I said, books are flowing water, flowing forever, flowing from the wheel of history and flowing to a bright tomorrow and a bright future. ...

I am here, gently open the title page of the book and slowly walk into the world of books. Then, the cold water of wisdom slowly flowed into my heart, giving me endless knowledge, spiritual support, emotional edification and personality enlightenment. I bathe in this flowing water, appreciate every grass and flower in the book, appreciate every unique person in my life, and appreciate everything that is earth-shattering or plain as water. ...

I always thought that the Grand View Garden was a prosperous land of flowers and willows, a gentle and rich country, and a beautiful and desirable daughter country, but the book proved me wrong. Running water told me the truth in a common voice, so I finally knew the pain of the beautiful Xiaoxiang Pavilion girl: the blue light shines on the wall and the window is not wet! Beneath the bustling appearance of Jiafu, it is the pain of swallowing gold, the pain of jumping into a well, and the pessimism and despair of becoming a young monk! The book is running water, and her crystal water shows me the laughter and tears, love and resentment of youth.

When the horizon in the east shines with red light, when the green Jialing River ripples, and when the gorgeous rosy clouds radiate all kinds of light, my heart can't be calm. For the sky just breaking dawn, for the dawn bought with blood ... the running water of books pours in my heart, and my heart is full of passion. I can't forget Jiang Jie's calmness and firmness before his death, and I can't forget Xu Yunfeng's unyielding and perseverance in digging stones with his nails.

Nothing can stop the pace of patriots whose faces are stung by the cold wind in the morning, with hoses spraying water, whips raised high and bullets flying overhead! The fearless marchers shouted out the voice of the whole Chinese nation! Their throats are hoarse, but their fiery hearts will not stop. They shouted with their lives: get rid of all those who trample on our country. Books are running water, and her deep voice flowing through Qianshan explained the greatness of patriotism to me.

"The more thousands of years, the more different the world is; Show great ambitions and ask who is in charge of ups and downs in the vast land; If you think about it, you will be like a painting, and you will aim at a thousand miles. " Chairman Mao's poetry has become an art, "In the morning of first frost, the horseshoe is deeply broken and the horn is swallowed." "Thousands of trees are red in first frost, and the heavenly soldiers are furious" ... The book is flowing water, and her impressive words let me see the wisdom of a generation of great men.

Books are flowing water, flowing forever, interpreting the true meaning of history. I would like to bathe this flowing water forever and let it flow through my heart. ...

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The unique angle of material selection and the gorgeous language of the article are the two highlights of this paper. I'm afraid that how to be creative and not stray from the topic in the selected composition is the focus of many students' consideration in all aspects. With the theme of "Books are running water", the author skillfully combines the rich emotional world displayed in the book with the characteristics of running water, generalization, splashing or surging and emptying. In just a few minutes in the examination room, he not only fully demonstrated his rich reading accumulation, but also embodied his profound thoughts and ideas. This is worth learning for candidates. Su Shi said, "When you say little, the sky will be magnificent and the color will be gorgeous ...". The language of this article just confirms this point. The combination of prosody length and language length, arbitrary confrontation and contrast, handy allusions and poems have created the magnificent atmosphere of the article and touched the gorgeous color of the article. The gorgeous language and temperament embodied in this paper is probably the key to winning the appreciation of the marking teacher.

On the shore, the flowing water is unrestrained.

I love the dancing energy of "flying arrows, if the waves beat on the shore", which drives my young and upward mind; I miss the homesickness of the wanderers living on the small bridge, touching my young thoughts and plucking the homesickness strings in my heart; I realized that the silence of "sunrise is like fire, spring is like a blue river" caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me a calm mind.

