Graduation thesis supervisor comments 1 1. The paper is structured, structured, logical, fluent, clear and focused. The format of this article conforms to academic norms. It shows that the author has strong independent scientific research ability. The paper shows that the author has mastered the basic theory and analysis method of enterprise management specialty, and the paper has reached the level of master's degree thesis. He agrees to participate in the thesis defense and suggests that a master's degree be awarded.
2. The paper is good at thinking and synthesizing, but it lacks consideration of actual needs and situations, such as users' demand for professional settings, availability and usability of data in data mining, etc. It is suggested that a broader perspective should be adopted in related research in the future.
3. The student explained the design details of the database in detail, did in-depth research, and independently completed the design part of the forum. He has certain scientific research ability, clear thinking in his defense and concise and smooth answers. After careful discussion, the defense team agreed that the student's performance was good, but asked the student to correct some mistakes in the paper.
4. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tries to find a connection between characters in the novels of lev tolstoy and Cao Yu. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
5. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to XXXXX's writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
6. In the five-minute presentation, the student introduced the main content and structure of the paper, as well as the research conducted for this purpose, which showed that he had a certain understanding of the research issues. The video design is beautiful, but it doesn't meet the professional requirements. It will be better to design the implementation process from the perspective of computer science.
7. The student fluently stated the theoretical and practical significance of writing this paper. The design process of antique websites is standardized, but there is little connection between entities and concepts. The whole design should meet the requirements of the computer as much as possible.
This student speaks clearly and answers questions fluently. Although the paper has a good idea and certain research value, the framework and content are huge, which requires strong independent research ability, and the title of the paper and the client login server module need to be slightly modified. The students are well prepared, the link sentences are complete, the thesis is clearly conceived, which embodies a good professional foundation and a good grasp of time. That is, there is demand in the paper but there is a lack of demand analysis, and the answers to some defense questions are not clear, and the graphic representation is not standardized.
9. Students use dreamweave and access database technology to design Ganzi tourism website. The design is fresh and beautiful, the main questions are answered accurately, and the basic concepts are clear. I want to correct the database storage problem in the file.
10. The student has good professional quality, fluent answers and high accuracy. He has a good understanding of the problems encountered in the implementation process and a good grasp of time. It will be better if it can be implemented in a relatively new operating environment.
165438+ After careful discussion, the defense team agreed that the student's performance was good, but asked the student to correct some mistakes in the paper.
12. In the ten-minute presentation, the student introduced the main points, content and structure of the paper, as well as the writing process of the paper, which was clear and organized, with no major mistakes in language, and gave basically correct answers to the teacher's questions, reflecting a certain professional quality. However, there are some minor problems in the design process and the flow chart is not perfect. I hope to correct it in time.
13. As can be seen from the defense, the student has a solid overall professional foundation, sufficient preparation work, is very familiar with the contents of the paper, can concisely and clearly state the design ideas and processes, has a smooth system display, reasonable answers, clear basic concepts and some innovations in the paper. I hope to continue to improve some words and symbols in the paper and strive for standardized use.
14. The student explained the main contents of the paper fluently and clearly within the specified time, and was able to answer the relevant questions of the paper properly, with a modest attitude and a solid computer foundation. It is suggested to use appropriate words to express the image opening function and standardize the paper format.
15. Combining with mathematical knowledge, using computer technology to deal with geological problems, and mastering methods and principles comprehensively, this paper is innovative. The results of fast Fourier transform and wavelet transform are analyzed in place, and the processing effect is good, and the computer basic literacy is good. The answers to the main questions in the defense are accurate and thorough. It would be better if there is a contrast between the converted indicators in this paper.
Graduation thesis supervisor comments 2 1. The paper is clear in expression and simple in explanation, but its deficiency lies in the lack of its own new ideas and methods, mostly applying other people's research results, and the format of the paper should be standardized.
2. The defense is well prepared, and I can answer the teacher's questions in detail, discuss the difficulties encountered in the research and design process repeatedly, find a better solution, and have good professional skills. It would be better if the static web page can be made dynamic by combining professional improvement, but the deficiency is that the description of the table in the database is not quite right, and I hope it can be improved.
3. The thesis statement is clear, straight to the point, and directly into the subject. I can answer the teacher's questions fluently and think clearly, but I can't correctly explain some codes in the paper and there are a few language errors. I hope there will be more innovations in future research.
4. The student can state the main content of the paper within the specified time, but the answer to questions in the defense is not very smooth, unfamiliar with the design details, and the relevance of answering questions is not enough.
5. Elaborate the thesis from five parts, with outstanding key points, fluent and skilled defense, basic knowledge in place and time meeting the requirements. The disadvantage is that there are some conceptual mistakes in the article.
