There is no one in the clear sky in Wan Li, and a crane, Ling Yunfei, has aroused my meditation on the blue sky. Don't you think your eyes are glowing? Yes, it's against the rules.
Since ancient times, we have said that autumn must be called "cold", and the sadness in our eyes masks the rich beauty and mature beauty that autumn really contains. Yes, spring is charming and colorful; In full bloom in summer; But why must the autumn sunset be regarded as a dying day? ("Breaking the routine") Second, the starting point of the quotation is high. For example, the essay entitled "Rich and colorful answers" begins with: "Ask what is in the world and teach people life and death."
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But the answers of different families are as different as everyone's face.
("What is love in the world") Third, make a comparison and create momentum. For example, the essay titled "Freedom" begins: the seeds break through the imprisonment of rock formations and face the light; The eagle went through the storm and flew into the sky; The steed broke through the fetters and galloped in Yuan Ye; Haiyan rushed to a more violent storm. Fourth, clever questions are thought-provoking. For example, the essay titled "Rich and colorful answers" begins: What comes quietly, leaving no trace, but arouses all kinds of light dances? What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing? What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season? What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time."
Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind." The tramp said, "This is just a dream."
(Happiness with Answers) 5. Cleverly speaking, the artistic conception is open. For example, the composition with the title of "sincerity" begins with: sincerity is like a ray of sunshine in spring, which makes people yearn for it and open their hearts to accept it; Like a piece of watermelon in summer, the entrance is sweet; Like the fiery maple leaf in autumn, it evokes people's infinite concern; Like snowflakes flying all over the sky in winter, it is always so pure. (Honesty-Forever Green Card) 6. The inscription reveals the main idea. For example, the essay titled "Feeling Life" begins: there is no stalwart tree, but there can be green grass; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! -Inscription (Stars at Night)? Seven, the story interesting image.
2. How to write a beautiful and attractive composition at the beginning Generally speaking, we should master the following principles: ① Jane: The ancients used the phoenix head to describe the beginning of an article, which shows the importance of brevity and the urgency of the college entrance examination time. Therefore, it is more important to look at the short opening.
2 love beauty: everyone has a love of beauty. If the beginning of the article gives people a sense of beauty, or literary talent, or profound artistic conception, or full of interest, then it will definitely impress the marking teacher's heart.
③ Odd: Everyone is curious. If we can grasp this point and design according to it, there will be suspense, doubt and contradiction, and the effect is self-evident. Rationality: Philosophy is a depth and a height.
Not everyone can easily achieve it. If so, what effect will it have? The following two styles of narration and discussion introduce several opening methods. 1, the first sentence of the narrative method at the beginning (1) is getting colder and farther away from us.
("Cold Taste") (2) Emphasize that the resident law will never forget the experience of childhood. (Walking is a Lantern) (3) When it comes to Switzerland, watches, sabers and chocolates, what do you think of? Snow mountain, green land, lakes and mountains? Neutrality and welfare Living and working in peace and contentment, Xanadu? ("Heaven is Man-made") (4) A method of absorbing souls Sometimes people we think we know don't.
("Why Hu Shi was besieged") (5) Creating rhyme method Guisheng Academy blue tile red wall, light moonlight, dew all night, refreshing fragrance. ("Dream of Drama") (6) Why is the orientation method called Big Wild Goose Pagoda? ("Wild Goose Pagoda") (7) If you want to promote Dharma first, your mother is a tiger.
Extremely fierce, not only for her five sons, but also for my father. We are all afraid of her.
("I already know you today") (8) Comparative introduction Fa Xiu is a girl in the mountains, but she always likes to see the cities outside the mountains. ("Xiuer") (9) Sudden narrative method The director brought another boy.
(The tenth tramp) (10) Quoting a famous saying, someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is colorful. Nietzsche thought: "The happiest person is one who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms and stones together, but not disgusting."
The stoics believe that "having unlimited wealth and power and being able to handle things calmly is the real happiness." ("The answer is rich and colorful") (1 1) Clever use of lecture time: September 2000 15 Objective: To study and discuss "being an honest person" and educate children to "be an honest person" with "honest children" as the content.