Standing on the high mountain, I miss running water. The water on the mountain, called waterfall, is as majestic as a roaring lion; The water on the plain is called river, like a dancing dragon, graceful; The water in the desert, called oasis, is like the ribbon of fate, which contains miracles. Praise the flowing water and think about the great achievements of historical figures; Look at the generations of Tianjiao bred by the flowing Yellow River: the feat of Qin Shihuang's reunification of China; The great emergence of the rule of Zhenguan in Xuanzong of Tang Dynasty: Mao Zedong liberated the magnificence of China; The great man of history is the proud child of the Yellow River and the vitality of flowing water.

Sighing about the flowing water, thinking about Four Treasures of the Study's dignity, and looking at the huge historical sum. Wang Xizhi's vigorous and powerful calligraphy, Qi Baishi's Long Qian was played with shrimp, and Xu Beihong's horse was also a great success; The profoundness of China's literature and art is the approval of the roaring of the Yangtze River and an endless stream of water.

Realizing that flowing water is a solid shore where flowing water beats, the shore is built into water, and the water becomes shore. Touch the cool water, don't forget the land where we stand, love the clear water, and don't forget the bank canal for water diversion. Yes, if running water is the petals of the earth, the shore is the flower base under the petals. Love flowing water, but don't forget to love the bank.

Holding a basin of cold water to wash my face, I saw the earth rising in Ran Ran in the blue sky and green water; Stepping into a clear stream and taking a refreshing shower, I saw the vitality bred in the flowing water of the stream; Embracing the magnificent waterfall and clearing my mind, I saw inexhaustible motivation in freedom.

Yes, water is the source of life, and running water is the sunrise of life; Water is the mountain of life, and running water is the vast plain of life; Water is the light of life, and running water is the flaming sun of life!

Looking back, lamenting the long river of history; Looking into the distance, I can see the river in the future. The future is not a dream, because the running water will take me to find the boundless sea; The future is not a dream, because the rushing water will give me endless motivation to pursue my dreams; The future is not a dream, because the eternal water will impact every vast world for me!

Cheer for the unrestrained running water and cheer for the future of youth!

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The thinking is "refined" and the thinking is "new". This paper is ingenious in conception, linking three seemingly unrelated things, namely "shore, flowing water and unrestrained", and associating them appropriately, which shows the author's positive thinking on the value of life. In particular, the theme at the end is clear and the charm is endless, which makes readers feel the philosophy and connotation of life and inspires people to forge ahead. Judging from the content of the article, we can't say that the little author has been thinking for eight years and his writing has been barren for eight years, but we can see his overflowing literary thoughts and unique feelings; From the perspective of language expression, it can be seen that this young author loves reading, is diligent in thinking, has rich savings and can be found at any time when needed. Prose-like language and rich associations give people beautiful enjoyment.

Listen to the singing of running water

The sky is crying, and the water drops on the ground gather happily, so there is me-running water. Close your eyes and listen quietly. Do you hear the sound of running water singing? ...

I sang all the way across the plain. I don't envy the towering mountains, nor the quiet lakes and mountains, because I have a flowing life. I don't look up at the powerful wings of the eagle, nor lament the speed of the cheetah, because I know I am small, but I am not small. Look! Peach blossoms on the shore comb themselves with a smile in the clear water; Liu Yang, nourished by me, rolled up his sleeves and flew; The fish in my body are playing happily. Life is red because of me. On the endless plain, I sang loudly, watching the rolling clouds in the sky and watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court.

Faced with the obstacles of high mountains, I don't feel sad, nor do I complain about the injustice of fate. On the contrary, I smile and play a passionate movement, and there will always be ups and downs in life. Listen! It was Qu Yuan who sang loudly and wrote Li Sao, which is immortal. "Since ancient times, no one has died in life, leaving a heart that shines on history." Wen Tianxiang sang his unyielding spirit beside the long river of history; Li Bai abandoned fame and fortune, and his ambition of "breaking the waves and making and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" was engraved in the long river of history. Those dangerous mountains can only block my way forward, but they can't stop my progress. I'm not discouraged or disappointed. I won towards the distant all the way. ...

