For example, the title of the proposition composition "The First Time" can only be roughly "Doing something for the first time, what is the significance of this matter or what kind of inspiration it gives people"; The content of the essay is nothing more than describing "what did you do for the first time" and "how did you do it", and then sublimating it at the end. It can be said that propositional composition has strict restrictions on the conception, material selection and style of the article.
But if the topic is "the first time", the situation is very different. On the basis of "the theme is related to the topic", we can expand divergent thinking and open up many ideas.
It is precisely because the topic composition emphasizes relevance that candidates can always start many topics within the scope of the topic, and what topic to write in the article is entirely their own business. Candidates can also choose whether this composition is narrative, argumentative or other styles according to actual needs. Topic composition provides a broad world for candidates to give full play to their writing ability.
It is a remarkable feature of open composition questions to freely draw up questions around the topic. When marking papers for the senior high school entrance examination, although the quality of the topic is not the factor that determines the scoring standard, in fact, as we all know, the quality of the topic can also directly affect the score of the composition. For the marking teacher, the composition in the examination room is like a shy bride standing in front of critical in-laws. In order to leave an unforgettable first impression on readers, candidates should be good at "dressing up", show their touching facial features and let the marking teacher "fall in love at first sight". Obviously, a good topic is a bright spot. As the saying goes: "Buddha depends on gold makeup, and people rely on clothes to make up." We can say: "articles rely on topic makeup, and topics rely on wonderful makeup." Some people compare vivid prose to a beautiful smile, looking forward to life and giving people a sense of beauty. It seems that a good topic is indeed an important weapon to impress the marking teacher's "heart" and one of the keys to winning high marks in composition.
But it is easy for candidates to ignore this point. In the formulation of the topic, it is often just a simple perfunctory, leaving no trace to the reader. Candidates often make the following questions in the proposed questions.
First, the author chooses the topic as the theme.
The topic itself is not a topic, but only provides a writing scope for candidates, with a wide extension and rich connotation. "Let it be three thousand, and I'll have a scoop of water." Only by concretizing the scope of the topic "small" and "virtual" can the topic give readers a striking impression. If you plagiarize the topic, you obviously don't pay attention to the requirement of "writing the topic yourself" in the topic composition. For example, 200 1 composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Qianjiang City, Hubei Province. "Taking' money' as the topic, the genre is not limited, it can be described, introduced and discussed. As long as it is related to money, you can make your own topic." Some students directly focus on "money", while others focus on "correctly understanding the role of money". Although they are all points deduction topics, the previous topic is too big, too broad and not targeted. The title of the latter seems to lack literary talent. If you write a story about a person who is obsessed with collecting all kinds of coins, you might as well take "money obsession" as the topic; If it is completely true to argue that there is no difference between good and bad money and that people's view of good and evil is at work, then it is very specific to take the topic of "money, what is the crime", "vindicating money" or "money depends on life"
Second, the topic lacks originality and is even less creative.
Such a title is like a cup of tasteless boiled water, which obviously can't attract readers in a sea of articles.
Eyes. For example, in 2000, the composition of the Beijing mock exam was titled "Wind". We can all think of the original meaning of "wind", such as writing about the breeze, gale and gale in nature, but in this way, the topic falls into a cliche and is monotonous. In fact, we can extend it from the original meaning: for example, write "flying against the wind" to show our elegance; It is conceivable that "If I were the wind" has a variety of lofty sentiments; It can express the melancholy of "you are sad after the wind has passed"; You can also write the joy of "blowing a pool of spring water"-such a title is beautiful, vivid and poetic, and such an article will naturally have an audience and get high marks.
Third, the topic is not concise, and it seems long and boring.
As the saying goes, "concentration is the essence". The title of the article should be a highly refined thought and content of the work, which is the wisdom of the author.
The embodiment of. Long titles will give people a feeling of procrastination, while short and small titles will give people a capable impression and make readers feel excited. Take the Chinese textbook as an example: When Farewell was first selected into the textbook, it was originally titled Listening to Books in Minghuju. Comparatively speaking, the original title is not as concise as the revised title, especially the word "Jue", which highly summarizes Bai Niu's superb rap skills. "The lingering sound will last for three days." This is beyond the reach of the original problem. Another example: Yan Lu's Listening to Tides, a word "listening", is full of artistic conception. "Tide" is originally a visual image, written by hearing, and has a unique charm. Therefore, the title of the article also needs to be refined by the author in order to glow with beautiful luster.
So, how to skillfully draw up the title of the article and arouse readers' interest in reading?
1. Clever use of rhetoric to add interest and beauty.
Aesthetically speaking, people's aesthetic vision is unique, but the pursuit of beauty is the same. Beauty is always built on the wings of association and imagination, covered with feelings and expressed in a certain form. When writing a title, the clever use of rhetoric can increase the aesthetic feeling of the article, making it appear implicit and meaningful, with endless aftertaste.
