A clear definition is the most critical step in the composition exam. A mature candidate, when getting the composition question, must first make clear what the basic requirements of the topic itself are for the composition, and know where he is limited. Because only by defining the boundaries can we know where the entry point of the composition is and where the openness of the composition is. The purpose of a clear definition is not to violate the rules and not to stray from the topic when writing. For example, the topic composition "The Choice of the Mind" should be limited to the scope of "choice", and the composition without "choice" will digress from Wan Li; Second, it is limited to the "mind". To write something that touches the heart and needs to make a choice, writing should highlight the psychological process. Let's take Jiangxi Volume in 2009 as an example to talk about how to "clearly define".
22. Read the following materials and write as required. (60 points)
On March 25 this year, under the strong opposition of Chinese people, Christie's auction house still auctioned the bronze statues of rabbits and rats illegally lost from Yuanmingyuan in Paris. Cai Mingchao, the general manager of an art company, paid a high price for these two cultural relics, but refused to pay afterwards, resulting in poor auction results.
In this regard, public opinion is in an uproar. Some people call it a national hero, some people think it is a malicious violation, and some people think that …
What do you think of Cai Mingchao's behavior? Please write an article based on this.
Requirements: (1) You must write an argumentative paper. (2) the topic is self-drawn. (3) self-determination. (4) The written content must be related to the given material. (5) Not less than 800 words. (6) Do not copy or copy.
In 2009, in order to strengthen the restriction of cooperation, the composition topic was set at three levels: the first is the restriction of writing content, because there is such a sentence in the stem, "What do you think of Cai Mingchao's behavior?" Please write an article according to this ",in which" this "refers to your opinion on Cai Mingchao's behavior, which is the limitation of the title on the scope of writing content. It can be seen that evaluating Cai Mingchao's behavior, putting forward opinions, and then demonstrating why we know Cai Mingchao like this should be the key to writing this article. If we just take Cai Mingchao as an example or start thinking on the basis of Cai Mingchao, and talk about how to be patriotic, how to respect rules, and the meaning and value of honesty, then there is no clear definition of the topic, which is digression, or "copying". The second is the limitation of writing materials. The title says that "the content written must be related to the given material", which means that candidates can choose multiple-choice materials in writing and can also use other materials to help prove it. But it needs to be clear that the materials used must be related to Cai Mingchao, forming an analogy or contrast relationship. Through these materials, we can demonstrate Cai Mingchao's behavior and discuss its absurdity. This is the openness in restriction. Third, stylistic restrictions require that "argumentative essays must be written". A clear definition is the key to writing a good composition. If this step is not done well, there will be no discussion later.
Second, grasp the angle.
Angle is the core of conception, and grasping the angle is to choose the best conception and make the composition fit the meaning of the topic. A composition topic with rich connotations often has multiple angles. If you grasp the angle well, you can show the uniqueness of thinking and the writing effect can be refreshing. When we get the composition topic, we can use some methods to determine our writing angle. For example, we can grasp the angle of the topic of "frustration" by adding some new factors: first, add factors in the back, such as "frustration education", "frustration association" and "frustration, the grindstone of success"; The second is to add factors in front, such as "thanking setbacks", "overcoming setbacks" and "bullying setbacks"; Third, there are factors before and after, such as "growing up in setbacks" and "writing life in setbacks"; Wait a minute. In this way, the angle of the composition is clear, and candidates can choose the writing ideas that suit them best. Let's take the national college entrance examination composition used in Guangxi in 2009 as an example to tell you how to grasp the perspective of a material composition.
2 1. Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)
Rabbit is the sprint champion of all previous small animal competitions, but he can't swim. Once, a rabbit was chased by a wolf to the river and almost caught. For the all-round development of small animals, the Animal Management Bureau sent rabbits to swimming training classes, as well as puppies, turtles and squirrels. The dog and the turtle learn to swim, and they have another skill. They are very happy. Rabbits and squirrels took a long time to learn, and they were very upset. The wild duck, the coach of the training class, said, "I can swim on two legs, but you can't swim on four legs?" 90% success comes from sweat. Come on! Hey! "
The critic frog sighed with emotion: "rabbits run so well!" Why do you only train for weaknesses and not develop specialties? " Thinker crane said: "survival requires more than one skill!" " Rabbits can't learn to swim, but they can make holes. Squirrels can't swim, but they can climb trees. "
Ask for the right angle, clear thinking, choose your own style and draw up your own title; Don't be divorced from the content and meaning of the material, don't "copy" or plagiarize.
This is a composition topic with rich connotations, which requires candidates to calmly analyze and choose a writing angle that suits them. The core event of the topic is that rabbits can't learn to swim. This paper analyzes the factors in the materials from five angles: first, the teacher is a wild duck, which can be imagined as "sometimes success does not depend on sweat", "blind efforts can not succeed" and "success depends on personality"; Second, the critic frog can be conceived as "should develop strengths and avoid weaknesses" and "focus on developing strengths"; Third, Crane, a thinker, can be conceived as "exploring one's own potential", "developing in many ways" and "not insisting on the development of shortcomings"; The fourth is animal administration, which can be conceived as "ignoring the personality characteristics of the educated" and "blindly promoting all-round development"; The fifth kind is an educated rabbit, which can be conceived as "fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses", "knowing one's own limitations and strengths" and "choosing a development direction that suits one's own".