"The fallen petal is intentional, but the flowing water is ruthless", and the fallen petal whispers in my ear. I said, "Please follow my path, and you will understand that running water is not heartless, but takes you to a wider world. The meteor that crossed in the night sky was only a moment, but it passed through the fiery atmosphere, burned its own life, and gave it selflessly to the earth, so it built eternity. " Don't believe it, I smiled happily and continued to flow forward.

In the distance, I heard the choppy call of the sea. I sang loudly and said to the fallen flower, "Look! I took you to heaven. " I packed my bags and threw myself bravely into the arms of the sea. Falling flowers can't help but sigh: "A flowing water that sings because of life has merged into an ocean of life!"

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Listening to the singing of running water, we heard it; Life is bright red because of running water, small but not small; Despite the barrier of mountains, the running water still smiles and rises and falls, singing all the way; The water is flowing away, not heartless, just to find the paradise of life. The little author heard philosophy and truth from the sound of running water, and his opinions were wise and original. What is more commendable is the atmosphere conceived in this paper. Based on the careful observation of the spirit of flowing water, the little author wrote it with a pen, quoting classics, and it was logical. Articles are always filled with high-spirited enthusiasm and have a strong appeal.

Yun shui ni ni

The flowing water is clear, rippling with the rhythm of sound and color, and flowing out the brilliance and brilliance of life.

The flowing water is soft, it spreads the tenderness of emotion and the spring dew of love.

Running water is bitter fleabane, which inspires the symphony of strength and beauty and shows the tenacity of the soul.

Ah! The clear and bright water, gushing from the ancient well covered with flowers and trees, is full of dreams and passions of life, and flows down gently and slowly with the reflection of red flowers and green trees, with flowers and dew. The gentle waves of gurgling water are mother's smiling faces, sweet and full of love. I can't help thinking of those gentle calls and sweet kisses when I was a child. Oh, the gentle waves of love are blowing! The glittering and translucent water droplets splashed gently are the tears of children's laughter, full of happy chords, looking back at the sunshine of childhood, and the sweetness of lollipops are indispensable. Oh, the ripples of emotion are spinning.

Running water, this gentle water.

Look! The muddy water of that river rushes from the horizon, sending out a strong and wild breath, rushing to the high dam, and gathering into a stubborn, turbulent and surging land with a sense of heroism. The passionate fighting spirit of running water is the courage of warriors, which is earth-shattering, and makes people miss Qu Yuan's call for wind and rain, Li Bai's lofty aspirations of "breaking the wind and waves, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" and Lu Xun's lofty aspirations of "facing the bleak life". Ah, the melody of pride is high! The waves splashed by fierce running water are the tenacity of fighters, which deeply shocked people and made people realize the tenacity and unyielding of Sandia's songs written by Hemingway. The courage and determination of Peking University mountaineering team to attack the top to the death; Sanmao gave up the city and yearned for the solidity of the desert. Oh! The waves are rough!

Running water, this masculine water.

Flowing water, flowing water, is delicate and gentle, but also magnificent and vigorous. Pentium, running water! Between heaven and earth forever. Sublimate, feel! Shine history with this long rhyme! Oh, the water is hovering!

Comment on "water", from softness to rigidity. The author accurately grasps the characteristics of "water", interprets "gentle water" with maternal love and childhood, and interprets "masculine water" with strength and courage. Gentle and graceful, both rigid and flexible, both rigid and flexible. Secondly, water is "flowing water", which is dynamic rather than static. Whether it is "dancing", "splashing" or "rushing" or "bumping"; Whether it is "shout", "kiss", "shout" or "bump", the author always goes downstream or is light and vigorous, which shows that he has a very good grasp of the topic.

