Comment on composition correction (1)
Can lead a reasonable imagination and embody a meaningful philosophy? The writing is fluent and concise, which gives full play to one's imagination. Is it a good one? The article is elegant, fluent and clear-cut, especially the humor and wit of the characters' language, and the use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.
There are many excellent sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
This article may not be particularly attractive in plot, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the image of the role well, on the other hand, the language is vivid and rich, and the life atmosphere is strong, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.
What is the article based on? For the ending, it is concise and memorable.
The full-text narrative is concentrated, with no branches, concise and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings.
By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.
The language is concise, the center is clear, the idea is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.
It is really commendable to write the inner activities of the characters vividly and leave a deep impression on people.
The article is coordinated from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.
The full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching, and the beginning is extraordinary.
The article is realistic, stereoscopic, readable and interesting. Fairy tales, with keen social insight, reflect the dark side of reality and vivid language, depict a series of greedy existence, which is profound.
Is this article based on? For clues, the articles on the right to use are coherent, smooth and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after, the language of the critical article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.
The article is well-founded, persuasive, outstanding in personality, natural in context change, clear in organization, coordinated from beginning to end, focused at the end, and highlights the central idea.
Is the author right? Careful observation, delicate description, vivid language and innovative expression.
The full-text language is concise and natural in structure. The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the beginning and end echo is clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.
In this article, a series of verbs representing the actions of characters are used accurately and appropriately.
This paper is written in the first person, which makes? It has great advantages, plays a good role in characterization and expression center, and is friendly, natural and credible to read, with clear thinking and lively rhythm.
The process of this paper is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author adds appropriate psychological description to the narrative, which fully expresses?
The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, like a clear spring. The finish line plays the role of finishing touch.
The article is vivid, sincere and special? The article on the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.
The narrative is clear, the verbs are used correctly, and the metaphor is appropriate and vivid. It is suggested that you can educate after reading it.
Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.
This paper has three main advantages: 1 This paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and be written completely. This process. 2. The structure is rigorous and focused. 3. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.
Comments on composition correction (2)
There are three highlights in this argumentative paper. First, the language is concise and the logic argument is strong. ? After all, an inch of land can be left in the mountains to soar; The sea must finally accept a trickle to be boundless. ? Second, the case is typical and persuasive. Third, the reason is reasonable and the logical argument is strong.
This paper skillfully uses the famous classical Chinese articles in high school textbooks to express the meaning that everyone should do their job well. The handy ability reflects the author's extraordinary language control ability; The creation of lofty artistic conception shows the author's extraordinary talent. Such a masterpiece should be appreciated by the public!
This article is a wonderful and normative argumentative paper. Language and structure are very good at using neat sentences or paragraphs. We might as well learn from the author's concise and vivid examples and refined sentences, supplemented by elegant written language with strong literary color. How about one? Okay？ Good word!
This paper is a typical argumentative essay with parallel structure. Life needs pain, and there is hope with pain. ? One sentence dominates the full text, with clear structure, profound content, rich examples, conciseness and power. Rich examples are worth learning.
Cut to the chase? Faith will overcome everything in the end? In the middle, concise language and examples are used to show the great power of will. What is particularly commendable is that there is appropriate language between each example, and the transition is ingenious and natural. The language is well-founded, forceful and vivid.
At the beginning of the article, the theme is indicated by writing languages and works from all over the world. We should learn to communicate for light up the world tomorrow. Famous poets at all times and all over the world can use it freely, and at the same time cite the deeds of Kyle Polo to demonstrate it. The arguments are full, eloquent and clear-cut, which is a masterpiece.
As an argumentative essay, what is the starting point of the exercise? Did people who achieved great things in ancient times have no wisdom and courage? The center is very clear. This paper adopts the structure of total score plus total score. Be brave in front of wisdom, and finally put forward both wisdom and courage in order to stand on the present? Clear thinking, reasonable structure, concise language, not bad.
This article begins with parallelism, which is very literary. Then concentrate on expressing your mind, show determination and courage to overcome difficulties, and appreciate successful people who can ferry their dreams. Reading through whole sentences and short sentences shows the author's profound cultural accumulation and extraordinary language accomplishment.
This is a wonderful argumentative paper. Who is the author? As easy as a car? This sentence comes straight to the point and raises the topic. Then explain the meaning and make people think. The transition is natural, and the example is typical. The level of demonstration is clear and the structure is clear. From the individual to the country, the discussion is profound and thought-provoking.
This argumentative paper is clear-cut and straight to the point? The key to our work is cooperation? Views. The author gives an example, which makes sense in the discussion. This paper discusses the importance of cooperation from both positive and negative aspects, especially the author's transition to nature. Finally, it discusses that learning should also pay attention to the cooperation with practice, so that there will be long-term progress.
What is the title of this argumentative essay? The value of life? At the beginning of the paper, a set of parallelism sentences leads to the following, and the main body is demonstrated concretely and forcefully through metaphors and examples, and at the end, a set of parallelism sentences echoes the beginning, which is persuasive and enlightening.
Composition correction comments (3)
Reflection on the Romance of the Three Kingdoms: This is a reflection on the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. The author's summary of the story is concise and clear, and he can clearly put forward his own views on the basis of quoting classics? We live not only in a hundred years' life, but also in a thousand years' history? . The full-text language is fluent, natural and vivid, which is a good exercise.
Reflections on the Five Heroes of Langya Mountain: This is a reflection on the Five Heroes of Langya Mountain. The author's summary of the story is concise and clear, and he can clearly put forward his own views on the basis of quoting classics? We should study hard to prepare for the future and become the pillars of the country? The full-text language is fluent, natural and vivid, which is a good exercise.
Reflections on Walden Lake: How does the author feel after reading Walden Lake? A cool lake has already merged into my heart, and it is crystal clear. It will cleanse my mind like autumn water, free from dust? Walden is really an amateur textbook. I like this review very much. Evaluation, feelings and the original text are organically combined, and the language is beautiful, like a beautiful essay, which is worth recommending.
Comments on "There will always be a tear to make us grow up instantly": This is a comment on "There will always be a tear to make us grow up instantly". The author told a touching story in meticulous language. This article is a narrative and discussion, with true feelings and heartfelt words. At the end, the feelings are sublimated, the theme is deepened, and the lyricism is very strong. The deficiency lies in the unreasonable structure of the article.
After reading the flowers: This is an article taken from the reader (1997). Firstly, the main content of this paper is briefly summarized, and then the material viewpoint is cited to make a concrete exposition in combination with the reality. In the end, the author understood a truth: life is like a flower, strong and fragile. The article is profound, rich in connotation and true and natural.
Helen? Evaluation of Keller's biography: This review mainly describes Helen Keller and Sullivan in detail, full of strong admiration for Helen Keller and affirmation of her success, and also expresses the author's praise for her selfless love. The language is kind and natural and infectious.
Reflection on the Water Margin: This is a reflection on the Water Margin. First of all, it briefly summarizes the main contents for us. Then cite examples in the book and expound the word loyalty and righteousness in combination with reality. Finally, what did the author learn from it? With a strong sense of justice, can you risk your life for justice and truth? Charm.
Reflections on the education of love This article is a reflection. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. There is a close relationship between reading and feeling among young writers. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion, true and credible, and interesting to read.
Comment on staying away from cherries: This is a comment on staying away from cherries. First of all, it briefly summarizes the main contents of this book for us, and then makes a concrete exposition according to the viewpoint and reality of the material. Finally, the author analyzes the writing style of this book, which shows the author's love for this book.