"On the second day of punching in the JJ IP camp, 1289 words, a total of 2492 words"

Before I go home for the holiday, I will meet my tutor as usual, report on my study in the first semester, plan my study and research in the summer vacation, and see if my tutor has anything for me to do and whether it is necessary to stay for a few more days.

I arrived at the teacher's office on time at three o'clock yesterday afternoon. I always arrive at the floor where my office is located earlier, but my past experience tells me that knocking at the door too early is not a good idea. My tutor may not be ready yet, and he may have his own things to do. Therefore, it is more appropriate for me to knock at the time.

First of all, the tutor pointed out the problem of the first draft of the paper I gave her last time. It can be said that there is nothing wrong with the first draft of this paper. I felt very confused when I finished writing, and it was really messy in the eyes of the teacher, but the teacher considered that it was my first time to write a small paper, and I had no experience and didn't criticize me severely.

Record the teacher's revision opinions:

1, don't use words too casually, don't use colloquial words;

2. The introduction part and the literature part are integrated. The literature review should not be too long. It is not used to gather words, not to tell others what you know, but to tell others what you have found and what it has to do with this research;

3. The model should be made clearer, and other factors should be comparable when carefully discussed, so as to minimize the influence of factors other than impact;

4. The results report should be from the overall to the heterogeneity;

5. The form can be further shortened, and the display of the form should be detailed and appropriate;

6, the form should be carefully explained and analyzed;

7, the last section directly with "conclusion";

8. References should be listed like journal articles, arranged in alphabetical order, and the author's full name should be given. There is no need to write numbers in the previous quotations, nor should they be written like dissertations;

9. Write a summary.

Look at these nine suggestions, which involve all aspects of the paper. It can be seen that the first draft I wrote is really rough and does not meet the requirements of academic papers.

But I also know that there is a first time for everything. With the experience of writing and revising this essay, I will accumulate more lessons and never do it again.

Then, I exchanged summer vacation plans with my tutor. My tutor thinks that I should strengthen English expression, especially English writing, and put an end to grammatical errors and basic word errors. Although I haven't written an English paper yet, I will write it sooner or later, so I have to lay a good foundation now.

My tutor suggested that I can take IELTS, TOEFL and other English tests to urge myself to learn English well. I firmly believe that death is the primary productive force after all.

After the start of next semester, my tutor actually helped me to consider that I have to be a research assistant and teaching assistant at least four times in the doctoral stage, which surprised me.

She said that she has two courses next semester, and then the teaching assistant of one course can let me be a teacher.

I told my tutor that next semester I should only focus on Gao Weiyi and Gao Yiyi, and the classroom learning tasks should be moderate.

Regarding research, my tutor suggested that I should pay attention to the relevant national document policies while reading the literature, and combine the position of the topics of interest in the literature, the theoretical basis of economics and practical problems.

Finally, I asked my tutor if it is feasible to go out for a part-time job next Saturday. My parents are worried that I will never grow up if I stay in school every day, and I will always be too naive and immature, so I am asked to go out and learn to treat people. The instructor felt a little puzzled. She appeared and said, "haven't we all stayed at school?"

Yes, the tutor has been staying at school. There is no problem at all. However, my parents' worries are not unreasonable, and my tutor has no objection, so it is not a big problem for me to take a part-time job.

Finally, my grade of senior two this semester came out. According to the information my friend got from the teaching assistant, the score is 90, I don't know 9 1. I got an A on my report card. I'm so happy!

Revise papers in summer vacation, learn English well and live up to your youth!