Poetic language is another remarkable feature of this paper, and profound poetic accumulation is obviously its source. Not to mention the gentleness and gracefulness of Li Qingzhao and Xu Zhimo, and the romance and tragic of Li Bai and Qu Yuan-the poems of these literati have been skillfully added to this article; Just the first three paragraphs of "clear water", "soft water" and "bitter fleabane bitter fleabane" make our ears resound with the beautiful melody of The Book of Songs. The language of poetry blooms like a flower, and "long water rhyme" is the sound of this flower.

The structure of the whole article is like a beautiful woman playing the piano-looking at it, her eyes are clear: the opening tone is fixed, the middle is soft and the middle is rigid, and the end is sublimated, which is clear at a glance; Listening carefully, the rhyme is very harmonious: "the soft waves of love are blowing", "the melody of lofty sentiments is soaring", "the ripples of emotion are swirling" and "the tough waves are rolling", all of which are the same. The symmetry and ease of writing make people lament the young author's skillful writing skills.

That time, I understood myself.

Each of us has a back garden in our hearts. When we feel worried or confused, we open the back garden, which is full of beautiful spring and flowing water. There is a carefree bridge, a forgotten spring, in which birds of heaven fly. Go in and let your thoughts fly ... —— Inscription

In the morning, I was wrapped in a narrow bus and shuttled through the besieged city at dusk. Regardless of the cold wind and heavy rain, I walked alone in this street countless times. I don't know why I feel so heavy this time, as if I were walking in a huge magnetic object with iron shoes under my feet.

Probably influenced by that thing in the morning! Knowing that I was considered to sit firmly on the throne and was pushed out of the top of the English remedial class, I suddenly heard the thunder, and the glory suddenly left me, as if my heart were in the Woods in late autumn. I am like the person who is picking up fallen leaves, and I miss the lost green with a wry smile.

I walked feebly, and the road was extraordinarily long. Suddenly, a beam of sunshine stung my eyes strongly. What a beautiful scenery! The sun is struggling to escape from the shackles of the horizon, which is a role unwilling to admit defeat! In the shadow of the clouds, the sun's rays gradually disappeared, replaced by only a frightening shadow. Is the sun still unable to defeat the endless dark forces? However, I was wrong, and a ray of light appeared again. It achieved this persistence in despair. "Heaven rewards diligence", the sun shines brilliantly on every corner, and the dark clouds yield!

I suddenly woke up. Isn't my situation so similar to this scene? It turns out that he is just a young man who doesn't know himself. A young man often complained that his talents were not brought into full play, so the philosopher told him, "Can you pick up that sand in the ground?" "Of course not!" The young man said dismissively. "If there is a pearl in the ground, will you still worry about not finding it?" Young people understand: try to be a pearl! This is me, and I am me. Despite the resentment that there is no way out, I still face life with confidence: "One day, I will ride the wind and waves and sail straight across the deep sea." Did I get any inspiration from it?

I really appreciate that I went into my back garden, read and asked the answer in my heart.

The same me, with the changing sun, moon and stars on my head, running at my feet, bravely chasing on my own road with my special feelings …

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The same ordinary raw materials can also make delicious dishes in the hands of skilled chefs, but the seemingly ordinary theme of "feeling from depressed mood" can be suddenly enlightened by the author through such a winding path. Parallelism, personification, metaphor and rhetoric are used freely in the text, especially in describing heavy-hearted paragraphs. The unique metaphor reflects the author's excellent sense of language, which can't help but be amazing.

That time, I understood the sound of falling flowers.

The boundless twilight cannot outline the bright sunshine, and the tired birds spread their wings in the wind. Confused, I silently stepped on the shadow to go home, secretly dreaming of my future.

Suddenly, a petal fell on my shoulder and rolled down my body under the wheel. I was moved by this little desolation, got out of the car and pushed forward. Not far away, there is a small flower tree, trying its best to open the last flower. At the same time, those once beautiful pink flowers can't resist Xiao Feng's call of "smashing into mud and grinding into ashes". I walked to the tree with my car in my hand. Somehow, I felt that the nameless flower tree was conveying some information about life, and I was very confused. Suddenly, another petal quietly hit my left cheek and landed at my feet. I intuitively found that the word "autumn" was clearly engraved on the stump. Once passionate and full of interest, it can only be turned into a fragment of life at the moment when the flowering period has passed. I can't help sighing deeply: Why do flowers sometimes wither? I am inexplicably excited and sad, as if between raising my hand and letting go, I am throwing away something, and what I am throwing away is something that makes me feel sad and carefree.

