Choose an appropriate angle. We can write about the pains and joys in our study, and also about the worries and joys in our life. It is best to write from only one aspect and describe it in detail, and never generalize. In addition, the examples should be novel and unique, and they should have their own real feelings and original opinions.

2. Choose the best form. The topic is not difficult to write, but if you want to write brightly, you must work hard on expression. We can reflect the sky of life in the form of novels or express the theme in the form of diaries. Of course, we can also use anthropomorphic writing. I can be a tree, a fish, a writing style, etc. , reflecting the topic in the form of self-report. Correct is the most beautiful, stick to the topic, choose a good form to write, and the high score will definitely be biased towards us.

3. Proposed theme. Don't forget, you must draft a shiny title. Reference topics include: young wings want to fly, flying under the family sky, beautiful new world, my mood, my sky and so on.

Fan Wen:

Villa's sky

Rain, it keeps raining.

It is raining in Mao Mao outside the classroom.

At this time, the annoying school bell came uninvited, and Vera's heart tightened. She thought: How can I go home if my parents don't get off work?

"Hey, Vera, let me take you home!" Jun Bai doesn't know when he has stood behind her and held up an umbrella for her.

They talked and laughed in the rain.

"I'm home, thank you!" Vera's innocent face was full of smiles. At the moment, my mother who just got home was closing the window and happened to see this scene.

"Listen, don't associate with that boy again!" Mom said seriously.

"Why? You are unreasonable! She cried loudly and felt wronged.

"If others see it, where will mom's old face go?" Mom is still very expressive.

She was very sad. Why did her understanding mother become so unreasonable?

"Mom is also good for you, I don't want you to get hurt ..." Mom's tone softened a little.

She didn't listen, just looked out the window!

The rain has been falling, floating, dripping on my heart, so cold, so cold. ...

The wind has been blowing.

Spring is really a naughty little girl. I don't know when, she sent a breeze to the earth.

"Junbai, let's not meet again, ok?" Vera said cautiously, her voice was as small as a mosquito.

"Why?" Jun Bai leng, "although we are rivals in study, we should be friends in life! Do you have any difficulties? "

"My mother said ... said ..." She hesitated, afraid to look him in the eye.

Silence, a long silence.

He understood the meaning of Vera's words and said calmly, "We just need to be honest."

She bit her lip and left silently.

The wind blows her thoughts, cutting and confusing.

God, it's always blue.

There are white clouds under the sun and the sky is surprisingly blue.

Vera had nothing to do, so she just picked up a book and flipped through it. Suddenly, a paragraph suddenly jumped into her eyes:

We can't choose family, school and society, but we can choose our own way of life. As long as it is correct, it should be adhered to. Experienced, pursued, a clear conscience is enough.

Watching, she suddenly enlightened, suddenly enlightened.

In the early morning, she walked alone on a lonely path. The gardenias on the roadside are in bud and fragrant, but she has no intention of enjoying them. It's really "a long way to go, but it's Xiu Yuan". Jun Bai just walked right in front of him, and his eyes met. How embarrassing! When they passed by, they smiled tacitly, as bright as the sun.

At the moment, the campus radio is playing the song "Gardenia Blossoms": "Gardenia Blossoms!

Open and open, it is a faint youth ... "

Vera in the article is me. Living under this blue sky, we need the sunshine of family, but also the breeze of friendship. Secular eyes will always misunderstand us when we are young. How I hope my parents can understand us and give us a vast sky to fly freely.

-P.S.

In 2005, Guangdong province, the non-experimental area got full marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.

[Composition Test] Write a composition according to the topic and requirements.

Title: Once again _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Requirements: 1) Complete the topic. (2) Choose your own style. (3) Not less than 500 words. (4) The real name and school shall not appear in the text, otherwise points will be deducted.

[thinking]

The word "you" can mean several repetitions or continuations, or it can mean another one that exceeds a certain number of times. When writing, you should pay attention to the details in choosing materials and using pens, and don't use ink evenly, and don't discount the details. Candidates can write about successes, failures, awards, exams, parting, meeting, disappointment, repentance, tears, touching, shaking hands, challenging, feeling happy and regaining confidence again and again.

