1, metaphor: "The water in Lijiang River is so green, as if it were a flawless jade"; "Like an old man, like a giant elephant, like a camel"; Like a green barrier, like a new bamboo.

2. Contrast: "The water in Lijiang River is so quiet ... the water in Lijiang River is so clear ... the water in Lijiang River is so green ..."; The mountains in Guilin are really strange ... the mountains in Guilin are really beautiful ... the mountains in Guilin are really dangerous.

3. Repetition: "The water truth of Lijiang …" and "The mountain truth of Guilin …" were repeatedly sung, expressing strong feelings of praising Guilin's landscape.

4. Setting off: The water of Lijiang River is set off by the sea and West Lake, and the mountains of Guilin are set off by Mount Tai and Xiangshan, which highlights the characteristics of Guilin's landscape.

5. Quotations: At the beginning, it is quoted that "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" and at the end, it is quoted that "people are above the blue waves and travel in the world of picture scrolls".

6. Truth: Use the words at the end of the previous sentence as the beginning of the next sentence, such as "The water in Lijiang River is so quiet, so quiet ... The water in Lijiang River is so clear, so clear ... The water in Lijiang River is so green, so green ...". The previous sentences summarize the characteristics of "quietness", "clearness" and "greenness", while the following sentences describe "quietness", "clearness" and "greenness" in turn, which enhances the expression effect of the language.

7. Duality: for example, "like a green barrier, like a newborn bamboo shoot"; Clouds and dreams in the air, green trees and red flowers in the mountains.

The full text mainly uses whole sentences (parallelism sentences, antithesis sentences, etc. ) And it also uses loose sentences, which have both the beauty of neat rhythm and the beauty of flexible and diverse changes.

Guilin Landscape is an elegant prose by Lao She, and the full text is as follows:

People say, "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world." We took a wooden boat, rippled on the Lijiang River and enjoyed the scenery of Guilin.

I have seen the magnificent sea and the mirror-like West Lake, but I have never seen such water as Lijiang River. The water in Lijiang River is so quiet that you can't feel it flowing. The water in Lijiang River is very clear, and you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. The water in Lijiang River is so green, as if it were a flawless jade. A series of waterlines are displayed by the microwave excited by the paddle, which makes you feel that the ship is moving forward and the shore is retreating.

I have climbed the majestic Mount Tai and visited the Red Leaves Fragrant Hills, but I have never seen the mountains around Guilin. The mountains in Guilin are really strange. They rose one after another, unconnected with each other, like old people, like giant elephants, like camels, and the peaks were listed in various ways. The mountains in Guilin are really beautiful, like a green barrier, like new shoots, brightly colored, reaching the water surface of the reflection; The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The dangerous peaks stand tall and the rocks are rugged. It seems that if you are not careful, you will fall.

This mountain is surrounded by this water, which reflects this mountain. In addition, there are clouds in the air, green trees and red flowers in the mountains, and bamboo rafts on the river, which makes you seem to enter a continuous picture. It's really "the boat is above the blue waves, and people are swimming in the picture world".