At this moment, I suddenly found that the nameless flower tree was densely covered with a layer of small green fruits. I don't know what it's called and what it does, but at first sight, I fell in love with that bright little thing. Oh, flowers bloom and fall, just to breed this little fruit! In an instant, my heart lit up. The true essence will only be revealed after you have experienced noise and loneliness. Of course, this kind of noise requires you to improve and spend it with diligence, tenacity and persistence, and this kind of loneliness requires your patience and positive enrichment. Flower trees bought many fruits with falling petals, but what about our life? Those beautiful praises, persistent pursuits, and countless tears that fall and climb up should become personal lofty ideals like flowers, rather than the price of painful compassion and success. Because the sound of falling flowers is beautiful and happy, they leave more important essence and more little lives for the continuation of life!

Flowers are beautiful, but falling is more meaningful. I will spread the petals of life one by one on the road to success. I won't regret it, and I won't sigh for the inevitable stagnation between my efforts and the end. Because I understand the greatness of falling flowers, I left the best things to the continuation of life!

Comments on this article are fluent in language and ingenious in conception. The author uses exquisite brushwork to turn the "silence" of flowers into sound. The "I" in the article, from the falling of residual flowers, inadvertently touches the heartstrings, and then from the noise when flowers bloom, the loneliness when they wither, from the spring flowers to the philosophy and meaning of life, gives people profound enlightenment. The article can be described as passionate and meaningful. The little author seems to have inadvertently felt the philosophy contained in flowers, but he is a man of heart in life.

That time, I understood them.

I remember in chemistry class, the teacher told us in class that the waste of resources in China is mostly due to unreasonable mining, and the mining rate of small coal mines is only over 20%. When the coal mine was abandoned, more than 70% of the raw coal was wasted. At that time, the students said indignantly: "The people in those areas are of poor quality and simply don't know the importance of protecting resources and the environment."

Although we are knowledgeable and know the importance of protecting resources and the environment, we are not them, and we have not understood them yet.

When I opened The Miner in Wumeng, when I saw faces trapped in the dark, when I saw black gullies on the faces of old miners, and when I saw the black faces of young miners that had lost their luster, these photos were only black and white, just like charcoal sketches. But that's who they are. Their life is only black and white How can it be as colorful as ours?

Zhou Qiyuan, I remember such a name. He looks only ten years old in the photo, similar to my cousin. My cousin is the only child in the family. He is cute and naive, and everyone loves him. However, when it comes to Zhou Qiyuan, I can't see that all the delusions and naivety of children of this age are reflected in his eyes as black as coal. Zhou Qiyuan in the photo is smoking a cigarette. At the age of ten, he was a heavy smoker. If you give him a cigarette, he can smoke one-third at a time. I also know from the note in the corner that Zhou Qiyuan is the youngest child in the family, but he has no choice but to make money in the coal mine to supplement his family. The only fun for workers is drinking and smoking after work, so Zhou Qiyuan also learned ... I couldn't help crying when I saw this-drinking? Smoking? He is a minor! But he is also a miner. Every day, coal pours down from his side, covered in the black left by pulverized coal, which masks the childishness of his round face and washes away his vision like when we were born. ...

Black coal grinds out the age and vulgarity of the name "Zhou Qiyuan", instead of the gorgeous color photos and rich and flashy names in the city-bleak black and white!

Looking at the picture in a complicated way, Zhou Qiyuan's eyes looked blankly into the distance. That time, I read him and read them-miners.

