hard, be brave and go forward bravely.

So from the process and value of life, life is like a tree. Life is like a tree.

People have to face everything from the moment they are born. From birth, learn to walk, and then grow up, just like a tree. As long as it grows seedlings, it will face ups and downs, which are beyond your will.

People, like trees, need a suitable environment to thrive in addition to their own conditions. Trees need constant fertilization and pruning, and life needs constant experience to achieve something.

Life is like a tree. It is true that everyone wants his life to be full, valuable and successful, just like a small sapling. No matter where you plant it, even on a high cliff, it will strive to grow up and hope to become a pillar.

However, not every tree seedling can succeed. Therefore, life may not be perfect sometimes, and it is inevitable that there will be frustration when moving forward on the road of life.

But that doesn't mean we don't need to move on. On the contrary, we should have such confidence: one day, I will ride the wind and waves and sail across the deep sea. Life is like a tree.

Whenever I see those tall and straight trees, I always think of the poem "the sword front comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold" These tall and straight trees, once saplings, were unknown, but they withstood the ups and downs of nature and eventually became towering trees.

Life is like a tree. Any ordinary life will have ups and downs, and the key depends on how you face it. A man who makes a difference always faces all difficulties bravely and never escapes from reality.

Those who have a successful career have experienced "bitter cold". Therefore, if anyone wants to sit still and wait for the pie to fall from the sky, he can only draw water with a sieve.

Life is like a tree. Poplar is "an ordinary tree, but it is by no means an ordinary tree", which is Mr. Mao Dun's praise of poplar in his famous essay "Praise of Poplar".

He used tall and straight poplars to symbolize the indomitable fighting spirit of the broad masses of anti-Japanese soldiers and civilians in the northwest and the Chinese nation. In fact, not only poplar trees, but all other tree species are extraordinary. Life is like a tree, because most people's lives are ordinary, and the road of life is always full of bumps and thorns, so everyone's life path is extraordinary.

Life is like a tree. May we see ourselves more clearly from the tree, draw strength and courage, and let our tree of life blossom bright flowers and bear rich fruits.

(The original score of this article: 90) To do this figurative topic, we need to achieve the unity of image display and rational thinking. In this regard, this paper grasps the overall image characteristics, grasps several similarities between man and tree from the aspects of history, success, the relationship between ordinary and extraordinary, and explains the truth that "life is like a tree".

The language of the full text is fluent, the quotations of ancient and modern poems are natural and appropriate, and the metaphors in all aspects are also appropriate, which shows that the author has good visual reasoning writing ability. What is slightly insufficient is that in the discussion on the theme of "life is like a tree in terms of its process and value", the content of "value" is still weak, and some levels of meaning are still intertwined, such as the second and fourth paragraphs, which repeatedly express the meaning of experiencing storms, and the paragraphs are not clean enough.

All levels are appropriate in form and reason, but in more general places. The full text has a level of development, but the discussion of deep excavation seems to be lacking.

This is a good composition, but I feel a little reluctant to give up 90 points, which seems a little low. A little.

5. Composition imitation with imitation as the topic

"Why?" My classmates spoke to me in a strange tone again. "Hum, do you want to learn from Shenyang?" I gave him a contemptuous look. ...

Actually, imitation is everywhere.

There is imitation in learning-in the composition class, the teacher grabbed our composition homework and started a cliche: "Your composition is so good that it is simply vulgar!" "Don't you want us to see that it is an imitator?" The students don't understand the teacher's "saying one thing and doing another". When the teacher heard this, he frowned angrily and adjusted his glasses with his middle finger: "I said you can't be flexible." I asked you to imitate your composition, not to copy it! " "

Alas, imitation is wrong again! It should be, draw lessons from the "good prescription" in excellent works and make the finishing touch in future writing.

There is imitation in life-"Mom, it is said on TV that rubbing leather and wooden furniture with white vinegar is more effective than ordinary ones!" " "I am like a little doctor, teaching my mother who is struggling with sauce stains on the sofa! Mother ignored me and still bathed the sofa with detergent. Half an hour has passed, and it's still a big piece. Mother had to "treat a dead horse as a living horse doctor" and give it a try. In less than five minutes, the sofa was completely new!

I proudly said to my mother, "Look, you should learn the wonderful tricks in other people's lives, and then imitate them well, which will be more exciting!" " Mom nodded: "You're right! "

Growing up in imitation-"Doug, like this." I am teaching my one-year-old sister to blow kisses. My sister followed my example, put her little hand on her mouth, waved her arm gently and kissed successfully! Every progress in growth can be imitated!

