Example 1

Jealousy is the meanest thing.

Strangely, seven kinds of birds, from the beginning when sparrows talk about swallows to the end when goshawk evaluates sparrows, are trying to deny each other.

Strange or not, it's all because of narrow psychology. "Destroyed by jealousy, jealous of invincible." More than 900 years ago, Wang Anshi made a profound analysis of jealousy. Swallow said oriole: "Only beautiful clothes." It is the beautiful feathers of oriole that make swallows feel ashamed and jealous. The oriole said that the lark, although with a nice voice, had an impure motive. The theory of "pleasing to the ear" is a true conclusion drawn from shame; The theory of "impure" is a nonsense fabricated by jealousy.

Are birds slandering each other because of jealousy? It doesn't have to be like this. But jealousy is a despicable emotion, so it will produce despicable behavior, which is true. Parrot parroting is an instinct and a stunt. Bailing won't, this is understandable. But when it vilifies the parrot as "the most unprincipled", it is obviously malicious slander. Similarly, "looking up and smelling the joy of the magpie" is also a folklore without scientific basis. Magpies chirp unconsciously. It is said that it is "born with a servile obsequiousness", which is a curse issued by parrots, because people are very happy when they smell the sound of magpies. The fable master krylov put it well: "The meaner your thoughts are, the more you have to find fault with others."

The storm of jealousy is hard to predict and prevent. Some students were rated as "three good" students, so some people compared their own "one good" strengths and thought that the evaluated students were not worth learning by themselves. What's more, they laughed at a shortcoming of the "three good" students to vent their dissatisfaction. Even if a classmate is praised by the teacher once, someone will soon tell the shortcomings of this classmate in one aspect, and even expose the faults of this classmate in a certain period. In other words, whether strange or not, jealousy often occurs among peers. Birds are not jealous of animals, animals are not jealous of humans, and humans are jealous of their own kind. Slander because of jealousy is a sign of weakness.

People who are jealous of virtue and ability are contemptible!

See xian Si Qi, commendable!

Comments: From the perspective of this article, one of the reasons why birds strongly deny each other is psychological jealousy. This article quotes Wang Anshi's words first, and then krylov's words: Two famous sayings also prove the cause of jealousy, and they come from different angles. The former is from the outside to the inside (jealous because of invincible), the latter is from the inside to the outside (finding fault because of despicable thoughts), and the latter is the deepening of the former.

Example 2

? Pride and Prejudice

Seven birds appeared and performed a farce. Comment on each other one by one, without exception, and completely deny it. Its tone is beyond doubt; His expression is arrogant.

This is an arrogant attitude. Sparrows look down on swallows, swallows dig orioles, orioles look down on larks, larks look down on parrots, parrots think magpies are not worth mentioning, magpies satirize goshawks, and goshawks don't even care about sparrows. Although allegorical poems do not describe the language and behavior of various birds, they have clearly seen the faces of a group of fanatics from their comments.

This is a one-sided view. Seven kinds of birds, each with its own strengths, have not been seen or mentioned in the same kind. For example, swallows can report spring news, orioles have beautiful voices, parrots are good at imitation, magpies give people hope, and goshawks have lingyun ambitions. I don't know, or don't tell? Turn a blind eye or generalize?

This is a sign of lack of self-knowledge. I don't remember who that celebrity is. He once said such a famous saying: Arrogance leads to prejudice.

See, prejudice can also produce arrogance. After reading the comments about birds, I believe this truth even more. Because of contempt for the same kind, there is no micro-view, and the whole view of the same kind, resulting in biased views; Because of prejudice, they think highly of themselves and are pretentious, so arrogance will arise. Arrogance and prejudice are mutually causal, and the root cause lies in the lack of self-knowledge.

An interesting fact is presented to us: arrogant people are also despised. Every bird is proud of its own kind, and every bird is despised by its own kind. This seems to be a mystery. In fact, Balzac, a French19th century master of critical realism, has long seen the mystery: "Arrogance is an unsupported dignity."

In real life, Pride and Prejudice is closely related, and there are many people. Some young people, who have made some achievements, are arrogant and supercilious. They always feel that the people around them are not as good as themselves, as if they stand out from the crowd and are unparalleled. Therefore, arrogance is often accompanied by loneliness, and an arrogant person is often a loner on the road of life. Arrogant people around them have classmates but no friends; Although there are peers, there is no confidant. Therefore, although the face is disgusting, it is really pitiful.

I advise arrogant people to treat their peers with humility; It is better to look at others comprehensively.

Comments: The article first outlines the expressions of seven birds, highlighting their arrogant faces, then traces back to the source, analyzes the reasons for arrogance-lack of self-knowledge, and finally depicts their disgusting images, revealing their sad situation and alerting the arrogant.

Writing Tip: This topic requires students to write a composition about fable poetry, so it is particularly important to deeply understand the implication of fable poetry in order to choose the right angle, tell the truth correctly and make it clear. Birds comment on the same species, although the words are not consistent, but the tone is generally similar: denial and slander. Have the advantages and disadvantages of birds been denied and vilified? Why can't deniers and detractors see these advantages and advantages? In the environment where we live, do people make the same mistakes as birds? These birds deny their companions. Do they have any shortcomings or deficiencies? What is the difference between them looking at themselves and their peers? Why can't they criticize themselves? Is there a similar phenomenon around us? Wang Anshi said: "Destruction is born of jealousy, and jealousy is born of invincibility." From Wang Anshi's point of view, what do you think of the analysis of "Comment on Birds"? The arrogant attitude of birds stems from their biased views. We can analyze the relationship between arrogance and prejudice. After denying other birds, each bird is denied by another bird. What kind of atmosphere will this form? Analyze what will happen if you live in such an environment. Make these questions clear and the general idea of the article will come out. It is a good article to choose one aspect to make an argument and integrate it with practice.