Lecture content: ..... (Handout) 2. The argumentative essay starting method (1) gets to the point. Everything is the unity of phenomenon and essence, and the essence can be understood through phenomenon. However, the analysis of things must first put aside the troubles of emotional factors.
Wang Xizhi, a famous calligrapher in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, once passed by a market and saw a girl cooking pancakes skillfully, quickly, well and beautifully. Seeing this scene, Wang Xizhi ... ("How can a thousand people have a skill?") (3) Introduction to Comics I have seen such a touching cartoon: under a coconut tree, an old man who has experienced many vicissitudes lovingly watched three babies lying side by side in a hammock and prayed to God: "God! I love them, please give them a bowl of rice every day! Don't give them sin. "
("Kopis Cut Rope, Bridge Crossing People") (4) Clever use of inscription to establish a rational balance between emotion and cognition! -Inscription ("Emotion * Reason * Cognition") (5) The famous saying induction "I took my life with a coffee spoon." This is a famous saying in the early poems of American poet Eliot.
It's a good way to describe the viciousness of some habits. Some habits are actually long-standing inertia, no less than people's opium.
("Speaking Habits") (6) With the help of rhetoric, there are mountains and valleys on the earth, and there are noble and humble people on the earth. The world is full of smoke and fog in secular desires, and all the family, friendship and love ... are like winds from all directions hanging over this smoky world.
Standing between heaven and earth, who can get rid of the fetters of the world of mortals, who can put aside all vulgar thoughts? ("Emotion and Cognition") (7) The habit of explaining the problem is a behavioral feature or tendency formed over time. China people have many habits, including behavioral habits and ideological habits.
For example, we used to supply non-staple food at cost, we used to keep things from rising in price, we used to rank according to seniority, and we used to produce goods according to the instructions of leaders ... (Habit) (8) How do you view the gains and losses of suspense method? The key depends on why you gain and why you lose. If you sacrifice some personal interests for the benefit of the country and the people, such a "loss" is worthwhile. On the contrary, in order to pursue personal interests, at the expense of the interests of the country and the people, the price of this "income" is despised and reviled! ("On Gains and Losses") (9) Demonstration of the First Law When the British philosopher Russell Wah gave a lecture, he gave the students a question: 2+2=? At that time, the audience was silent and full of people.
In fact, this is a question that even primary school students can answer, but the audience never expected that the answer would be so simple, so no one answered. People are superstitious about authority and often lose their self-assertion. They should have their own minds, open their eyes, use their brains and think independently.
Do not be superstitious about authority.
3. How to write the beginning and end of the landscape composition? A new campus, like our mother, always guards our safety; Campus, like our home, has a good time every day. I have always missed our campus because it is so beautiful. I love my beautiful campus.
As soon as you enter the gate, you can see the big playground of the school. There are six basketball stands on the playground. Students always like to play basketball on the playground. Look at the south and north of the school. They are two opposite teaching buildings. The students are studying hard in the classroom, and my classroom is on the second floor in the south. The teaching building in the north was built only a few years ago. It is four stories high. The computer room and multimedia room are on the second floor.
Next, we came to the west of the school. This is the teachers' dormitory. Many teachers live here, which is much more convenient. There are many big trees in front of the teachers' dormitory, including two tall banyan trees and two osmanthus trees. Banyan has been firmly rooted here for many years, and its vitality is still so strong. Seen from a distance, these two big banyan trees are like two big umbrellas enjoying the cool. In autumn, osmanthus trees give off fresh osmanthus fragrance, which is really like "sweet osmanthus in October, thyme."
Look at the east of our school again. This is the flag-raising platform. Every Monday, the bright five-star red flag will rise to the top of the flagpole in Ran Ran. Behind the flag-raising platform are blackboard newspapers that record the teacher's sweat and knowledge.
Let's go to the dormitory of our school. Behind the south teaching building, there are also three floors. The students who stay here go to bed early and get up early, and are diligent and thrifty. Besides, the air here is fresh and the environment is good.