1. Humanoid style
For example, in 2002, Changzhou senior high school entrance examination essay said that "people can change the environment, the environment can change people-people's habits can change, people's ideas can also change-learning methods can change, attitudes towards life can change, and the relationship between people can change. Please write an article on the topic of "change". Write your own experiences, talk about your feelings and thoughts, or make up stories. The topic is homemade. " The title of the excellent work in the examination room is "Ears are picky eaters". The quasi-topic jumps out of the conventional thinking pattern, personifies the ear, takes the ear picky eater as a clue, interprets the story of the gradual loss of "truth", attacks the bad phenomenon of society, and arouses readers' strong interest in learning. The story of a fishing net, the dead kite and the crying old tree all make people feel in the air. Another example is the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Nanchang and Taiyuan in 2002, with the theme of "happiness". The two topics "Happiness of Snowflakes" and "Careless Birds" write things in nature spiritually, attach people's feelings and embody the true meaning of happiness. In addition, such as "Choose the Color of Life", "Let Faith Be the Master" and "The Footsteps of Sunshine" are all refreshing and won the favor of marking teachers.
2. Metaphorical style
For example, in 2002, Yancheng senior high school entrance examination essay, "As the saying goes,' relying on mountains to eat, relying on water to draft', but the results are often unreliable, and the scenes of' sitting on an empty mountain' and' sighing at the ocean' always occur; In our real life, the achievement of big or small things depends on perseverance, on unity and cooperation, on hard work and hard training, and on-please write an article on the topic of' relying on', and you can write your own experiences, experiences, feelings and opinions. " The title of the masterpiece "Harbor of Love" in the examination room. The title uses metaphor to turn home into a harbor where the wind and waves are moored, and accurately and vividly points out that "with this love, we spend the spring and autumn in the harbor at home;" With this love, I will ride the wind and waves, and my parents will always be young. Another example is "sincerity". Titles such as "Honesty is gold" and "A promise is as good as a thousand dollars" vividly show the important position of "Honesty" in people's minds with vivid rhetoric. Another example is Honesty, titled Honesty is Wealth, which compares the virtue of honesty to wealth, which strongly proves that only honesty can win friendship, success and knowledge. Another example is "dedication". The title "The Last Candle Tears" is implicit and vivid. It uses metaphor to symbolize grandma's selfless dedication to the end of her life, and it contains wordless and endless praise for grandma's lifelong dedication. The image is appropriate, not rigidly adhere to the old model.
2. Rhetoric and rhetorical questions
For example, in the topic composition of Lianyungang senior high school entrance examination in 2002, "Choice is a compulsory course in life. In the journey of life, you will encounter all kinds of choices: choose friends, choose study, choose career-noble or despicable, positive or decadent, happy or sad-maybe you have chosen, maybe you are choosing, maybe you are about to face a choice. Socrates once said: In our life, no matter whether your choice is right or wrong, life will not give you a second choice. What we can do is to cherish every opportunity and seize every opportunity. Please write an article on the topic of "choice", and the topic is self-made. " The title is "An Neng takes the bear's paw and gives up the fish?" (rhetorical question) "Who is wrong?" "Does Lin Daiyu have to die?" (Question), using the form of questions in the topic, you can deliberately set suspense to attract readers to pursue answers.
Step 3 compare
For example, in 2002, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Guiyang was titled "Return" and was intended to be titled "Return and Take". Another example is "sincerity", and the proposed topics are "sincerity and hypocrisy", "right and wrong", "returning from going out" and "snowflake". Title comparison, which is right or wrong, is clear at a glance, so that readers can leave room for thinking without reading the full text.
Step 4 quote
Proper quotation of some idioms or famous sentences in the title can achieve concise and dignified results, and make your article add a heavy cultural background, more elegant and full of literary interest. For example, in 2002, the composition topic of Guiyang senior high school entrance examination was "collection" and the topic was made by ourselves. The title "The Stars Last Night and the Wind Last Night" is the opening of Li Shangyin's first poem "Two Untitled Poems". It's about tonight's scene and the memories of last night. To express the aftertaste and cherish of past friendship can be described as a blend of scenes and complement each other. Another example is the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Xiangfan City, Hubei Province in 2002, entitled "Trust". The title "One Word, One Life" quotes the lyrics of the popular song "Friends", which is simple and simple, and will make people have endless associations. Another example, the sun is changing every day (with the theme of "tomorrow"), a flash in the pan and Spring and Autumn in a small town (with the theme of "change"), can all reflect the author's language charm.
