Success requires "borrowing"

Xunzi said, "People who pretend to be boatmen can't swim, but they will never reach the river." : Those who cheat horses are not good enough, but cause thousands of miles; The life of a gentleman is different, good or false. "Zhuangzi" also said: "Peng moved to Nanming, and the water hit three thousand miles, and the climber was nine Wan Li. "A person's strength is limited, but the power of the public is infinite. The aura of success requires personal efforts and good use of external things.

There is a fairy tale called "The Bird on the Eagle's Back", which tells that birds hold a flight competition to see who can fly the highest. The eagle thinks it can fly the highest, so it tries to fly high. When it didn't have the strength to fly higher, a bird on its back suddenly flew high and far. The eagle sighed, "No matter how powerful an individual is, it is not as good as a weak individual with a solid foundation." The bird's strength is very small, even insignificant, but it can fly higher than the eagle, because it has learned to strengthen itself with external forces.

The clever bird succeeded. It is successful because it can use foreign things. Although man is the master of all things, after all, wisdom and strength are limited. Only by making good use of external conditions and learning to use external forces can he succeed.

Madame Curie once said when accepting the Nobel Prize: "Radium belongs to all mankind, and my success was achieved on the shoulders of giants." Without the previous research results and various objective conditions provided by the outside world, Madame Curie's chances of success are very slim. American scientist Crick and German scientist Bain, who put forward the double helix structure of DNA, succeeded by summarizing the research results of predecessors for hundreds of years and constantly obtaining new discoveries from each other to make up for their own shortcomings.

From human society to subtle natural society, there is a truth that success needs to be borrowed. The mutual benefit of leguminous plants and rhizobia is to prosper through "borrowing", and countless bacteria in the human body gain life through "borrowing" ...

Wisteria and morning glory, without tall and straight trunks, show their beauty to the world with dead trees and fences; Fences and dead trees are not beautiful at all, but with morning glory and wisteria, a series of scenery have been achieved. Baiyun realized the dream of chasing the wind with the help of the blue sky; With the help of white clouds, the blue sky has widened. With the help of the ocean, Xiaoxi fulfilled his dream of making waves. With the help of streams, the ocean has become boundless. ...

There is a "borrowing" relationship between everything, and it is this relationship that makes success more brilliant!

Comments: The genius of this article lies in its lofty idea: after all, the wisdom and strength of individuals are limited, while the strength of the masses is infinite, so it is necessary to "borrow" the aura of success. Secondly, the structure is clear: at first, the argument is drawn from Xunzi and Zhuangzi's remarks about "borrowing", and then examples from fables to scientific historical facts to nature are cited to illustrate this truth. The material is quite substantial, and finally make a summary. In addition, the language of this paper also has some bright spots, the language is concise and lively, especially a parallelism sentence.

First,? Examination questions:

A, look at the material, analyze the topic, and get an opinion.

Wisteria and morning glory have their own defects and are not perfect, but they do not affect their own beauty; Fences and dead trees are dry and ugly, but they can also make scenery. Why?

The topic is "borrowing". Looking at this word alone, there will be many understandings: ① temporarily borrow other people's goods or money; (2) temporarily providing articles or money for others to use and lend; 3 false support; 4 shit, use it.

Contact materials, obviously should choose the fourth meaning. Wisteria, morning glory, fences and dead trees are not perfect, but they are all good at relying on external things and external forces to make themselves perfect. Therefore, we can draw the conclusion that being good at relying on external objects or forces or learning from the advantages of others can make our life more perfect (or more successful).

B, the trial requirements, Ming type, points.

Style is an argumentative essay. If you want to set at least two sub-arguments, you must decompose the central argument. (A) Causal decomposition method

Ask why first, that is, take the newly obtained point of view as the result and draw up several reasons. This is called causal decomposition. That is: why do you say that being good at relying on external objects or forces can make your life more perfect (or more successful)? The reasons are: 1, relying on foreign things can learn from each other's strong points, and 2, relying on foreign things can make fewer detours and make breakthroughs and successes easier.

(B) or from the role of "good at relying on the main body" to set arguments:

1, being good at relying on will make it easier for individuals to succeed.

Being good at learning advanced technology or management experience will make an enterprise develop better. (Haier)

Being good at learning from others may make a country or nation more prosperous. (Japan)

(3) Or use dialectical analysis method to decompose sub-arguments:

Positive and negative contrast

1, with foreign things, you can learn from others to make up for your own shortcomings.

If you refuse to learn from it, you will be stagnant and unable to develop, and your advantage will become a disadvantage. (Green door closing)

Divide into two-everything has a good side and a bad side

1, borrowing can take advantage of others and make up for one's own shortcomings.

2. Simply borrowing other people's things may make you lack creativity.

3, learn from and be innovative, and don't copy it completely.

Second,? Choose examples and famous sayings, try to diversify the argumentation methods, and then write them down in writing.

Requirements: The case is typical, the argument is sufficient, the language is summarized, and the case can be analyzed closely with the argument. For example, Xunzi said, "People in fake boats can't swim, but they can't swim themselves." : Those who cheat horses are not good enough, but cause thousands of miles; The life of a gentleman is different, good or false. "Zhuangzi": "Peng moved to Nanming, the water hit three thousand miles, and the climber was nine Wan Li." "Stones from other mountains can attack jade." "Gold is not enough, no one is perfect. "

Third,? A little dialectical analysis makes the argument more rigorous

After the argument, we should make some dialectical analysis before the conclusion and after the main body of the argument to make the argument more rigorous. For example, learning from others, instead of accepting everything, blindly copying and following blindly; Or learn from everything at any time.

Fourth,? Writing misunderstanding:

1, the assessment is not in place.

Cooperate, help each other, borrow and return, and successfully use your own internal factors (self-confidence, perseverance, strength, good communication skills, etc.). )

The body is borrowed from parents, so you should have a grateful heart.

2. Lack of stylistic awareness. Writing narratives and essays, "four unlike"-too many narrative languages and too vivid expressions make the stylistic features of argumentative essays not obvious.

3, there is no argument, only argument+argument.

4. Heaping arguments without analysis will make arguments and arguments as incompatible as oil and water, and natural arguments are not convincing.

5, change the subject, first demonstrate that you can succeed by external forces, and then start to demonstrate other successful factors.

6. Individual evidence lacks universal significance and is unconvincing.

7, regardless of the evidence, empty reasoning, pale and powerless.

8. Reuse given materials.

The materials given in the composition are only examples of topics, which help us to understand the topics, open our writing ideas or limit the topics.

9. Title

Don't write, or prose titles.

Verb (short for verb)? give the right prescription for an illness

1, meaning of examination, clear requirements (pay attention to materials and guiding words)

2, list the outline, choose good arguments (using methods, list the main points)

3. Draw up a bright and bright title (you can use the central argument as the title).

4. Enlighten the mind and express opinions (in the first section, use appropriate materials-quoting classics and metaphors, simply analyze and express opinions, within 100 words, 70-80 words is appropriate).

5. Arguments and arguments are well-founded (① list arguments; ② simply explain facts and theoretical arguments; ④ analyze and summarize-generally not less than 2 arguments).

6. Dialectical analysis is more rigorous.

7. Take care of the full text, ask for help, and emphasize the point of view again.

8. Some rhetorical devices can be appropriately used at the beginning and end to increase literary talent and improve the overall level.

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