First, good sentences and paragraphs:

1. If the blackboard is a piece of Wang Yang sea, then the teacher is a sailor on the sea. At the moment when the bell rings, you paddle the textbooks moored in the harbor like a boat with the teacher's whip. On the desk, problems piled up. Your gestures are lifelike, like a flying bird, waving a beautiful arc on the podium-the ship passes by ... the sky is like a cloud.

2. Hope comes from disappointment, and rise begins with worry. As a poet said, people who feel hungry must digest well, people who feel anxious must be efficient, and people who feel crisis must make rapid progress.

Don't wander under the tree, don't meditate in the rain, and don't cry in the dark. Look forward, don't look back. As long as you dare to face it and look up, you will find that the haze of achievements is just a short rainy season. Looking ahead, there is still a bright day, and people will not feel confused.

4. The soft sunshine hangs obliquely on the branches and leaves of pine and cypress, which looks so quiet and solemn. On the green lawn and the white cement road, the footsteps are so light, but everyone's heart is so excited and full of thoughts.

The ocean of life is not as blue as Xizi Lake. As time goes by, it is sometimes as calm as a mirror, sometimes the waves splash, and sometimes the waves soar into the sky ... People often become stronger after being tested by big winds and waves.

6. When you are immersed in warm air, birds and flowers, green mountains and green waters, fertile fields, you will be intoxicated; When you face the golden autumn as fruitful as gold, you will be ecstatic. Have you ever thought that the abundant spring scenery is heroic after severe cold baptism, but the beautiful autumn scenery is the crystallization after the summer heat melts? .....................................................................................................................

7. If you want to harvest fruits in the golden autumn, you should roll up your trouser legs in the early spring when the chill invades people, and make unremitting efforts to open up wasteland, sow seeds and cultivate until the day of harvest.

8. Life is a winding path in the mountains, with bumps on the side and cliffs on the side. If you fall, cry if you want. What are you afraid of? Stop pretending! This is honesty, not weakness, because crying does not affect the road, but it can increase a sense of caution. Flowers are in full bloom and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, smile happily, don't pretend to be reserved! This is honesty, not pride, because smiling does not affect the road, but can increase self-confidence.

9. Love is the sunshine in winter. People who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world. Love is a clear spring in the desert, and people who are on the verge of despair have seen the hope of life; Love is a shower sprinkled on the long-term arid land, which makes the lonely and helpless people get spiritual comfort immediately. .......................................................................................................................................................

10, days always pass through your fingertips like spun yarn and slip away inadvertently. Those sorrows and misapplications, washed away by the fleeting time, with the waves passing away gently, will leave the joy and smile in the depths of memory forever.

1 1, the melancholy mood vanished.

12, faded memory.

13, another peaceful home is smoking.

14, some memories are burned, some memories are buried in the bottom of my heart, and the age of innocence is like flowing water across the golden age.

15, I want to melt in the pink peach petals and erase the worries in your heart all day.

16, I completely read my parents' hearts.

17, maternal love is a masterpiece that I can't finish reading all my life; Motherly love is the sky I can never fly out of. .....................................................................................................................................................................

18, when the yellow autumn leaves are swaying in the wind and floating outside the school gate in late autumn. In the moonlight, my father's shadow is very long, and my skinny father is wrapped in a huge windbreaker, and my heart is sour. .......................................................................................................

19, the true feelings in the world are like a big net, always warming people's hearts, just like maternal love, endless.

20. Time is a poem, a philosophical poem of the richest man. Time is a camel carrying the dreams of countless people.

2 1, the fate of the ship lies in drifting; The fate of sails lies in chasing the wind and waves; The fate of life lies in grasping, grasping and believing in life, so as to have a clear conscience of youth. ......................................................................................................................................................

22. Past events are like songs. In the journey of life, despite ups and downs and full of regrets, the beauty of youth has not been lost. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let's remember this sentence: I won't cry if I miss the sun, otherwise I will miss the moon and stars.

If you fail in life, please don't write sad tears on your face. Failure is also a kind of gain. The most important thing in life is to have full courage and the courage to start a business.

24, once thought that a helpless cry, the memo is all the vicissitudes of the world; A small setback and a memo are all failures in life. I was told when I was fourteen. ...

25. The moonlight is quiet. Raindrops pattered on the hut. In the dim light, mother sewed the homeless clothes tightly. Suddenly, a cold wind squeezed into the window gap of the hut. My mother seems to have caught a cold and coughed a few times with deep fatigue. I woke up in my dream and looked at my old mother in the light. ...

26. At night, the spring breeze blows gently. I sat on the colorful steps of falling into English with my chin cupped, and another unforgettable thing came to my mind.

Then there are the arguments and arguments of the argumentative paper:

On argumentative writing combined with model essays

According to an old legend, Wang Cheng played a joke on his brother with a plane leaf and said, "Take this leaf to seal you." Duke Zhou came in to congratulate him. Wang Cheng said: "This is a joke." Duke Zhou said, "The son of heaven can't joke." So Wang Cheng sealed the land of the Tang Dynasty to his younger brother.