Facing the semi-propositional composition, students can give full play to their creativity, expand their thinking space and sublimate their thinking. An imaginative person can describe a specific situation and express vivid people, events and scenes. People who are good at thinking can express their thoughts directly through analysis and comparison; Lively and extroverted people can use relaxed style to promote the warmth in their hearts; People who are introverted and calm can rationally tap the touched heart.

In recent years, the composition proposition of Guangdong senior high school entrance examination has always been barrier-free, close to the reality of junior high school students' lives, in line with their age characteristics, so that all candidates have something to say. In order to get high marks, it is necessary to introduce running water, widely read and accumulate materials, strengthen the training of basic writing skills, and gradually carry out key breakthrough and fragmentation skills training in each link of topic examination, topic preparation, outline preparation, material selection and conception to strengthen writing skills. Write wonderful opening remarks and closing remarks, strengthen the training of beautiful paragraphs, vividly describe the details, deeply analyze the situation, guide students to observe diligently, practice their eyes, collect quotations in the examination room, gallop their imagination, and write interesting, affectionate and tasteful "three-flavor articles".

[Full score]

Borrow another bowl

"You don't study hard when you go back to school, and you give me trouble every day. You are a disgrace and useless! " I just went out and went to class happily, but her reprimand ruined the good mood of the day. What a nuisance! She is my new neighbor. On the first day she came, there was probably nothing at home, so she always borrowed it from our house. She said she borrowed it, but she didn't return it for three or five days. She borrowed countless bowls, pots and barrels. Since then, our house has become her best "borrowing office", while my furniture has been watched helplessly.

One day, I said impatiently to my mother, "This neighbor is really troublesome. He really steals from others. My beloved doll bowl will never be lent to her again! " Mom smiled: "Neighbors should take care of each other and borrow something. Besides, it's not easy for her to educate her son so patiently every day and go to work so far away! " My mother's words made me angry. ...

"Bell, bell, bell ..." The bell rang. I grabbed my schoolbag, rushed out of the classroom and went straight home. I thought it was my parents' smiling faces that greeted me when I opened the door, but I didn't expect to ask General Tie to open the door for me. I entered the room, turned on the TV, and then suddenly lay on the comfortable sofa, watching my favorite TV programs with relish. Unconsciously, I don't know.

"Ding-dong, Ding-dong ..." The doorbell rang, and I excitedly opened the door, thinking it was my mother, but I didn't expect it to be that annoying neighbor. "lend me a bowl!" I gave her a white look and went in to copy the bowl, but I only copied my beloved bowl and gave it to her eagerly. Unfortunately, I lent it to her again.

"Ding-dong, Ding-dong ..." My parents must have come back. I rushed to open the door. In front of me is a bowl of steaming delicious noodles. I was shocked. It's her-our neighbor! I see. She borrowed my bowl to cook noodles for me.

"Here, you are hungry." She looked at me with a big smile.

I slowly took the bowl of noodles, but said nothing. This bowl of noodles is really fragrant, very fragrant ... I can't say what flavor it contains.

[Full score reason]

This is a very successful narrative of the examination room. My neighbors who just moved in borrowed all my things, and they often refused to return them, which naturally aroused my dissatisfaction. At first, the candidate used a lot of pen and ink to render and created a selfish and annoying neighbor image. After school, while my parents were not at home, my neighbor borrowed it again. Unexpectedly, my neighbor "borrowed a bowl" and brought me noodles. The ending was dramatic, unexpected and reasonable. After all, distant relatives are not as good as close neighbors. This article is clear and fluent in narration, plain in language, accurate in deduction and prominent in the center, which is enough to be used as an examination composition for junior high school students.

Taste maternal love again

My pen rustled in the orange light. After working for more than an hour, I felt my head hit the table. "Are you tired?" At this moment, there is a familiar and cordial concern. When I looked up, a cup of coffee made by my mother was already on the table.

I picked up this steaming cup of coffee, smelled its attractive fragrance and tasted it again. On this quiet night, I can't help but get lost in thought. ...