It can be seen that only by grasping the angle can we make an accurate idea; Only with accurate thinking can the article stand out. Angle can well test the acuity and accuracy of candidates' thinking. Therefore, in the examination room, as long as you can keenly capture the most sensitive part of the proposition and take it as the focus of your intention, it will be targeted and innovative.
Third, activate materials.
"Ask the canal to be so clear, because there is running water at the source." So where is the source of writing for college entrance examination students? In fact, the treasure house of college entrance examination composition is ourselves, but there is a short-term "thinking jam" in the specific environment of the examination room, and I can't remember it at once, and it has become "a clever woman can't cook without rice" Composition is the art of mobilization. In the examination room, we should take mobilization as a "normal state", make full use of mobilization skills, learn to activate the writing materials in our own treasure house, and let the "source flowing water" gurgle out.
First, we should activate the material of society and life. The college entrance examination composition requires students to examine their ability to observe life, know life, feel life and reflect on life. Usually, we have accumulated a lot of information in this respect. In the examination room, remind yourself to recall life experiences, associate social hotspots, and hint at your feelings and thoughts about nature, society and life. First of all, we can dig up materials from the little things in life and ignite the spark of human emotion from daily life; Second, you can pay attention to the society, the focus and hot spots of the times, and discover the truth, goodness and beauty in life with your own eyes; Third, we can think about the harmonious relationship between man and nature and understand the law of survival; Fourthly, we can see the track of human progress from the beacon smoke of history and taste the massiness and vicissitudes of history.
Second, we must activate the materials in the textbook. Textbooks are in front of us. They are the most familiar, abundant and inexhaustible material library, but they are easily overlooked. Therefore, we must make full use of the materials in the textbook in the examination room. These materials are not only convenient to use, but also carefully selected by editors, recognized by readers and tested by practice, which is typical and convincing. In fact, people who have the heart do not need to buy a complete set of composition materials before the exam, nor do teachers need to collect a lot of classic materials for the exam, nor do they need to rack their brains to collect anecdotes of celebrities at all times and in all countries. As long as they understand the textbooks in their hands, they will not be troubled by lack of information.
Third, we should activate ourselves and inner material. Faced with an essay topic that may determine their future, many candidates often like to be far-sighted, write about successful people, celebrities and great men, and write about ancient sages, but forget an equally rich but more personalized material library, that is, themselves. Every self is a rich and unique treasure, inexhaustible. Therefore, don't forget yourself, be good at expressing your true feelings with your own pen, express your love and pursuit of life, show your mental journey, growth experience and life experience in your composition, and talk to the reading teacher.
Fourth, we must activate the used materials. Every candidate wrote a lot of compositions in high school and when preparing for the college entrance examination, and used countless materials. These materials are what you are most familiar with, what you know best, and what you are best at using, but when you get to the examination room, you forget them all. Therefore, during the exam, candidates can mobilize the familiar materials used in writing at ordinary times, sort them out a little, and divide them into "key points" so that they can be used by me on the spot.
Fourth, get out of mediocrity and show your personality.
The article has personality, which is one of the important conditions for getting high marks. Although an article has "good facial features", it has no personality and it is difficult to get high marks. Judging from the marking of college entrance examination compositions every year, quite a few compositions are mediocre: the subject matter is familiar, the ideas are old-fashioned, the language is not literary, the structure is "stable", there is no new idea and personality, and the scores are always unable to get up.
If you want to get an ideal composition score in the college entrance examination, you must get rid of mediocrity, fully display your personality, strive to be different, write new ideas and show your characteristics. In recent years, in the examination syllabus, the words "with individual characteristics" in "development level" have been changed to "with individual colors". It also takes into account the actual situation of candidates. First, it reduces the requirements for individualization of the composition and is more operational, as long as there is individuality; The second is to emphasize the importance of personalization of college entrance examination composition and expand the scope of personalization of composition. Only when the college entrance examination composition has individuality can it have characteristics and be innovative. Candidates can only write articles with individual colors if they have unique feelings and thinking about life and have enough individual thinking ability. Then, how to personalize the composition in the examination room? First of all, we must innovate. Do what others say. You should choose the best angle of conception, show your unique thinking and write your unique understanding of life. Second, we should proceed from ourselves and seek truth from facts. The writing is absolutely frank. I want to devote my whole body and mind to my composition. I write my heart by hand. Third, be emotional and realistic. Writing is a reflection of life, an expression of subjective feelings, and a personalized spiritual labor. Therefore, the college entrance examination composition must write the most familiar process and something that touches the heart. Fourth, life needs language. The expressive ability of language is always the charm of composition. Make full use of the language of life and make your language full of personality, such as flowing, floating and disorderly, and rolling freely.