Seven, writing (60 points)
22. Read the following materials and write as required (60 points).
There is a big tree with lush foliage and shade everywhere, which is the favorite resting place for birds and animals. Birds and animals often tell stories about their travels. Hearing this, the tree asked the birds to travel. The bird said that the tree had no wings and refused. Please ask the animals for help. The animals said that the tree had no legs and refused. The tree decided to find a way by itself. It bears sweet fruit, which contains seeds. Birds and animals eat fruits, and the seeds of big trees spread all over the world.
Please write a narrative or argumentative essay of not less than 800 words from your own point of view according to the above materials.
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"There's a big tree, leafy and full of shade, which is the favorite resting place for birds and animals. Birds and animals talk about their experiences of traveling around. The tree also wants to travel, so he asks birds and animals for help. The bird said, you have no wings, and he refused. The tree wants to ask animals for help. The beast said, you have no legs, and you refused. So, the tree decided to find a way. It bears sweet fruit, which contains seeds. After the fruit was eaten by animals, the seeds of big trees spread all over the world. "
I saw this material in the composition of Hunan college entrance examination this year. How do you think you can get high marks?
"The world is so big, I want to see it." This hot topic on the Internet extends to this year's college entrance examination composition in Hunan, that is, "The world is so big, trees want to see it."
When the composition problem came out, it caused controversy among all parties. Chinese teachers agree that fables with philosophy are the easiest subjects for candidates to master. This year's college entrance examination composition is not very difficult in terms of conception. Students' scores may mainly depend on the text and the skills of layout and composition.
Fable materials are familiar to candidates.
It's easy to understand this idea.
Judging from this material of Hunan college entrance examination this year, there are many ideas. Many senior three Chinese teachers also said that fable-like material composition questions are usually trained more, which is easier to deal with and easier to grasp ideas.
Judging from the composition information fed back by several college entrance examination candidates, the reporters do have various opinions. Some candidates start with realizing their ideals, overcoming difficulties and perseverance, while others start with acknowledging their own disadvantages, persisting in their own advantages and seeking ways to achieve their goals; Some candidates aim at sharing and cooperation and achieve a win-win situation through cooperation with others; Some candidates regard themselves as "a gentleman who is good at making use of external conditions to achieve their goals". ...
High marks mainly depend on writing skills and layout skills.
Teacher Shu Bin, the leader of the Chinese lesson preparation for senior three in Changsha No.1 Middle School, said that this year's composition topics in Hunan are relatively easy to write, and students have a lot of room to play. As long as the subject of this contact's life and life perception is accurate and not off topic, the score will not be very low. "The difference in composition is mainly in writing skills and layout skills, depending on whether the structure of the article is complete or not." Teacher Shu Bin said.
"The philosophies and implications contained in the materials are rich and varied. Our ideas based on this can be: don't be influenced by the secular view of talents, but fully understand and tap our own potential and advantages; There are thousands of paths to success. The key is to be good at discovery and innovation, and turn your own disadvantages into advantages. Individuals with different characteristics, even countries and nations, have their own advantages and disadvantages. Only by learning from each other's strengths and cooperating with each other can we win. Wait. " Zhong Wuwei, a senior Chinese teacher at Changsha Lushan International Experimental School and a teacher who has been engaged in composition teaching and research for the college entrance examination for a long time, said.
Famous works
The magic of creativity
Wang (writer)
A big tree, it wants to travel far, birds and animals refuse to help it, and it also laughs at it without wings, legs and feet. What should I do with this big tree? If it flinches, it means that those friends are completely right to laugh at it. It can only paint the ground as a prison forever. If it throws in the towel in public, it is equivalent to stubbing out its dream in its fingers, and it is really extremely timid. It is very clear that if you want to fly without wings and spread like wildfire, you must come up with ideas to bear sweet fruits on the branches so that birds can peck and animals can eat them. These familiar "postmen" and "volunteers" will be happy to spread seeds for it. Once the seeds take root in different parts of the world and settle down, you can enjoy all kinds of scenery and meet all kinds of new friends, and the beautiful journey will continue to extend and then extend.
Creativity is really powerful and invincible. It can help the big tree win by surprise and get what it wants.