Suddenly found that maternal love is like this cup of strong coffee, how great and selfless! It gives off a special fragrance, the first taste is tasteless, the second is bitter, and it is not until the last taste of its sweetness. Because its sugar is deposited at the bottom of the cup, you can only appreciate its sweetness if you taste it carefully! This is like implicit maternal love, which is revealed in my mother's words and deeds, a kind greeting, a caring voice, some kind nagging, and even severe blame ... are these all manifestations of love, but I turn a blind eye. Fifteen years ago, I began to rob my mother's milk and asked for materials from home. With the passage of time, I grew from a young and ignorant girl to a slim girl. However, my mother's temple quietly grew a silver line. She broke my heart for my growth and gave everything without complaint. It took me fifteen years to taste this cup of coffee. In the past fifteen years, how much sadness my willfulness and ignorance have brought to my mother and how much pain my rebellion has brought to you. You embraced everything with a generous and kind heart. How can I repay you?

On a quiet night, I tasted coffee again. But I tasted not only the taste of coffee, but also the maternal love like sunshine and rain.

[Full score reason]

Who doesn't believe that sometimes a drop of water is a sea, a leaf is a spring, and a cup of coffee is a life! The composition in the examination room is like this. When we savor coffee again, we can not only taste the taste of coffee, but also feel the maternal love like sunshine and rain. This article tells us that the most beautiful scenery in life is sometimes not painted with strong colors. It may be just a faint mark, but it is deeply hidden in the softest place in our hearts. Life is like this. Once you touch the password, it will flood in, soak you and soften you.

In 2005, Linyi City, Shandong Province got full marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.

Composition test questions

The mountain is silent, but it has read all the vicissitudes of life; The sea roars, but it comes from a trickle of silence. Another example is that flowers are in full bloom, dead leaves are withered, and cicadas are shelled ... Nature's mountains, rivers, plants and trees are full of wisdom, philosophy and spirituality. Advocating nature, being close to nature and blending into nature will make our life more harmonious, more emotional and more exciting.

Please write an article of about 600 words on the topic of "Understanding Nature". You can write about your experiences in getting along with nature, some emotional changes, some thoughts and feelings, and so on.

Note: 1, the topic is self-made, the style is self-selected, and the thinking is self-determined.

2. No real name, school name, place name, etc. can appear in the text.

Thinking guidance

The topic of "understanding nature" is quite broad. Facing the boundless world and infinite weather, we can't be at a loss, which requires us to turn the virtual into the real and turn the small into the big when writing. The "literary eye" of "understanding nature" is "understanding", so we should avoid the objective "reappearance" of "seeing mountains as mountains and water as water". If you only write about the superficial properties of natural things, it is not strictly speaking, it is out of line with the requirements of the topic. In order to have emotional communication and spiritual collision with readers in the composition, the author is required to be good at experiencing his own experience, immerse his heart in the pen end and pour it on the pen end. Only in this way can the feeling of "understanding nature" be concrete and visualized.

This topic determines that it is the easiest to write lyric narrative. When writing, we should first present a vibrant nature in front of us, feel the life of nature, and add our emotional experience to everything in nature. For example, climb to the top of the mountain and feel the pride that "other mountains are dwarfed under the sky". ; Facing the vast sea, I feel that "all rivers run into the sea, with great tolerance"; Look up at the starry sky and feel the vastness of the universe; Listen to insects and experience a colorful life. Secondly, it is especially suitable for this topic to tell a touching story and realize a truth. For junior high school students, it is the easiest thing to write a relationship with a tortuous story as the carrier. For example, Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey" is a good example. Thirdly, we should use various expressions to express our feelings. For example, Mao Dun's Praise of Poplar is to discuss and express feelings on the basis of narration. The content of "feelings" can be found at the end of the article or scattered in the article. Don't write a purely argumentative paper, it's difficult to grasp. The whole discussion was boring.

In short, when we "feel nature", we must highlight the word "enlightenment" and express our true feelings with the help of specific images, instead of sighing and putting on airs. It should have a deeper meaning and give people some enlightenment. Only in this way can your article be successful.

Perfect work

Peach blossoms grow old.

Peach blossom is a very common flower, but it has a special position in my heart. Seeing it reminds me of the past with a friend.

It was a spring a few years ago, and I visited a friend's house in a neighboring village. When we went for a walk in the wild together, she solemnly folded a peach blossom and handed it to me, saying, "It's for you. I hope we can be good friends forever." At that time, we were graduating from primary school, and the students wrote messages and gave gifts to each other, but no one thought of sending flowers.