Imitation should choose-my brother started smoking and asked him why. Ironically, he tried to imitate his father's chic way of smoking. This kind of imitation can put a lifetime of health into it. Imitation requires a certain choice, not abuse.

Imitation composition (3 articles)

"I am a small Shenyang, and my stage name is also a small Shenyang ..." At the literary performance, the humorous Xiaogang twisted up and imitated the small Shenyang again. His antics made everyone laugh.

Hey, this imitation ...

6. Please recommend some essay topics about enlightenment. The revelation of a small matter "Time flies, the sun and the moon fly."

I never quite understood this sentence, but in a small incident, I understood the meaning of this sentence. It's a sunny Saturday. I get up early, brush my teeth and wash my face.

I finished my homework on Friday, because there was little homework on weekends. I am happy to check my father's homework. When I finished my Chinese, math and English homework, I held out my hand and asked my father, "Dad, I have finished all my homework. Can I play for a while? " "Of course."

On the side, I smiled like a flower. "However, when your mother and I go out later, you have to write a composition. At four o'clock, I came back to check. " * * * Simply answer: "All right! Piece of cake, you can't win me! " I look confident.

After mom and dad left, I was the master of this family! Lying on the sofa is very comfortable, eating snacks, watching TV, watching CCTV, watching children's TV and watching series. I found it was time to write a composition, so I looked at the clock on the wall. It's already twelve noon. I thought about it. Anyway, there are still a few hours. At this time, I just ate snacks and digested them, so I had to take a pack of instant noodles to satisfy my hunger.

I was full, drunk and a little sleepy, so I climbed into bed and had a dream. I slept until three o'clock in the afternoon, and my intuition told me that it was too late to write a composition now. My parents will be back in an hour. what can I do? I am so anxious that my heart is like fifteen buckets of water-up and down.

I have to take out a piece of paper, write a composition casually, and then take it to work. At this time, mom and dad just came back. As soon as dad comes back, let me show him my composition. I slowly took out my composition and felt even more uneasy.

I saw my father shake his head slightly, and then said to me seriously, "Li Jie, have you written your composition carefully today?" Have you written your due level? "I told my father what happened today in detail. When my father saw me like this, he said to me earnestly, "Never mind, just correct it next time. Remember that time is precious. Remember, son? The ancients once said, "Young people who don't work hard are sad."

If you don't work hard now, it will be too late when you grow up, and time won't stop for you. "After listening to my father's words, I felt very sorry, so I made up my mind to race against time and become the master of time! Although it took a long time, I really realized that "time flies, the sun and the moon fly like a shuttle." "

The meaning of this sentence, everything my father said that day, was deeply imprinted in my heart. It happened on a summer afternoon. The sun hangs high in the air like a big fireball, and there is no wind at all.

The flowers and plants hung their heads listlessly and fell asleep. Even the asphalt road is soft, with deep wheel prints. I was walking on my way to school, wearing a hat, but my face was still sweaty. How I look forward to eating an ice cream to quench my thirst at this moment! Walking, I saw a group of people buying ice cream in front. I felt thirsty and squeezed into the crowd to buy one.

Take a bite of ice cream, wow! It's so comfortable It is cold from head to toe. As soon as I threw the ice cream paper, it floated up and landed right outside the trash can.

I ran to pick it up, and I thought, well, it's just an ice cream paper. It's nothing, so I keep going. After a while, I came to a fork in the road and saw a five-or six-year-old boy running to his mother with an ice cream.

As he ran, he shouted, "Mom, you're here!" He ran to his mother, with one hand holding the ice cream to her mouth and the other throwing the ice cream paper on the floor. His mother leaned down and picked up the ice cream paper and said, "Father Land loves cleanliness as much as you do. If you dirty his clothes, he will be angry. This environmental sanitation depends on all of us. There is a trash can over there. Mom will throw the ice cream paper into the box with you. "

Say that finish, they walked to the front of the trash can and threw the ice cream paper in. Looking at this scene, I blushed to the neck. The behavior, words and deeds of mother and son, like a stone, broke my inner peace.

The ice cream in my mouth, somehow, is not cold at all. Not only that, I feel unusually hot, my face has nowhere to hide, my body has nowhere to hide, and my heart is like an overturned five-flavor bottle, bitter, sweet, sour and salty, and I can't tell what it tastes like.

I looked at the distant back of the mother and son, and felt that I was missing something. I felt that I was too small to lift my head ... In the following days, the weather continued to be hot, and waves of heat waves surrounded the city. As usual, when I am thirsty, I will buy an ice cream to resist the heat.

I just stopped letting the ice cream paper fly with the wind, but carefully put it in the trash can. I frankly tasted the sweetness and coolness brought by ice cream.

