1. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the problems existing in _ _ _. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.

2. The topic of this paper is reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. The full text takes the theme as the analysis and demonstration, which has reference and reference significance for perfecting China's administrative management. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable, and the format is more standardized. The reference materials are closely related to the theme of the article, but the innovation and arguments are insufficient, especially the last part of the article is too weak and unconvincing. Generally speaking, it basically meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

3. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the practical significance of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the dilemma of the official accountability system in China is deeply analyzed, and finally effective suggestions are put forward to solve the dilemma. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the paper's viewpoints and themes, and the practical demonstration is not enough. But there is not much real innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

4. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.

5. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.

6. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. The parts are closely related, the opinions are basically accurate, and the argumentation content is more convincing. In the process of argumentation, the basic knowledge principle of administrative major is basically used to analyze the main problems in the article, but the reference materials are insufficient, the article lacks its own original content, and a few viewpoints are not profound and comprehensive.

7. This topic has a novel angle, clear context, fluent writing and clear basic views. The main problems still exist in the article: students have not thoroughly digested the information they are looking for and the arguments are not strong enough.

8. The idea of this article is novel. Taking _ _ _ as a clue and combining with local standards, this paper comprehensively analyzes the problems and reasons of _ _ _. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.

9. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the hot issues in society. Therefore, the research of this topic is conducive to promoting the further development of _ _ in China. The full text starts with the problem of _ _, and then analyzes the reasons of _ _. On this basis, the related _ _ is analyzed. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.

10. This article focuses on _ _. The topic selection is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of administrative management specialty, and has strong pertinence and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.