Fan Wen:? Take stock of life and beautify life.

If you want to live a good life, you must be diligent in calculation. Calculate, one-third of our life is spent in sleep, so during the day, we become stingy and frugal in front of life. Because life is short, no one wants to waste their time.

Life really needs counting. This is probably human instinct. I still remember that I knew how to bargain with my mother when I was very young. I don't want that doll and train, I want an electronic organ. Although some children are in it, at my age, I began to understand the choice. We always hope that in life, there will be more surprises and less dullness; More perfection, less regret; More returns; Pay less. These are not from God's arrangement, but mostly from our choices. Life is changeable, and we will face one pass after another. If we don't break through, we will try our best. When I regret it, you want to tell me to start over, but where can I find the past time? Therefore, when we have the opportunity to choose, we must resolutely choose, and once we choose, we must be loyal to our choice. Life is naturally less disappointed.

Life needs courage to count. It's like cleaning the room, sitting in a pile of old things and rummaging through the closet. Maybe everything has some origin and a little story, but we always have to bite the bullet and throw it out, and the room will be completely new. In this kind of tossing and turning, you need a kind of courage to give up. Life should be persistent, but not everywhere. Inventory needs to clarify some misunderstandings. Counting and giving up something often and decisively does not mean giving up lightly. It is wise to dare to count decisively and give up too many unrealistic goals. If you can't have your cake and eat it, you must give up the fish and take its claws. I often hear people boast that success is due to perseverance. Actually, it's more than that. Before perseverance, he had abandoned the comfortable and leisurely life of ordinary people and the elegance of shopping and gardening. If you want something precious, you must give up something almost as precious as it. Although there is some helplessness, this is the original taste of life. When life doesn't give you the best of both worlds, you must think twice before you act. Don't end up with Chang 'e regretting stealing the elixir. Don't follow blindly, don't be impulsive, life needs careful calculation. For those who linger in our hearts for a long time, smile indifferently, because that is the price of life.

One more burden, one less relaxation, one more desire and one less happiness. Endless desire is always exhausting. How can a heavy burden make people face difficulties? Atrium space is limited. Don't put everything in. Know what to give up and what to cherish.

A wise man will not let the past hold him back. Only fools indulge in the past, because they don't know how to calculate themselves.

In fact, the heart also has a pair of wings. The less burden on the shoulders, the better it can fly.

Satisfied with life, you can enjoy life; Counting life can beautify life. Life belongs to you, so be diligent in calculation.

Comments: This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points. The author firmly grasps the word "number" to write. In life, we often ignore "calculation" and pay too much attention to pursuit; In life, we often wander on the edge of giving up and not giving up. Our life is limited, our energy is limited, and our heart is even more limited, so we should give up decisively, count our lives and beautify our lives. The full text is eloquent, novel in technique and distinctive in theme. The full-text language is sophisticated, beautiful and concise. In particular, the sentence at the end of the article sublimated the main idea of the full text. ?

Test analysis: To write this article well, we must first make clear the writing scope, that is, what is "calculation". It should be said that "calculation" is essential for everyone living in modern society. Everyone should learn to count in life. In life, we should not only count things in time, but also count things and thoughts. People's life and energy are limited, and only by putting the limited time and energy into a specific life goal relatively intensively can it be realized. I long for everything, but I may get nothing. Therefore, in life, when we are very tired, we should give up some things, and we should work out what we should not invest in in time. When writing, as long as what you write must conform to the scope of "calculation".

Secondly, we should choose a good angle, that is, choose a small angle that we know deeply and have rich material reserves. Only a small angle can dig deep. From a big perspective, our country or collective will inevitably have some shortcomings when operating certain events, so our policies and guidelines need to be counted; In the cultural circle, some wrong or inappropriate literary and artistic views should be counted; In the process of education and teaching, some teaching reforms or teaching methods violate the laws of education, so it is necessary to make statistics in time ... From a small perspective, our life goals are set a little high, which is not in line with our own reality, and the goals need to be calculated; There are some mistakes in our thinking or understanding, which require us to take stock and discard them frequently and decisively. Nine times out of ten, life is unsatisfactory, and all these troubles and complaints need to be thrown into the dustbin of years and thoroughly counted; Endless desires in life are always exhausting. How do people face the difficulties of being overburdened? Therefore, we should count the atria in time in a limited space, so that the heart also has a pair of wings. The less burden on the shoulders, the better it can fly. ……

Third, we should carry out divergent thinking, open thinking and extract as many novel ideas or centers as possible.