The miners struggled for a long time before we dared to think about hope before entering the examination room and where to play during the holiday in the classroom.

We have a future, and they only have the present, because now is survival. And "survival" means that they just dig coal, because there is no survival without digging coal. How to think about education, and how to think about the future if you can't survive. Those beautiful dreams for the future, even if they exist, are absorbed and buried by black.

I see.

When the tears of the dying miners kneeling on the ground were tortured by selenium lung disease, I understood.

Please let us find their future, grow up with these "two futures" and give them back.

I understand, because we are all life. When life is painful, one life will look for another. Their vicissitudes, their complexity, their black and white are no longer far away from our colors!

At first glance, there seems to be nothing surprising about this article, but if you chew it slowly, you will find that this article is novel in concept and not rigidly adhere to the old model. The article criticized the waste of coal mining from the beginning. Along this line of thinking, many people may mention the importance of protecting resources and caring for the environment. However, the candidate took the article "Wumeng Miner" as the breakthrough point, and selected one of the details-the black face, especially the description of a small miner, which aroused people's concern about the living conditions of miners and a special group, embodied humanistic care and brought forth new ideas.

Sunlight, sunrise and the eyes of the viewer

When the first ray of dawn was slightly sprinkled on the earth, how many young people in the darkness radiated dazzling light of life because of its appearance.

The morning glow has given a young man great literary charm. Once, Turgenev came across a wonderful article. After asking about it, he was just a nobody and had no good works. However, Turgenev never gave up. After finding the author's aunt, he said to her, "Your nephew is a wizard, and I believe he will make a great contribution to the literary world. Please continue to create. " Young people didn't expect that when they were down and out, in desperation, he wrote graffiti and was praised by great writers. From then on, he embarked on the road of creation and became a world-famous lev tolstoy.

There is morning glow and bright sunshine in the viewer's heart. Without Turgenev's appreciation and adult beauty, there would be no famous thinkers, some meaningful books and many loyal readers in the world. Taiwan Province writer Lin Qingxuan also had such an experience. Once, when he lamented the human world, he casually wrote: "Thieves, their thinking is so cautious and their hands and feet are so flexible. People like this can achieve something in anything in the world. Why are they going to the point of no return? " It was this sentence that inspired a young thief's confused mind and changed his past bad habits. Now he has become the owner of several chain stores in Taiwan Province Province, and his business is booming. Talking about his early entrepreneurial experience, he said excitedly, "everything I have is given to me by Teacher Lin."

Bacon said: "The viewer has morning glow, dew and flowers that bloom all year round;" Those indifferent people, frozen into the heart of the city, the sea dried up and the mountains were deserted. "Appreciation is a kind of pay, a kind of fragrance, a kind of communication and understanding, a kind of trust and blessing ...

People long for sunshine, but at the same time, it also gives many people the color and vitality of life. There is a sunrise in the viewer's heart, and the sunshine gives it vitality. Sunshine, the light of hope! Light of life! Let's create a blue sky of our own and play the strongest sound of life with sunshine.

Comments: In the examination room, the author of this article can establish the concept that "the viewer must have sunshine in his heart to give people sunshine" and start thinking according to the topic "Sunshine" and the innovative ideas. Take literary anecdotes and famous sayings in reading as appropriate arguments to prove the point of view of the article. The little author talks about the past and the present, full of philosophy of life, and is superior to others in many narrative articles. This is one aspect of the success of this paper. Secondly, this argumentative essay has a profound understanding and a novel angle, which avoids the general argumentative essay mode, is relaxed and lively, starts with a vivid description and ends with a vivid discussion, and is natural and rich in literary talent from beginning to end. In a word, extensive reading is the greatest mystery of the success of this exam composition.

My intimate contact with suffering

In the sunshine as always, walk into the middle school gate, how many ambitions and dreams, how many ideals and ambitions, gallop and fly freely in the sunny sky, don't linger, wait, stand up, prove yourself and fight campus life!