I wrapped this peach blossom in plastic film and ran home. I thought, "We can't let this flower of friendship wither." After returning home, I asked my grandfather to graft it on a peach tree in my orchard and marked it. A few days later, I was delighted to find that they survived.

Another year, I have been in junior high school in Shanwai Middle School. My friend can't go to school because of his poor family. Because he is far from home and his homework is tight, I seldom go home. Gradually, I forgot about peach blossoms and peach trees.

One day in the summer vacation, grandpa brought me a basket of peaches to taste. Grandpa picked some big and red peaches for me and said, "Xin Wei, these are the peaches you brought back from your friend's house." They are really good varieties. They are big, sweet and rich. I grafted those buds onto other trees. " I was shocked and remembered the peach. Grandpa added:

I ran to the orchard, came to the peach tree and looked at the lonely peach branches. Peach branches are flourishing, and many green and red peaches are hung on them.

Looking at this fruitful achievement, I shed tears unconsciously. Who says peaches and plums are speechless? I clearly heard it say, "We will always be friends." Forgive me, my good friend, I haven't contacted you for a long time. Everyone says that "people are not vegetation, and vegetation is more affectionate than people."

I came to see you, old friend.

Full score reason

This paper is cleverly conceived, which makes the marking teacher shine in the background that countless compositions in the examination room are just vague "feelings" without plots. This civilization writes peach blossoms and secretly writes friendship. Judging from the impetuous contrast between peach blossoms and people, the feelings for plants and trees are more affectionate than people, and emotional expression comes naturally. At the end, only one sentence was used to point out the topic, but the victory was endless. The greatest advantage of this paper is that there are characters, plots and plots.

Bird's nest on the tower

I am a magpie. I was born in a big forest last spring. At that time, our home was on the branch of a big tree. There are dense green leaves on the top of our warm home to keep out the hot sun and heavy rain, and there are trees around to keep out the strong wind and dust. The gentle swing of branches makes our home a real cradle. However, just a few days after I flew out of the nest, many "people" came to the edge of the forest-this is the first time I have seen such a rude animal. They drive all kinds of vehicles with strange machines. A tree was cut down and loaded into a vehicle to be transported away in the harsh strange sound of machinery. The forest was destroyed. Fortunately, we quickly escaped from this terrible disaster. Mom and dad cried sadly for a few days, and then sent our brothers and sisters away. My mother told us with tears: "son, people are the most terrible animals." Never get too close to people. When you settle down, be sure to find the big trees that people can't climb. "

After leaving my parents, I looked everywhere. On the way, I found my lover. We looked for many places, but we couldn't settle down safely anywhere. There are too few tall trees. "Magpies nest in trees and swallows nest under the eaves." This is a common saying of human beings. However, cruel people, why not leave us a few big trees to settle down? In desperation, our eyes turned to the high line.

Those iron towers have high-voltage lines, which are taller than the big trees where I lived when I was a child. But this "iron tree" is too hard and cold. On windy days, high-voltage wires will make a sharp roar. When there is fog, the tower still emits blue sparks and crackles from time to time. Alas, how can I put my home in such a dangerous place? However, on such a terrible tower, many of my colleagues have settled down, and even several people live on some towers at the same time.

Therefore, despite the wind and the sun, despite the fog, rain and lightning, it is nothing for our own life safety and the reproduction of future generations. At least here, we will not be invaded by humans for the time being, and there is no danger of nesting.

People, it is said that you used to live in trees. It was your ancestor "Youchao" who learned from our birds! But why kill us and push us to the tower? I don't understand. Can you tell me?

Full score reason

This article is a fairy tale. At first glance, it doesn't seem to be consistent with the topic of "understanding nature". In fact, on the contrary, the topic of this article is very tight, which embodies the profound theme of how man and nature live in harmony. With the help of birds, the author puts forward a sharp question to us: We live on the same earth and are all flesh and blood. Why should we exterminate other animals?

The unique style is the main reason why this article got full marks.

Eternal Toona sinensis

Toona sinensis can be regarded as a landmark tree species in Yimeng mountain area. No matter where you go, you can almost see three or two Chinese toon trees. There are two old Chinese toon trees behind my hometown.

