Writing ideas and main points: describe in detail the people and things to thank, and then tell your feelings and gains.

Text:

Finally, I would like to thank everyone who helped me in the whole process of writing my thesis. First of all, I want to thank my tutor, Mr. XXX. He helped me a lot in the whole process. When I worked out the topic of my thesis, he first affirmed the general direction of my topic, but at the same time he made a concrete analysis for me, so that I finally chose the specific goal of endowment insurance for landless farmers and gave me the specific direction in words.

When I worked out the outline of my thesis, my thoughts were not very clear. With the help of the teacher, the thinking became clear when writing specifically. After writing the first draft, the teacher carefully examined my article and pointed out many of my problems. Thank you very much for your careful guidance, which enabled me to successfully complete my graduation thesis.

Secondly, I would like to thank my classmate Juck Zhang who helped me find the information. Later, because of his internship, I couldn't go to the school library to check the information at any time. I am also grateful to him for taking the time to help me find some foreign materials.