This year's college entrance examination composition will be diversified, and the composition should first train students' ability to examine questions; Secondly, cultivate students' dialectical thinking ability to look at problems in two ways, so as to establish students' correct moral outlook and world outlook.

Writing skills

This is a "multi-material+self-defined topic" composition topic. The key lies in the examination of the topic. We should read the material carefully, summarize the main idea of the material, and then determine a positive and healthy topic around the main idea of the material. It is worth noting that the main idea of summarizing materials must cover every material. The two materials in the title of the last composition tell two stories about Confucius and his disciples. The first story tells that Confucius praised students for their bravery and got valuable reward gifts. The second is that Confucius criticized students for not being reimbursed by the government after redeeming slaves. Two students, one is to save people, the other is to redeem people, in a word, they are all good deeds; A student was criticized but praised by Confucius, and a pocketbook was praised but scolded by Confucius. It can be seen that Confucius is in favor of rewarding those who do good and not letting those who do good suffer. There will be a question here: why do saints who have always advocated Confucian morality value money so much? Answering this question is the key to completing this composition, which involves interests and morality. Please see the perfect composition below.

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Meditation under the banner of morality

When I was involved in the case, I was puzzled by Confucius' words at first: the student who saved Lunu without reimbursement was blamed, and the student who saved his life but accepted the thank-you gift was praised. Concealed meditation has a far-reaching impact.

Seeing problems and doing things should start with who is the biggest beneficiary. Although individuals get valuable returns, the biggest beneficiaries are the country and society, which is bigger or smaller, which is self-evident. In fact, the relationship between virtue and benefit is not completely opposite. It is only because we hold high the moral banner in our hearts that we make a wrong judgment on all slightly deviated behaviors.

The ancients said: "The grid is above the plum and accumulated among the bamboos; Moral confidence must be correct, and the quality is elegant and high. "Indeed, morality is a noble character. From ancient times to the present, morality is an eternal topic and the foundation of being a man. Without morality, one cannot stand on one's feet. However, when we admire morality, we often go too far, as if morality and money are natural enemies. When evaluating a person's morality, it is unwise or even completely wrong to focus all eyes on money.

In the Millennium, Professor Yuan Longping accepted the first "highest scientific honor award" of 5 million yuan. According to the above theory, should we consider him immoral? No, the popularity of two-line hybrid rice technology in Yuan Longping has enabled China to feed hundreds of millions of people in the world. In contrast, this 5 million yuan is insignificant for his contribution. The reason why the state set up this award is to encourage scientists to make greater contributions to the country, let the world know that China is a country that respects talents, and thus attract more domestic talents, overseas students and foreign scientists to work in China. The "reward effect" has been really fruitful in recent years.

China made a historic breakthrough in the Athens Olympic Games. After the competition, the state rewarded the athletes who won the gold medal. This incident caused a lot of discussion, and the words of accusation filled my ears. But I think reward is a kind of catalyst, which can motivate more athletes to achieve good results. Maybe we will win the first place in the total number of gold medals in 2008. We can't think that athletes lose their morality when they get bonuses. Don't women volleyball players collectively donate money to charity? Coincidentally, when SARS was prevalent last year, didn't Real Madrid players who made huge sums of money in China also donate huge sums of money to china charity federation?

Of course, we should not forget the great righteousness, but we should correctly treat and handle the relationship between morality and interests. Not long ago, facing the fishermen who fell into the water along the coast of Leizhou, someone shouted "charge first and then save people", which made people shudder. The incident that a Korean star published a "photo album" in the name of "comfort women" is even more irritating. This kind of behavior of valuing profit over morality and taking advantage of loopholes to make money is disgusting.

Under the situation of market economy, it is particularly important to deal with the relationship between morality and interests. We should not misappropriate the concept of morality unilaterally, but should treat and deal with moral problems rationally.

My friend, let's treat interests with rationality and maintain morality with rationality!

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The author summarizes the material in two sentences and leads to the topic simply and quickly. The style of writing firmly grasps the key point that people don't understand Confucius' point of view, and puts forward the view that "who should benefit the most from seeing problems and doing things", and the topic is accurate; Quote the words of the ancients, take a step back, admit the importance of morality, then point out the mistakes of one-sided and over-praising morality and analyze the reality; The positive examples of Yuan Longping and Athens Olympic gold medalists winning national awards and the negative examples of Leizhou Coast and Korean entertainment circles are listed, which are powerful and the materials are clear and accurate.