Our campus is really beautiful. The learning environment is good, the education quality is high, spacious and beautiful, so that students can grow sturdily. I really love my beautiful campus!
4. Write a composition about your learning experience, with a novel beginning. You can write backwards.
This is definitely new and alive.
For example, I often imagine how comfortable and quiet my life would be without my mother every day, but one day my mother went on a business trip temporarily, and this experience of staying at home for three days alone became my nightmare, which also made me really realize how important my mother is in my mind.
After this beginning, the following can be added. For example, you wrote that you were glad that no one was in charge at first, but after an hour at noon, you were hungry, neither thirsty nor thirsty. You don't know where to put your things at home. Without mom's nagging, the world would be boring. Finally, you decide to go out, but you look at your messy home and suddenly miss your mother.
Then I turned to write about how you usually talk to your mother, how you communicate with her, and how you seem to be attached, but it doesn't seem to matter. Then I wrote that after ideological struggle, I decided to clean up my room and wait for my mother to come back.
5. How to write a beautiful and attractive composition at the beginning?
As far as the present situation is concerned, inscriptions are not widely used in exam compositions. The existence of inscriptions can not only make the article unique and attractive in form, but also lay the tone of the article, highlight the depth of the article, show the trend of the article and mark the level of the article. Therefore, good use of inscriptions can get twice the result with half the effort.
There is no limit to what kind of sentence is used for inscription. You can use famous sayings or languages that you think can express the theme or feelings of the article; You can use poems, proverbs or even a short story. It can be lyrical or philosophical, but it must be related to the article, otherwise it will make people feel flashy and opportunistic. Generally speaking, there are many philosophical inscriptions, so we choose mostly philosophical ones.
▲ The softest and most fragile thing is human nature, and the thickest and strongest thing is human nature.
▲ The fall of human nature often begins with disregard for justice, and the dignity of society often shrinks due to the abuse of power.
▲ I always believe that the world is not just a desert of the soul, an ice kiln of feelings, and all kinds of feelings from the best to the true have built the most beautiful scenery.
▲ Personality is style, like every unique leaf, showing the edge and beauty of survival.
▲ Life is sometimes like a rain, which looks beautiful, but more often, you have to endure cold and humidity.
▲ The meaning of life is not in beautiful words, not in empty pursuit, but in actually seeking your own survival and helping others survive.
▲ A person's life is like four seasons, spring planting, summer harvest, autumn harvest and winter storage.
▲ Life is picturesque, you can be vigorous and colorful, but you can't lack beautiful artistic conception.
▲ Some people only care about matter and ignore the soul; Some people despise matter in order to emphasize the mind; Only people with broad vision know the importance of balance between mind and matter.
▲ Life is like a burning match. When you look around to determine your position, it is already dawn.
▲ This is a colorful river, slowly flowing in the boundless desert, changing colors. I am barefoot by the river, and my favorite color is in a transparent glass bottle.
▲ Life is the root, underground; Life is water, in the lake; Life is a mountain, in strength; Life is a flower, when it blooms.
▲ Let's hold fast to the * * * of life and get close to you again, so that you can sublimate in my heart. Open the neon of the mind, let's stick to our hearts and pulse once.
▲ With the rainy season coming, many memories of life have been drenched into faded scenery by rain, and all casual memories have become the most romantic ideas. In the morning after waking up, I reluctantly plunged into another kind of drifting. ...
▲ Everyone has faced life choices, and we must decide what is important. ...
▲ I am rich because I have wisdom.
▲ Open the curtains, there is only one color of sunshine.
▲ Don't be blinded by worldly hustle and bustle.
▲ Just think about what I'm going to do today and what I'm going to do tomorrow, and then try to finish it … The joy of success will gradually moisten our lives.
▲ Wake up your ears and then listen to the world. I believe there must be a voice that belongs to success.
▲ If roughness is used as a condiment, you will feel that a rough life also has a taste.
▲ There is only one road to the truly great realm of mankind-the road to suffering.
▲ Suffering is the stepping stone of genius, the wealth of capable people and the abyss of the weak.