The "big tree" that walks the world with creativity is not unique. Their "travel" never stops, and their footprints are all over the world. For example, in just 30 years, Apple Inc., a world technology company, has acted as a "postman" and "volunteer" and spread its "seeds" all over the world. I think if both Eskimos in the Arctic and penguins in the Antarctic can comment on the world as big as #from 20 15, and trees want to see it, it seems that Apple will be the first choice when using electronic products.
It's hard to imagine that when Apple started, there were only three partners, Jobs, Wozniak and Wayne. They assembled 50 desktop computers in the garage and sold them out. At that time, Jobs saw the broad growth space and development prospects of personal computers and home computers with a forward-looking vision, so he strongly advocated that Apple computers must work hard on practicality, convenience and personalization. With its own creativity, Apple has risen rapidly in Silicon Valley and grown into a high-profile big brand technology company. Its success is due to the continuous superposition and accumulation of ideas. This big tree has long been flourishing and covered with greenery. Is "apple" sweet? All fruit powder will answer you "yes" the first time. It has come a long way, and it can go further. Why? With its continuous innovation, creativity is the magical fruit of this big tree.
Since the new century, China manufacturing has also turned a new page, and the success of Zhuhai Gree Electric Company is an example. Many companies can do air conditioning, but Zhuhai Gree Electric Company has the most core technology, and Gree air conditioning is the most energy-saving and environmentally friendly, which has long been well known. Now, Gree has been recognized as a big tree, and the creative wand guides the representatives made in China to the world.
In this era of "innovation is the first productivity and the first competitiveness", if you want to go further, see better scenery and make more friends, you can't stick to the rules and be complacent. If we draw a prison and rest in the credit book, we will hold our dreams in our fingers. Only creativity can make us do anything well and make any career bigger and stronger. For this reason, our brain memory must reserve enough magic space for curiosity and imagination.
Micro-evaluation and fast reading
@ 京京京京京: I like this question very much. I just brushed the Hunan college entrance examination questions, and I feel I can get high marks!
@ _ Nancy _ _: Different people have different ways of living, and they will stand on their own feet according to their own talents.
@ Walk to new york 2020: There may be some things that need outside help to achieve, and there is more than one way to success. Another way and thinking may be more helpful to success.
@ Xinyaruolan 125: Everyone has his own value. Who is a showman, knows how to pay, knows how to empathize, and has his own dreams, because you will have hope if you persist!
The tree knows the answer
Huang (Senior Editor)
Suddenly, I was in awe of a tree.
Three generations of gentlemen. Educating people with trees is the ancient wisdom of the unity of man and nature. In the west, IELTS Bell said more poetically: "Education is a cloud pushing another cloud, a tree shaking another tree, and a soul awakening another soul."
The way of education is also the way of life; The beauty of education is also the beauty of life.
Philosophers say that there are no two identical leaves in the world. Isn't that talking about the uniqueness of individual life?
Flowers in spring, leaves in summer and fruits in autumn are natural order and natural methods. Who expects spring to do "anti-season" things in summer or autumn and winter? Isn't it ridiculous to go against the sky?
Spring leaves are born, which is vigorous beauty; Autumn leaves have fallen. Is that another kind of beauty?
Trees are philosophers, philosophers without language.
The eternal attitude of a teacher is to stand in a tree.
Trees, the watchers of nature. Even though the heart of the whole world is chasing, running, wandering and drifting, the tree is born without "feet" to migrate. Its "progress" is in its lush eyes, in its roots that go deep into the cracks in the soil or rocks, and in its beautiful language of spring flowers and autumn fruits.
Please don't think that such a "station" is an eternal loneliness and helplessness. Trees, with their static water depth, always flow to an extremely open space.
This tree will stand here forever.
It doesn't move, but his world is full of countless beautiful encounters. The morning breeze whispers to its leaves, the afternoon white clouds look at it from a distance, birds sing among its branches, but its roots and stems have become strong and powerful in the fine cutting and nourishment of the earth, becoming a lush cultural landscape.
Such a tree cannot migrate freely in physical space, however, it magically migrates in the spiritual world of human beings.
One day, we will be surprised to find that those children, those growing teenagers and young people, because of the existence of these trees, their hearts will always be green, and everyone has planted a tree in their hearts; In other words, everyone is a tree.
What is a good education like?
Tree, know the answer.