5. Duality
Titles are listed in dual form, and the antithesis is neat and rhythmic, which can also achieve unexpected results. For example, the song "Preface to Late Summer and Winter" vividly shows the seasonal characteristics of September (the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province in 2002 was entitled "Hope"). Born in change and died in stubbornness (the composition of Changzhou senior high school entrance examination in 2002 was entitled "change").
6. Puns
For example, in 2000, the composition of the Beijing mock exam was titled "Wind". The title of "Wind Love in Beijing" is a pun, which not only makes people feel the power of the wind in Beijing's early spring, but also writes about Beijing's folk customs, which can be described as killing two birds with one stone and being natural. Another example is the title "Life is precious", "You can't subtract" vice "at will, and the title of the article is meaningful by homophonic and pun.
Others such as parallelism: the title "that mountain, that water, that man" also shows the originality in the use of rhetoric.
2. Change the idioms of famous sentences and change the beauty of artistic conception.
Renovate famous sentences, idioms, etc. Make the topic of the composition humorous and interesting. Take "change" as the topic. The title of "A leopard cannot change his spots" was changed from the cliche that "a leopard cannot change his spots". This title is very impressive and unique in conception. Another example is the title "Give a man a fish, but also give him a fish". From the idiom "Give a man a fish, it is better to give him a fish", this title has a unique personality and a novel angle. The topic "If you die, don't throw away your honesty" is not only clear-cut, but also uses petofi's famous sentence "If you are free, you can throw away both", which is much more unique and novel than the general topics of many candidates. Another example is the title "Good wine is afraid of the depth of the alley", which was changed from the idiom "Good wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley". This transformation makes the title of the article unique and has its own endless mystery, just like a green olive, which makes readers chew and ponder repeatedly.
3. Clever "suspense" and wonderful suspense beauty.
Suspense is a mystery. Clever suspense and clever suspense in the title can produce a breathtaking artistic appeal. For example, the textbook "Dead Sea Undead" has been named "Dead Sea", so why is it called "Undead"? This seemingly contradictory combination has greatly aroused the enthusiasm of readers. The fog in the topic will not be known until you have read the text completely. For example, in 2002, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Qinghai Province was entitled "Tolerance". The title "Beautiful Lies", lies are deceptive, certainly false and ugly. Why decorate it with "beauty"? The title skillfully uses reverse thinking and puts forward the title in a language that goes against the common sense of life, making the title of the composition clear and eye-catching. Another example is the topic composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province, which is entitled "Feeling Life". For example, in A Drowning Fish, everyone knows that water is the lifeblood of fish. How can a swimming fish drown? Another example is "Tomorrow", "If there is no sun tomorrow" and "If there is no tomorrow", which can also inspire readers to trace the whole story of the article and sigh the brilliant thinking space of writing.
4. Old bottles are packed with new wine to reproduce "creating beauty".
Masterpieces are a huge and extensive library for high school students' extracurricular reading. In this wonderful temple of words, there are many familiar and exploitable topic resources. It is a good way to find the breakthrough point between famous works and real life, make the past serve the present, tell today's topic through the mouth of the ancients, and tell new truths with old stories, which can better reflect the ability to create beauty. For example, A New Biography of the Merchant of Venice, Red and Black, A New Life in Grandet, Ruthlessness is not a Real Hero, Nostalgia in the South of Beijing, A Dream of Red Mansions and Choosing Three Layers are all excellent compositions of this kind in the 2002 college entrance examination, which is also worth thinking about and applying. The use of well-known masterpieces can not only reflect a kind of accumulation ability, but also reflect rich language skills, reproduce a profound literary picture, and turn the original simple beauty into creative beauty.
5. Clever use of punctuation marks to increase the aesthetic feeling of expression.
For example: 200 1 Xuzhou senior high school entrance examination composition topic: reading as the topic, you can describe, summarize, introduce, ask questions, and have a dialogue with the characters in the works. The proposed topic is "Who is the hero who fights tigers?" Don't wait for Liu Bei. Another example is "students are in the period of independent personality formation, and they all want to be respected and learn to respect others." Respect is easy to achieve: thank you when you get help, apologize when you hinder others-respect is also easy to be ignored: being left out and exposed-in short, respecting others is a virtue and being respected is a kind of happiness. Please write a question at will on the topic of' respect'. "The title is respect for others = respect for yourself and self-esteem? Humiliate yourself? ","3- 1=0 "adding appropriate punctuation marks in the title will help to enhance the expressive force of the title, turn decay into magic, and play an irreplaceable role in writing.
Of course, there are not only five ways to propose topics. Candidates need to carefully ponder these topics, learn from them flexibly and tactfully, beautify the eyes of topic composition with their own talents, and expect it to really become the highlight of the content.
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