I don't think this is right. If Wang Di should seal it, the Duke of Zhou should tell Wang Cheng in time that it can't be faked just for joking. If Wang Di shouldn't seal it, the Duke of Zhou faked it because of banter, and sealed the land of Tang to a child and let him be a monarch there. Is it a saint? Besides, the Duke of Zhou doesn't think that the son of heaven should talk nonsense, and he must do whatever he says. If the King of Qi made fun of the plane leaf and the imperial eunuch, did the Duke of Zhou want him to do the same?

The king's morality depends on what he does. What he did was wrong, even if he corrected it ten times. He must do it right, what's more, he is obviously joking. If you are joking, you must implement it, that is, the duke of Zhou taught the king to do something wrong.

I think Duke Zhou should help him become a moral king in peacetime, and he should not take this opportunity to say such things. What's more, we shouldn't make him look like an ox or a horse. If he does this, he is sure to fail. Even between his family and his son, not to mention between the monarch and his subjects. ……

This is Liu Zongyuan's comment on an event recorded in Historical Records Jin Shijia's Biography. The following is an excerpt.

The level of the article is very clear, and the theme of the article, namely the legend of the ancients, is put forward concisely from the beginning.

This topic was highly targeted at that time. At that time, the struggle between reformists and conservatives in the imperial court was fierce, and both factions wanted to promote their own ideas by influencing the emperor. Therefore, under the specific historical conditions at that time, it is very meaningful to choose such a topic.

The argument of the article, the first sentence of the second paragraph, is very concise and clear. This is the judgment of the topic and the center of the whole article. With such a center, materials can be organized in an orderly way.

Look at its arguments. There are five main arguments in this paper: the first one is how to seal it; The second is how to seal improperly; The third is that if it is wrong, it doesn't matter if it is changed ten times; The fourth is to make a joke, that is, to teach the king to do something wrong; The fifth is to help the king what to do and what not to do. These five arguments are not only sufficient, but also to the point.

The argument of the article is also very strong. It uses deductive method, first from what should be sealed and what should not be sealed, then from what Wang should and should not do when he is wrong, and finally from what Wang should and should not do to make a more powerful rebuttal.

The whole article presents a step-by-step and more powerful momentum.

Problems in argumentative writing

1. Problems and avoidance methods

When primary school students write argumentative essays, there are two main problems: one is the lack of argumentation, and the other is the lack of rigorous argumentation and insufficient strength.

The argument is insufficient, mainly because the materials used to prove the argument are insufficient, or the materials used in the article lack typicality. The main reason for this problem is that there is no serious and in-depth analysis of the topic. We know that every topic has a specific essence, and there are also various aspects to express the essence. Only by refuting or proving the essence of the problem and showing the main aspects of the essence can the article produce strong persuasiveness. This article can only be regarded as a success. Therefore, after determining the title of the article, we should first carefully analyze the questions raised in the title to see what its essence is, what are the main aspects of showing the essence, and where is the focus of discussion. After considering these problems clearly, we can establish an argument and choose the one that best illustrates the problem.

The debate about Tung Ye's "sealing brothers" is excellent in dealing with these problems. It is not difficult to see that the essence of the topic is that the Duke of Zhou thinks that what the monarch says must be done, while the main aspect of the essence of performance is that the Duke of Zhou thinks that even joking must be done. Liu Zongyuan grasped the essence of the problem and the main aspects of the performance of the essence, and refuted it from five aspects in turn, refuting Zhou Gong's wrong practice, so that it no longer had any untenable basis.

The argument is not rigorous and lacks strength, mainly because the materials are not well organized, which makes the argument not play its due role. So, how can we put the materials in order? In addition to paying attention to the structural method we talked about earlier (that is, the first is always divided; Divide first and then total; Except for pushing. ), but also pay attention to the logical arrangement of materials. Argumentative writing is different from narrative writing, and the organization of materials should be arranged according to the logical connection of things. Generally speaking, it is arranged in the order of asking questions, analyzing problems and solving problems.

Asking questions, that is, the beginning of the article, is mainly to ask questions and clarify arguments, so that readers can have a general understanding of the content to be discussed in the article and attract attention.

Analysis of problems is the key part of argument, and the main task is to analyze problems and organize arguments to prove the correctness or refute the mistakes of arguments. This part should consider the order of discussion and persuasion effect according to the internal laws of things.

Solving the problem, that is, the conclusion of the article, is usually the end of the article. This part is a synthesis and generalization of the full text, which should also be paid attention to. A good ending, or a summary of the full text, highlighting the argument; Or take care of the last article, rigorous and thoughtful, or come to an abrupt end, clean and neat; Or it is endless and thought-provoking.

Within each part, materials should also be arranged according to the needs of expressing arguments and the center of some parts. Only in this way can the whole article be like a tall and straight tree with lush foliage.

The argument of "Tung Ye Feng Xiong Debate" is worth learning. The article comes straight to the point, puts forward the question concisely, and then enters the analysis stage. The text is concise, but the pen is sharp and the sentence is to the point. After refuting the wrong practice of Duke Zhou, he came to an abrupt end and left his thoughts behind, which was very crisp and neat.

I hope it helps you.