Although the Toona sinensis tree is very old, its newly grown leaves and stems are deep red, thick, full of juice and very delicate, and will break when pinched. After the red and tender Toona sinensis buds enter the pot, they turn into bright turquoise when heated, giving off an attractive aroma. In my childhood's eyes, scrambled eggs with Toona sinensis buds were the most beautiful dishes in the world.

After the long summer, all kinds of vegetables appeared on the dinner table one after another, and Toona sinensis was neglected. As a result, the buds of Toona sinensis that had not been picked began to stretch unscrupulously, and a few days later, the bare branches became lush. Alas, the poor tree was destroyed as soon as it sprouted. When people don't need it, it grows silently in order to provide delicious food for people when it turns green and yellow next year.

After I went to middle school, my family and I moved to the city, leaving behind the old Toona sinensis tree. During the May Day holiday this year, I returned to my hometown after three years' absence. I saw that weather-beaten old Chinese toon tree flourishing far from home. Running under the tree, I looked up at the long stems and leaves on the crown and saw a scene I had never seen before-the Chinese toon tree actually blossomed! I wiped my glasses and looked at the tree again. Really, the Toona sinensis tree has blossomed. Clusters of white flowers, like ears of wheat, are covered with branches and exude a faint fragrance. The blooming Toona sinensis flowers are the size of soybeans, and the stamens are yellow. The five petals around the stamen are white. What beautiful flowers. It turns out that Toona sinensis trees can also blossom.

Looking at the white flowers all over the tree, my heart is shaking. Old Toona sinensis, how many years have you been wronged! In the spring breeze, your budding buds are eager to spread their wings and welcome colorful time. However, everything became a beautiful dream. Spring has been missed again and again, sprouted countless times, plundered countless times, and you still contribute silently.

I bent down and bowed deeply to the old Toona sinensis tree. I will pick a bunch of the most beautiful Toona sinensis flowers and hang them on my desk to remind myself how to be a real person.

Full score reason

This paper describes an ordinary tree-Toona sinensis. Toona sinensis was plundered as soon as it germinated, and missed spring every year, so that people thought it was a tree that would not bloom, and realized the spirit of "you still contribute silently after being plundered countless times". Although the author doesn't explicitly express "borrowing things to get people" in the text, it makes us seem to see such a selfless person who doesn't care about personal gains and losses.

Duyuanshan

Outside my window, there is a distant mountain. I read to my heart's content, as if I were reading a beautiful scenery.

In the crisp autumn season, the mountains in the distance are a ray of dark blue. At dusk, a mysterious golden purple is embedded in a hazy mountain peak. In the winter morning, after a night of snowflakes, the distant mountain is a soft silver curve, so pure and noble. The spring is bright and the distant mountains are full of vitality. If there is nothing, it is basking in the warm spring breeze. In the hot summer,

I have climbed Mount Tai, Mount Huangshan and many little-known peaks. However, for all the famous mountains and rivers I have visited, no matter how long I stay, I am just a passer-by. Their unobstructed view sometimes deeply touched me. Perhaps the most beautiful scenery in the world can only exist in people's imagination.

Today, the distant mountains outside the window have strengthened my mind.

Can I get close to it? Of course, it's only a dozen miles from me. However, I can't get close to it because beauty exists in the distance. If that touch of indigo becomes a real green tree, that touch of golden purple becomes a real cottage farmland, that misty rain becomes a real mountain stream, and that silvery arc becomes a rock, then I will lose it.

I can get close to it, but I dare not get close to it. Because when I approach it, the charm of the distant mountain will disappear in an instant and disappear in the boundless distance. At that time, it will no longer be my distant mountain.

Looking at the mountains in the distance, I understand that only at a real distance can I realize the real perfection and keep it in the treasure of my life forever.

Although flowers bloom and fall, time passes like water. That distant mountain is always so beautiful and rich, treasured in my heart.

Outside my window, there is a distant mountain. I read wholeheartedly, like reading a heavy book.

Full score reason

After reading this article, the marking teacher was deeply shocked by the youth's maturity and wisdom. The ancients said, "The benevolent loves mountains, while the wise enjoy water." Looking from the window, the author found that a hill more than ten miles away had such a profound understanding of life, which was really amazing. In the author's opinion, the answer is no. Because "beauty lies in distance", the language of this article is stretched beautifully and hierarchically.