The enlightenment of a test paper can be seen everywhere, in books, newspapers and TV ... but the enlightenment brought by a small test paper is different, which is of great help to my study! Early this morning, the teacher came to the classroom and told us that Grade 5 and Grade 6 were going to do a set of mid-term simulation papers from 9: 00 to 1 1 this morning. I think: this is just a simulation test paper, so it shouldn't be too difficult. Don't be too nervous. Do this paper calmly and prepare for the mid-term exam.

After the test paper was issued, I still couldn't help listening to my heart "bang". This is not a real midterm. Why am I so nervous? How strange! After browsing the test paper, I found it was not difficult, so I stopped being so nervous, relaxed and did it slowly ... Time passed, and my test paper was almost finished. The "Ding Ding Ding" bell rang. It's time to hand in the test paper. I handed it in reluctantly, and I went out to play with confidence.

In the second class in the afternoon, Mr. Liu walked into the classroom with a serious face, holding the paper we took in the morning. At that time, my first hunch was: I'm sure I didn't do well in the exam, and Mr. Liu was "keeping a straight face." I am nervous again.

Teacher Liu handed out the test papers. I looked at my paper in a daze. Then Teacher Liu said, "The exam was not satisfactory. We ...

7. The fifth grade Chinese volume imitates the composition of lesson 25 by about 400 words. Today, the teacher asked us to go home and write a composition.

I am most afraid of writing a composition, because it takes time to think and write. I held a pen from 8: 30 to 9: 30 in the evening, and only wrote 123 on Monday. The teacher asked us to write at least 400 words, but my 123 word is far from 400 words! Dad said, "Go to sleep now and get up at 6 o'clock tomorrow to write."

I didn't want to, so I fell asleep. I slept in bed and thought about it: What's wrong with this composition? I thought about it and fell asleep before I knew it.

Ah! I came to a fairyland. No matter young or old, and children, the level of composition here is quite high, even a baby of 1 year old can write a composition.

I asked a grandfather who was over eighty years old: "Grandpa, why is your composition so good?" Grandpa touched my head and said, "Little friend, our country is a kingdom of composition, and our king is best at writing.". He opened a composition restaurant here, from which we learned composition skills. Learn.

You are an "alien" and the king will not accept your money. "He pointed to a" composition restaurant "just 100 meters ahead.

After I said goodbye to my grandfather, I went directly to the composition restaurant. As soon as I entered the door, I saw an aunt smiling and saying to me, "Welcome, little friend."

8. Write a composition with the theme of the first person and five senses, imitating Mr. Feng Zikai's fingers and five senses. Each of us always carries five senses and never leaves our bodies. The five senses on the head have different postures and different personalities. The position of the nose on the face is really unique. He lives in the center of the whole face, with eyebrows, eyes and mouth to protect him 24 hours a day. He enjoys a carefree life. However, as an important organ of the five senses, the nose also risks its life. He has to endure the stench of toilets and sewers for a long time, and the suffocating smell emitted by disinfection water and waste gas discharged from factories is only absorbed by him. He needs to make sure whether the food has gone bad. Natural and man-made disasters often affect him, just say the most common cold! Almost without exception, a cold will have symptoms such as stuffy nose and runny nose, and it is nothing more than the nose that suffers. The mouth lives under the nose. The contribution of mouth is self-evident. It allows you to taste the delicious food in the world and express your feelings in words. But I think, the mouth is not born to enjoy life. Although food is always tasted by him first, words are always expressed by him. However, I can feel the helplessness in my mouth. My mouth has to bear many accidents. For example, if any part of my body is uncomfortable, I have to taste the bitter fruit. Although my nose is in a prominent position and my mouth tastes delicious, God didn't give them the most important role in people's hearts when they created people, just like how can you have your cake and eat it? The most important thing on a person's face is his eyes. Some people say that the eyes are the windows to the soul. We can see the beautiful world outside through him, and others can feel our hearts through him. I can't imagine what kind of disaster his disappearance will bring us. Looking all the way and listening all around, we can see that ears are second only to eyes, and sweet and elegant music rushes into our lives through ears. Let people get spiritual comfort after a meal. Ear is also the only place where a lovely lady chooses to wear jewelry, but beauty comes at a price. Piercing ears and hanging earrings can really make the facial features look more beautiful, but the pain when piercing will make the ears hurt. Bro eyebrow is the smallest and most inconspicuous of the five senses, and it is also the lowest among the five senses. At best, his function is to draw thrush and make the five senses look more beautiful. That's all. I just feel that the five senses on my face have different functions and status. They don't distinguish between beauty, ugliness and nobility. They live on people's heads, enjoy supreme status and control the normal work of limbs. They have their own strengths and weaknesses.