According to the information you provided, this article should be regarded as a narrative, because both the content and the structure are close to the narrative. If you quote too many historical figures, it will give people the illusion of argumentative writing. However, an argumentative essay must have a clear argument, and your article should say no, so that it will not be classified as an argumentative essay.

Generally speaking, it's not bad. Strictly speaking, 7 or 8 points will be deducted.

The teacher is very direct, thank you for understanding.