2. The article should be revised in the order of whole, part, part, idea, material, content and form, instead of being distracted by some details with a stroke of a pen. Just like sculpture and painting, there is always a rough outline before it is gradually refined, and so is the revision of articles.

3. It's like leading troops to fight. First, we must dispatch troops and deploy troops.

Therefore, the first step of revision is to make the clues of the whole article clear, the context clear and the structure reasonable through "tone", and then sort out the paragraphs.

5. Through "tune", the scattered becomes centralized, the chaotic becomes clear, and the incoherent becomes coherent.

6. Make up.

7. "Complement" is mainly to supplement the omissions and imperfections, making the article more comprehensive and complete.

8. For example, an argumentative essay, when expounding a certain point of view, does it only analyze the positive side, mainstream, achievements and strengths of things, but does not dialectically see its negative side, tributaries, problems and shortcomings? Does it only have the positive side without consequences, only the foreshadowing without care, does it only see the material but not the point of view, and does it have necessary central sentences and punctuation sentences?

9. At the same time, we should pay attention to using some necessary transitional words, such as "anyhow", "therefore", "anyhow", "on the contrary", "since ... then ..." and "not only ... and ...", and pay attention to using some transitional phrases.

10. for example, "in a word" and "summary", use some turning sentences or paragraphs.

These necessary transitions will make the article more complete and rigorous.

12. Added.

13. The so-called "increase" means that when revising, by supplementing some materials, the abstract and vague articles become concrete and true, and the thin and unconvincing articles become rich and powerful.

14. For example, if the narrative is just a straightforward "running account", it will naturally be boring. You can consider adding some details to make the object of description clearer and fuller; Or add some descriptive angles.

15. Delete.

16. When revising, those repetitive, rambling and rambling sentences should be deleted, those redundant, unnecessary and self-evident sentences, those paragraphs and materials that are beside the point, divorced from opinions, contrary to facts and obviously untrue, no matter how wonderful, should be deleted. An example has been deleted.

17. Change.

18. The so-called "change" is to turn those old and plain materials into novel and vivid materials, and to turn those ambiguous, general, ambiguous and obscure sentences into more accurate, clear and vivid expressions.

19. When revising, the first thing is to see whether the materials in the article are typical and novel. It is best to replace those old materials that have been quoted many times by others. You might as well search from your material library again to find more attractive and updated materials.