The fate of a tree

There is a row of towering trees by the river outside a village far from the city. They are Populus tomentosa. These poplars are about thirty years old. They are tall, straight and stout.

Populus tomentosa grows slowly, and no one wants to plant it now. Therefore, this row of tall poplars is particularly eye-catching. They covered the river with beautiful trees and pagoda-shaped crowns. To describe it with a common sentence in newspapers and periodicals is "standing in beautiful scenery".

There are fourteen poplars in this row. After a year's baptism of wind, frost and rain, they stand tall. In summer, they provide a cool place for farmers working in the fields and a world for children to play. Birds nest on their shoulders, and cicadas sing on their shoulders. They live freely.

This spring, a few potbellied officials came. They pointed to this row of trees and discussed excitedly. Trees don't know where these people come from, but they have only vaguely heard of "big trees entering the city", "beautifying the environment" and "image of political achievements" After these people left, more people came the next day. They brought many vehicles, cranes, trucks and excavators. the result is

I don't know what the tree thinks, but fate is not in its own hands. It took several days for the crown of the big tree to be cut off one by one, leaving only a few big forks, with a lump of soil at the foot, which was loaded into a big truck by a crane and transported into the city.

However, there is only one exception. It was not obvious when standing in a row. When a tree is removed, its cloak shape is revealed. Its lower trunk is tall and straight, but its upper crown slides in one direction like a reed in the breeze. Because of this, it became the only one left.

Facing this big tree, I thought to myself: because its image is incorrect and does not conform to the aesthetic point of view of human beings, it did not enter the city's colorful world with its companions. Is this unfortunate or lucky? For a moment, I really can't draw a conclusion. So, are people similar to this?

Later, I heard that all the 13 trees transplanted into the city died. At this time, I finally found the answer.

Full score reason

As the saying goes, "if a tree moves, it will die, and if a person moves, it will live." By comparing the abandonment and transplantation of one tree with another 13 tree, this paper reveals a theme: fate is unpredictable, and good and bad are mutually transformed. Although this view is not directly expressed by the author, it is easy to see through the author's narrative. In the face of this common thing, the author faces the following problems.

Composition examination questions and excellent works in Chongqing curriculum reform experimental area in 2005

Composition theme

Choose one of the following two questions.

(1) Title: That's a song.

Time is like a song, life is like a song. There are many touching movements in our life. Please take the one you have the most feelings for. ...

(2) Read the following story and write your own composition according to your own feelings and choices.

A young reporter went to a place in Africa for an interview, and he had to cross a desert on his way. After knowing that he was going to cross this desert, an old African man said that he would go too. The young man thought, even if he is slow, he should accompany the old man.

After crossing the desert, the old man said, "Young man, you have been running all day, and your life is too bitter!" In contrast, our life will be much calmer! The road ahead is easy, so I won't see you off any more. " Say that finish, the old man walked to the desert again. The old man's words surprised and moved the young people.

Surprisingly, the old man felt sorry for him after such a hard life! What moved me was that the old man was actually seeing him off!

The composition requirements 1) are not limited in style, not less than 500 words. (2) The real name or school name is not allowed in the text.

Thinking guidance

Composition has always been the focus of attention of society, students and parents because of its high score. A good composition topic should be close to students and life, and help to activate students' life accumulation, so that students can express their unique feelings and real experiences about nature, society and life in a personalized and creative way. This year's senior high school entrance examination composition proposition in the experimental area of curriculum reform has a good guiding role in guiding students to understand life and express their spirit.

Composition title 1: It's a song. This topic should be said to be simple and meaningful. To do this well, we must have an accurate grasp of the topic. Three key words should be grasped when examining the questions: song, that and a song. The "song" here is obviously a figurative song, which is not realistic. It is a metaphor for events, scenes and emotions in life, life and years. It can be a scene, such as a family walking down the street; Can express an emotion, affection is like a song, friendship is like a song; It can also be a historical review, writing a distant and desolate song; You can also read a literary work to interpret emotions. "One song" means that the selected material is not complicated, either writing one material or integrating multiple materials, otherwise it may not be "one song" but "multiple songs".