1 first, comment on a thing and tell its phenomenon.

2. Secondly, the reason, origin and social impact of the problem are brought out. It is best to have news reports or articles as arguments, which can be convincing.

Then comment on this matter, and tell your views, feelings and analysis on this matter, as well as the degree of harm to society.

Finally, draw a conclusion about this matter, put forward a solution or make an appeal to attract more people's attention.

Second, how to see the essence through the phenomenon

"Seeing the essence through the phenomenon" is one of the requirements of the college entrance examination for the development of graded composition. The new insights are surprising. After all, they are temporary and superficial. If you want to make people moving, thoughtful and unforgettable, you must dig deep and have profound ideas. This is "unexpected". Others only see the superficial phenomenon, but you see the hidden essence; Others can only "know why", but you can "know why" This can enlighten people, make people think, make people think. So, how can we see the essence through the phenomenon?

1, exploring and explaining the background of the phenomenon;

2. Explore and explain the similarities and differences of phenomena;

3. Explore and explain the special meaning of the phenomenon;

4. Deduct from special to general, and connect with real life;