6. In the process of defense, the student can skillfully and concisely state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, with clear organization, obvious innovation, quick response when answering questions, accurate expression, skilled system demonstration and high professional quality. After deliberation by the defense Committee, it was agreed that his performance was excellent.
7. The topic of the paper is very meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
8. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is used comprehensively to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
9. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
10. The topic of this paper is reasonable. Regional economy is the focus of economic research, and agricultural economic growth is also the focus of discussion at present. In recent years, many experts at home and abroad have made many mature discussions on this issue, and some experts and scholars in XX area have made in-depth research on the economic problems in XX area, but no special discussion on the comprehensive study of XX agricultural regional economy and its growth has been found. How to understand the present situation and future trend of regional economic differences in XX agriculture and promote the healthy and sustained growth of agricultural economy is an urgent problem to be solved in economic reality, and it is also the significance of this paper.
1 1. The selected topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has practical guiding significance.
12. The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect relevant information of papers. In the process of writing, he can basically comprehensively apply basic knowledge, comprehensively analyze problems, and his ability to comprehensively apply knowledge is average.
13. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are logical to some extent, but there is a lack of personal opinions.
14. The topics are basically the same and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.
15. The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
16. The research in this paper provides a new basis for XXXX to have strong practical value in controlling accounting information distortion. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.
17. This paper is correct in topic selection, reasonable in structure, rich in content, sufficient in data and materials, advanced in analysis method, reasonable in writing progress, and the conclusions and suggestions have regional practical significance. The recommendation is an excellent graduation thesis at the university level.
18. The title of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tries to find a connection between characters in the novels of lev tolstoy and Cao Yu. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
19. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the XXXXX paper writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
20. This topic is realistic, targeted and practical. The structural arrangement is scientific and reasonable, with clear thinking and distinct levels. Each part is closely related, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, and the argumentation content is convincing, but the article lacks its own original content.
The graduation thesis supervisor's comment is 3 1. This idea is very good and has great research value. However, this topic is huge in structure and content, and it also needs strong and mature independent research ability. So it is not difficult for undergraduates. If the author can learn more from the previous research results and strengthen the reading and analysis of the literature, it will help him straighten out the logic and think smoothly in the argument of the topic. It is necessary to be bold and confident in the presentation of the paper, and improve the refining ability of the on-the-spot language and the adaptability to the problem.
2. In the five-minute presentation, the student introduced the main idea, content and structure of the paper, as well as the research conducted for it. The statement is concise and to the point, which shows that you have a certain understanding of the problem under study. The student's answer to the teacher's first question is accurate; The student answered the question about the source of the data honestly, but in many places in the paper, she did not specify the source of the data, which is a major defect. The answer to the third question is obviously not relevant enough. You may not have heard the teacher's oral question clearly. The student is fluent in defense language, but there are some problems in pronunciation and intonation. After careful discussion, the defense team unanimously agreed to pass the student's graduation thesis, but asked the student to correct some mistakes in the thesis.
3. In the process of defense, the student introduced the main points of the paper and answered the questions of the defense members. The defense shows that the student has a deep research on the compensation system for land expropriation, sorted out a lot of literature materials, has a certain literature ability, and has made innovations in the research on compensation for land expropriation. The students' answers to the teacher's questions are basically correct. In addition, there are still some shortcomings in the paper, such as the deep-seated basic theoretical issues involved in land expropriation are not discussed deeply enough. After careful discussion, the defense team unanimously agreed to pass the student's graduation thesis defense and suggested that a bachelor's degree be awarded.
4. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
5. This theme meets the following requirements ... professional training objectives, and also reflects the strong characteristics of the times and practical application. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable, the thinking is relatively clear, the language is fluent, the level is clear, the viewpoints are basically accurate, the arguments and arguments are basically the same, and the references are closely combined with the topics and papers. I can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management and analyze the main problems in the text in combination with social reality, but the format is not very standardized and innovative enough. This paper takes … as the theme, first analyzes …, then analyzes …, and finally focuses on …,
6. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and some of them are closely related to this part, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and individual concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
7. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
8. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
9. Studying this issue can provide reference value for solving the administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
10. The research on the topic of ... can provide reference for solving the problem of ... In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administrative management major, and can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
12. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
13. This article has a novel idea. In view of the existing problems, the countermeasures to solve the problems are put forward. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
14. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects social hot issues. Therefore, the research on this subject is helpful to promote the further development of China's education. The full text starts with the problem of … and analyzes the reasons of …. On this basis, the related. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.
15. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can be a good investigation-existing problems. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.