▲ If suffering is only regarded as suffering, then it is really just suffering. However, if you combine it with the most vast land in your spiritual world, it will become a valuable nutrition, which will make you feel particularly sweet and beautiful like a phoenix nirvana in suffering.
▲ Only the width can accommodate people, and the thickness can carry things.
▲ An unquestionable philosophy, an unforgettable proposition and a symbol with rich connotations. There is no century superman who is not for fame and fortune, only a wise man who treats fame and fortune well.
▲ I am the sun myself. As long as I am the sun, the morning will surely come.
▲ You actually have one of the best life mentors, and that is yourself.
▲ Color the mood, our life will be colorful, and we will really grasp ourselves.
▲ The difference between an optimist and a pessimist is very subtle: the optimist sees a doughnut, while the pessimist sees a small hole in the middle of the doughnut.
▲ I want to decorate today with a smile and illuminate the night with songs.
▲ If you want to change the world, change yourself first.
▲ God will open a window for you after closing all the doors for you.
▲ As long as I have a pair of loyal eyes to cry with me, it is worthwhile to suffer for my life. Even in the cold winter, I saw the splendor of spring.
6. How to write a good composition at the beginning? The ancients said that "the phoenix head and leopard tail", that is to say, the beginning should be colorful. Just like the head of a phoenix, some people say that "a good beginning is half the battle", which shows the importance of beginning. Similarly, a good beginning is also of great significance to college entrance examination composition.
So, what kind of beginning is good? There is no fixed method for writing, and there is no fixed format at the beginning. There is only one standard to measure the quality, that is, whether it is an organic part of the article, whether it can serve the content and center of the article, and whether it can attract readers to read.
Due to the limitation of time and space, the beginning of the composition in the examination room is concise, vivid and beautiful. The following methods can be considered.
1, cut to the chase
The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to a straightforward way of writing articles. For example, "Talking about backbone" shows the point at the beginning: "We China people have backbone." "Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This method is widely used in writing all kinds of articles, accounting for a large proportion. Its expression angle can be the direct narration at the beginning or the point of writing; You can reveal the main idea from the beginning, or you can come straight to the point and tell the enemy directly. And so on. Because this kind of writing is crisp and neat, it should be the first choice at the beginning of the composition in the examination room.
2. The background gradually enters
Natural science tells us that the universe is a big system, and social science tells us that human society is a big system. A tree is in a forest system and a leaf belongs to this tree system. A person belongs to the social system and a finger belongs to this person's system. Therefore, any single thing, any phenomenon, can not be separated from the system to which it belongs, that is, the social background or natural background on which it depends. For example, "Kong Ji Ji Ji" begins: "The big square counter in the street ... can warm wine at any time". "Under the scorching sun and heavy rain" begins: "June 15, it's crazy!" These beginnings explain the time, place, festival, climate or the background and environment of the topic. Writing in the examination room, some topics at first glance seem abrupt and unpredictable, but if you think about the background carefully, it will suddenly become clear. For example, the topic of 1999' s college entrance examination composition is "If memory can be transplanted". With the development of science and technology in recent years, cloning technology has come out, genes can be transplanted, and space technology has advanced by leaps and bounds. In recent years, China has sustained economic development and made outstanding achievements in economic construction. Contact these backgrounds, the content of the article can be written, and association and imagination will have a foothold.
3. Questioning
Flashback the result of things first, set suspense, or set questions to break the theme first and cause explanation or discussion. For example, "Jujube Stone" begins: "Before leaving for America, ... but this is very strange." Another example is the beginning of Colorful Flowers: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. Of course, this open form should be skillfully used to avoid single or formal curiosity.
(In fact, this opening form is very rich, such as:
(1) First, an open question is raised.
(2) intercept a wonderful event first.
(3) first explain an object that plays a clue role.
(4) First, arrange a scene that triggers the story.
⑤ Introduce the characters closely related to the story first. )
4. Famous aphorisms
Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center. Echo, for example, begins with a poem by Ai Qing. Cheng Yi's words are quoted at the beginning of Yi Xue: "Scholars must doubt first" and so on. This opening method is also an easy method for general candidates to master and use. Imagine, which candidate can't even remember a few ancient poems, aphorisms and famous sayings? The composition in the examination room varies from topic to topic, and the lens is quoted. Why not? The well-known epigram opening can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, eventful and lofty. Of course, the quotation should be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual errors.
5, incisive metaphor
Metaphor is used at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or truth to be explained. For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow." Ma Shuo begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a swift horse." Taking the story of Bole and Maxima as a metaphor, this paper leads to the central argument, and incisive metaphors are often used at the beginning of argumentative papers, which can make the articles unique and enhance their attraction and expression effect. Since it is a metaphor, we have to pay attention to the similarity between "other things" and this question, and we can't be far-fetched
In addition, there are lyric discussions, characterization and other ways to open.
In a word, how to start a composition determines its content, nature and unique conception. After getting the topic, don't think twice before you act, and don't act rashly.
7. How to write the beginning and end of the composition? Ask questions at the beginning and summarize at the end. At first, many famous sayings and poems were used to attract the attention of the marking teacher.
Write the beginning and end of the article.
(1) Write a good beginning As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". An appropriate and novel beginning can not only make you write flowers, but also increase your literary talent and attract readers.
(1) confessed four elements from the beginning. That is, simply explain the time, place, people and events at the beginning.
② Cut to the chase. That is, the article does not beat around the bush at the beginning, but directly puts out the people, things or things to be described and introduces them into the text. Directly express the author's point of view, point out the center, and guide the full text.
(3) Description of the scene at the beginning. That is to say, at the beginning of the article, people, events and scenes are described first, and the atmosphere is rendered, giving readers an immersive feeling and paving the way for setting off characters and touching scenes.
(4) Ask questions at the beginning. That is, at the beginning of the article, asking questions makes people think, thus attracting readers' attention and interest.
⑤ Flashback method. That is, at the beginning of the article, write the result of the matter first, and then write the reason and process of the matter, so as to create suspense and enhance the attraction of the article.
6. The starting method of expressing feelings. That is, express the author's personal feelings and thoughts and feelings at the beginning of the article.
⑦ Reveal the central opening method. Some articles summarize the full text at the beginning and directly point out the center of the article.
⑧ Introduce the background opening method. According to the content of the article, in addition to introducing the time and place of the incident, it also introduces the form and related situation before the incident. The outline is always changing. If you read more, Syaraku will be fine.
(2) How to write at the end of the article
① Natural ending method. That is, the end of the article is the result of things. When the story is finished, the article is over.
(2) Point ending method. This is a common way to end. Attention should be paid to: how to summarize the full text, how to refine the central idea of the article, and avoid repeating the basic content or the beginning of the article.
③ problem ending method. That is, at the end, ask questions in the form of questions (rhetorical questions or rhetorical questions). This way of ending is suitable for the writer-centered narrative. Students should pay attention to asking questions when writing a composition. The purpose of rhetorical questions is to express one's true feelings, not to be far-fetched.
(4) Express feelings at the end. That is, at the end, the author expressed his true feelings about the things described and was full of praise. Pay attention to feeling and expressing feelings when writing, and don't get sick.
⑤ Heuristic ending method. In other words, the ending gives people some education or inspiration, and the author can use appropriate words to make readers think, giving people a feeling of "endless words and endless meanings". This ending method is generally suitable for writing articles about people, notes and landscapes. When writing, students should pay attention to the fact that description should serve the prominent center and avoid aimless description or description for description's sake.
⑥ Looking forward to the future ending. That is, after describing the present situation, look forward to the future at the end, inspiring and inspiring.
When writing, it should be noted that if the beginning of an article is to point out the center, then the end is generally to show the future. At the same time, the content of the outlook must be related to the central idea of the article, and it is forbidden to copy it mechanically. No matter how it ends, it should be concise and clear. If you make a long speech, it will dilute the text, usurp the role of the host, and give readers the feeling of "gilding the lily", and the appeal of the article will be greatly weakened. I hope that students will read the excellent articles carefully, be inspired by them, and gradually master the methods of the beginning and end of the composition.